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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:28pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
Its difficult to quote or reply every comment. I only update when I am less busy. If I don't reply your comments, don't take it against me, just know that your comments are appreciated. codedbaby:Anyways am sorry. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:32pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
Too everyone that is angry because I don't reply their comments, you know how difficult it is to quote 10+ comments. I use my spare time to update. But if you all want your comments to be replied, then we'll start with that from tonight. *Every comments shall be replied from now henceforth. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 9:36pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
Ngozi: Nice one, I really luv wat she did... Dat guy wahala too much. Rachael: I'm nt sure her husband will 4giv her ooo, cos her husband is nt really in luv wit her. Kelvin: d guy is really crazy Deoye: I pity him ooo Don: mmmmn... E be lyk say na inside prison u go chop ur next food ooo. D9ty7: thanks 4 d update.... But we need more ooo 1 Like |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Emmykul4love(m): 9:39pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
adeh39:d9ty7 so you send your guys after my s.heart.................well am back now sweetie,dot worry i will take care of them all....................tecno,fatalvi,onemansquad and who again............d9ty7 himself?.................... |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by classicuju: 9:42pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
Techno, i be lady keep d fun rolling, D9ty7 God's grace |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 9:43pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
tecno4life: S.heart... Y are u lyk dis nau? Y are u so jealous? U no be gentleman at all "in fela's voice" leave my Darling alone joor nd stop dragging sum1's pant ooo... U hear? 1 Like |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by bdabuwa(m): 9:44pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
C'mon Racheal tell him, I'm sure he (Clement) will understand ! |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by classicuju: 9:46pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
IMO, D9ty7 replying evry comment wl b boring n d story wl nt b classic as usual |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 9:49pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
Pants? U could have at least grabbed my shirt now. ... :oPants? U could have at least grabbed my shirt now. ... |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 9:50pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
Emmykul4love: Yes, he's their boss.... But he keeps pretending as if he doesn't knw about it. Take care of dem very well. But erm.... As 4 Techno4life...beat him very well but pls handle him wit care. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 9:54pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
adeh39:hey lady wil u kip quiet b4 i cal ma guys nd kidnap u nw |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Niwdog(m): 9:56pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
Finaly am bk frm a long vacation, thanks 4 keeping the ball(story) rolling. Na one tiffany steal me go drop for one of her triology story |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 9:57pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
tecno4life:Okay my mum will hear this. You pulled my pants instead of shirt |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by MhizEnkay(f): 9:59pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
kingphilip:thats sad.. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Hameenat94(f): 10:48pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
really missed this story buh happy me bk and it took me almost two hrs to read all d pages I missed.. I blame Rachel a lot cos she knows she's stucked in d past, y did she get married. kelvin end z near and he should do one last thing to save his brother buy I really pity Clement cos his family z a mess and he's d one to fish them all out. it would be disheartening if he finds out at d die minute buh I trust d9ty7 to give us d best. #still following |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by SOLMICHAEL(m): 10:55pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
so so interesting!! nice work bro!!! more ink to your pen. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 11:40pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
Emmykul4love:oga i was d wetin u go do? Na me slap ha |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 11:42pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
adeh39:make e nack my guy? "UNPOSSIBLE" oboy c english |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 11:46pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
Bluestarry: Hey!! U and Onemansquad. U guys should free me jare... I no fear u again ooo... My Darling is standing lyk a big Rock at my back. UNPOSSIBLE? , bad english, d correct one is UNIMPOSSIBLE abi? Am I nt rite ![]() |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 11:49pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
Welcome, its good to have you back. Hameenat94: |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 11:50pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
Yes boss! SOLMICHAEL: |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 11:52pm On Nov 17, 2014 |
adeh39:you are more than right mrs lecturer. As 4 ur darling, my boy tecno4life has taken care of him. You wont c im 4 a lng time. Please what the past tense of "thinking" i think is "thunking" oga d9t7 help me abeg |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kocvalour(m): 3:29am On Nov 18, 2014 |
FTC today.. Oga keep it up o... Come comment abeg b4 i go bk 2 sleep |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 5:53am On Nov 18, 2014 |
Ogbarmey:Why all dis girls una no dey put profile pic, abi una too wowo ![]() |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 6:32am On Nov 18, 2014 |
codedbaby: Baby you really coded ooh See d way u vex ![]() Come siddon 4 MA side baby I get some hollandia and grilled chicken here ![]() |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 7:21am On Nov 18, 2014 |
--continuation-- Don drove his black Nissan Amanda into the university of Lagos where he claimed to have graduated, but in the real sense, he was rusticated in his second year as a Biochemistry student and he couldn't go home, he joined an armed robbery gang and started making money, while his parents thought he was still in school. Three years later when he must have graduated, he told his parents he has gotten a job with a six digit pay per month for a start. "Where is their hostel?" Don asked as he manouvered his way. "That's it over there." Deoye replied from the backseat just when a torchlight was flashed on them. It was one of the security guards. "Duck!" Don barked silently. Deoye quickly hid between two guys who were seated with him at the back. "What do you have here?" The guard asked moving closer to Don who kept a straight face tapping his fingers lightly on the steering wheel. The guy seated on the passenger seat was whistling as he hid his face. "I came to check my sister." Don said pointing to the hostel a few metres away. The guard pointed the torchlight towards the building painted in white. "That hostel over there?" The guard asked. Don nodded affirmatively getting irritated. "It is out of bound to visitors. You can't go in here once it is dark." "Mr man, you are wasting my time." The guard thought for a while before he allowed them to pass. Deoye sat up once again as he heaved a sigh of relief. "You will go in now, we'll be waiting out here for you." Don said patting Deoye on the back. ++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Deoye landed silently into the compound and crawled towards the front door. And with a gentle push the door opened. He ascended the stairs and headed for the girl's room. With a light tap, he knocked on the door and waited a few seconds with no one answering. He removed a hand-driven drilling machine, placed it on the the door lock, it clicked open and he walked in carefully holding his gun high in his hand. Alas, no one was in the room, he searched every nook and cranny of the room without making a single sound. "Where could this girls be?" He asked himself. "Maybe you should just leave, there is always another day." A voice told him frankly. He pocketed his gun and scattered the room to leave trace of his visit when he started hearing footsteps. He quickly hid inside the small room which served as their kitchen. Tokunbo walked into the room suprised to see the state of the room. "So this girls did not lock their door. Ah ah, who could have scattered this place?" She asked himself as she walked out. Deoye concluded she went out to call her friends, an to avoid stories that touch, he felt it is high time he left. He considered leaving a note behind for them but he'll be wasting his precious time and chances of escape. "Time to go." He walked briskly out of the room. And when he was traces of flashlight heading towards his direction, he jumped from the verandah upstairs to the ground with little or no noise. He rolled to the side of the hostel when he realised he had woken up the hausa man keeping watch over the hostel. The northern man grabbed his gun and headed for Deoye's direction. Deoye grabbed his head and covered his mouth before hitting him on the neck, he passed out, just when he started hearing screams from the girls alerting every other students in the hostel of a burgler in the compound. Deoye jumped the fence like he had done when he came five minutes ago. "How did it go?" Don asked as he sped past the hostel. "I didn't see them in their room. One useless girl like that gave me out." Deoye explained. "Boss, take the second gate on the west." The guy seated beside Don in the front said. It seemed these guys know a lot about the school, maybe they were all once students. "Don't brood over something that is not worth it. There is always a second time." One of the two guys seated beside him at the back said. --to be continued-- 1 Like 3 Shares |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 7:23am On Nov 18, 2014 |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 7:32am On Nov 18, 2014 |
Mmmmmn..... Thank God ooo.... I thought one person will die dat nite ni.... I dnt think he can get anoda chance o. Thanks 4 d update...... But can we get more 2day? Nd u promised 2 update THE THOMAS yesterday........ U didn't, guess u were busy, so I'm expecting it 2day ooo. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 7:38am On Nov 18, 2014 |
tecno4life: ![]() tecno4life: |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 7:59am On Nov 18, 2014 |
Good morning to you my faithful readers Adeh39, Ogbarmey, Vibra, tecnon4life, kocvalour. More updates to come. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 8:00am On Nov 18, 2014 |
--continuation-- Clement walked out of his office fastening the lock, he proceeded towards the counter to sign out. "Oga, you are leaving?" A short bald man that stood behind the counter asked. "I didn't sign for the night job." Clement replied. The bald man handed a file to him and Clement fillied the neccessities, his name, rank, time of signing out and his signature. "Goodnight." Clement said and made to walk out of the police station when he bumped into Habeeb who was taking the night. "You are leaving?" He asked. "What do you think? I have a wife." Habeeb smiled as he remebered something. "What do you suggest we do to thos cultists?" Habeeb asked. "How do you mean? They'll be questioned tomorrow, then we'll be able to differentiate who is who and the fraternity they belonged to." "My mind tells me they belonged to Deoye's frat." Habeeb said. "That makes our job easier." Clement replied. Earlier in the day, the school security were contacted, as well as the police to come and stop a fight that was ongoing between two cult groups in the school. The first group killed a member of the riva group and this escalated, there was a gun battle in which no one was hit, none of the cult members were hit but with use of other dangerous weapons, an additional cultist was killed while the last casualty sustained a head injury because he was hit with a redbrick(made from mud) on the head. "We'll be able to question them tomorro. But you can make Scorpion give you the names of his members, then you can call them into a different cell because am sure they'll fight overnight." Clement instructed. "Okay sir." "Have you see Ngozi lately?" Clement asked. "She left with her boyfriend." "Goodnight then." Clement said and walked out of the bulding which was by now deserted, with only few officers on the night shift. He entered his car and drove off. ++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Rachel has been anticiptating his return immediately the clock reached the hour of eight, she knew he'd be home any moment and she made up her mind to spill out her darkest secret to him, she dreaded what his reaction would be like. But he remembered who Clement was, that gave her a glint of hope, he doesn't raise his voice on a woman, he doesn't hit a woman. Then came the most dreaded moment, his car honked outside the gate and he drove in seconds later. She sat on the bed and thought of how she'll explain to him. "Sweety, I have something I want to tell you." She said. "Yes? What is it?" He asked removing his shirt. "There was this guy when I was much younger. I loved him and he does too but somethings prevented us from taking things further. But recently I met him, one thing led to another and we kissed. That was because the feeling of the past was still there, but believe me, I now hate him. Baby please, it is you I love. And I know I am at fault because I allowed my emotion to get the better of me. Please for give me." She explained with tears in her eyes when two hot slaps landed on her cheek in quick succession. "How dare you? Feeling of old time? Emotion? Are you mad." He asked moving closer to her. She went pale. "Onome has put me in trouble." she thougth. "So you could cheat on me?" He asked. "Baby, am sorry." He shook her vigorously. "Sweetheart, am home." He said. She heaved a sigh of relief, afterall, it was just her mind playing tricks on her. "What's wrong with you?" He asked joining her on bed. "I have been calling you for almost five minutes." "Tell him." A voice said. "You better don't. His reaction has been shown to you. He'll hit you and send you out of his house." She was torn between two ultimate decision. Its either she told him and he divorced he like he threatened in her imagination or she kept it in herself until he found out much later, and still divorce her. Same result for the two options. But the former seems okay, her predictions may be wrong afterall. He might not hit her. "Am perfectly okay. I am only imagining how its gonna look like on that day that I go into the labour room." She lied. --to be continued-- |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 8:12am On Nov 18, 2014 |
I pity dis Rachael ooo....., I dnt think clement will slap her but I'm sure he will wnt 2 divorce or punish her sha. D9ty7..... *on my knees* gud morning sir! Thanks 4 d update. The Thomas nko? |
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