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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Crownfullhouse(m): 8:49am On Nov 18, 2014 |
Welldone boss......... More wisdom to Ur brain.......... |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 8:51am On Nov 18, 2014 |
Thanks boss Crownfullhouse: |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 9:01am On Nov 18, 2014 |
This story and its twist and turns,I'm feeling it tho...but I fear for Racheal o,mk she nr go make decision wey go finish her |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by adewealth027(f): 9:35am On Nov 18, 2014 |
Rachel,ur mind is only playing tricks on you,pls tell ur husband and I can bet with my lunch and dinner that he won't raise his hands on you..... D9ty7........good morning and how was ur night(even though u didn't greet me)..........more updates plssss |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:02am On Nov 18, 2014 |
I don't need to greet you here again. You were the first person I saw this morning and I think I greeted you with a kiss. adewealth027: |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kocvalour(m): 10:09am On Nov 18, 2014 |
D9ty7: Morning boss!! Clement needs to go down!! The govt has to lose in this story |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kingphilip(m): 10:22am On Nov 18, 2014 |
Rachel isn't helping matters at all.. she beta confess n b free than b holed up in guilt of been exposed by an outsider. her husband may forgive ha for confessing but may not take it lightly for hearing it from someone else. nice one boss d9ty7 u r really doing a great job |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 11:11am On Nov 18, 2014 |
Thanks boss haydot95: |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 11:12am On Nov 18, 2014 |
Lets see who looses at the end of the day kocvalour: |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 11:15am On Nov 18, 2014 |
Thank you boss for sticking around. kingphilip: |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by handmaid: 11:32am On Nov 18, 2014 |
good morning house oga theninetyseven (felt like spelling it this way, i hope its not an offence) i salute you codedbaby cool down biko |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Flakeey(f): 12:05pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
worris kelv 's pwoblem you are currently romping a celebrity and a police officer is also head over heels for you abeg free your sis in law jor, it's none of ur biz nothing wey eyes never see b4 Rachel should do the right thing b4 it's too late it's better ur hubby hears from ur mouth than from kelv's or someone else ko ni funny rara Omome should be a marriage counsellor she is very wise and mature well done D9ty7, the Boss-man |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Emzypaz(m): 12:16pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
D9ty7, a good job you have done so far. This is the most tricky part of the story and I trust you to deliver. Btw, I checked the Nairaland writer's collaboration thread and I discovered that you are not part. Why? Aren't interested in working with them(other writers) or you weren't invited? |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by adewealth027(f): 12:24pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
![]() ![]() D9ty7: |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 12:29pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
Update drops by 1pm or 2pm depending on the comments. Am off to read my Tom Clancy's coollections. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by d4real890(m): 12:39pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
D9ty7:Alright I'm always by ur side bro and we need more update |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by crystalsaint(f): 1:00pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
nice!!!! |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 1:01pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
Your first comment I guess. crystalsaint:Welcome ma |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 1:04pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
--continuation-- Sandra saw Kelvin off to his car outside. Sandra who was dressed in her nightie hoping Kelvin will pass the night was suprised when Kelvin announced that he was leaving. "Seriously, I don't want you to leave." Sandra said leaning on the car. "Its not like I wanted to leave too, but you know I didn't plan this beforehand. I came here yesternight because someone annoyed me and I know you'll put smiles on my face. I'll be back on sunday." "Promise?" She said smiling. "I cross my heart." She jumped into his arms and kissed him on the lips. Kelvin unlocked the door and hopped behind the wheel. He switched on the ignition. "Baby, please call me as soon as you got home." she said pouting her lips. "Yes your highness." He said. She blew him a kiss and this seemed to pummel him, he sped out of the compound. ++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Ngozi had just finished preparing dinner and was setting the table. Her fiancee, Tobiloba was seated in the living room watching a soap opera. "Sweetheart, the table is set." She annouced. "I'll be there in ten minutes." He replied without looking back. Ngozi frowned as she walked into the living room and stood in front of the television. "Whats the matter?" He asked camly. "Your food is ready." She repeated. "I said I'll be with you in ten minutes, I can't afford to miss this episode." He replied. "But you can watch from the dining now." She pushed further. "You won't understand." "What is it that I won't understand? Twenty minutes ago, you almost died because you are hungry, now that the food is ready, you are talking about not wanting to miss one stupid episode of a soap opera that is not made in your country." Ngozi said angrily. "It is set in Mexico. You see that girl, she is the lead actress." He said trying to get on her nerves. "Lets go and have our dinner now. I'll help you download this episode, then you can see it on your laptop." She said and switched off the television. Over the years, Tobi had learnt not to go into arguement with his fiancee, because she is a police and could vent her anger by one day pulling out her gun. So he had always threaded carefully, playing the dumb, something he will later on still regret. Five minutes into their meal Ngozi brought up the issue of Mr Ayo Okorie's residence and her decision to handle it. "Are you out of your mind?" Tobiloba asked. "How do you mean?" "You want to explore an underground which you couldn't even locate. An underground that you had no idea of what could be underneathe. Are you tired of leaving? Don't you love yourself? Even if you don't, remember some people do, of which I am." He poured out. "But you knew what this job entails before you supported me to enter for it." She said trying to be cool. "I only supported you because I don't want you to feel bad. I want you to be happy, do what you wanna do for us to live happily." Tobiloba replied. "Seriously baby let me do this. This is my only chance, I promise you that I'll resign once this is over and we'll live happpily." "If you like, you may resign now, I am the least concerned but there is no way you are going into the underground." Tobi stood his ground. Ngozi tried persuading him to at least let her do it but he didn't look like giving in soon. "I think I am done here." She said washing her hand and angrily walked out of the dining room. ++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Clement unlocked the door into Kelvin's room and headed for his tv stand. He searched the shelf on the which the 21 inches television stood with a dvd player and two speakers on both side of the shelf. Then his eyes got what he wanted. He saw five film jackets lying on the floor, he examined them carefully. "These films are new, so where did he keep the once he had watched?" He asked himself. He walked towards his brother's wardrobe which was locked, but he knew he could unlock the wardrobe with little or no resistence from the lock. His police mind told him to go for it and check whatever was inside, but his second mind advised him against it. "Its his privacy, you shouldn't check it while he is not there. You being here is wrong." He has learnt over the years not to act on his police instinct when it comes to his family or someone close to him. He opted to heed to his other mind, he carefully walked out of the room and locked the door like he had met it. But his police mind kept telling him, Kelvin has a skeleton in his cupboard. But how sure is he? --to be continued-- What do you think of Clement's resolve not to check his brother's wardrobe. Don't you think he has lost the only chance to nab his brother without much problems? But Kelvin on the other hand could be innocent. Its wrong to work on guesses. He need facts. 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 1:42pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
Kelvin would'nt be silly enough to leave arms at home even if does i don't think it be more than one. Lets just hope the family secretz ar unravelled. Nice updates oga boss 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 1:52pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
D9ty7:well people like Kelvin do not make mistakes to keep evidences at home. Probably a gun hidden somewhere for defence. Clement was wise on this. Kevin could have cooked a lie easily. Assasins can be smart. Each update gets better. Welldone D9ty7 |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 2:04pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
Ogbarmey:Thank you ma'am |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kocvalour(m): 2:37pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
D9ty7: I c kelvin leaving dat secret gang.. I also predict him working with his brother soon |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 3:05pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
Oga D9ty7 this three updates are superb ![]() ![]() Drop more ghan ![]() |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 3:30pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by codedbaby(f): 3:35pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
D9ty7:I no vex again |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by codedbaby(f): 3:36pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
tecno4life: thanks Tecno baby. love u dear |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by codedbaby(f): 3:38pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
handmaid:I no vex again |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Emmykul4love(m): 3:52pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
I see kelvin turning around and joining his brother to bring down the corporation.....................their father might also join them including their sister...................adeh how are you doing |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by ViktorMartins(m): 3:57pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
Oga, sense making!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 4:25pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
1 Like 1 Share |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 4:28pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
ViktorMartins: See Viktor Don come Hope u ney dey look 4 dangerkelv e no dey here ooh ![]() |
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