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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 4:38pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
A dis ghost mode readers ![]() ![]() I just dey observe una ![]() |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by femyodsky(m): 5:00pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
Nice updates. You are doing well. Thanks for not starving US of updates. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 5:08pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
I have nothing to gain in 'starving' you. femyodsky: |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 5:21pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
You guys have really been wonderful today Vibra, Adewealth027, tecno4life, Adeh39, kingphilip, Emmykul4love, codedbaby, femyodsky, Viktormartince, crystalsaint, kocvalour, Ogbarmey, stuff46, d4real890, Emzypaz, Flakeey, handmaid, haydot95, and others. Including those who didn't comment. I love you all. More update later in the evening. Presently, loads of works are piling on my small table. Nothing stops me from dropping something tonight. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Benjaminbest(m): 5:21pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
dis one na gombe.....guy u na genius ur crime beat dat of my guy............. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by nedubest(m): 5:40pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
nice story bruh...kip eet up |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 5:45pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
Oga i d wait o |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 5:58pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
D9ty7:as long you always give us the best |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 5:59pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
Viewing this topic: pweeeetychi, KKImoh, benedictilemona(m), iamsirmuel(m), dekokelvin(m), Bettybold(f), stuff46(m) and 4 guest(s) see them abeg, they no wan comment |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 6:00pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
Bluestarry:oboy how far na |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by alabig(m): 6:05pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
It takes only a coded being to decode some puzzle instincts of a smart guy. Clement might have thought of been so clever to unravel the concealed secrets of his brother without thinking of what the outcome would be. On the other hand, rechael is now lying as a bait to be crunched from the khal group and as well seem to be an object of revenge from kelvin if at all something goes wrong between him and clement instincts. Moreover, mr patrick does'nt forgive anyone that intrudes into his affairs. Racheal just relax it's just about time. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 6:10pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
stuff46:50km. I dn c ur msg |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 6:12pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
Bluestarry:make we talk there na |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 6:20pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
Now let me drop one of the updates that has already been typed and saved. And btw, where is Niwdog? |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 6:21pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
stuff46:k |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 6:24pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
--continuation-- Dolapo, Tolani and other occupants of the hostel were all standing beside their lynched security guard while the other members of the vigilante were performing some magic on him. The man stirred and sneezed loudly. "Thank you Jesus." The girls shouted. "Now you all can go back to your rooms." The eldest among the vigilante said. One after the other, they dispersed to their various room. "Am not sleeping in that room tonight." Tolani said. Tolani who was in Tokunbo's room dubbing a note as at the time when their room was burgled and Dolapo who was in the room two minutes before Deoye borke into the room only left to go and call Tolani. She narrowly escaped death, because if Deoye had met her in the room, she'd have been killed. They colcuded that whoever the intruder was, he certainyl was not after their money or laptops because as at the time Dolapo left to call Tolani, two laptops were conspicously lying on the bed, while three laptops were locked up inside the wardrobes belonging to Late Hadiza, Dayo and Chioma. "Lets all go to my room." Tokunbo came to their rescue like she has always done. The girls all went to Tokunbo's room which housed three girls and with their inclusion, they made a total of five. The last time Tolani slept in Tokunbo's room was on the night when Chioma was killed. It was possible for her because Tokunbo's roomates were all in the library reading late into the night. "What is the meaning of this now?" Charity one of Tokunbo's roomates asked. "what's the matter Cha cha?" Tokunbo asked. "How do you expect everyone of us to sleep in this small room?" Charity asked. "Its just for one night." Tokunbo said. Even though Charity was a very friendly person, she was someone who couldn't trade her comfort for anything. She loved being on her own without disturbance. "If that is the case, we'll leave." Tolani who was not a fan of begging people for help said already moving to the door. "You don't need to leave. Shebi you want to sleep ni?" Charity asked. No one answered her question. "You can sleep, I'll go to Amina's room upstairs." Charity said picking up her wrapper and wearing her slippers. "Seriously, Charity I don't like how you behave sometimes." Doyin, a two hundred level computer science student, Tokunbo's cousin said. "You are making it sound like we don't have somewhere to sleep for the night. We have our room, but we are just afraid to sleep in there." Tola said irritatedly. "Whatever." Charity said picking up her bible, her phone and she tucked her laptop into he own compartment of the wardrobe. "As a matter of fact, we'll just leave your room now." Tola said angrily as she grabbed Dolapo's hand and led her out of the room. "You shouldn't have done that now. We should have begged her, she has a right to talk, its their room." Dolapo said. "come on shut up. Is she not our friend?" Dolapo dragged her friend and only surviving roomate to their room even though she was afraid herself and had the feeling that whoever broke into their room would return in the middle of the night. "You girls should wait na?" Tokunbo called after them. "Am sorry on behalf of Charity." she said. The two girl smiled, not knowing what to say. "I'll sleep with you guys." She said. A cold breeze of relief blew on Tolani and Dolapo who quickly urshered her into their room. But on a second thought, their fear came rushing. Tokunbo is just like they, she is a lady too and there is little to what she could do to save them. Even Chioma who was the strongest of them all with a masculine body was killed, not to talk of Tokunbo who was the sexiest. What can she do? END OF CHAPTER TWELVE 2 Likes |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 6:31pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
na wa o, see girls Viewing this topic: Bluestarry(m), uanda(m), MhizEnkay(f), bdabuwa(m), stuff46(m), D9ty7(m) and 2 guest(s) after readinq please encourage the writer. Your comment means alot |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by MhizEnkay(f): 7:27pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
stuff46:thats weird.. I wasnt here.. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kcee14u(m): 8:06pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
tecno4life: na wa 4 u ooo techno4life, u jst dey pull my leg since... Good work D9ty more oil to ur amrpit **winks** |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 8:14pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
Next update drops in few minutes. But first, someone has to comment. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Emmykul4love(m): 8:33pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
Well i dot see deoye coming back this nite........................:-O |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by handmaid: 8:34pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
while i await your next update, i will go back and read the last one. i noticed u'v updated after d last time i checked. i have a question. mr. d9ty7, how do you do it? i mean, there is almost always an update to read all he time. by them way, what does don, his boys and deoye stand to gain from the deaths of the girls? are they sooo blood thirsty not to know that their lives are not worth taking simply because deoye made a boast? 1 Like |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 8:37pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by toykathy(f): 8:44pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
I wanted to ask him too, cuz he is better than some writers there. Emzypaz: |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:01pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
To everyone asking how I manage to update almost every time: Your comments is the reason why I update consistently. I am a very busy person, I hardly have a free hour, but I try to get my updates typed and saved at night and sometimes in the mid-night. Then I just copy and paste. But basically, the way you guys recieve the story and every update is the reason why I want to satisfy you all. The mail messages, the sms, the phone calls, the comments, the encouragement and above all, the prayers has been my source and power. ------- How about if I drop two more updates tonight? No I won't anymore, you guys are already complaining. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:04pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
Oh! I appreciate the fact that I am a better writer, but please don't condemn other writers. I hold everyone of them in the high. toykathy:I am nothing before God. Every writer here is equal like Larry clearly pointed out. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Crownfullhouse(m): 9:14pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
D9ty7: Oga D9ty7, love Ur humbleness...... Keep the good work...... May Allaah continue to strenghten U........ |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by ViktorMartins(m): 9:16pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
tecno4life:Lol! Na Abdul Maleek be my padi, dangerkelv small oh! |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:18pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
Crownfullhouse:Amina ya allahu! |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by toykathy(f): 9:19pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
Condemn ke?? Why wud I condemn somthn i cant make? I appreciate evry writer on this forum cuz we dnt pay them yet they give us their best. I'm just saying a gud writer like u shud b included. Cc: Larrysun, sir pls include D9ty7 in ur collaboratn. Thz. D9ty7: |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by pishon: 9:20pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
I'm so loving and enjoying your story bro with d fact that you update constantly makes it worth the while, welldone. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by SOLMICHAEL(m): 9:20pm On Nov 18, 2014 |
good work bro! |
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