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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by toykathy(f): 9:22pm On Nov 18, 2014
BTW, I like d fact dat u re humble n updates frequently. May God bless n prosper ur ways. Kip up d goodd work boss. #back to my ghostmode#

D9ty7:
Oh! I appreciate the fact that I am a better writer, but please don't condemn other writers. I hold everyone of them in the high. I am nothing before God. Every writer here is equal like Larry clearly pointed out.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by adewealth027(f): 9:23pm On Nov 18, 2014
I know u are waiting for my comment and av done so..................D9ty7 darling...next update pls
THE THOMAS FAMILY........dem still dey vacation
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tescoleps(f): 9:27pm On Nov 18, 2014
D9ty7:
To everyone asking how I manage to update almost every time:
Your comments is the reason why I update consistently. I am a very busy person, I hardly have a free hour, but I try to get my updates typed and saved at night and sometimes in the mid-night. Then I just copy and paste.
But basically, the way you guys recieve the story and every update is the reason why I want to satisfy you all. The mail messages, the sms, the phone calls, the comments, the encouragement and above all, the prayers has been my source and power.
------- How about if I drop two more updates tonight? No I won't anymore, you guys are already complaining.
D9ty7 i love ur consistency nd d quality of ur updates. U r one of d reasons i stil come 2 NL. Keep it up dear. D sky is ur starting point.btw, dis is ur first story i'm reading.wil find time 2 read others.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 9:33pm On Nov 18, 2014
Ogbarmey:
undecidedSo techno has those he welcomes with drink and those whose pants he pulls and calls wowo? Ok ghost mode activated. D9ty7 pls let's roll.
oya sorry make I arrange VVIP table 4 one 4 u only with whtever u order 4
*runs and arranges table*
okay go and sit, anything u want order 4 it *bows*

D9ty7 kip it up
ur story is moving me mehn
like phyno says
"I'm flying up in the air mehn cool "
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:33pm On Nov 18, 2014
This could be some impromptu writing that I am not ready for. But since its a story based on the theme 'detective' I may be in. But if there is another writer willing to join, then we can both write a chapter togather. Maybe the last chapter.
toykathy:
Condemn ke?? Why wud I condemn somthn i cant make? I appreciate evry writer on this forum cuz we dnt pay them yet they give us their best. I'm just saying a gud writer like u shud b included.
Cc: Larrysun, sir pls include D9ty7 in ur collaboratn. Thz.

But I'll say we should wait till next year. I'll be doing a collaboration very soon with an established writer here.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:38pm On Nov 18, 2014
As much as I really want to reply all comments, its time consuming, but all comments are recieved and appreciated.
Thank God Adeola temi nikan is back. I'll drop one last update be4 I go to bed. Check back tomorrow morning before 7am, there'll be an update.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 9:39pm On Nov 18, 2014
So loving this..but no blood should be shed again


But if its rachel's blood,we won't say anything about it
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:43pm On Nov 18, 2014
CHAPTER 13
Clement walked into the police
station very early because the day
promises to be a very hectic one.
Even though, there was nothing
unusual about the surrounding
except a pick-up van which was not there when he left the previous
night, with the inscription "The
Nigerian army."
Every other vehicles were always
the same, belonging to his
colleagues. He walked into the large hall to see
two men dressed in uniform seated
in the waiting room. Immediately
they sighted him, they stood up
and saluted.
Even though he was taken aback by their actions coupled with the
fact that he was unsure of their
rank in the force, with a wave of
hand he eased them.
"Lets go to my office." He said
seeing that they actually came to see him.
A young female police officer who
was behind the counter this smiled
at their display of professionalism.
She one day hoped she'll be in an
enviable position such as Inspector Clement's or even the visiting
detective Ngozi.
"Call sergeant Mike for me."
Clement said to the lady as he
disappeared into the hallway that
connects to his office. "Have your sits sirs." He said
motioning them to the two chairs
that stood opposite his desk.
"Straight to business, I am
leuitenant Harry and here with me
is Idowu. We are here on orders of the Major General."
"Okay. I am inspector Clement
patrick." He said.
The two men glanced at each other
and Idowu decided to speak on.
"We have been ordered to hand over a criminal who was caught a
few days ago to the police for
proper investigation. He shot
sporadically at the stadium few
days ago when the ruling party
were having their campaign rally." Idowu said.
"So he was nabbed and we've
decided to hand him over to the
police for proper investigation."
Harry continued.
"He has been locked up in one of the cells here. And Major General
Oguntade wants daily report on
him." Idowu said.
Harry who seemed to be the most
senior of the two dropped the
envelope he was hoding on the table.
Just then the door was pushed
open and Mike walked in.
He saluted the three men and he
was eased.
"That's sergeant Mike." Clement said.
The two soldiers shook hands with
him and he stood behind them.
"We'll like to take our leave now."
Harry announced.
"Thank you very much sirs." "Its a pleasure working hand in
hand with you." Idowu said
shaking hands with the two
policemen as well as Harry taking
their hands in his.
Clement chipped in a joke and they all laughed like old friends.
"Mike, walk them." Clement said to
Mike who instantly followed the
two men out of the office.
Clement was taken aback when he
saw the picture of the man in their custody. His curiousity got the
better of him and he switched on
his laptop when he saved the
pictures of some wanted criminals.
Alas, the man was Viktor, the man
who drove the van which brought Kelvin and his team to the airport
complex to release a dangerous
gas in the ventilation system.
Things are turning out a lot more
easier than he expected.
++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Tobiloba brought his car to a halt
in front of the police station. Ngozi
who has been keeping malice with
him since the previous night
opened the door and made to get
out. "See you later." She muttered
without facing him.
"Should I come and pick you when
I close from work?" He asked.
"No, don't bother. I'll be spending
the weekend with my parents." She said shocking him with the
reply.
Ngozi was someone that,
whenever she is with her fiancee,
he becomes his priority. Every
other thing comes second. Now she wants to spend the weekend
with her parents. He remembered
how he used to persuade her to at
least spend weekends with her
parents, now she wanted to go
willingly. Is anything wrong? "Baby, are you still angry because
of what I said yesterday?" He
asked.
She ignored him and shut the car
door. He wanted to alight and run
after him, but on a second thought, he swung the car to a reverse and
off he went.
***
Tolani picked up her bag and
headed for the door. The events of
the previous night kept playing in
her mind.
"Don't you have classes today?" Tolani asked Dolapo who was
lying on the bed still dressed in her
nightie.
"I don't, not until 2pm. Professor
Orimade." She replied.
"STAT right?" Tola asked. "Yeah. Last class before exams."
Dolapo emphasised.
Tola pushed the door knob and
walked out of the room, head high
in the air.

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by LogoDWhiz(m): 9:44pm On Nov 18, 2014
Wow D9ty7, these updates are sumptuous.
Really delicious and I enjoined it.
More grease to your elbow.


Still waiting on the summary tho.

Finding it hard to understand some things in d story
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:46pm On Nov 18, 2014
Thanks boss.
LogoDWhiz:
Wow D9ty7, these updates are sumptuous.
Really delicious and I enjoined it.
More grease to your elbow.


Still waiting on the summary tho.

Finding it hard to understand some things in d story
Anyone here willing to do the summary for Chief Logo?
We need volunteers.

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by LogoDWhiz(m): 9:49pm On Nov 18, 2014
Yes I think so. With more evidence, they can nab the enemy.

And yes I think ngozi is overreacting. Its all for her good.
Don't do it alone!
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by adewealth027(f): 9:49pm On Nov 18, 2014
Wow......Kudos to the Police,at least they are progressing
Ngozi......I think she's overreacting,Tobi doesn't wanna loose her to death because he knows d underground mission is gonna be dangerous...........na love dey shack Tobi o so make Ngozi cool down
Have a wonderful night rest D9ty7 sweetie kiss
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 9:51pm On Nov 18, 2014
D9ty7:
Thanks boss.
Anyone here willing to do the summary for Chief Logo?
We need volunteers.
i for do am but my battery is down


tecno4life will handle this
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:58pm On Nov 18, 2014
Guy, will you? @tecno
Vibra:
i for do am but my battery is down


tecno4life will handle this
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 10:04pm On Nov 18, 2014
is lyk dis Ngozi is mad oo so police force has taken over her head
infact tecno4life gv me dt ma cane i nid 2 cane her

oga d9ty7 i sight u jor expetn mor frm u 2moro
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by LogoDWhiz(m): 10:07pm On Nov 18, 2014
Vibra:
i for do am but my battery is down


tecno4life will handle this

Vibra, can u do it tomorrow then?
Thanks for the gesture.

Thanks boss D9ty7, and please stop the flattering
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by toykathy(f): 10:11pm On Nov 18, 2014
Fine then! Nxt yr it is. Waiting....
D9ty7:
This could be some impromptu writing that I am not ready for. But since its a story based on the theme 'detective' I may be in. But if there is another writer willing to join, then we can both write a chapter togather. Maybe the last chapter.But I'll say we should wait till next year. I'll be doing a collaboration very soon with an established writer here.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:11pm On Nov 18, 2014
Are you blaming Ngozi again? Small time you'll start to dey blame men of the NPF. Encourage them, if some people are not willing to fight insurgence, there won't be peace.
Onemansquad:
is lyk dis Ngozi is mad oo so police force has taken over her head
infact tecno4life gv me dt ma cane i nid 2 cane her

oga d9ty7 i sight u jor expetn mor frm u 2moro
I pray one of your children joins the force. Lol.
Tomorrow is another day boss.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Niwdog(m): 10:12pm On Nov 18, 2014
D9ty7:
Now let me drop one of the updates that has already been typed and saved.
And btw, where is Niwdog?
present sir. i go join ghost mode readers but am enjoying and following the story like twitter
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:15pm On Nov 18, 2014
If you join 'ghostmode' readers pere, na so me sef go join 'ghostmode' writers. I need your everyday comments badly.
Niwdog:
present sir. i go join ghost mode readers but am enjoying and following the story like twitter
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 10:18pm On Nov 18, 2014
D9ty7:
If you join 'ghostmode' readers pere, na so me sef go join 'ghostmode' writers. I need your everyday comments badly.
tell dm o
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Niwdog(m): 10:21pm On Nov 18, 2014
D9ty7:
If you join 'ghostmode' readers pere, na so me sef go join 'ghostmode' writers. I need your everyday comments badly.
i don quickly change frm ghost mode to alive mode. u won't miss my comment again jst as i hope nt to mix u everyday update
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 10:24pm On Nov 18, 2014
D9ty7:
Are you blaming Ngozi again? Small time you'll start to dey blame men of the NPF. Encourage them, if some people are not willing to fight insurgence, there won't be peace.I pray one of your children joins the force. Lol.
Tomorrow is another day boss.
dats wat i even want
Am a *No Nonsense* guy o

say NO 2 terrorism grin grin
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:28pm On Nov 18, 2014
Lol
Niwdog:
i don quickly change frm ghost mode to alive mode. u won't miss my comment again jst as i hope nt to mix u everyday update
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by zainharb: 10:33pm On Nov 18, 2014
M back. well done D9ty7.
I missed u guys o, though I know no 1 missed me. more ink to your pen sir.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:34pm On Nov 18, 2014
No one missed yo ke? I missed you baje. In fact I wanted to come to your house, then I remembered I know not where you live. Ask Emzypaz, he is my witness.
zainharb:
M back. well done D9ty7.
I missed u guys o, though I know no 1 missed me. more ink to your pen sir.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Benjaminbest(m): 10:46pm On Nov 18, 2014
more grace
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:49pm On Nov 18, 2014
Yes boss!
Benjaminbest:
more grace
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by crystalsaint(f): 11:01pm On Nov 18, 2014
tecno4life:

Welcome ma
Ur table is over there with grilled chicken and rice with yogurt kiss
hope the food is still available ..
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by crystalsaint(f): 11:15pm On Nov 18, 2014
Ngozi is over reacting because she is falling in love with dangerklev ..well....just saying ,not too sure!!
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by hebraheem20(m): 11:23pm On Nov 18, 2014
i dont really kwn wat to say but all i will say is my GOD will surely bless u with ur heart desire
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by classicuju: 11:24pm On Nov 18, 2014
D9ty7 welldone, carry go i follow u jejee

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