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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:57am On Dec 04, 2014
You can't fit vex for me na. I be your brother from the Yoruba empire na.
Beckytee:
I want to vex before, but since u said u are a proud yoruba boy, I won't vex again...... What d hell is wrong with rapheal? Shey na love abi lust. +rachea I dey pity u o
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by macpetrus(m): 10:07am On Dec 04, 2014
Twwwwwaaaaaaaccckkkk!... I feel the pain cry
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:07am On Dec 04, 2014
Next update drops when I get back home in the afternoon. Latest by 3 or 4pm. But your comments will do a lot in encouraging me to drop 2-3updates before that time.
Kip your comments coming.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Tuprety(f): 10:08am On Dec 04, 2014
welldone D9ty7, keep the update flowing...
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:09am On Dec 04, 2014
Bro I tells you. You know sey girl's slap dey pain person pass boy's slap. I have witnessed it before, have you been slapped by a girl before? If not, abeg find one girl wey go slap you in public.
macpetrus:
Twwwwwaaaaaaaccckkkk!... I feel the pain cry
I am still searching for dat lady who will slap me. Volunteers?
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 10:11am On Dec 04, 2014
lol
she should try and behave like onemo, atleast for the time beinq
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by macpetrus(m): 10:15am On Dec 04, 2014
D9ty7:
Bro I tells you. You know sey girl's slap dey pain person pass boy's slap. I have witnessed it before, have you been slapped by a girl before? If not, abeg find one girl wey go slap you in public.
I am still searching for dat lady who will slap me. Volunteers?

Yes.. I have receive hot slap back in secondary school days.. And I don't pray fro the day to reoccur in my life time again.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 10:22am On Dec 04, 2014
Serves him right......, dat Raphael is really crazy, he should hv wait 4 Dolapo 2 embarrass him very well, na true u talk ooo, yoruba girls get razor mouth, nd erm....D9ty7, I volunteer 2 slap anybody dat has nt experience a lady's slap b4. Thanks 4 d update. Expecting mooooooore.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by adewealth027(f): 10:25am On Dec 04, 2014
And y hasn't Rachel told her husband anything.....I keep hating her more
Well done Dolapo.......na me u resemble jare
D9ty7............yoruba gals abi?? Ifa cash u ehn.......
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by missviva(f): 10:38am On Dec 04, 2014
#Ghostmode deactivated...hehehehehe I D̶̲̥̅̊ε̲̣̣̣̥γ̲̣̣̥ feel dat slap...d9ty7 ‎​you re. Da bomb!
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 10:45am On Dec 04, 2014
adeh39:
Serves him right......, dat Raphael is really crazy, he should hv wait 4 Dolapo 2 embarrass him very well, na true u talk ooo, yoruba girls get razor mouth, nd erm....D9ty7, I volunteer 2 slap anybody dat has nt experience a lady's slap b4. Thanks 4 d update. Expecting mooooooore.

i have never recieveed.
Hopinq one day i would but the girl would not live to give her own account of the story. grin
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by alabig(m): 10:50am On Dec 04, 2014
d9ty7, your apology is yet to be justifiable. You highlighted doctor rapheal as a man of the east, which could mean that eastern doctors might be randy. Moreso, it would be pleaseful for the other side not to get annoyed if you tender justice with equality. Apologise to eastern male doctors as you did to yoruba ladies.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tobilorba14(m): 10:51am On Dec 04, 2014
stuff46:

haha
bad guy,na only you wan chop food.
We ma wan eat
then b fast abt it
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 11:03am On Dec 04, 2014
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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kocvalour(m): 11:17am On Dec 04, 2014
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Janet should be killed biko..
Stuff lemme
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Profmaojo: 11:40am On Dec 04, 2014
Mehn nice update, first time ....d story is unpredictable i just hope d story is going to end well ...a war of justice, vengers and also of next in power
kocvalour:


Janet should be killed biko..
Stuff lemme
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 12:02pm On Dec 04, 2014
Raphael God save u dat u think twice u would av being a celeb in dat hospital if dolapo finish wit u
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Flakeey(f): 12:59pm On Dec 04, 2014
nice one Dolapo dear

Mike, you need to be extra-vigilant

i be omo yoruba and i get bad mouth, D9ty7
so if u talk anything wey pass your mouth, i go sammer u ur size
*now running to hide under my boss' table*
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by handmaid: 1:22pm On Dec 04, 2014
alabig:
d9ty7, your apology is yet to be justifiable. You highlighted doctor rapheal as a man of the east, which could mean that eastern doctors might be randy. Moreso, it would be pleaseful for the other side not to get annoyed if you tender justice with equality. Apologise to eastern male doctors as you did to yoruba ladies.


hello alabig. this is just a story, a work of fiction. i do not wish to explain (in my view) wat d9ty7's reason for writing those lines you complained of were. i feel you are takin it like a serious ish, well maybe that's cos he apologised to the yoruba ladies (which wasn't so necessary, ds bn just a story)

but if u don't see it that way, I HEREBY APOLOGISE TO OUR EASTERN BROTHERS AND EVERYONE ON BEHALF OF D9TY7. BIKO DON'T BE ANGRY.

#M neither yoruba nor ibo but i hope this puts this issue to rest. one love #
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Flakeey(f): 1:35pm On Dec 04, 2014
handmaid:



hello alabig. this is just a story, a work of fiction. i do not wish to explain (in my view) wat d9ty7's reason for writing those lines you complained of were. i feel you are takin it like a serious ish, well maybe that's cos he apologised to the yoruba ladies (which wasn't so necessary, ds bn just a story)

but if u don't see it that way, I HEREBY APOLOGISE TO OUR EASTERN BROTHERS AND EVERYONE ON BEHALF OF D9TY7. BIKO DON'T BE ANGRY.

#M neither yoruba nor ibo but i hope this puts this issue to rest. one love #


yea, i agree with you my sis
Deoye and Don are yoruba and cultists
Tobilola acts like a mumu fiancee to Ngozi

we shouldn't take this fiction as a serious issue
and i also see D9ty7's appology as some kinda joke, not serious

sorry if you're offended, alabig
*kisses*
*modified*

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by handmaid: 1:38pm On Dec 04, 2014
@flakeey
thanks.
by the way, i am a 'sister' not a 'brother' o
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 1:54pm On Dec 04, 2014
Abeg o! My brothers and sisters from the East, make una no vex o. Rapheal is just one guy who has lost his dignity a long time ago. His character according to the story doesn't sum up to the behaviours of our pple from the East. He is one randy guy who chases anything in skirt, that doesn't mean every Eastern person does the same.
The apology to the Yoruba girls was just a joke cos I know people like Flakeey, Adewealth will talk. But all the same we are all one. Unity in diversity.
Once again, no vex.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by slimjoe225(m): 2:24pm On Dec 04, 2014
All i can say is bro "keep it up"
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 2:40pm On Dec 04, 2014
D9ty7:
Abeg o! My brothers and sisters from the East, make una no vex o. Rapheal is just one guy who has lost his dignity a long time ago. His character according to the story doesn't sum up to the behaviours of our pple from the East. He is one randy guy who chases anything in skirt, that doesn't mean every Eastern person does the same.
The apology to the Yoruba girls was just a joke cos I know people like Flakeey, Adewealth will talk. But all the same we are all one. Unity in diversity.
Once again, no vex.

grin (SORI IF I QUOTE YOU)
we accept youp apology
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Flakeey(f): 2:45pm On Dec 04, 2014
handmaid:
@flakeey
thanks.
by the way, i am a 'sister' not a 'brother' o


oops
so sorry for the oversight dear sis
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by creamy1990(f): 3:07pm On Dec 04, 2014
tecno4life:
Ladies drop ur digits for the whatsapp group angry


D9ty7 try ooh e no easy
am I missing sometin here,abeg whic whatsapp group be dat whts it all about
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 3:07pm On Dec 04, 2014
Currently on my way home, update will drop once I get home, in forty minutes time at worst.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by ViktorMartins(m): 3:27pm On Dec 04, 2014
D9ty7:
Currently on my way home, update will drop once I get home, in forty minutes time at worst.

Expecting the updates!
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 3:28pm On Dec 04, 2014
lacasera saying okoro was jumping d9ty7 continue grin
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 3:51pm On Dec 04, 2014
creamy1990:
am I missing sometin here,abeg whic whatsapp group be dat whts it all about

its a group for us as d9ty7 fans to chat and instead of derailing the thread with chats we chat there.

ladies drop ur digits grin
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kocvalour(m): 3:56pm On Dec 04, 2014
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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 3:57pm On Dec 04, 2014
--continuation--
Immediately Victoria drove off Mike gave some instructions to his partners in the barbing business.
"Lets go after her." Mike said.
"But why? You know she might not be one of them." One of the two detectives asked.
"I quite agree with you but, you know she might lead us to these guys." Mike explained.
"That doesn't lead us anywhere." Detective two replied.
"Lets go." He said hurriedly walking out of the shop, closely followed by detective one while detective two stayed behind in case anyone wants to barb their hair.
Luckily for them, Victoria was a gentle driver, maybe because the road was untarred and full of pot holes. She was carefully manouvering her way avoiding the port holes.
They ran after her car and just before she swung unto the main road, they got to the junction where their car was parked. The two men hopped in and followed her closely but unsuspiciously.
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Janet was begining to get impatient while Frank was trying to buy more time. He had sent messages to both Sandra and Victoria with Janet suspecting nothing, while Janet was giving him all manners of attitudes telling him he had overstayed his welcome. And Frank who knew this is his only chance to redeem himself before his cousin was trying all he could to buy more time.
He had tried everything he could and he seemed to be running out of ideas. Then he remembered their last conversation a few days ago.
He smiled as he stood up and walked towards her on the three seater couch where she was seated.
"Janet." He called.
She raised her head from the phone she was pressing and frowned at him.
"I love you." He said.
She was taken aback by what he just said but hide her suprise and eyed him angrily. Frank on his part had already spoken before he realised the gravity of what he just said. It was true that he loved her, and he had already told her about it on phone, which was why she sent her address to him so that they can talk about it, even though she knew it will never work. She was travelling to Ukraine and cannot keep a relationship here in Nigeria, because she was unsure of when her next visit would be.
Frank gave her some of his student-fling punchlines and he could see her eyes turning in their sockets while he made sure there was no slip up. He knew he had captured her heart when she opened her mouth to speak and nothing came out.
"I love you too." She said and just like a magnetic pull, he was on top of her and kissing and caressing her like his life depended on it. He knew he had bought enough time for a late coming Victoria, but while she was yet to come, he made a vow to savour the feeling and pleasure that came with the romance.
She moaned as he worked his magic on her small framed body, he tried to take things slow, a lesson he had learnt when he was much younger. He only worked on her lips and caressed her small br.e.a.st through the cloth.
After roughly five minutes of kissing, they broke free and gasped for breathe.
"I love you." She said happily.
"I love you too." He replied sincerly.
He felt the urge to tell her about Sandra's plan for her, but he knew he'd loose his life. He concluded that he'll talk to Sandra later to let her go while they seize her properties and the money in her account.
She now felt safe in his arms and decided to tell him about her intended travel.
"Baby, I am travelling out of the country this evening." She said.
She couldn't place the look on his face, maybe he was suprised, sad, happy about the news.
"When is your flight?"
"8pm." She replied.
"You just got your flight cancelled." A voice said from outside.
He knew it, Victoria was around afterall.
The knob turned and the door creaked open. A beautiful lady of about twenty four strolled in casually, she was fair in complexion, 5' 6" in height. She shut the door behind her and faced Janet.
"Who are you?" Janet asked.
"You duped you boss of eight million naira and you want to know who I am."
She looked from the lady before her to Frank who kept a straightface like he was not in the room with them.
"Now move." Victoria said removing a 9mm revolver from the small bag hunged on her shoulder.
"Frank do you know about this?" Janet asked crying.
"Don't make me use this thing on you." Victoria warned as she tucked the weapon in her bag and followed her out of the house.
They both hopped into Victoria's car which was parked outside the gate, and drove off.
"Did you see that?" Mike asked his partner.
Just then Frank drove out of the compound taking the opposite route to the one Victoria took. What suprised him the most was Victoria's attitude, she ignored him while they were in there, but anyways, he had succeeded in cleaning his name.
"Follow her." The detective said to Mike who ignited the car and followed Victoria.

--to be continued--

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