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The Day The Clouds Turned Red (crime Story) / 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] / All In A Circle...(a Crime Story)-- The Completion (2) (3) (4)
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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by donPhill(m): 8:53am On Dec 26, 2014 |
wow....wat more can i say... D9ty7 noni! |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:02am On Dec 26, 2014 |
--continuation-- As Clement drove out of the airport after he had confirmed that Dolapo's flight had taken off, he felt it will be good if he report to office for the first time in a week and at the same time express his gratitude to his colleagues who showed him love and care during the past one week. As he drove, he realised how empty and lonely he was. He realised how much he needed a comapnion, someone to talk to, even the presence of someone would do him a lot of good than harm. He decided to listen to the radio and the first radio station he tuned to caught his attention when he heard the name, Obi Patrick. He decided to stick around and listen to the news in details. And as God would have it, three minutes later, he got strucked in the traffice and at the same time, the newscaster decided to give the news that had the name Obi Patrick in details. "The International criminal court yesterday sentenced a former president of Nigeria to twenty five years imprisonment. The trial which lasted for days as presided over by Barrister Van Djik, a dutch. The president after his impeachment was charged to court by well to do Nigerians, both at home and in diaspora as well as the interference of the United state goverenment. The former president was accused and guilty of a fourteen count criminal charge and in the end was sentenced to twenty five years. Speaking to members of the press after the court verdict, the Nigerian ambassasor to the United state, Mr Bala Muktar said, the president's involvement in terrorism and killing of innocent Nigerians was totally babaric and inhumane. Mr Muktar said, the president should have gotten a more lengthier punishment. The former president was further compelled to give the names of his accomplices and those who worked with him, sources from the international court said the president mentioned, a former president of Ghana, Mr Mensah Odi, a former prime minister of Nigeria in the first republic, and a former senate president and former Nigerian ambassador to Belgium, Chief Obi Patrick. The Nigerian police are on the lookout for the aforemention political leaders." The newscaster said. "And that will be all on the morning news. Do join me at twelve o'clock for the major news at twelve. Until them, I am Maxwell Constance." This time, the traffic was begining to move as Clement with a heavy heart turned off the radio. He could remember when his pastor came visiting a few days ago, the man of God told him that all these happenings are from God and things can only get better. And when he was begining to think things are getting better, he just got another major blow in his groin. He felt sick that moment, but he wasn't convinced that his father was guilty and at the same time he wasn't conviced of his innocence. Only time would tell. ++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Kelvin picked his travelling bag and dropped it in the trunk of his Chrysler. He unlocked the door and dropped his laptop bag on the backseat. Just then, his father came out to join him. "So, do you intend to move into Khal corp now?" Chief Patrick asked. "No, I'll be moving into Sandra's apartment for now until the police forget about the case." Kelvin replied. "That's good. Just lay low for a while. I will also go into the hiding tonight, then that gives this useless police no chance against us. And before I go I will talk to Maleek, if after three days, the police are still searching for us, then he should get a team that will blow up the police headquarters." Chief Patrickk explained. "That will be good. I will personally see to the death of Clement, Ngozi and that boy Jay. He is the only one who could expose me to the police. And he is in their custody." Kelvin said. "Good one there." Chief Patrick said shaking hands with his son. Kelvin hopped into the car with tinted glasses. "Be good." His father said and at once wound up the glasses. He sped out of the compound. --to be continued-- 3 Likes 1 Share |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by jorghor(m): 9:07am On Dec 26, 2014 |
Its officially now a father and son tag team....this is gangster toh badt |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:23am On Dec 26, 2014 |
Thanks to everyone who has commented today. Adewealth027: Ehya! I never knew this story could make someone shed tears. Pricelesslove, femyodsky, jorghor, donPhil, bossricky, emmabest2000. More updates to come later in the day. Currently charging my phone. 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by jorghor(m): 9:37am On Dec 26, 2014 |
I hope you plan to go commercial with this story....its a good one |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by shankies215(f): 9:51am On Dec 26, 2014 |
D9ty7, may ur source of inspiration neva go dry! Thanks so much for d updates 1 Like |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Akinife(m): 10:05am On Dec 26, 2014 |
I have been a silent reader of ur work....nice one I must say.....but I observed inconsistences in ur locations. Like when kelvin went to attack the VP...the meeting was suppose to b in abj and kelvin is based in Lagos. Also LASU and UNILAG have been used interchangeably..,.. Love ur work! What sly,victor and rest FBI team |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by macpetrus(m): 10:13am On Dec 26, 2014 |
"She said and they both gave a short laugh, the first time in a week. Even little Amanda chuckled." So emotional ![]() Clement vs family. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:19am On Dec 26, 2014 |
Akinife:Well, maybe you missed something. Kelvin attacked the VP in Lagos, one of the stadiums. Remember, Chief Obi Patrick rode to the stadium in the same convoy with Ahmed Gulak, if you still remember the role he played, as well as Gulak's candidates for the senate and Ogun state gubernatorial office. I didn't use LASU and UNILAG interchangeably. We all know that Dolapo is a graduate of LASU. Notable mention is it that Clement is a product of UNILAG, same with Rahmon, and even Kelvin. But the point is, they were students of the school at different times. I may not be perfect, but mistakes such as this, I don't expect myself to make them. Thanks for pointing them out anyways. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by seunviju(f): 10:27am On Dec 26, 2014 |
Is anybody selling handkerchief on this thread?because I need one to wipe my tears.Happy boxing day D9ty7 and thanks for the update |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Niwdog(m): 10:37am On Dec 26, 2014 |
D9ty7. Thanks for the christmas package. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 10:39am On Dec 26, 2014 |
seunviju:*gives her bucket and handkerchief* ![]() ![]() hapi boxing day |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by emmabest2000(m): 10:40am On Dec 26, 2014 |
D9ty7:* observation * I personally don't like how you mention God with wickedness countless time ! Too much of everything is BAD !! IMO though ! 1 Like |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:54am On Dec 26, 2014 |
emmabest2000:Well, its a story and we need to it real at least. I have a perfect relationship with God and that explains what has been put in place before writing story. And how will the story look like if everyone in the story thanked God after every misfortune? We all can't have the same knowledge about God. Ask philosophers. I only tried to make it real. But all the same, I appreciate your observation. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Fareedha: 10:59am On Dec 26, 2014 |
why re u guys crying now...me too lemme cry |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by omotalkie(f): 11:02am On Dec 26, 2014 |
Eiya RIP to Rachael. i wonder how Clement will react when he finds out dat Kelvin & his dad murdered his wife. Gud work oga D9ty7 |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 11:04am On Dec 26, 2014 |
Fareedha:dunno aw to cry... Need a sexy female teacher who can teach me well..... |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Fareedha: 11:10am On Dec 26, 2014 |
Bluestarry:. I'll send one of our well behaved sexy teacher over ko |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 11:30am On Dec 26, 2014 |
Fareedha:wow am grateful but before she finish her teachings, she will be one of your best sex freaked sexy treacher over ko.... Am a teacher you know?... |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 11:34am On Dec 26, 2014 |
--continuation-- The sympathy he recieved from colleagues the moment he drove into the polic headquarters was unexpected and as a matter of fact out of this world. Everyone left what they were doing to say 'hi' to Inspector Clement and tell him everything would be fine. His suprise was capped off when he entered the commissioner of police office and saw a stranger. It was later he learnt that the former police commissioner has been transferred to Akwa Ibom and the newest state police chief was brought in from Imo state. He had chatted with the new boss who seemed firm and ready to work with any willing polic officer. "I am deeply sorry about your wife Mr Clement." The new commissioner said with sincerity. From his estimation, Clement knew the man should be in his early or mid forties. So that explains his preparedness and agility. "I want every suspected insurgent group members nabbed and brought to book. I have gone through your profile and I must say I am impressed. As young as I am, I didn't achieve half of what you have achieved now as an Inspector before I became a D.P.O and now a commissioner. I know we can both make things happen, which is why I am entrusting this case to you." The commissioner had said towards the end of the chat. "I am always ready to work and serve my fatherland sir." Clement replied. "I have also made up my mind that, the visiting FBI agents assisting us here would be allowed to go so that our men here can do the job they were employed to do. Or what do you think?" "It won't be a bad idea if we let them leave, but our corporative efforts has paid off and we've achieved a lot from working together. Lets work together to the end sir." Clement explained. At the end of the chat, the commisioner said something which Clement from his private interaction with various commissioners of police. "I want result within days. And if the need arises, I can always lead a backup team into the picture. Therefore, don't hesitate to give me a call if things threatens to go wrong. I can achieve little or nothing in this office of mine." He exchange pleasantries with his boss once again and left his office, head held up in the high, swelling with pride, ego and determination. Ruthlessness was on his mind, revenge was boiling in him and the desire to make use of his gun on the killers of his wife was what clouded his mind. ----------- His ever present colleagues were waiting for him in the waiting rrom by the time he finished with the commissioner. "You've spoken with him?" Sylvester asked excitedly. "Yeah." Clement replied. "So, what do you think? Don't you think he is the kind of boss we have been lacking since the begining?" Mike asked in a bid to spite Sylvester and his friends(the ex-commissioner) "Yeah, he is." Clement replied. He walked over to the counter and signed in officially inside the attendance book. "What new development do we have in place apart from the president's case and revelations?" He asked. Everyone knew he didn't want to talk about his father's involvement in Khal corp emergence and activities or maybe he wanted to handle the case his own way, or another person should handle the case. "Deoye and his gang has been transferred to Alausa state police command, from where they'll be taken to court tomorrow. Habeeb, Viktor and Jay are the few criminals we have around." Mike explained. "Okay, so, have you gotten anything new for any of them?" Clement asked. "It is obvious that Khal corp used Habeeb because he didn't know much about the corporation. He only gives them informations. Viktor is a bloody driver who didn't know much as well. But from my interaction with Jay, he seemed to know a lot, because he has a tattoo on his chest which can only be found on top members. He claimed to know everyone under the mask at the corporation and most importantly, the man, Danger-kelv. He promised to talk only if he set his eyes on you." Mike explained further. "Then, what are we awiting for? Lets go in then." Clement said heading towards the left wing of the station where cells and questioning room were located. Everyone seemed to love the new Clement. Who talked less, who listened to explanations less, but acted more. Its a start of something new. Ngozi thought as she reluctantly followed the three men. She couldn't imagine what would happen to Jay, with this new Clement, he could shoot him just to make him talk. END OF CHAPTER TWENTY THREE |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 11:51am On Dec 26, 2014 |
Jay will tel them expose khal corps hideout, danger-kelv infact everybdy danger kelv will b caught b4 reaching sandra's house same wit chief obi patrick #guessing tho |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 12:25pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
racheal our dearest lovely wife rip new clement.. smh jay help fight insurgence of karl corp plese oga d, no words for you for now |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Oyinprince(m): 12:41pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
Wow! I got emotional here . Clement has been badly hit |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 1:09pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
Rounakid: tears him hot slap** iam not joking |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 1:28pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
stuff46:ahh bros u wnt kill psn pikin wit dat ur king kong hand?? |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Michaellegend(m): 1:57pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
Viewing this topic: amigos( f ), Karevwite(m ), hotswagg12 , Chemmzy (f ), misslambo (f ) and 2 guest(s) caught them in HD. oya make Una comment sharperly. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Natty14(m): 2:37pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
nice job d9ty7! u ar talent. keep the fire burning! |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Ebbisco(f): 2:44pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
Excellent job D9ty7. Thanks for the updates. Meanwhile, #TEAMCLEMENT |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Rounakid(m): 2:55pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
Onemansquad:*sobbinq* u no see wetin he do me...? |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Rounakid(m): 2:57pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
stuff46:**shouts in pain** aaaaaah...! Dis quy don kill me oooh... **drops d weapon and flee for mah dear life...** |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by donPhill(m): 3:39pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
kelvin ll only b caught in sandra's house cos he might have reached b4 jay ll expose hin (dats if he tell d police abt d hideout) i feel he only wants to tell clement abt his brother's involvement only. Ride-on D9ty7 ...cnt wait 2see tinz unfold BTW happy BOXING-DAY all |
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