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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Kolynz(m): 3:47pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
Always rep #team_DangerKelv |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Lilyomi(f): 3:58pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
I was expectin Rachel's mum to seek custody for da child. Chidinma never heats da news? Akpan's fam too never came for him? And Dr Raphael jus went away, da death cud av caused Clement to retaliate. All in all, I'm so in love with the write up. The morale never went down. Lile I said earlier, D9ty7 was born with a pen. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Lilyomi(f): 4:00pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
I was expectin Rachel's mum to seek custody for da child and blame Dolapo for the demise. Chidinma never heard da news? Akpan's fam too never came for him? And Dr Raphael jus went away? Da death cud av caused Clement to retaliate. All in all, I'm so in love with the write up. The morale never went down. Like I said earlier, D9ty7 was born with a pen. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 4:11pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
Lilyomi:Well, big sis, under normal circumstance things should have played out that way. But remember Clement saying something like, for Amanda's safety, she had to leave the country, and coincidentally, Dolapo had to travel out too. Why should I bore you with Akpan's family involvement? I am trying to cut some characters off, and you want me to add more. Its just like I am giving you details of how Darasimi, Chioma, Dayo, Hadiza and Tolani were buried. I hope you understand? Doctor Rapheal? Its my fault, I didn't add him among the criminals in detention. He was actually arrested by Mike, remember, Clement called him to show up at the hospital. Thanks for pointing them out anyways. 1 Like |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by d4real890(m): 4:22pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
Hayaya original gobe #teamforgivenessisasin |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 4:42pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
Rounakid:ur mouth 2mch jor u tank God wey i quickly cum rescue u if nt stuff46 go murder u ni oo |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kingphilip(m): 4:50pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
Wow d9ty7 u r really trying in this piece well I predicted the piece might b on the rush n I'm already noticing it but it's gud in another way sha since we aren't bothered with unnecessary scenes I think Kelvin is making a mistake by going to Sandra's place he should have driven straight to khal corp n get some protection |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Fatalveli(m): 4:52pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
[b]D9ty7 but u said earlier that Ngozi told her parents that she had seen her long lost brother(jay) and promised them that she would visit them together with jay..... Weeks have pass now and you still haven't talked about them..... Is her parents not pressurising her |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by seunviju(f): 4:56pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
Me I don't need a bucket o Onemansquad: |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by donPhill(m): 5:28pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
if u de thirsty comment oo....cos am seeing much ghost readers |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Olanireti(m): 6:14pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
Nice job you are doing here. kudos to you. I guess the story is moving to the end sha. And I hope danger kelv, chief Patrick are ask brought to justice. let's see how it goes. I hope Clement well not die sha |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by shankies215(f): 6:25pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
D9ty7, u promised to kil just one person nd u kill two? Akpan nd Rachael |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Rounakid(m): 7:18pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
Onemansquad:**still sobbinq...** Oqa ''D'' u no wan say smtin ba...? Shey u dy side him abi...? Okay ooo seun must hear dis... **starts leavinq d thread, then remembered smtin and stopped** eeehen... B4 i forqet oqa onemansquad, tnk u for savinq me from dat beast **turns back and countinue headinq to unknown place ** |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by teamplayey: 7:23pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
shankies215:. . .That is what I have been wondering oh. But una no regard man Akpan as person now. Na so life dey |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by florjay(f): 8:26pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
*Wiping out everything I wrote * Am speechless, this 1 has pass Nollywood standard. Abeg wetin dem dey call American Wood, that is where dis story is supposed to be. Oga D, no turn this story to season film ooooo Almost all the protagonist has been wiped out, Someone Please do Nigeria president actually serve jail term, I mean in practice not inside CONSTITUTION |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 8:30pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
Me beast Rounakid: oga d sorry if iam derailinq buh i gahs teach dz boy say ... 1 Like |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 8:34pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
florjay:4 dis present time Asuming na d old nigeria i fit agree small bt nw? Mbano d9ty7 u too harsh oo considering d fact say we dy 9ja dat tin no fit hapen oo |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by mariamferanmi(f): 9:09pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
D9ty7 u are truly a genius!!!! I need an handkerchief pls *crying* 4 Rachael is dis how she take go RIP!!! We love u but kelvin wasted ur life!! Dolapo may God protect u at state ooo n little amanda!l |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 9:17pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
mariamferanmi:*gives her bucket and handkerchief* |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:30pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
CHAPTER TWENTY FOUR Kelvin drove into Sandra Oselu's compound. "Welcome oga." Sabur greeted. "Yeah. Thank you." Kelvin replied. "Is your madam in?" He asked. Sabur nodded in affirmation as he helped Kelvin lift his bag off the car trunk. The two men strolled towards the main house. There was nothing unusual in the compound, save for a cream coloured toyota camry which was parked just in front of Sabur's house. He kept mute and decided to see who has the car, maybe it belonged to Sandra afterall, but would she buy a car like this? He wasn't sure. Seeing they say is believing. ------------ Sandra was seated on a two seater couch beside her lawyer, Barrister Benson who was seated on a single seater couch, with his ever present tablet device on the arm of the chair. "So, how do you intend to go about this case?" Benson asked. "I should ask you this question. You are the lawyer here, you are the one handling this case, you should be able to pull it off. All I want is that, Victoria must not be jailed." Sandra replied. Benson heaved a very deep sigh. "Well, we'll need to provide convincing evidences before the court first, then we can think of other things. The reason why she had a gun in her possession must first be trashed out, its self defence, but no one saw her use the gun except the two men she killed in her room. And the second task is to outsmart Rahmon's wittiness. No doubt, he would try to make sure, Victoria gets sentenced too, so he would do the unthinkable just to convict her. The thing now is, the FBI agent who was a witness can't reach a compromise with us, therefore bribe is out of our options. The second option has to do with you." Benson explained and stopped to see Sandra's reaction. "Me?" She asked. "Yes, you." He replied. "How?" "Good, you'll provide evidences that you were blackmailed by a certain group of people and you paid them eight million naira. You will tell them you contacted Victoria to help you trace the e-mail through which the pictures and proceedure of payment was sent. Being a computer expert, she was able to get the location which happened to be an old friend, from the university, Rahmon. He got to know about Victoria's involvement and decided to punish her. That brings us to the business deal Rahmon was discussing with Vicky that night." Benson explained. She really loved his plans and they looked brilliant in sight, but ugly if digged deep. First was her involvement and decision to act as a witness, what if things go wrong and Vicky gets a jail term, then she'll be labelled a criminal who defended a criminal on falsehood. A whole international model, what would her clients think? The companies she is affliated with, what would be their reactions to the endorsement deals binding them? And the other side of the whole plan includes the moral aspect of life. Who would be so bold to go before a court of law and present her own sex pixtures? Even if she ended up winning the case, what would people say? Then the reason why she paid eight million naira then would be exposed, then loosing at both ends. The door into the living room opened and Kelvin walked in with Sabur behind him. "Hey sweety." Sandra said running to hug him. After almost minute of hugs and kisses, the two love birds decide to bring their audiences out of their miseries. "You didn't tell me you were coming." Sandra said pouting her lips. "Sorry darling, its a suprise visit and I would be spending a few week with you here." He replied. "Waoh! That's good." She exclaimed. "Come and meet Barrister Benson, my lawyer." She said pulling him into the living room proper. "Barrister Benson." He said extending his hand. "Kelvin Obi Patrick." Kelvin said without removing his hands from his pocket. Benson flashed red from embarrasment that moment, but who was he to question another man's decision not to greet him. "The same Obi Patrick?" Benson asked. Kelvin ignored him and collected his bag from Sabur who was dismissed immediately and exactly that moment, Janet walked into the living room and helped Kelvin with his bags. "Every lawyer is interested in your father's case. We just hope that when he is eventually arrested, he shouldn't be taken to the ICC for trial. We can nail him here also. Only God knows the empire he wants to build in this tate." Benson said, no one asked him to tell a story. "Don't you dare talk ill of my family." Kelvin warned silently. "Go inside baby, I will join you soon." Sandra said when she realised the tension in the room was becoming too much. --to be continued-- |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by adewealth027(f): 9:36pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
E be like say dis benson mouth dey loose abi?? BTW..............nice update And am using dis medium to invite everyone to my birthday tomorrow |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:38pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
florjay:Try and not miss important words in the story. If I make mistakes, I don't think I can with anything relating to politics and polity, most esecially in Nigeria. Before the president's trial in the Internation criminal court, he has been impeached. In one of the updates, there was a joint sitting of the two federal houses. But thanks for pointing this out all the same. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:43pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
Onemansquad:What exactly are you talking about? Is there anything American in the story? |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by macpetrus(m): 9:57pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
Kelvin on the run...... |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by onosj(f): 10:03pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
Kelvin if u like make u run go meet devil self Clement must bring u dawn. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 10:06pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
D9ty7:bros dats nt what i mean.. Am jst relating dat part whr u said d Ex-president was given 25yrs imprisonment to what is happening presently in 9ja .. Shey u get or ma explain further?? 1 Like |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by donPhill(m): 10:25pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
chai...make benson no fuckup oo.... He is bringing good plans on vickky bt she has already explain all to her clement...now would clement play along Addewealth027 "d parry venue" |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:56pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
Onemansquad:Abeg explain further. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 11:12pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
D9ty7:i mean its hard 4 a president , ex-president or any political leader to get a 25yrs imprisonment no matter the crime he commits he will still find his way out #shey u get or u nid more |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 11:25pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
Onemansquad:Well, from Nigeria's useless judicial system, its impossible. But in this context, I mention an international court and not the supreme court in Abuja. Iraq's president, Saddam Hussein was sentenced to death, all thanks to the United states and our African boy, Obama. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Tobilastik(m): 11:46pm On Dec 26, 2014 |
D9ty7: lol, I love hw dz guy dy counter bk, keep it up bro |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 12:42am On Dec 27, 2014 |
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO ADEWEALTH027!!! |
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