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The Day The Clouds Turned Red (crime Story) / 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] / All In A Circle...(a Crime Story)-- The Completion (2) (3) (4)

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 12:14am On Jan 23, 2015
*25gun salute 4 baba God

*20gun salute 2 d9ty7 again?? yes anoda gun salute cos he is 2mch

*10gun salute 2 all d actors who died in dis movie;-hassan, tolani,rachael, sly's wife, sylvester,chioma,hadiza,deoye,dayo,capt sanni, all the policemen and soldiers who lost their lives, darasimi nd d rest may their soul RIP

*15gun salute 2 clement,ngozi, dolapo,d new commissioner, and d rest
*15gun salute to my guys mehn u guys ar d best
adeh39, adewealth027, stuff46, bluestarry, handie, lilyomi, skimpledawg, fatalveli, uthman51, flakeey, ogbarmey, tecno4life, kingphilhp, shankies215, mariamferanmi, bdabuwa, emmykul4love, labaski, tharuthlxx7,omotalkie, niwdog, tenajtek, flakkydagirl..and to evry thread member dat has read and wil read dis story.

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Donpoker9(m): 12:14am On Jan 23, 2015
action packed story... reminds me of mynd44' story: The Guardians, the rise of the powers that be....







d9ty7 thank you...
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 12:23am On Jan 23, 2015
Onemansquad:
*25gun salute 4 baba God

*20gun salute 2 d9ty7 again?? yes anoda gun salute cos he is 2mch

*10gun salute 2 all d actors who died in dis movie;-hassan, tolani,rachael, sly's wife, sylvester,chioma,hadiza,deoye,dayo,capt sanni, all the policemen and soldiers who lost their lives, darasimi nd d rest may their soul RIP

*15gun salute 2 clement,ngozi, dolapo,d new commissioner, and d rest
*15gun salute to my guys mehn u guys ar d best
adeh39, adewealth027, stuff46, bluestarry, handie, lilyomi, skimpledawg, fatalveli, uthman51, flakeey, ogbarmey, tecno4life, kingphilhp, shankies215 bdabuwa, emmykul4love, labaski, tharuthlxx7,flakkydagirl..and to evry thread member dat has read and wil read dis story.


Yeah
And oga D9ty7 come tell people for WhatsApp the name of ur next story before any other pesin grin
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 12:27am On Jan 23, 2015
ThaRuthlxx7:
Atlast this story has ended..
But D9ty7 why i no see my name for the mention.. OooooooOoooOo am not important okwia?? Just chiale'gudi mma bia

U no know say ur name hard to spell offhand grin
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by donPhill(m): 12:35am On Jan 23, 2015
wow...cant believe someone with presentation is still glued to his phone this hour....u really nailed me man
and am a proud to notice a thread as such... Have finally read d story to d end...
**what have i learnt?? In a sentence(compound)
terrorism is nt a game to play along with and just like law of kama, what goes around comes around...all actions got price, people have to sacrifice for d peace of others(clement; being handicapped, losing wife), people re betrayals(typical of habeeb and sly) many police died(okoro and co) some re born killers(dats my nigga DANGER-KELV:my best character)
it's all good,oga D9TY7 ...........i twale!!

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by donPhill(m): 12:39am On Jan 23, 2015
tecno4life:


U no know say ur name hard to spell offhand grin
help me tell am oo
some names wey if u no eat pounded yam u no fit pronounce

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Uthman51(m): 12:41am On Jan 23, 2015
D9ty7 I swear my father you remain d best...even God him self confirmed it...more wine to your cup joo....God bless you...

***I wan kiss you b4 but as I remember *14years* hmm... I no wan b victim oo**
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Uthman51(m): 12:46am On Jan 23, 2015
Onemansquad:
*25gun salute 4 baba God

*20gun salute 2 d9ty7 again?? yes anoda gun salute cos he is 2mch

*10gun salute 2 all d actors who died in dis movie;-hassan, tolani,rachael, sly's wife, sylvester,chioma,hadiza,deoye,dayo,capt sanni, all the policemen and soldiers who lost their lives, darasimi nd d rest may their soul RIP

*15gun salute 2 clement,ngozi, dolapo,d new commissioner, and d rest
*15gun salute to my guys mehn u guys ar d best
adeh39, adewealth027, stuff46, bluestarry, handie, lilyomi, skimpledawg, fatalveli, uthman51, flakeey, ogbarmey, tecno4life, kingphilhp, shankies215 bdabuwa, emmykul4love, labaski, tharuthlxx7,flakkydagirl..and to evry thread member dat has read and wil read dis story.

I beg supply us better orijin and alomo
]maybe make u add small Igbo inside palm wine come
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Edipee(m): 12:51am On Jan 23, 2015
Waoh! Finally, congrats and thanks to you Sir.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by toykathy(f): 12:53am On Jan 23, 2015
like seriously? I wont be refreshing dis page 2 check 4 updates? Wow! D9ty7, The way u ended dis story proves 2 things 2 me: u re nt influenced by reader's comments and u re so good at what u do. Thz alot 4 dis beautiful ride, bigger u i pray bro. Btw, thz 4d mention. I will definately miss dis story.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by ThaRuthlxx7: 1:18am On Jan 23, 2015
angry donphil and tecno4life the way i go use handle una... Even united nations can't save u guys.

I dy wait D9ty for back door make hin come pass, person go wound this morning, ***where my dagger**
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by ThaRuthlxx7: 1:19am On Jan 23, 2015
Onemansquad:
*25gun salute 4 baba God

*20gun salute 2 d9ty7 again?? yes anoda gun salute cos he is 2mch

*10gun salute 2 all d actors who died in dis movie;-hassan, tolani,rachael, sly's wife, sylvester,chioma,hadiza,deoye,dayo,capt sanni, all the policemen and soldiers who lost their lives, darasimi nd d rest may their soul RIP

*15gun salute 2 clement,ngozi, dolapo,d new commissioner, and d rest
*15gun salute to my guys mehn u guys ar d best
adeh39, adewealth027, stuff46, bluestarry, handie, lilyomi, skimpledawg, fatalveli, uthman51, flakeey, ogbarmey, tecno4life, kingphilhp, shankies215 bdabuwa, emmykul4love, labaski, tharuthlxx7,flakkydagirl..and to evry thread member dat has read and wil read dis story.


Oms i no get change i for find u something.. Welldone
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tenajtek(f): 3:26am On Jan 23, 2015
CONGRATULATIONS!!!! D9ty7 . Was really surprised at the mention; thanks all the same. I pray that God will bless all you do with naira and dollars! Keep shining!
CONGRATULATIONS EVERYONE!! WE MADE IT!!!
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kocvalour(m): 3:47am On Jan 23, 2015
lol d9ty7 tight shaa..
God go make u Bigggggger
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by fam24(f): 4:09am On Jan 23, 2015
Whao. d9ty7, u are really good. Seeing a literature Nobel prize coming to Nigeria.
the thread which made me join NL
the thread which made me glued to my phone
U ARE THE BEST. Regular update, nice story


Nevertheless, I be Oliver Twist, when should we expect update on THE THOMAS?



God bless u gidigba.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by bigwig97(m): 4:57am On Jan 23, 2015
hmmmm....what a gr8 story 4rm a gr8 writer, d9ty7... baba D, u are the best
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by busyinks(f): 6:05am On Jan 23, 2015
Wouldn't read dis nd nt commenting, you surely d best man. Thumbs up
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Scholesjnr(m): 6:13am On Jan 23, 2015
Chaii! At last... D9ty7 anybody wey say u no b genius... D person mama there.... (dancing) shoki.... (drinking) alomo and pammy... Chai.. U b bomb.... no b ordinary boko haram bomb... Thanks man!
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by hebenz(m): 6:56am On Jan 23, 2015
mhennn dis is awesome... great ending bt i'd av loved ngo and clem 2 b 2geda oooo.... great work from a great MAN
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by omotalkie(f): 7:08am On Jan 23, 2015
Onemansquad:
Woow woow woow so our 5months old story is finally cumin 2 an end *jst fil lyk it shuld continue* bt it cant "evrytin dat has begining has an end"

d9ty7 ur humble fans are waitin 4 u
Cc;
adeh39
adewealth027
stuff46
bluestarry
handie
lilyomi
skimpledawg
fatalveli
uthman51
flakeey
ogbarmey
tecno4life
bdabuwa
emmykul4love
labaski
tharuthlxx7
flakkydagirl
So am not included among d fans right ok ooh
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 7:10am On Jan 23, 2015
Good morning guys, you know what? I am missing you all already. And I very much appreciate all the comments, and that person comparing me to Dan Brown. Aish! Tho I have never read any of his books, but hey! I am just starting.
And to those whose names I forgot to mention their names, no vex na.
ThaRuthlxx7- You know sey you offend me sha. All the things you did to Adeh. I go arrest you, na small e remain.
Uthman51 is another long time follower of my story. Abeg, fourteen years no be joke o. I give you the permission, instead of kissing me, why not kiss Shankies215?
Seunviju- I for remember you name o, but you offend me big time. Since this story started, you are always with a bottle of viju milk everyday and you never for once gave me one teaspoonful. But its all good sha, I go forgive you for you do not know what you are doing.
Scholesjnr- See you in the champions league next season. Man utd must sign you.
Busyinks- Thanks.
Bigwig97- Your story still dey run?
Fam24- I appreciate. The Thomas will resume on monday.
Edipee- Its nice having you from the start till the end.
Donpoker9- You be baba.
Donkaz, Lordkayy, Pharmfonex.
Niwdog is another loyal follower of the story, right from the start, but he suddenly went missing. I no forget you bro, you are well appreciated. A blessing from God to mankind.
I am also using this opportunity to thank my friends who joined Nairaland because d9ty7(a very good friend of theirs) is posting his stories here. They actually came to mock me, but God disappointed them. lol
Rahma26, Jornson, Mhot42 and others who refused to tell me their usernames.
Most importantly, Emzypaz, the biggest character builder ever liveth.
Also, my big time gf...*winks. She stopped reading both on paper and Nairaland the moment Tolani died. She bears Tolani and that explains it. If I write another story and there is a Tolani in there, she would die!
Lastly I give it to the guests, I don't know them but their presence were felt. Almost 200,000 views, almost 200pages. Omo! This one na record o.
There is also a MMA22, you are the best.
I love you all.

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Niwdog(m): 7:13am On Jan 23, 2015
Wow! Thank God the story ended in a nice way.
D9ty7 i appreciate you for this wonderful piece.
Thanks and remain bless
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 7:15am On Jan 23, 2015
What was I thinking? I didn't include our mummy, Omotalkie.
She gave birth to an all in a circle baby. Did you see the girl's picture? She is cute.
And when the girl grows up, make sure she reads this story. Tell her, this story was written when she was born, so she should respect the story. Lol.
You are indeed a big sister.
To those who celebrated their birthdays when this story was on, Fareedha, Mehrigold, Adewealth027 and others. Also, another reader of this story became a grduate when this story was on, Handie, a bigger you I pray.
You guys are just too numerous to mention. Walahi

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 7:20am On Jan 23, 2015
omotalkie:
So am not included among d fans right ok ooh
wat? shocked did i jst omit ur name shocked am sori ma
#included
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 7:29am On Jan 23, 2015
[b]AND FOR THE FACT THAT WE HAVE SPENT A LOT OF TIME TOGETHER, FIVE MONTHS. WALAHI, BABY WEY DEM BORN THAT TIME GO DON BEGIN DEY WALK. LOL
I HAVE DECIDED TO DROP THE TITLE OF MY NEXT STORY HERE. I KNOW IT WILL BE A HUGE SUCCESS, ANOTHER CRIME STORY, BUT WITH A SAD ENDING. YOU GUYS HAVE THE POWER TO MAKE IT SUCCESSFUL.
IT IS ALSO A VERY LONG STORY, BUT AND I HOPE IT WILL BE BIGGER AND BETTER THAN ALL IN A CIRCLE, PROVIDED YOU GUYS LOVE IT.
IT IS TITLED: 1985.... 1987.... 2014¤¤(A crime story)
The title looks somehow abi? Walahi, I don think but no title came and I decided to do something diffrent by using the dates in the story.
About the story;
In 1985, there was a war between the three major ethnic groups in Nigeria. A major character during the war was Colonel Mark Anthony and after the war in 1987, there was a millitary coup where Mark became the millitary vice president and a few months later, his government was toppled in another coup. His family was displaced, he became a living ghost. He went on facial disguise, and in 2014, many years after Nigeria began practicing democracy, he announced his presence in disguise just the way Chief Obi Patrick did in All in a circle.
An American detective was paid to help Nigeria end terrorism and he worked with a top female Nigerian detective.
Did they succeed?
Just what you are thinking. Did they fall in love?
Where did it all lead them?
How did it all end?
This story can make you shed tears, so, know what you are in for.
That's just the story in brief.
[/b]

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 7:30am On Jan 23, 2015
Wow! Wow!! Wow!!!. Honestly speaking, this is the best story I've ever read on nairaland.

Oga d9ty7 you are talented. This story is a bomb i must confess. I love your works. I enjoyed it while it lasted but i wish it didn't have an end.

Tualeee to you my boss, your works have inspired a lot of souls. I also pray that terrorism in Nigeria will be brought down sooner or later.

All the same, i expect more mind blowing piece from you in a weeks time cheesycheesycheesy

my shouts out to my niggers, ye all know yourself, for the whatsapp group.
thanks for your time and efforts. God bless d9ty7, God bless Nairaland, God bless Nigeria.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Digriz(m): 7:32am On Jan 23, 2015
Wow! wow!! I was never a visitor to literature section of nairaland until this story.This story won my heart and literature section became my most visited section of nairaland since then.
The updates were regular and long and everything about the story was mind blowing. I can't say more but to give a great thanks to you D9ty7 for this wonderful story full of suspense.More grease to ur elbow and more ink to ur pen,u are a wonderful writer and the best for me in nairaland.
I will not fail to say thank you also for acknowledging my presense as one of the followers in this story, may God bless you.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 7:37am On Jan 23, 2015
D9ty7:
[b]AND FOR THE FACT THAT WE HAVE SPENT A LOT OF TIME TOGETHER, FIVE MONTHS. WALAHI, BABY WEY DEM BORN THAT TIME GO DON BEGIN DEY WALK. LOL
I HAVE DECIDED TO DROP THE TITLE OF MY NEXT STORY HERE. I KNOW IT WILL BE A HUGE SUCCESS, ANOTHER CRIME STORY, BUT WITH A SAD ENDING. YOU GUYS HAVE THE POWER TO MAKE IT SUCCESSFUL.
IT IS ALSO A VERY LONG STORY, BUT AND I HOPE IT WILL BE BIGGER AND BETTER THAN ALL IN A CIRCLE, PROVIDED YOU GUYS LOVE IT.
IT IS TITLED: 1985.... 1987.... 2014¤¤(A crime story)
The title looks somehow abi? Walahi, I don think but no title came and I decided to do something diffrent by using the dates in the story.
About the story;
In 1985, there was a war between the three major ethnic groups in Nigeria. A major character during the war was Colonel Mark Anthony and after the war in 1987, there was a millitary coup where Mark became the millitary vice president and a few months later, his government was toppled in another coup. His family was displaced, he became a living ghost. He went on facial disguise, and in 2014, many years after Nigeria began practicing democracy, he announced his presence in disguise just the way Chief Obi Patrick did in All in a circle.
An American detective was paid to help Nigeria end terrorism and he worked with a top female Nigerian detective.
Did they succeed?
Just what you are thinking. Did they fall in love?
Where did it all lead them?
How did it all end?
This story can make you shed tears, so, know what you are in for.
That's just the story in brief.
[/b]
sorry for quoting.
with the power vested upon me, i command you...yes you... You d9t7, i command you to open a thread and kick start the story now now now or else * removes my catapult* do you want this to blow out your balls?
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 7:43am On Jan 23, 2015
Digriz:
Wow! wow!! I was never a visitor to literature section of nairaland until this story.This story won my heart and literature section became my most visited section of nairaland since then.
The updates were regular and long and everything about the story was mind blowing. I can't say more but to give a great thanks to you D9ty7 for this wonderful story full of suspense.More grease to ur elbow and more ink to ur pen,u are a wonderful writer and the best for me in nairaland.
I will not fail to say thank you also for acknowledging my presense as one of the followers in this story, may God bless you.
i tell you, the guy is a doro. Doro d9ty7
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by ThaRuthlxx7: 7:55am On Jan 23, 2015
D9ty bigs up to u, my man..
I wasn't really following any order story apart than and a little of blue.starry's.. Its good, i remember at first i was sayn the action i was expecting from this work was working out well. But as time goes on i learnt not to judge a book by it cover. For the main time lemme chill off. Till we meet in the next story.D9ty bigs up to u, my man..
I wasn't really following any order story apart than and a little of blue.starry's.. Its good, i remember at first i was sayn the action i was expecting from this work was working out well. But as time goes on i learnt not to judge a book by it cover. For the main time lemme chill off. Till we meet in the next story.
D9ty bigs up to u, my man..
I wasn't really following any order story apart than and a little of blue.starry's.. Its good, i remember at first i was sayn the action i was expecting from this work was working out well. But as time goes on i learnt not to judge a book by it cover. For the main time lemme chill off. Till we meet in the next story.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 7:58am On Jan 23, 2015
i can't help but cry at the epilogue,its so touching....
All thanks to God i saw the beginning and the end of this story...
Oga D9TY7 when is a new one starting
you are one of the talents we can't afford to lose in Nigeria
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 8:03am On Jan 23, 2015
Bluestarry:
sorry for quoting.
with the power vested upon me, i command you...yes you... You d9t7, i command you to open a thread and kick start the story now now now or else * removes my catapult* do you want this to blow out your balls?
Thug!

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