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| The Poem I Wrote To Propose by penplayer: 11:58am On Apr 22, 2015 |
A poem for proposal Moment after moments, time over time, I close my eyes silently, expecting the nothingness of darkness, but instead, an image forms straight in my head. A beautiful creature beclouds my sight as the fog on an early day. I keep my eyes closed for the image is not one I wish to fade. It is as the sweet meat which takes every space in my mouth as I chew on deliciously. The sweet sensation of cold water on the mind on a sunny day. Moment after moment, I wish this fantasy of mine will hit reality when I open my eyes. Beholding you keeps my heart beating hard, its solemn rhythm goes discordant at your voice. Of course, it seems involuntary, but your beauty is that which gets my mind racing. I slowly recede into loneliness, hoping for the day you ll show my heart mercy and liven its undesirable boredom. Every second, time ticks on tick tock, my ultimate wish is to be your sunlight, to lighten your path. I'd liken your character to the moon, illuminated by the sunlight. Have you seen a good sailor, his suit all white, steering the ship rightly and ne'er to sink, so shall my love for you be. Let me be the pillow which supports your head in the night, and the golden jacket which protects your body even on a cold winter day. Not only are you the beautiful flower on the fruitful golden plant. You are also the root which nurtures life to multiply. Around you, I feel the confidence of rowing against the wind and winning life battles. I wish you'd come to me and let me treat you as the golden queen of my heart, the priceless gold in my treasure box. You are as the oasis, giving life to the desert riders, oh how I wish to stay by you always. Blessed is the day I came to know you. Don't make me wait till eternity. Let's together unite our hearts and bless the world with the goodness of love. #Altarboy ©penplayer.com c.c. mhyra |
| Re: The Poem I Wrote To Propose by DuchessLily(f): 12:00pm On Apr 22, 2015 |
Nice! But is it not too long? |
| Re: The Poem I Wrote To Propose by buygala(m): 12:00pm On Apr 22, 2015 |
The girl for don turn grandma before she finish that epistle  an example of what you should have written..... Baby, l love you  Talk your own |
| Re: The Poem I Wrote To Propose by mhyra(f): 2:59pm On Apr 22, 2015 |
hmm, it's a beautiful piece. but please, do I know you? |
| Re: The Poem I Wrote To Propose by Nobody: 3:54pm On Apr 22, 2015 |
Clap for yourself |
| Re: The Poem I Wrote To Propose by 2dice(m): 4:06pm On Apr 22, 2015 |
1 Like |
| Re: The Poem I Wrote To Propose by penplayer: 5:19pm On Apr 22, 2015 |
mhyra: Nice finishing . You don't. I just kinda wondered how a random unknown pretty lady like you would react to something like this. Don't mind me. *stretches his hands* I'm Emmanuel. 1 Like |
| Re: The Poem I Wrote To Propose by mhyra(f): 5:48pm On Apr 22, 2015 |
penplayer:phew! I thought i had a bad memory. I'm Rachel. nice meeting you. plus, I think you're specially gifted  |
| Re: The Poem I Wrote To Propose by penplayer: 5:57pm On Apr 22, 2015 |
buygala: Haba! On a 1-minute read. My would-be girl must be tired of 'I love you' already |
| Re: The Poem I Wrote To Propose by penplayer: 5:59pm On Apr 22, 2015 |
mhyra: Thanks. My pleasure. Let's be friends, if you don't mind. |
| Re: The Poem I Wrote To Propose by habeebcole: 6:01pm On Apr 22, 2015 |
guy u carry eyes go market |
| Re: The Poem I Wrote To Propose by penplayer: 6:03pm On Apr 22, 2015 |
habeebcole: Thamks man... lol |
| Re: The Poem I Wrote To Propose by habeebcole: 6:08pm On Apr 22, 2015 |
penplayer:lol....bt this your pose @d.p gidi gan ooo |
| Re: The Poem I Wrote To Propose by Nobody: 6:10pm On Apr 22, 2015 |
Flash back memory... Mhyra *smiles @ her* |
| Re: The Poem I Wrote To Propose by marieolae(f): 6:10pm On Apr 22, 2015 |
Originality is the best,, seriously mehn 1 Like |
| Re: The Poem I Wrote To Propose by penplayer: 6:13pm On Apr 22, 2015 |
| Re: The Poem I Wrote To Propose by penplayer: 6:15pm On Apr 22, 2015 |
marieolae: Sure! than the 'I love you' I wanna marry you' words. |
| Re: The Poem I Wrote To Propose by mhyra(f): 6:17pm On Apr 22, 2015 |
penplayer:I don't mind.. hope you're good. |
| Re: The Poem I Wrote To Propose by penplayer: 6:19pm On Apr 22, 2015 |
mhyra: Nice. And I am, what about you? |
| Re: The Poem I Wrote To Propose by mhyra(f): 6:20pm On Apr 22, 2015 |
Godvilla:#flashes smile too.. hey! been looking everywhere for you!! |
| Re: The Poem I Wrote To Propose by mhyra(f): 6:22pm On Apr 22, 2015 |
penplayer:Ama fit like a fiddle. |
| Re: The Poem I Wrote To Propose by Bosville(m): 6:22pm On Apr 22, 2015 |
u flow really great...pencraft at its best@o.P 1 Like |
| Re: The Poem I Wrote To Propose by penplayer: 7:07pm On Apr 22, 2015 |
| Re: The Poem I Wrote To Propose by penplayer: 7:09pm On Apr 22, 2015 |
mhyra: Good. Good. I hope your email is not in recess. |
| Re: The Poem I Wrote To Propose by Nobody: 8:36pm On Apr 22, 2015 |
mhyra:Am here..... So, whts up with u and how's my lil princess Favour? |
| Re: The Poem I Wrote To Propose by penplayer: 8:38pm On Apr 22, 2015 |
DuchessLily: My dear. did it bore you? Apologies. Hard it is to cut off some ideas for it will diminish the sense of it. Apologies again. |
| Re: The Poem I Wrote To Propose by mhyra(f): 10:28pm On Apr 22, 2015 |
Godvilla:Lol.. I'm cool. favour is Fine o, just a little troublesome. how have you been?? |
| Re: The Poem I Wrote To Propose by mhyra(f): 10:35pm On Apr 22, 2015 |
penplayer:um, the last time I checked, it was taking a nap. I just hopes it wakes up in time  1 Like |
| Re: The Poem I Wrote To Propose by Nobody: 10:39pm On Apr 22, 2015 |
mhyra:Awwww... Favy baby girl... Iv been good, on a vacation!!! |
| Re: The Poem I Wrote To Propose by penplayer: 4:11am On Apr 23, 2015 |
mhyra: Wake up in time? when hot water, club and sticks are there. It will wake up instantly. |
| Re: The Poem I Wrote To Propose by mhyra(f): 7:50am On Apr 23, 2015 |
penplayer:  |
| Re: The Poem I Wrote To Propose by Nobody: 9:14am On Apr 23, 2015 |
penplayer:very nice...copied few parts from it. tnx for that. |
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