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St Valentine. by Nobody: 12:47pm On Apr 25, 2015
've heard the fighting stories of countless story-tellers.
And a thousand conflicting references in various best-sellers.
So much that we can never know which truth is, and which lies.
About this man, this old man, St. Valentine.

For times have gone beyond the clocks and,
Are two, two paintings are all we have left Valentine's.
One was of a man who philanderer he was, in his old old time.
Standing portrait of an artist's imagination of 'lovely' evil.
Dipped in blood red ink, a touch of black, maroon dark, and ruby lips, a sly smile; Devil's,

And the other was brighter, bright, and it had wings.
Wings of Valentine, made him an angel and love is sing.
Sing songs and love, give gifts, dash some hope and love some more; the angel he.
And those are the best of he, we still really see.

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Re: St Valentine. by AllNaijaBlogger(m): 1:58pm On Apr 25, 2015
So no one truly knows who this valentine man is?

Nice poem by the way.

My interpretation is that you are saying that many authors have given differing accounts of Valentine?


#YouAreLaykorn grin
Re: St Valentine. by stuff46(m): 3:16pm On Apr 25, 2015
Nice one you have.

cheesy
Re: St Valentine. by Nobody: 3:58pm On Apr 25, 2015
AllNaijaBlogger:
So no one truly knows who this valentine man is?

Nice poem by the way.

My interpretation is that you are saying that many authors have given differing accounts of Valentine?


#YouAreLaykorn grin

Your interpretation is tantamount to mine sir. smiley
Re: St Valentine. by Nobody: 9:25pm On Apr 25, 2015
Hi Laykorn smiley Glad you are back.
Re: St Valentine. by Sleekyshuga(f): 10:44pm On Apr 25, 2015
Laykorn, shocked shocked where have you been?

Geeezzz... It's been awhile... Glad to have you back kiss.
Re: St Valentine. by Nobody: 12:57am On Apr 26, 2015
standd:
Hi Laykorn smiley Glad you are back.

Thank you. smiley
Re: St Valentine. by Nobody: 6:36pm On Apr 26, 2015
Sleekyshuga:
Laykorn, shocked shocked where have you been?

Geeezzz... It's been awhile... Glad to have you back kiss.

Thank you! I've just been busy smiley

How have you been?
Re: St Valentine. by Sleekyshuga(f): 6:40pm On Apr 26, 2015
laykorn:


Thank you! I've just been busy smiley

How have you been?
OK then.. Doing good, dear..

Sup with Jennimma? Its been a while.
Re: St Valentine. by Nobody: 6:46pm On Apr 26, 2015
Sleekyshuga:

OK then.. Doing good, dear..

Sup with Jennimma? Its been a while.

Actually,It's been a long time since we talked last. She told me sometimes back that she'd be getting really busy a few months into this year. Her last seen on WhatsApp is a long time ago too. I'm sure she's good; just busy.

Are you done with school now? cheesy
Re: St Valentine. by Sleekyshuga(f): 6:59pm On Apr 26, 2015
laykorn:


Actually,It's been a long time since we talked last. She told me sometimes back that she'd be getting really busy a few months into this year. Her last seen on WhatsApp is a long time ago too. I'm sure she's good; just busy.

Are you done with school now? cheesy
Aiite...

Not yet.. Few months to go cheesy, though it seems the workload is worse now..
Re: St Valentine. by OMA4U(m): 7:04pm On Apr 26, 2015
Laaaaaaykorn! How're you? BTW, nice poem you've got there. I missed you, bro. The poetry section missed you.
Re: St Valentine. by Nobody: 7:06pm On Apr 26, 2015
Sleekyshuga:

Aiite...

Not yet.. Few months to go cheesy, though it seems the workload is worse now..

That's the way it is. Nevertheless, I wish the best for you dear. smiley
Re: St Valentine. by Nobody: 7:13pm On Apr 26, 2015
OMA4U:
Laaaaaaykorn! How're you? BTW, nice poem you've got there. I missed you, bro. The poetry section missed you.
Hehehe. Everyone keeps repeating the same thing about the poetry section. I think it's great to be missed for good things. smiley

How are you brother and how is the club faring under the new administration?
Re: St Valentine. by OMA4U(m): 7:19pm On Apr 26, 2015
laykorn:

Hehehe. Everyone keeps repeating the same thing about the poetry section. I think it's great to be missed for good things. smiley

How are you brother and how is the club faring under the new administration?


Yeah, it's great. I have been so scarced on NL. Tight schedule and besides the 'owners' of my phone have taken it, leaving me with one small phone like that.

What's up? How's your program? Let's chat. Catch y' there.

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Re: St Valentine. by Nobody: 7:22pm On Apr 26, 2015
OMA4U:


Yeah, it's great. I have been so scarced on NL. Tight schedule and besides the 'owners' of my phone have taken it, leaving me with one small phone like that.

What's up? How's your program? Let's chat. Catch y' there.

Your WhatsApp seems not to be working. I'm getting only a tick here.
Re: St Valentine. by OMA4U(m): 7:33pm On Apr 26, 2015
laykorn:


Your WhatsApp seems not be working. I'm getting only a tick here.

Oh! No wonder I haven't gotten any notification since morning. Let me check it.
Re: St Valentine. by timpaker(m): 11:28am On Apr 27, 2015
Laykorn,

I must confess that while reading your poem i was forced to laugh at some point.
You're good man. Walahi!!!
Cheers.



OMA4U:


Yeah, it's great. I have been so scarced on NL. Tight schedule and besides the 'owners' of my phone have taken it, leaving me with one small phone like that.

What's up? How's your program? Let's chat. Catch y' there.

Nice line... hehehehheeh wink
Re: St Valentine. by Nobody: 11:57am On Apr 27, 2015
timpaker:
Laykorn,

I must confess that while reading your poem i was forced to laugh at some point.
You're good man. Walahi!!!
Cheers.

Thank you sir. smiley

Could you please help to review these two?

www.nairaland.com/2277644/sounds-wretched-heart


www.nairaland.com/2277656/untitled-dedicated-oma4u

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