007Bruce:
it plays na

Ksslib:

Bia krone, e be like time don reach wey you go begin pay levy on every instance you use me as a case study ..

kr0ne:

If you'd take my advice, I'd say don't give up yet. Your kick-off is far doper than Ksslib's, but look at him today. A few months back, Laykorn was just a no-rhyming poet but go look at his last battle....dude was doing four-syllabic rhymes.
We all have a beginning in this textcee business and we were all once wack. Consistency and perseverance did it for us. So don't say it's tough, coz it's not.

I saw him puffing with pride/ in his mind...'i'm coming to shine'/ pfft! in this battle....i promise the guy/ a 'perfect' beating and a shocking surprise!..../ coz I'm bound to put an 'end to sin'.....like the second coming of Christ!!

Gladyys:

lol.... ghost write ke?? lol..

the first quatrain didn't rhyme with with second one.. same goes for the remaining quatrains in that bar.

coogar:


i think kr0ne or teddymiyaki wrote for you. the bars were too nice!

kr0ne:

Taa! How must debate take play with m.asturbate? I'm sure "master bait" will play.

kr0ne:

E don get one time wey I wan use u do one punchline/metaphor > yeast/rise quickly. But I no get time. U forget say u win ur first battle, even when u no sabi rhyme at all?

sinizia:


I don't think i'll do well cos of my excessive grammar. i don't know to keep it simple like you guys. I'm so complex. Maybe if i get my mojo back, i might consider doing it again.

that aside.. i need some clarifications. You once said the rhymes in a quatrain must match the final punchline, but many of Gladys' quatrains didn't match... or am i wrong?


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the first quatrain didn't rhyme with with second one.. same goes for the remaining quatrains in that bar.

007Bruce:
must debate/masturbate plays, it depends on ones accent

kr0ne:
Na only for Kumasi, Ghana dat one go rhyme, abeg.

coogar:


i think kr0ne or teddymiyaki wrote for you. the bars were too nice!



she rhymed everything in that opener.

•puffing with pride
•coming to shine
•promised the guy
•shocking surprise
•coming of christ

she scores 10/10 in perfect rhyming!

007Bruce:
must debate/masturbate plays, it depends on ones accent

sinizia:

Okay.. The mistake is from me then, cos i thought if a word ends in "pride", the next quatrain must end with matching end words like in this case, something like 'snide'.

Emaprince:
They rhymed, sinizia..

They are...

Puff/ing/ with/ pride/
Com/ing/ to/ shine/
Prom/ise/ the/ guy/
Com/ing/ of/ christ/

What she just did is 4multisyllabic rhyming right there. Its an advanced form of rhyming, bro.


As for the vocab thingy, you don't need to dumb down shiit to relate to us. We are all educated and brilliant. All we ask for is to build well and land well. Be very creative. You can't speak all the english and drop weak punchlines. It won't get you no where. Choice of words are done carefully to execute each line perfectly.

coogar:


it's a reach!
why not just play masturbate with mass debate? the difference in pronunciation should be very very slight.

i have seen some crazy word plays here that nearly made me faint.

eledumare = elle do marry

it's a reach!
why not just play masturbate with mass debate? the difference in pronunciation should be very very slight.

i have seen some crazy word plays here that nearly made me faint.

eledumare = elle do marry

nah!
as long as the vowels rhyme, it's acceptable
shine, ride, price, sprite can all be in a rhyme scheme & it's widely accepted!

coogar:


i think kr0ne or teddymiyaki wrote for you. the bars were too nice!



she rhymed everything in that opener.

•puffing with pride
•coming to shine
•promised the guy
•shocking surprise
•coming of christ

she scores 10/10 in perfect rhyming!

Emaprince:


My burning addiction/ is to have newbies taught the tradition/ too bad, this one got terribly mocked in the mission/ coz 'everybody will avoid Sin henceforth'.....born again Christians!!

*sign of the cross*

This is outright bully on a newbie. This is funeral!!!

Gladyys:

lol sire...... y'all getting it wrong... i'v been readin battles n crafting ideas from dope ones.... i knw my problem was setup n rhyme scheme so i had to work on it .... any tanks alot

Gladyys:
mehn.... limerick please drop ur supposed verse against rebel lets read na.... n did darkrebel drop his verse in d thread

Emaprince:


My burning addiction/ is to have newbies taught the tradition/ too bad, this one got terribly mocked in the mission/ coz 'everybody will avoid Sin henceforth'.....born again Christians!!

*sign of the cross*

This is outright bully on a newbie. This is funeral!!!

coogar:


i am sure kr0ne or FYH wrote those lines for gladyss. the set up to the punch was a URL standard.



if you continue at this rate, na you go send me to an early retirement. well done! i like the wordplay you did on "sin" throughout.

007Bruce:
this bar got me grinding my teeth

I suspect someone ghostwrote for gladys

coogar:


i am sure kr0ne or FYH wrote those lines for gladyss. the set up to the punch was a URL standard.



if you continue at this rate, na you go send me to an early retirement. well done! i like the wordplay you did on "sin" throughout.

Jason21:
ask krone........he stinks in those lines. that dude is a snitch and a cheat......he tried to dumb it a lil bit but i know those lines are from him. since when did gladys start 1-2 punch?

Emaprince:
walahi, I suspect kr0ne...haba!! Gladyys can't just change overnight like that. The build up alone murked and murdered the guy before the final uppercut.

*Its certain after this little upset
I will be praized for bringing a killer concept./ but every one will despise....what this silly dog text
And if he ever tries 'standing up to me again'....... NZO BOOM NZO BOOM .....my biafra bombs will protest

'The rugged and noisy, my technical..... I'mma mock you in a new scene......joker part
.....Wait lemme resound that
Rugged and noisy, my tech ain't cool....I'mma murk new in a new scene....joke apart

kr0ne:

Kid, stop crying! We're you the one she battled? I don't even have her on my Whatsapp, including Teddybiyasi. People improve. Gladyys has been battling on Facebook for years. I was shocked with her performance tonight, but I clearly have no hand in it. So stop bitching around and stop calling me!

Jason21:
ask krone........he stinks in those lines. that dude is a snitch and a cheat......he tried to dumb it a lil bit but i know those lines are from him. since when did gladys start 1-2 punch?

kr0ne:

Kid, stop crying! We're you the one she battled? I don't even have her on my Whatsapp, including Teddybiyasi. People improve. Gladyys has been battling on Facebook for years. I was shocked with her performance tonight, but I clearly have no hand in it. So stop bitching around and stop calling me!

coogar:


is it possible to have you guys battle each other again? how much will it take to have kr0ne vs jason21 in a fight to kill battle?



she might have improved though.....
there are loads of top quality scripts on this section to help her reach this height. even teddy's position as the queen of battle rap is being threatened.