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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by vickkyruby(f): 1:44pm On Feb 18, 2016
Captivatingly Interesting.
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by sameesyd(m): 10:50pm On Feb 18, 2016
Mizquote writes like a pro in d field
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 6:31am On Feb 19, 2016
fransho:
Nice work u're doing Dear. Oliver Twist want some more, thanks.


thanks.

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 6:32am On Feb 19, 2016
sameesyd:
Mizquote writes like a pro in d field

lolz.
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 6:32am On Feb 19, 2016
vickkyruby:
Captivatingly Interesting.


thanks.
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 7:14am On Feb 19, 2016
she noticed she usually have severe pains while meeting with her customers.

one of her customer even complained after he was done.

" why you dey shout make I do fast fast cum eh? no me money i dey pay you?

she was greatly embarrassed when one said

"sister, i like you o na him make i dey patronize you, abeg try treat yourself oh, na which kine smell like burnt wire wey nearly one tear my raincoat, Nawoa".

she was greatly embarrassed.

she noticed it.

she was excessively dry, she had bloated stomach and her private itched as well.

she wondered why she was the only that attracted misfortunes in this world.

the next day she couldn't sleep, she was greatly disturbed by her condition.

she had no other choice than to wake her roommate.

"oooh o, haba na, Maggie why you dey wake me by this time eh"?

"sorry Maggie, but something dey disturb me for mind.

Maggie looked at her and saw how wary she looked.

"oya tell me" she said.


she related everything to Maggie, Maggie asked her to gather all her savings as they were going to see the doctor the next day.

****""""""*********************""£""££***********"

they eventually met the doctor who she related her problem to, he noted it and gave her a paper to go to the lab for some test.


the test were rather expensive, her savings for the past month couldn't meet up the bill she even had to borrow from Maggie.


the next week, she went back alone to collect the test result.


the doctor took a while, stared at her and cleared his throat.

Doctor: ma'am the test here reads that you have

candidiasis and bruises around your uterine wall which means you once tried and had a failed abortion.

you re five months pregnant.

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by desire222(f): 8:08am On Feb 19, 2016
U are extremely talented. I've been following ur post for a long time. Keep it up

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Missmossy(f): 12:16pm On Feb 19, 2016
Ghen-ghen

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Dfrenzy(m): 5:59pm On Feb 19, 2016
Damn!
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 9:21am On Feb 20, 2016
desire222:
U are extremely talented. I've been following ur post for a long time. Keep it up

thanks, keep following
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 9:35am On Feb 20, 2016
she didn't say a word to the the doctor, she just stared at him lost.

the doctor was confused. He repeated again "ma'am you re five months pregnant, and i will like to add that you should register for ante natal so that complete care can be administered to you and your unborn child'

she didnt say a word neither did she move she just stared lost.

the doctor who was rather uneasy but wanted to sound professional continued,
" for the cadidiasis, i will encourage you to observe physical hygiene, eat a lot of fruits and stay away from coi.tus while you take your medication religiously.

she didn't say a word.

the doctor was uneasy and blurted, "ma'am, is there a problem?, if there is none i will like to call on the next patient", he brought out a file

"i want an abortion she blurted out".

he looked up from the file he was reading,
"you want what?".

thr doctor looked dazed.

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by sameesyd(m): 12:03pm On Feb 20, 2016
:- shocked undecidedyou want what, don't you know that you carrying a potential..... lipsrsealed

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Mercytop: 8:14pm On Feb 20, 2016
Nice story

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Megadon109(m): 4:43am On Feb 21, 2016
I might be wrong but i think the doctor's reaction does not show he is a professional. a doc does not just annouce a result to a patiant without counselling, moreso when the test revealed that she had earlier tried to abort the foetus. instead he was ready to call in another 'client'

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by enoch273: 10:12am On Feb 22, 2016
Happy birthday mizquote, wishing you the best life has got to offer, this is my first time of stumbling across your thread though.

More grease to your elbow.
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mismore(f): 11:11am On Feb 22, 2016
Happy birthday.... birthday mate.
Enjoy ur day to the fullest!

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mismore(f): 11:11am On Feb 22, 2016
Happy birthday.... birthday mate.
Enjoy ur day to the fullest!
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Yousuf4sure(m): 11:55am On Feb 22, 2016
Happy birthday Misquote...

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by desire222(f): 2:09pm On Feb 22, 2016
Happy birthday to u.
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by sameesyd(m): 6:55pm On Feb 22, 2016
Live long to celebrate more of Gods faithfulness
Happy birthday MIZQUOTE

Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Leobrain(m): 8:59pm On Feb 22, 2016
Hapi bufdae dear
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Osman1996(m): 10:36pm On Feb 22, 2016
[color=#006600][/color] grin
WHA YAH SAY
U +1 todaY
Long life nd prosperity
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by fransho(f): 2:10am On Feb 23, 2016
Happy birthday Dear!!
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by doncharleyosumo(m): 10:18am On Feb 23, 2016
Happy Birthday Mizquote... Long life and prosperity!!!

You just earned a special place e in my heart with this beautiful piece.

I'm earnestly waiting for your update.

Pls add my name to your plot (Doncharley AKA the Don).

Thanks!

Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 6:06pm On Feb 23, 2016
thanks everyone for the birthday wishes.
I love you guys.
more updates, later today.
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by sameesyd(m): 8:16pm On Feb 23, 2016
mizquote:
thanks everyone for the birthday wishes.

I love you guys.

more updates, later today.
shocked :owe de wait
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 5:20am On Feb 24, 2016
Doctor: excuse me?

sir pls, I don't need this child, I don't have the means of taking care of this child. I beg you in the name of God, pls remove this thing growing inside me.


Doctor: where's the father of the child?

it then dawned on her, she realized she had always played safe with her customers, except for once were the condom bursted, but that was two months ago, her pregnancy was five months.

her head spinner when she realized that timothy or the stranger that raped her at the park is responsible for her pregnancy.

she puts her hands on her head and shouted ' i don finish o' chai, God why me na?.


the doctor was getting uneasy, he had too many patients lined up to see him and he also needs to attend his association meeting to decide if they were embarking on strike or not.


he nodded as he looked at her, young girls of nowadays, wanting to eat what their fathers and mothers were eating. he knew she once attempted abortion, but this is not the first time he has been handling this type of case.

and what this dramatic display he asked himself?

doctor: are your parents aware you re pregnant?

she nodded, her hands still on her head, tears rolling down her cheek.

sir, I am an orphan, and this pregnancy was bore out of rape, pls help me sir.

doctor: sorry ma'am, you re way past abortion, any procedure carried on you now can have severe effect on you which can lead to life loss. besides abortion except it endangers the life of its mother is referred to as 'criminal abortion' and can cause my license to be seized.


"but they re other options."

she looked up.

"you can have a child and give it up for adoption."

hearing that she stood up and left, she had never felt the overwhelming urge to commit suicide, to end it all as she felt now.


she looked at the road, she had the thought of jumping into it.

she cried as she walked, her result in her head.

passerby looked at her and shook their heads, "new madness".

she felt their eyes bore into her skin but she didn't care.

she was convinced of who her baby's father is.

Timothy.
her adopted brother.

the man she murdered.

history was repeating itself again, but this time with so much bile.

she got to her room and laid down.

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by bolajiboi(m): 10:14am On Feb 24, 2016
Nice story





mizquote:
Doctor: excuse me?

sir pls, I don't need this child, I don't have the means of taking care of this child. I beg you in the name of God, pls remove this thing growing inside me.


Doctor: where's the father of the child?

it then dawned on her, she realized she had always played safe with her customers, except for once were the condom bursted, but that was two months ago, her pregnancy was five months.

her head spinner when she realized that timothy or the stranger that raped her at the park is responsible for her pregnancy.

she puts her hands on her head and shouted ' i don finish o' chai, God why me na?.


the doctor was getting uneasy, he had too many patients lined up to see him and he also needs to attend his association meeting to decide if they were embarking on strike or not.


he nodded as he looked at her, young girls of nowadays, wanting to eat what their fathers and mothers were eating. he knew she once attempted abortion, but this is not the first time he has been handling this type of case.

and what this dramatic display he asked himself?

doctor: are your parents aware you re pregnant?

she nodded, her hands still on her head, tears rolling down her cheek.

sir, I am an orphan, and this pregnancy was bore out of rape, pls help me sir.

doctor: sorry ma'am, you re way past abortion, any procedure carried on you now can have severe effect on you which can lead to life loss. besides abortion except it endangers the life of its mother is referred to as 'criminal abortion' and can cause my license to be seized.


"but they re other options."

she looked up.

"you can have a child and give it up for adoption."

hearing that she stood up and left, she had never felt the overwhelming urge to commit suicide, to end it all as she felt now.


she looked at the road, she had the thought of jumping into it.

she cried as she walked, her result in her head.

passerby looked at her and shook their heads, "new madness".

she felt their eyes bore into her skin but she didn't care.

she was convinced of who her baby's father is.

Timothy.
her adopted brother.

the man she murdered.

history was repeating itself again, but this time with so much bile.

she got to her room and laid down.

Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by femoskyy(m): 11:04am On Feb 24, 2016
Well done! Um still following. When is d next update?
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by doncharleyosumo(m): 12:29pm On Feb 24, 2016
Misquote keep on firing. We are solidly behind you....
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by johnspurgeon014(m): 7:56pm On Feb 24, 2016
mizquote:
she was devastated.

her legs began to shake.

tears began to drip from her eyes.

Maggie was angry and sorry at the same time for her friend.

"mama, shey I tell you say make you no dey play without protection?"

she was confused.
she had never had se..x with any man unprotected.

she had always insisted.

no matter how much the men offered to pay she always stood her ground.

she looked at her friend and knew she was disappointed in her.

"Maggie, no be so o, I never sleep with any man without protection".

she then realized her period was approximately thirteen days late, she had never experienced delay in her cycle.

she didn't know what to do if she was truly pregnant.

she didn't believe she was pregnant.

she was a specie whose D.N.A was corrupt the worst she could do was bringing up a child of her kind of gene.

she was lost in thought.

her confusion grew as her thinking became distorted.

she heard her roommate saying.

"if you talk say you never play without rubber, then there's hope".

she stressed the last part of hope well

"it dey happen a times, your period fit delay because of too much stress, make we go buy pregnancy strip, make we use confam if Belle Don enter or not."


hearing the part she felt a bit relieved, she held onto the tiny hope of not being pregnant.

she ran to the toilet confused but she needed to do it.

to pray.

she prayed, for the first time since she was introduced into the line of business.

she prayed from her heart.

she asked God not to give life to anything in her stomach.

for she was poor and cursed.

she murdered her family.

she was a prostitute.

she had no money.

she explained to GOd the reasons why she shouldn't be pregnant.

as she talked she cried.

this wasn't her usual cry.

it was a cry of pain.

a cry of hopelessness.

a cry of frustration.

a cry of loss.

a cry of self pity.

she was crying for the person she had become.

she cried until all her tears dried.

she felt a sense of relief.

she had a feeling her prayer had been answered.

she washed her face and went back to her room feeling light


*******†***£******†*******††¥***"*"**"*******

thirty minutes later Maggie came back with the pregnancy test strip.

she didn't want to undergo the test for she knew she wasn't pregnant.

Maggie forced her.

she peed in a small cup.

Maggie collected it.

thirty seconds later.

the result came out.

two tiny bright red lines appeared.

she was indeed and undoubtedly pregnant.

Maggie shook her head.


the girl understood.

two hot drops of urine fell.

she became dizzy.

This was the best update #Opinion
But then ur plot graph has a lotta climaxes. Look forward to a resolution only to be hit with another high note, so much we no longer experience the valleys and set ups. #Jargon Way to go though.
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 5:42am On Feb 25, 2016
thanks everyone.

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