Welcome, Guest: Register On Nairaland / LOGIN! / Trending / Recent / NewStats: 3,208,593 members, 8,003,062 topics. Date: Friday, 15 November 2024 at 06:17 AM |
Nairaland Forum / Entertainment / Literature / Finding Love (53192 Views)
Finding Mrs Right / Finding Me (a true life story) / Thawed... Finding Love Where You Least Expected It (2) (3) (4)
(1) (2) (3) (4) (5) (6) (7) (8) (9) (10) ... (12) (Reply) (Go Down)
Re: Finding Love by jmadebayo(m): 9:31am On Jun 19, 2016 |
nice story...the Lord is your strength, keep it up |
Re: Finding Love by Jok3r(m): 9:33am On Jun 19, 2016 |
lolaHikmat: @lolahikmat trust me you are good.. have never had time to read stories Pple post like this but urs captivated my mind.. thanks.. you a good writer... |
Re: Finding Love by Jok3r(m): 9:44am On Jun 19, 2016 |
lolaHikmat: when is the next story line coming.. when you post it just hola me 08165233431 so I Com back online quickly to read on.. you intrigued me with your suspence |
Re: Finding Love by pastrydelightz(f): 9:47am On Jun 19, 2016 |
Nice story...keep it up. Pls pay attention to your spellings and punctuation. The sky is your starting point. |
Re: Finding Love by SurestG(f): 10:25am On Jun 19, 2016 |
This is interesiting...Kudos to u Lola |
Re: Finding Love by Annruby: 10:40am On Jun 19, 2016 |
madam ikimat where u at now.. 1 Like |
Re: Finding Love by niffymizzy(m): 10:53am On Jun 19, 2016 |
Interesting write up, keep it up, just that the story line somehow looks predictable, twist the storyline and make it suspense filled...my opinion tho |
Re: Finding Love by lolaHikmat(f): 11:05am On Jun 19, 2016 |
***Chapter 7*** She got home that day and met the house extremely quite but saw Dare's car packed outside. When was done changing her clothes she decided to check on him in his room. She knocked but got no reply then decided to enter. What she saw shook her to the core, she was not supposed to be jealous but what would you expect when you see a woman sharing the bed of your husband whether pretend or otherwise. She quietly left the room and headed downstairs. The sound of the door closing woke Dare up. He was shocked by the presence beside him. He turned and found Tiara unclad. "What are you doing here" he yelled at her "Baby you brought me here yourself, you said you missed me" "I said no such thing, now leave my room" "but baby...." "For crying out loud, I am a married man" "You should have remembered that before bringing bringing me here" " Just leave my room now". Stella though very hurt went to the kitchen to check on the cook and helped prepare dinner, then sent her to call on her husband and Tiara to come down for their meal. Dare didn't know what to say to her when he finally faced her, he has crossed the limit today. She has been quite all through the times Tiara flirted with him, he was only trying to make her a little jealous. The day she met them sleeping I'm the sitting room she merely let that pass too. He decided to see what her reaction would be at dinner. Dinner was a silent affair and Stella didn't behave as if she saw something. She even engaged Tiara in a little discussion. "May I speak with you after dinner" She asked him "Sure why not". After dinner, she went up to his room. " Hi" she said "Hello" "Just wanted to tell you that my trust fund has been signed over to me" "That's great" "Thank you very much" "What you saw this evening is nothing" "It is nothing, we spelled it out from the beginning" she said and left his room. 3 Likes |
Re: Finding Love by SirGowon(m): 11:27am On Jun 19, 2016 |
Nice piece ma'am, you should by now know where you need to work on as my other NLers have pointed out. From the typos, punctuations, suspense, blend of past and present too, once all these are worked on, you are good to go...... I could be your editor if you don't mind tho, for free. Keep up the good work |
Re: Finding Love by vickvilles(m): 11:27am On Jun 19, 2016 |
interesting story, pls continue |
Re: Finding Love by ALANBEY(m): 11:38am On Jun 19, 2016 |
appreaiate your write up. please make the next chapter long. |
Re: Finding Love by Angelina996(f): 11:52am On Jun 19, 2016 |
Okay now... Before I start reading another "unfinished story" lemme ask you lolaHikmat, will you finish what u started? OK, that settled, gimme a chair to sit and devour my pop corn while I enjoy this love ish... 1 Like |
Re: Finding Love by Bishop4bella(m): 11:55am On Jun 19, 2016 |
Too anxious to read the complete story. I guess I should wait till it's completed. Lolahikmat kudos to you |
Re: Finding Love by josef1(m): 12:07pm On Jun 19, 2016 |
I know this story is gonna be dope.
Kudos to you. Keep it up |
Re: Finding Love by Nobody: 12:08pm On Jun 19, 2016 |
@lolaHikmat You are a brilliant and well articulated writer. I was engrossed with your story the moment I read your first post. I can't wait to for the rest. I sincerely hope you finish it. |
Re: Finding Love by Nobody: 12:22pm On Jun 19, 2016 |
lolaHikmat:well done Lola! Despite that am also a Story-Teller, i felt glued to your story |
Re: Finding Love by Nobody: 12:22pm On Jun 19, 2016 |
Yes u re tryin but ur mouth is faster dan ur hands dats y u re omitin sum words nd ur update is short. best of luck dear hope u'll improve wt tym...*** 1 Like |
Re: Finding Love by lolaHikmat(f): 12:40pm On Jun 19, 2016 |
The following day she stopped at the hospital and tests were carried out on her. The doctor told her the result is going to be out in 3hours time. When she got to the Shop Lola kept asking her what is wrong with marriage. She merely told her to forget it. 3hours later she went to the hospital and she was told she had an infection and drugs were given to her. Part of her was disappointed, because she hoped to be pregnant instead. She decided to put her energy in her work and was thinking of diverting a little into event planning and decoration. She shared her opinion with Lola and Lola thought it was a cool idea. They started working on it. Stella was happy she had something else to work on and focus her mind on instead of Dare. She couldn't help but think of when he is going to complete his project so that Tiara can be out of her face. She always tried to avoid them at home. She was in her room undressing when she had a knock "Come in" she called out Dare entered "How are you doing" "I am fine" "I have been meaning to ask you since but I barely see you, have you been to the hospital" "Yes, the doctor said it was just an infection" She felt she saw am expression passed over his face momentarily but she wasn't sure since it was very fast. "Okay, do you have any plan for tomorrow's evening" "No" "Good I was invited to an event and I want you to come with me" "Okay " she said He left her room. Dare was disappointed because he hoped she was pregnant at least that will get her to stay in the marriage. He shook the thought from his mind he was not going to trap her in a marriage she didn't want to be in. 1 Like |
Re: Finding Love by splmosixx(m): 12:42pm On Jun 19, 2016 |
Thumbs up dear...#more inspiration i pray |
Re: Finding Love by Angelina996(f): 12:43pm On Jun 19, 2016 |
And again lolaHikmat, don't allow ur inner inspiration to wither.... Make sure u complete this story for another time' sake. Kudos to ya Modified That's great, but can u pls make it more lengthy? |
Re: Finding Love by Kyrialuv(f): 12:57pm On Jun 19, 2016 |
I taught she ws pregnant too
which kinda stupid infection b dat. Nyc update dear am always following u #thumb_up |
Re: Finding Love by MyLane: 1:18pm On Jun 19, 2016 |
I'm already falling in love with Stella and I really hate the way Dare treats her. Please lolaHikmat tell her she has a shoulder to cry on. Nice piece! |
Re: Finding Love by oluwashola4me(m): 1:20pm On Jun 19, 2016 |
Jok3r:lol...bro shey u sure say na still unto her story matter or u go lyk digress*dat kin tin na**winks** 1 Like |
Re: Finding Love by 3verblazing(m): 1:51pm On Jun 19, 2016 |
Lovely writeup...tumbs up D rest of it lolaHikmat: |
Re: Finding Love by CuteChiluv: 2:01pm On Jun 19, 2016 |
Well done dear, enjoyin myself |
Re: Finding Love by DePartfinder: 2:44pm On Jun 19, 2016 |
For the fact that u are new at (in) this, u are doing wonderfully good. Nice story line love.....waiting in anticipation for the next update! |
Re: Finding Love by Nobody: 2:53pm On Jun 19, 2016 |
Big ups to u bro...love seeing new things like this for a change...keep the suspense going its good for the story... |
Re: Finding Love by phemziekay09(m): 2:54pm On Jun 19, 2016 |
Nyc 1......u don gimme work....... |
Re: Finding Love by KINGS100(m): 3:01pm On Jun 19, 2016 |
what a magnificent piece! Keep it comming dear. |
Re: Finding Love by Fredchisom(m): 3:14pm On Jun 19, 2016 |
the write up is so crisp,more power to ya creativity. waiting for d next episode |
Re: Finding Love by Francesp(m): 3:22pm On Jun 19, 2016 |
You so good. I enjoyed reading your works. New stuffs keep coming out, keep it coming!!! |
Re: Finding Love by Nobody: 3:22pm On Jun 19, 2016 |
hum! infection ke? nawa o 1 Like |
(1) (2) (3) (4) (5) (6) (7) (8) (9) (10) ... (12) (Reply)
Chimamanda Adichie Poses In Her Hometown In Abba, Anambra State / Secrets And Scandals / Oceanofpdf.com Is Back
(Go Up)
Sections: politics (1) business autos (1) jobs (1) career education (1) romance computers phones travel sports fashion health religion celebs tv-movies music-radio literature webmasters programming techmarket Links: (1) (2) (3) (4) (5) (6) (7) (8) (9) (10) Nairaland - Copyright © 2005 - 2024 Oluwaseun Osewa. All rights reserved. See How To Advertise. 37 |