Nice one hikmat... We are waiting o... Update pls...

Am loving it,

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This is interesting..... ride on dear

wow, this is getting serious. more grease to ur elbow hikmat

pls ...can u add me on watsap...08162243381....so we can discus....i love u story

Everybody want to contact with her,.... Abeg make una take am easy now... Allow her build her carrier herself.... Una want distract her ABI Dia ris God oh

now the story is getting more interseting,the suspense is now coming out,i tot u would said she is pregnant,but i like the dimension the story is taking now,kip it coming.

I won't read this story until I see de old end.blind love and co did not end dere stories

Following

@OP, Where are thy? Come over and complete what you have started.... Glued to my Q10 reading this episode while my 4month old daughter cry endless without showing concern on a Father's Day... Omo your Torri bad gan oo

Nice write up Lola and i hope you're your sister's keeper like your namesake in the story connotes. If this is your first story, I'm must confess you're doing a great job, truth be told, even with some calling for improvements, some of which are proper punctuation, suspense, lengthy episodes and many more that others pointed out. Please keep up the good work Ma.

I was going to upload this evening but got caught up with some things. I am going to do that very early tomorrow and I promise it is going to be lengthy, probably two updates. I am extremely sorry for keeping you waiting.

Full of suspense. More wisdom to ur writing

lolaHikmat:
I was going to upload this evening but got caught up with some things. I am going to do that very early tomorrow and I promise it is going to be lengthy, probably two updates. I am extremely sorry for keeping you waiting.

can't just wait to see the next updates...nice job hikmat

oluwashola4me:
lol...bro shey u sure say na still unto her story matter or u go lyk digress*dat kin tin na**winks**

unto story matter of no digression

Nice write up Lola; More ink to ur pen my dear.

Make I buy land here.. Military zone keep off

lolaHikmat:
I was going to upload this evening but got caught up with some things. I am going to do that very early tomorrow and I promise it is going to be lengthy, probably two updates. I am extremely sorry for keeping you waiting.

waiting for dat oooo

She came back from work very early the next day so as to have ample time to get dressed. She was dressing when Dare and Tiara returned. She just hope the lady won't follow them. Trying to look simple and classy she opted for a black strapless gown and made sure her make up
was well done. When she was through she hurried downstairs and met Dare waiting. Talk about a fast dresser, he was looking so handsome her heart started racing fiercely. He turned and saw her.
Dare just kept staring at the figure of perfection he called his wife, how he hoped what they had was real, he would have been the best husband possible. He just didn't know how to keep her in the marriage.
They were staring at each other when Tiara announced her presence
"I am here, sorry for keeping you waiting"
Dare felt he saw a pained expression on Stella, and immediately felt bad for letting Tiara tag along, but he was helpless since they were both invited.
The drive to the party would have been silent but for Tiara's constant chatter.
Stella was becoming irritated by this Tiara girl can't she learn to hold her mouth, must she chatter and follow her husband everywhere. Must she flaunt the fact that her husband wanted her over her. She was so caught up in her thought she didn't know when they arrived at the party. Tiara immediately latched on to her husband's arm .
"You wouldn't mind if he shows me around and be my escort, you know most people here and this is my first time of attending such party" Tiara directed at Lola
"No problem"
Stella let them lead the way and followed silently behind. The party was well attended by people of high caliber. She decided to later stay alone after she managed to excuse herself from a group of high class ladies asking about her latest delivery and some fashion Tips. She sat and watch her husband and his friend in a circle talking .
She was getting bored when she felt a presence beside her.
"Hi " he greeted her
"Hello"
"Can I sit with you"
"Sure"
"All this society events can be tiring"
"Very tiring"
"So what is a beautiful lady like you doing alone"
"I am not alone, my husband is there" She pointed out
"And left you on your on, no offense but if you were my lady, I wouldn't try that" He said
She merely smiled .
"My manners, I am Femi"
"Stella"
The shook hands and got talking, she found him very interesting and he had a very good sense of humor.
Dare watched Stella with the stranger and could see she was happy talking with him. He wished he had an idea of what the are talking about that could lighten her up.
At the end if the event Stella bid her new friend goodbye but he insisted they exchange numbers. So after doing that she made her way to where her husband was
"Who was that" he inquired.
"Just a friend" She replied.
Dare watched her smile all through the journey back home.

nice 1 hikmat.....i just wish Dare can quickly open up to Stella so that Femi won't take advantage of that so called 'jealous method'...keep it coming dear.

When she got home from the party, she got a call from Femi asking if she has settled home. That was the beginning of their conversation, they started chatting on social media too. She begin to develop a likeness for him, but what she felt for him was different from what she felt for Dare. She only liked Femi as a friend nothing else. She and Dare has improved their communication since the day of the events, she couldn't place her hands on what happened but he has started calling her more and engaging her in conversations when he his home.
3weeks later they were having breakfast when Tiara started throwing up, this continued for days until she was forced to tell her to visit the hospital for check up.
She came home from work to me them arguing
"I didn't touch you" Dare yelled at her
"You didn't what, who took me to his room, who had his way with me"
"Tiara, I am a married man"
"You call this nonsense you have marriage, well you should have considered that before sleeping with me"
"Don't you ever insult my marriage, and I am not responsible for that bastard"
"Yes, you are and I am going to tell that thing you call your wife"
She didn't expect what happened next, Dare gave Tiara a resounding slap
"By God you are the first lady I will ever slap say that again and you will be very sorry" He said
Stella quietly entered, Dare was shocked to see but Tiara made perfect use of the moment
"I am pregnant for your husband, deal with it"

Gud story so far. Thumbs up

Am loving this

Hi Op,

I have been following this since yesterday. This is one of the most inspiring story i have read in recent time.
Please keep up and try to make into print later

Magic, Op. Did he touch her?
# A little leaven always leaveneth the whole lump

keep it coming

Nice story, keep it up

This is really an interesting piece........keep up d gud work.....n Thanx for d update

I want mooooooorrrrreeee Update oooooooo

hello .. pls update....miss lola hik

lolaHikmat:
"I am pregnant for your husband, deal with it"

knock out blow
job well done madam