hefelove:

abeg I dey look for female wey go rape me

I get just gv me ur address

Nice one Op, but I wonder why you're managing the space

...and your updates are too short, please do something about it

Following...

Beautiful work. I like how well you make the piece intense. It feels real, an element lacking in most works nowadays. I like how Rhoda has admitted she enjoys her dad's intimacy.

nice one... thumbs up

Nice one, following.

Following already! Congrats on making FP.

FP implies Voluminosity


Congrats

loving this

God of Heaven and Earth, save our little ones from spoilers of life.....in Jesus name

You are doing a great job, thumbs up.

Yeeeeee FP oooooooo Thanks you all ooo was soo surprised to see it now! This is my first ever story! Thanks you all for d advice and everything. As for the short updates erm please just bear it with me I'll post much updates!

Episode 16
My hands were still shaky and I could feel the blood in my legs draining to my feet. The ground was swirling or was it my eyes? I pressed my back to the wall and slowly slipped to the floor. If I wasn't holding the railings at the corridor I would have fallen and rolled down the stairs and it wouldn't be the first time just as Father's attempt to rape me wasn't the first too,except that I never defeated him.
The thought of being a conqueror for the first time in my life made me feel like a king slayer in a Camelot story.
The house was gradually closing in on me. Darkness covered me on the floor where I sat and I wasn't sure what time of the day it was because the tension in me had washed my memory. I didn't even know if the pain I felt was the impending headache caused by my irritation towards Father's dirty act and unreasonable misbehaviour or the wrenching of my heart into a thousand pieces of red tissues.
I was deeply hurt beyond measure, it was worse than having 187 in JAMB. Why was I a total piece of shit tossed around by the man that brought me into this world? My face was hot and swollen. Father must never see me in tears because it would make him feel fulfilled. Besides, what would breaking down in tears do the hurt in my heart? it wouldn't explain to Mother the fact that I am not the enemy and Father is. It wouldn't let her understand how unloved I feel because she is inlove with a hot batender. She wouldn't even have the tiniest idea how every night I go to bed praying for a better home and God forgive me for praying for Father's death to be slow and painful.
And most importantly, crying wouldn't ease the desire he had built down below my waist line that made me wrap both legs around each other like a starved harlot. How did the human body operate without being time and situation conscious?
Anyway if I wanted to feel better emotionally,physically and of course, sexually....self pity and gradual unintentional suicide was definitely not the best remedy.
But I knew just what to do.

Episode 17
The motorcyclist seemed to know my plans because he sped almost like he was on a hot chase. Thank God it was a Bajaj Boxer motorcycle and not a jincheng; you know how noisy that made in China okada can be on bad roads like this Akute-Berger road. There were times I had entered that blender called a bike and regretted it not only because I got home looking dirty and unkept but because it called unnecessary attention towards the wealthy looking rich kid in that kind of environment.
How come Mother was rich but still built her house in a jungle like this place. Once I told her it was a place for the retired and retarded then moved in with my sister to the island but I soon packed my load and came back home after I realised I was inconveniencing her with my presence as she was not free to go out and come back anytime she wished.
My sister and I hardly spoke. The exact reason why I hate Aries. Secretive set of people! They could kill and bury thirty souls and not even their diary would know!
The ride to Kwame's place was rough but it was worth it. I had an emergency arousal that he had to look into. I wasn't a LovePeddler and I would never be. I was just being safe than sorry.
I had to choose between falling in Father's trap or dutifully submitting my self to my boyfriend.
I alighted from the motor cycle thankful to God that my buttocks hadn't been blistered as usual after being on a bike for too long on a rough road. You would be surprised the things I thanked God for!
I put my hand through the see through lock on the gate , unlocked the gate and allowed my self in. I was no stranger or visitor so chill,no one thought I was breaking in.
Surprisingly the door to my boyfriend's apartment was opened wide and his generator was running
The noise from the television enveloped the whole room and the first thing I did was turn it off. There was a pack of cigarettes on the table. When did kwame start smoking? Didn't I quit smoking because he said he didn't love people who smoked? Okay yes I used to smoke really bad because I learnt to forget father that way and now you know why I stopped.
The laughter from the room caught my attention and I froze at the spot. I listened again and another laughter broke through the house again.
Without much display of confusion, I walked as quiet as a cat into the room and there it was.
The source of their laughter, the beginning of my entire sadness.
"Kwame!"

Rukkydelta:
Hmmm
When you see one never run away

abi I don run ni

saxwizard:


I get just gv me ur address

surulere eko ni

hefelove:

surulere eko ni

Lol u go old fa

So kwame too is playing away match I just wonder the kind of girl Rhoda will later turn to

This story made FP sha congrat Frozenfire keep it up we dey ur back

Saxwizard o fe sure

hefelove:
Saxwizard o fe sure

U knw say na Buhari era we dey ntn comes free so gv an upfront and work will start. ...lol



Frozenfirenaija love as we don land fp....how we go take celebrate am?

I ws expecting an overflow of updates

saxwizard:



U knw say na Buhari era we dey ntn comes free so gv an upfront and work will start. ...lol



Frozenfirenaija love as we don land fp....how we go take celebrate am?

I ws expecting an overflow of updates

u will surely get it ooo

Episode 18
Every time in every movie,every story,every music video,every true life story I have heard. When caught cheating individuals open their dirty mouth and go all "babe I can explain". Kwame could have had a different sense of humour,dress sense and even a different language but he wasnt different.
But the only thing I wanted to understand was why he didnt cheat on me with someone better than me other than this very dark in complexion skinny bitch that laid under him.
I mean I can do better than missionary style for goodness sake!
And the dirty girl under him just stayed there like a fool. I wanted to beat her up but then I had second thoughts. This was kwame's house so if anyone needed to be beaten it wasn't her but kwane who invited another girl to the house I thought was ours alone.
How foolish did this world take me,first my father and now this!
I stood there in anger knowing my presence only made matters worse. If this was the end of our relationship I shouldn't be the one to suffer most of this drama. He was embarrassed to put off the condom and put on his clothes in front of me. I just stood there till they both got reasonably dressed and the girl packed her shoes and left. I stared right into her eyes and I could feel my monster getting fueled again. My better judgement knew it was wrong to strike her so I didn't let the devil have his way and let that dirty looking girl disrespect me by engaging in a childish fight with her. It's not like Kwame had put a ring in my fingers.
Still standing stabbed in the heart ,Kwame stood up and came closer to me.
Before he could touch me and start saying the usual things they had in their mouths to say I landed a slap on his face and even I felt the pain. The sound of the slap echoed around the room like an electric door bell,it's resonance vibrated around the four corners of the room and if waves were visible,this one was translational and longitudinal. You already know I was a science student in secondary school which was also the last time i slaped anybody. when a guy smacked my ass with his book that had felt right but this one was better.
Slapping Kwame was my best of 2016 feeling.

OMG!!!..... FROZENFIRENAIJA if you dont want me to start stalking you in real life coman update again....

please give the DAD a painful death!!

I like the kind of girl Rhoda is. Some girls will beat the girl beat the guy and start crying but for Rhoda na just Factory Reset Slap

hefelove:
I like the kind of girl Rhoda is. Some girls will beat the girl beat the guy and start crying but for Rhoda na just Factory Reset Slap

lol

#comesouttaghostmode. OP u rock, at a point my mouth was wide open witout me realizin it. I luv ur use of words, it looks soooo real. #thumbsup

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Some ladies have seen hell on earth,just like it happens in reality. Thumbs up frozenfirenaija,beautiful piece.

Bia come nd update before I bring my cane

Nice job.
This is really one amazing piece

lemme jejely sit at this corner and be watching with amusement as update keep flowing...........

As an African mother a heavy slap landed on my face and I swear I heard the ringing of the bell and even saw the bell ringer and a group of church choristers singing in my head...


@op did it sound like halleluyah hallelujah hallelujah


Nice piece.. Following like a treasure hunter following the trail of a treasure

Nice one pls kip it up

. The exact reason why I hate Aries. Secretive set of people! They could kill and bury thirty souls and not even their diary would know!

Hehe I am Aries o.. Pls no hating...

I landed a slap on his face and even I felt the pain. The sound of the slap echoed around the room like an electric door bell,it's resonance vibrated around the four corners of the room and if waves were visible,this one was translational and longitudinal.

D kind of slap that can Change a radio frequency..