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Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by Cornerstone001: 6:53am On Aug 11, 2016 |
Bibi, good morning. Hope you had a wonderful night rest? I am enjoying this piece bar, I cannot afford to miss any part of it. Nice work 1 Like 2 Shares |
Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by jacy67(f): 7:06am On Aug 11, 2016 |
Such a twist! This might sound wicked but it serves Jeff right!
Bibi how was your night? Thanks for the timely updates. 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by bibijay123(f): 7:32am On Aug 11, 2016 |
Cornerstone001: Good morning bro. Thanks. |
Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by bibijay123(f): 7:32am On Aug 11, 2016 |
Cornerstone001: Good morning bro. Yea i had a great night, urs? |
Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by mescan(m): 7:35am On Aug 11, 2016 |
Following |
Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by ogboni76(m): 7:42am On Aug 11, 2016 |
Hope you got the huggs I sent last night and I hope they kept you warm all through the night.. Good morning BIBI, I realised almost all the guys on NL are following you, I don't like following the crowd nothing stops me from being followed too.... 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by koalarts: 8:16am On Aug 11, 2016 |
cchhhaaaaiiii......ebere should just make sure she doesnt commit sucide...Dt will b d worst .....Well done bibijay123 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by veekid(m): 8:50am On Aug 11, 2016 |
Bibi sorry lemme ask again, when will you kill bro Jeff?? |
Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by Nobody: 8:53am On Aug 11, 2016 |
BIBIJAY123.... i spent the entire night reading tis story... and i beg you in the name of everything you hold dear... mention me when nxt you update.... please if jeff wasnt the one tat infected ify it coulda been tat guy she slept with tat one time!..... jeez..... pls dont forget to give juliet a painful death... dont forget Ebere's madam too ... please update sis!!!!! 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by blessedvisky(m): 8:56am On Aug 11, 2016 |
JeffreyJamez: skarlett: 6 Likes 1 Share
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Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by yousooph(m): 9:30am On Aug 11, 2016 |
Nice one Mrs writer. Pls no kill ify ooooo.
#MoreUpdatePlease 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by crazygod(m): 10:02am On Aug 11, 2016 |
Chai. I luv the twist on the Jeff part. Confirm. Serves him right. Abeg miss bibi pls sell ur work to nollywood. This is exactly the kind of movies they should be making. Now I'm following u. 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by bibijay123(f): 10:42am On Aug 11, 2016 |
Chapter 7 Ifeoma Dedicated to Skarlett and Jefferyjamez My hands trembled as i pulled on my skin tight black number, it was an expensive little thing that doesn't leave much to the imagination. My b00bies were almost out of the dress, then i wore my make up with care, nothing must go wrong. Ebere' s door was closed, i sighed in relief and slipped out of the house. I was almost at Ogba when i broke down in tears, i remembered my mother forcing my hand into a bowl of hot water, i remembered the numerous beatings i had gotten from her, i remembered Juliet, i was so happy when they took me in. They were like family to me but they had turned me out without a second thought. " Madam " A dirty looking police man knocked on the glass of my door. " You are parked illegally " I dapped at the tears on my face, careful not ruin my make up and continued with my journey. " Good Morning ma". A short skinny guy threw open the gate. " Morning, is Mr Jeff Wright at home?" " Ah madam! he has gone to work o, but his office is at Opebi." I beamed at him and i could have sworn his eyes turned shy. " Mind giving me the address?" " No Problem ma. I used to be a gateman there before Oga transferred me here." He wrote out the address and gave it to me. " Thank you. How about Juliet?" " She took her children to school. You know her husband' s family chased her away when he died.'' " Yes i know. Terrible family, maybe i should say hi to mommy, is she inside?" " No She' s out of the country ". " Thank you". I drove back to Opebi Allen, i remembered the spot i had stood that night, long ago, he had walked to me and offered me a hundred thousand naira for a night. I had thought God sent him to me, as a solution to our problems. We needed the money badly, i couldn't let Ebere starve. " N100 thousand without Condom. I hate condom" he had said. " I don't want to get pregnant sir" i told him naively. " Don't worry i will pull out. " I didn't understand what he meant by pulling out but i guessed it meant he won't get me pregnant. He was so thin i remembered thinking " how could he be so thin if he has a hundred thousand naira to give away." Jeff' s office wasn't hard to locate, his secretary was a little mousy girl, she ushered me in without informing her boss first. " What is this?" He barked. " How could you just bring someone into my office without my permission" " Sorry sir" she hurried out. " Hello Jeff" He looked at me and almost dropped on the floor. His gaze was fixed on my bosoms. This fish was hooked. " Hi...........hi miss.......please have a seat" he stuttered out. " Have we met before?" I sat down, deliberately widening my legs, his gaze dropped to my exposed thighs. I gave a little laugh. " Its me, your baby girl........Ify" He turned ashen and lost his color. " Ify.....baby......" I smiled at him." I have missed you, i couldn't resist coming to see you.....baby are you married?" I would have walked out immediately if he had answered with an affirmation. I couldn't put an innocent girl through hell. " No, no am not married. Baby girl am sorry for_____" Oh really? I didn't let the bas.tard finish" Baby all that was in the past. Am so hot for you, is there somewhere we could go?" He stood up hastily, knocking off the files on his desk. " Yes, yes baby. " We went to a seedy motel in Ikeja, the sheet got tangled in no time. " That was hot!" Jeff said panting. " Darling why are you dressing up?" " I just remembered i had an appointment later today". " Awww baby. Please stay nau" " Some other time." I snapped at him. " OK baby, ehen...I just remembered something ". " What!?" " Your dad..........he came the next day after ..........um....after you left " " My dad?!" " Yes, he kept coming every week to check if you had returned. He stopped coming five years ago." My dad. I told myself i wasn't going to cry. " Your mother too came back two weeks after you left. Why didn't you come back baby?" I could have killed him right there and then if i wasn't certain he was also going to die. " Where is.......my mother now?" " She is still at your house. She kept asking questions about you especially after the boy died." " Which boy?!" I shouted." Toby, my brother?" " Yes, That's the name! He had an astmatic attack." My knees gave out. I remembered his chubby cheeks. He had stood up to mom on several occasions trying to defend me. My baby brother. " Sorry baby" he said lifting me up. " Where is my dad now?" " I have his number" I got my dad' s contact from him, picking up my bag, I said, " Jeff you might want to run some medical tests........Yea i think you should" " Why?" I breezed past him towards the door. " One can never know what disease they could contract by an unprotected sex. Good luck!" His eyes widened in shock, he turned pale." What do you mean?!" He shouted. " Ify! Ify!" I drove down to Abiola gardens at Sectariat. Little things begins to matter when you know you are dying. A bird flying in the sky becomes a delight to watch, a little girl running around with the wind blowing through her hair makes you cherish life more. A beautiful couple walking by makes your heart squeeze with pain. I sat down on the green grass, I offered to carry a young woman' s baby so she could eat. Lord knows am never going to hold mine. I closed my eyes imagining the cherub belonged to me. I gave a little boy a push on the swing after handing the baby back to the grateful mother. The little boy had been on the low swing, shouting, " mommy please come and push it" the mother had been more interested in the phone in her hand. In the evening i drove home blasting sinach' s ' I know who i am' " I know who God says i am, what he says i am , where he says am at, I know who I am!" I sang aloud . " I ........am holy, i ........ am righteous ooo...I am......beau..ti......ful....oooo" TBC Please i need a constructive criticism of the story and writing. If any angle is not clear to you let me know....... Thank you all! 26 Likes 10 Shares |
Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by bibijay123(f): 10:45am On Aug 11, 2016 |
crazygod: Loool. I sold a script to one of dem till today i never see one kobo! dem still yab me join |
Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by bibijay123(f): 10:48am On Aug 11, 2016 |
slyIsaac: Loool. Bro in life ppl get away wit so many things BT i will definitely give u a mention. 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by bibijay123(f): 10:50am On Aug 11, 2016 |
veekid: Awww. Sometimes living in pain is better punishment than death o |
Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by bibijay123(f): 10:53am On Aug 11, 2016 |
jacy67: My night was good, urs? |
Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by johnwizey: 10:54am On Aug 11, 2016 |
I can't just imagine the look on Jeff's face 1 Like |
Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by veekid(m): 10:55am On Aug 11, 2016 |
bibijay123:Fine!!! That's all I wish for, at least you've givn me the picture how his life is gon b, that's OK for me 1 Like |
Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by johnwizey: 10:59am On Aug 11, 2016 |
bibijay123:Awon werey! 1 Like |
Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by kingkaspa: 11:03am On Aug 11, 2016 |
Very captivating story. Well done. 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by Cornerstone001: 11:13am On Aug 11, 2016 |
bibijay123:It was calm, thank you, |
Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by sulakishop(m): 11:18am On Aug 11, 2016 |
bibijay123: You are the next best thing after sliced seasoned buttered bread! |
Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by CaaseStudy: 11:28am On Aug 11, 2016 |
so far so good, Keep it up... bibijay123: |
Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by crazygod(m): 11:34am On Aug 11, 2016 |
bibijay123:Find a way to get the contact of uche jombo. She loves movies like this. U can get her on social media and with persistence, u will see ur stories grace our TV screens. I believe in u. Chai. U too talented like kilode 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by MhizCandice(f): 11:36am On Aug 11, 2016 |
Bibi ur too slow in updating and somtyms I get tired of waiting |
Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by olatex25(m): 11:58am On Aug 11, 2016 |
Let me join u in singing.. Am walking in power , am walking in miracle, i live in d life of favour, cos i know who i am... Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh i knw who i am 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by Nobody: 11:58am On Aug 11, 2016 |
bibijay123:please so... i love your brain... have i told you before... sure people get away with a lotta things... Life can be unfair.... just dont let jef juliet and madamB escape darris my own.... 1 Like 2 Shares |
Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by yousooph(m): 12:03pm On Aug 11, 2016 |
this was wat I was waiting for. ify getting update about Her parent.
Buh its too late. u are always making my break time meaningful. #KeepItUp 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by bibijay123(f): 12:09pm On Aug 11, 2016 |
MhizCandice: sorry babe. M trying my best. 1 Like |
Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by bibijay123(f): 12:11pm On Aug 11, 2016 |
crazygod: Thanks....it never occuresd to me o. Will give it a shot! 1 Like |
Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by bibijay123(f): 12:14pm On Aug 11, 2016 |
crazygod: Thanks....it never occurred to me o. Will give it a shot! |
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