bibijay123:



Yes bro. My former house wasn't far from there. I went there one evening and got gists from den.

gbens2000:
nice work sis am really impressed.

skarlett:
I get to have a whole episode dedicated to me

Its not easy to have a namesake

I can't wait to see what ifeoma's mother and father have to say for their despicable attitude

olanshile2016:


you know say you be star

Boss na you oh because after you na still YOU

skarlett:


Boss na you oh because after you na still YOU

Girl360:
I always feel lazy reading these nl stories, but this one got me...


Keep it up Bibijay..

I'm so gonna read your other stories

FoxyFlow:


I was wondering why Chiboy mother thought she was pregnant. Her body, Ifeoma, is strong sha. Ten years when some people starts displaying symptoms on the first month of infection.

Theirs was a no sex relationship then. He he Hehehe, I told you I knew the next thing that would happen, maybe because I bury myself in whatever I am reading.

There will be a twist in the plot. Not all stories have happy endings but this one do. Whatever made her make this statement, "And my happily ever after ended", points to one thing.

From another point of view, maybe, just maybe, her one night stand wasn't what infected her but what do I know? Make a hundred thousand naira in a single night leaves much to be desired and without condom, fate, I tell you have a way of dealing us cruel blows.

Eh, Bibi, make we hook up via whatsapp na. I gat something to tell ya...

bibijay123:
Chapter 7

Ifeoma

Dedicated to Skarlett and Jefferyjamez


My hands trembled as i pulled on my skin tight black number, it was an expensive little thing that doesn't leave much to the imagination. My b00bies were almost out of the dress, then i wore my make up with care, nothing must go wrong.

Ebere' s door was closed, i sighed in relief and slipped out of the house. I was almost at Ogba when i broke down in tears, i remembered my mother forcing my hand into a bowl of hot water, i remembered the numerous beatings i had gotten from her, i remembered Juliet, i was so happy when they took me in. They were like family to me but they had turned me out without a second thought.

" Madam " A dirty looking police man knocked on the glass of my door. " You are parked illegally "

I dapped at the tears on my face, careful not ruin my make up and continued with my journey.

" Good Morning ma". A short skinny guy threw open the gate.

" Morning, is Mr Jeff Wright at home?"

" Ah madam! he has gone to work o, but his office is at Opebi."

I beamed at him and i could have sworn his eyes turned shy. " Mind giving me the address?"

" No Problem ma. I used to be a gateman there before Oga transferred me here."

He wrote out the address and gave it to me.

" Thank you. How about Juliet?"

" She took her children to school. You know her husband' s family chased her away when he died.''

" Yes i know. Terrible family, maybe i should say hi to mommy, is she inside?"

" No She' s out of the country ".

" Thank you".

I drove back to Opebi Allen, i remembered the spot i had stood that night, long ago, he had walked to me and offered me a hundred thousand naira for a night. I had thought God sent him to me, as a solution to our problems. We needed the money badly, i couldn't let Ebere starve.

" N100 thousand without Condom. I hate condom" he had said.

" I don't want to get pregnant sir" i told him naively.

" Don't worry i will pull out. "

I didn't understand what he meant by pulling out but i guessed it meant he won't get me pregnant. He was so thin i remembered thinking " how could he be so thin if he has a hundred thousand naira to give away."


Jeff' s office wasn't hard to locate, his secretary was a little mousy girl, she ushered me in without informing her boss first.

" What is this?" He barked. " How could you just bring someone into my office without my permission"

" Sorry sir" she hurried out.

" Hello Jeff"

He looked at me and almost dropped on the floor. His gaze was fixed on my bosoms. This fish was hooked.

" Hi...........hi miss.......please have a seat" he stuttered out. " Have we met before?"

I sat down, deliberately widening my legs, his gaze dropped to my exposed thighs.

I gave a little laugh.

" Its me, your baby girl........Ify"

He turned ashen and lost his color.

" Ify.....baby......"

I smiled at him." I have missed you, i couldn't resist coming to see you.....baby are you married?"

I would have walked out immediately if he had answered with an affirmation. I couldn't put an innocent girl through hell.

" No, no am not married. Baby girl am sorry for_____"


Oh really? I didn't let the bastard finish" Baby all that was in the past. Am so hot for you, is there somewhere we could go?"

He stood up hastily, knocking off the files on his desk.

" Yes, yes baby. "

We went to a seedy motel in Ikeja, the sheet got tangled in no time.

" That was hot!" Jeff said panting. " Darling why are you dressing up?"

" I just remembered i had an appointment later today".

" Awww baby. Please stay nau"

" Some other time." I snapped at him.

" OK baby, ehen...I just remembered something ".

" What!?"

" Your dad..........he came the next day after ..........um....after you left "

" My dad?!"

" Yes, he kept coming every week to check if you had returned. He stopped coming five years ago."


My dad. I told myself i wasn't going to cry.

" Your mother too came back two weeks after you left. Why didn't you come back baby?"

I could have killed him right there and then if i wasn't certain he was also going to die.

" Where is.......my mother now?"

" She is still at your house. She kept asking questions about you especially after the boy died."

" Which boy?!" I shouted." Toby, my brother?"

" Yes, That's the name! He had an astmatic attack."

My knees gave out. I remembered his chubby cheeks. He had stood up to mom on several occasions trying to defend me. My baby brother.

" Sorry baby" he said lifting me up.


" Where is my dad now?"

" I have his number"

I got my dad' s contact from him, picking up my bag, I said, " Jeff you might want to run some medical tests........Yea i think you should"


" Why?"

I breezed past him towards the door. " One can never know what disease they could contract by an unprotected sex. Good luck!"

His eyes widened in shock, he turned pale." What do you mean?!" He shouted. " Ify! Ify!"


I drove down to Abiola gardens at Sectariat. Little things begins to matter when you know you are dying. A bird flying in the sky becomes a delight to watch, a little girl running around with the wind blowing through her hair makes you cherish life more. A beautiful couple walking by makes your heart squeeze with pain.


I sat down on the green grass, I offered to carry a young woman' s baby so she could eat. Lord knows am never going to hold mine. I closed my eyes imagining the cherub belonged to me. I gave a little boy a push on the swing after handing the baby back to the grateful mother. The little boy had been on the low swing, shouting, " mommy please come and push it" the mother had been more interested in the phone in her hand.

In the evening i drove home blasting sinach' s ' I know who i am'

" I know who God says i am, what he says i am , where he says am at, I know who I am!" I sang aloud . " I ........am holy, i ........ am righteous ooo...I am......beau..ti......ful....oooo"









TBC


Please i need a constructive criticism of the story and writing. If any angle is not clear to you let me know....... Thank you all!

Icemany:
Oga write your own novel nah or better still try sharrrap small....
Kudos Bibijay!

blessedvisky:


Hmm, constructive criticism?.. Ìdk how to do that but I'll try.
1) one doesn't end up under the sheets with someone who caused you so much pain in about 3 hours. Even if she was willing, the guy should have suspected foul play naw. He raped her and got her kicked out of the house with no means of survival and he accepted "Please all that is in the past".?. Me no fit accept am OO. He should know she was gonna get back @ him somehow when she showed up uninvited in his office

Also, he couldn't remember the face of someone he once lavished with gifts and got raped and also got her kicked out...? ? Well, make-up is powerful sha

A build-up of max a week which lead to sex would have made more sense.

2) still related to point 1, that's a lot of info to find out just immediately after a hot session under the sheets. Does the guy have mouth diarrhoea?? Even at that the guy should have 'neared' her while telling her the info, not staying on d bed, coz it's sensitive info to deliver. For one trying to stop Ify from going, he should made a physical move, not just 'baby don't go now'


3)lastly, she should not have spoken about the danger of catching something after doing skinny. He can easily go for Post-Exposure Prophylaxis. It is believed that HIV is curable within the first 48-72 hours after a person contacts it. You can read up on post exposure prophylaxis. If Jeff is smart enough, he might walk out of it unscathed and Ify would have lost on both sides. She could have texted him or something after she is sure he has caught it.

4) Jeff and Ify should have exchanged numbers at least now. You made it seem she just came to infect him, daz all. She wasn't subtle at all.

bibijay123:






ok if this was a fictional write up i might be able to answer the above questions but it is not so am also wondering the same thing. But really she just came to infect him. as for him not remembering her, remember ten years is a whole lot of time and a lady's appearance changes when weavon and make up get involved. As for readily going to bed with her, only a fool would do that shows he's one. Thanks tho

blessedvisky:

You didn't say anything about the post-exposure prophylaxis. Or will that be revealed as time goes on?

MhizCandice:
Bibi abeg update na....I don wait taya o

bibijay123:




Yea. we good now?

blessedvisky:


Sure we're we bad b4

blessedvisky:


Hmm, constructive criticism?.. Ìdk how to do that but I'll try.
1) one doesn't end up under the sheets with someone who caused you so much pain in about 3 hours. Even if she was willing, the guy should have suspected foul play naw. He raped her and got her kicked out of the house with no means of survival and he accepted "Please all that is in the past".?. Me no fit accept am OO. He should know she was gonna get back @ him somehow when she showed up uninvited in his office

Also, he couldn't remember the face of someone he once lavished with gifts and got raped and also got her kicked out...? ? Well, make-up is powerful sha

A build-up of max a week which lead to sex would have made more sense.

2) still related to point 1, that's a lot of info to find out just immediately after a hot session under the sheets. Does the guy have mouth diarrhoea?? Even at that the guy should have 'neared' her while telling her the info, not staying on d bed, coz it's sensitive info to deliver. For one trying to stop Ify from going, he should made a physical move, not just 'baby don't go now'


3)lastly, she should not have spoken about the danger of catching something after doing skinny. He can easily go for Post-Exposure Prophylaxis. It is believed that HIV is curable within the first 48-72 hours after a person contacts it. You can read up on post exposure prophylaxis. If Jeff is smart enough, he might walk out of it unscathed and Ify would have lost on both sides. She could have texted him or something after she is sure he has caught it.

4) Jeff and Ify should have exchanged numbers at least now. You made it seem she just came to infect him, daz all. She wasn't subtle at all.

bibijay123:



pele. Still at work........ more updates as soon as i get back home

SPDAZZY:
Nice update bibi, but how was ify able to easily locate Jeff' s office. Does it mean she has being keeping tabs on him?

And the idiot just jumped into bed just like that? Someone he hasn't seen in ten years.