Lawal2015:
Exams Saturday and have been reading your work all day,its 22:56 hrs by my time here,you have added to my wealth of knowledge and believe me you I hope and pray that God give you the zeal and energy to prosper in your chosen endeavour! Hope to meet you in person someday.Thank you Lawal S.O

Luckymay:
Cool story. More creativity to your brain @bibij123

Twizzy30:
Bibi give us update plss

bibijay123:


lol bro dis story yaff end o

Akposb:
Good evening Bibijay, love the story and the ending is quite beautiful.
First of all I respect your vision and can't help but say you are good. You can only get better.
The structure of your story is just like the rest of your other lengthy stories but I feel this kind of restricted the plot. Yes, you said it is a true life story but I believe or guess that not all facts are represented here hence you could have done some slight modification to blend in some form of 'fantasy'. Maybe you shouldn't have given the character voices, rather you should have related their story impersonally.

Also, your use of language is good but you tend to use Am a lot instead of I am. Also you used too many informal words to relate the sexual organs which is kind of derogatory, such innuendos could be best in the conversations of the prostitutes and not in your narrative Just do your best to do a proper review as it seems you hurried over the narrative in some parts.
No need to repeat what others have said but just be willing to do more readings to improve your craft.

Lastly, keep up that humble and cheerful spirit as it can only make you better. Prostitution is a vice that shouldn't be encouraged and I just hope things could better that we won't have these characters around.
Also, I hope you check out my story https://www.nairaland.com/3331639/little-secret-short-romance-story.

mofy1:
Bibijay123 this story will serve as inspiration to every reader. As in u sent a deep message across. Please accept my hug. Ni nu gbogbo writer oga ni e joor. But pls u didn't indicate if baby ify came out positive. God bless ur hand.

bibijay123:



Based on a life story.

bobbydreofficial:
Nice story bibi, I enjoyed every bit of it.
And maybe we can work together oneday

wonderfulchild:
Waooh !Dis is really worth my time. Thanks for ds wonderful write up. pls, I noted one word you always mis spell, which is cheque. You always write 'check ',instead of 'cheque '. thanks for your understanding

sotozo:
you wouldn't believe I just completed all your stories. Unto the new one.... Na we get am.

Strolls out with my Kuli Kuli and chilled kunu

bibijay123:



lol sha no finish the kunu ooo

Whyykayy:
Im always a Ghost reader on Nairaland. Bt d Emotion in dis write up cracked me up. Ure just too good baby.
Fire on. More grace.. And do u hav any oda story i can read here.?

nma4god:
yet another mind blowing story...girl where do u get all these delicious things from??....I'm so impressed ...reading is my best hobby and u are delivering it hot to me...u aren't disappointing, kudos

Sagacity07:
I'm not too familiar with nairaland but I must say I was surprised to see this much views for your story, seeing again that the thread is recent....gifts does make room kudos...I'm new in writing having forgone my gift for a very long time and I intend reviving it, so I wrote a 300 word fiction and it happened to be shortlisted for the voting process. Pls do go through it https://prize.etisalat.com.ng/flash-fiction/voteall.php?id=2467 and kindly vote, if impressed, do share and I would honestly love your candid opinion about it. Thanks. You are doing a good J.

Thank you. How do i vote for you? I clicked on d link but didn't see the vote button.

Sagacity07:
The like is the vote button as you can only vote via Facebook. Thank you very much. Do let me know when you get it done. Thanks https://prize.etisalat.com.ng/flash-fiction/voteall.php?id=2467