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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by olatex25(m): 8:21am On Nov 25, 2016 |
toboski1:yea, she deserve to rest bt if she decide to sell her story today I must b d first buyer, bt in as much dat she choose nt 2 sell. We deserve frequent update... Although i sent dat msg jst 2 gain her attentn nd 2 remind her dat it's been 2-3days of no update... Bt bro wetin b ur own gan self, ''mafi lomi dasi".. 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by adetomdx(m): 8:24am On Nov 25, 2016 |
How are you feeling now Bibijay?... Its my birthday, a dedication will do *winks* 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by room089: 8:33am On Nov 25, 2016 |
Funmi isn't the killer! From my crystal bulb I'm seeing a lady who used to be in mrs afolabi's employ as the killer! Knowing bibi as a 'twister', you think she would go straight by using funmi we all have our minds on as the killer? Believe so only if you haven't read at least two of her works. Bibi keep slaying; the Lord is your strength! |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Michelle55: 8:34am On Nov 25, 2016 |
Bibi.. Hope you are alright? Do take care of yourself mbok! |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by MozB: 8:48am On Nov 25, 2016 |
jagugu88li: lol.. See me o. I forgot that part where mrs Afolabi said 'she followed U'. In that case almighty Funmi is the prime suspect now o... But we cannot be so sure, lets just watch and see the twist. |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by MozB: 9:09am On Nov 25, 2016 |
Marcela04: ow! Pardon my ignorance. I forgot its a 'she' mrs Afolabi said and not a 'He'. And i dont hate sly. I jst didnt like the situation where he tried to take Dupe away from Uche when he knew they were together. You dont go behind another guy to take his woman. Its not right. 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by nikz(f): 9:10am On Nov 25, 2016 |
Hello bibs wateva the issue is God is in control. Take ur tym and take care of u. God bless u |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by AyamConfidence(m): 10:18am On Nov 25, 2016 |
Wow...hi everyone... Confidence is finally here...this story is just off the hook and I thought it would have ded before I got here but I'm happy it hasn't First I want to thank Bibi for this story...the plot, the narrations from everybody's different angles is just on point... The followers of the story too...myself included are just too much ![]() I'm here till the end of the story...ain't dropping till last bus stop I wan join bibilets ooo hope entry form still remain ![]() Bibijay123 I'm loyal ma 1 Like
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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Marcela04: 10:48am On Nov 25, 2016 |
MozB:Sorry once again but I just have to write that. I believe Sly will be her lawyer and he will defend her to d fullest and win d case. |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Nobody: 10:58am On Nov 25, 2016 |
room089: ![]() This cracked me up!!! Hello everyone...please forgive me for making my entrance like this....but this post was too funny for me to ignore, I dunno why! Mz bibijay123....you write well ![]() Team #canwestoptryingtomanipulateBibitodoourwishes ![]() |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by adebriana(f): 11:51am On Nov 25, 2016 |
Where are you bibi? I've refreshed this page like a hundred times already... I really hope you are Ok 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by remiseyi(m): 3:08pm On Nov 25, 2016 |
olatex25:I don't really need to... |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by room089: 3:44pm On Nov 25, 2016 |
merahki: No aunty, nobody is trying to manipulate 'almighty' bibi to do our wish! Mbanu! Nobody can fit do it! Bibi is an enigma ![]() Ooooooh! Now I remember, you are just joining the train. Try and read two of her previous works then you would confirm that she's a 'mega twister'. As for what i said, it's a mere prediction in the right direction! ![]() Remember, to predict is free but its manifestation is sold seperately. Afterall somebody predicted that the woman would win U.S presidential election, biko what was the outcome? ![]() 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 4:01pm On Nov 25, 2016 |
* Continues* Dedicated to Topscoque. Happy belated birthday sweetie. Uche She had been gone since morning and I was becoming worried. Her phone lines were off and Funmi couldn't be bothered about her friend's safety. For a spilt second I almost dashed out of the house, to go in search of her and I remembered that I was a half man now. A man who couldn't even see his way through to the bathroom, a man who had become dependent. How could such a man protect his wife and family? Dupe deserved better. She should be with someone who would fight nail and tooth to keep her safe. My ears picked up the sound of Mama's heavy footsteps. She walked into my room and I perceived that she was also worried. Since I lost the use of my eyes I had become very perceptive to my environment. Even the smallest of sounds would jar me awake. I could scent Dupe from a mile away, I could pick up Mama's footsteps and I could also perceive when any one of them was angry, anxious, sad or worried and right now Mama was worried. " Uche, there's something I must tell you" She said. My heart went up and I stood up hastily. Whatever it was she wanted to say couldn't be good news by the tone of her voice. " What happened to Dupe?" I screamed out. " Eiiii Calm down nah ehn. I am sure she will be home anytime soon. Maybe she's stuck in traffic." She said. I sighed heavily in relief." What else do you want to tell me Mama?" " Your brother called me yesterday. He's been in Nigeria for over a month now and he wants to come back home. I know Chidubem has caused us a lot of grieve but he's still one of us and we can't turn him away. Please let him come back home." She pleaded. The boy had been nothing but trouble ever since he was born and he had caused us a lot of heart ache but he was blood and family and I couldn't turn him away. He was also a lead to the the gang who had killed Nonye, I thought. I will get him to tell me who they were and how we could get them arrested. " Alright Mama. " I agreed. " Thank you, my son." Her phone rang out and she walked out of the room.She returned shortly and I could perceive that her mood had changed from anxiety to sadness. Something had gone wrong and I felt it in my bones that it had something to do with Dupe. " What happened to Dupe?" I asked. " She has been arrested for murder. " She cried out. ***** Sylvester Annie had walked into my office that early morning and without preamble informed me that Dupe was in the police custody for murder. I felt like she had slammed a fist into my nose. I couldn't help slamming my fist into the wall, I should have known Uche wouldn't be able to protect her. I shouldn't have let her go to him, I blamed myself and I don't think I would ever forgive myself. After Mrs. Ahmed made a big fuss, she wraped my knuckles in ice and Annie and I went to the police station. I remembered the last time I saw her, she had been distraught and although she looked tired she was beautiful still. She had walked away from me without a backward glance and I had foolishly let her. I introduced myself to the director of the police station and requested to see my client alone.His boys had shown me into a waiting room and shortly afterwards, they led Dupe in. She looked so pale and weary and I felt like slaming my fist into Uche's face again. He should have protected her! If he couldn't he should have at least tried to speak some senses into her! she shouldn't have gone to that woman's house in the first place. she sat down and placed her hands on the table. " I am your lawyer " I said, trying not sound shaken. Whatever we had before was in the past now. I was her lawyer and she was my client and there would be no crossing of any boundaries." I need you to tell me what happened and please do try to tell me everything you recall because that is the only way I can help you." She nodded her head and looked at her hands.I saw a tear slip on to her palm and I swore within me. I had promised myself not to get personal with her or allow myself to feel any emotions for her but it was too damn difficult to do so.That is the only way I could help her. I didn't want to break down in court when she's been massacred by the prosecutor. " Please look up and answer my question... Miss...." " Mrs." She said, head still bowed. I wanted to scream no but I kept quiet. When had they tied the knot? " So tell me what happened?" " Funmi asked me to go see her......she wanted me to plead on her behalf." " Why does she want you to plead on her behalf and who is this Funmi person?" I asked, mentally filing away all the information. " She.....I don't know! I don't know why but she begged me to and I couldn't say no." She looked up."'Sly, please help me. I didn't kill her, I .....I can't go to prison. Uche needs me. I am also pregnant please help me." " We will continue this tomorrow " I said and hastily walked out of the room. Annie ran up to me and caught up with me as I walked towards my car. I couldn't let Dupe see my tears, I couldn't let her know that for once I doubted myself. I couldn't let her see how scared and broken I was. I didn't want her to see that i was afraid I might fail her. This wasn't a good start and I needed to be the one in control and not my emotions! " Shark, what happened?" Annie asked. " Damn! Please don't succumb to emotions" " Annie when are you getting me arrested?" She flinched. " When Dupe is out" " Good. You know where Uche lives?" I asked. "'Yes." "'Get into the car." I drove furiously, following her directions while she gasped occasionally as I almost brushed into the cars in front of us. At a point she had to beg me to slow down but the devil in me had been resurrected. I parked outside the gate, jumped down from my car and Annie hurried after me. She led the way to his apartment, his mother opened the door and froze at the look on my face. I asked where Uche was and she pointed towards his room. He sat so still on the bed, a stick by his side and I rushed into the room. I slammed my fist into his face and he stumbled to the ground. Annie and his mother rushed in and they both held me back. " You should have protected her!" I shouted, seething with anger. He staggered up and wiped the blood oozing out of his nose with the back of his hand. " I know. I know" Uche said. TBC P.S Sorry for the delayed updates. It wasn't deliberate. 17 Likes 8 Shares |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 4:02pm On Nov 25, 2016 |
saraphina: Thank you ma, I appreciate. 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 4:03pm On Nov 25, 2016 |
rachealfst: Thank you sweetheart. How are you? 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 4:05pm On Nov 25, 2016 |
swann: lol thanks 2 Likes |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 4:06pm On Nov 25, 2016 |
toboski1: she read English and literary studies 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 4:07pm On Nov 25, 2016 |
jagugu88li: Thank you duchess, I am also hoping it stays away forever, amen to that. 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 4:09pm On Nov 25, 2016 |
adebriana: Thank you 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 4:14pm On Nov 25, 2016 |
Jay542: lol God forbid ooo, I am not a killer 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 4:18pm On Nov 25, 2016 |
bummybummy: Yes its amazing how ppl change, sometimes I feel it is not that they changed but maybe we just don't know them as much as we thought we do. It will surprise you that the person in question myt be surprised at his own actions too. But life goes on ..... 2 Likes |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 4:19pm On Nov 25, 2016 |
Tife101: Thanks boss, I appreciate. 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by rachealfst(f): 4:22pm On Nov 25, 2016 |
bibijay123:I'm doing great, thanks. |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 4:22pm On Nov 25, 2016 |
olatex25: lol no vex ooo, the pounding in my head refused to go too but I am ok now. 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by rachealfst(f): 4:23pm On Nov 25, 2016 |
bibijay123:I'm doing great, thanks. Welcome back. |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 4:24pm On Nov 25, 2016 |
flistyl: Amen oooo, God pass dem 2 Likes |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 4:26pm On Nov 25, 2016 |
queenDD: Thank you ma'am 2 Likes |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by olatex25(m): 4:26pm On Nov 25, 2016 |
bibijay123:eiyah, sori sis... I knw u'll surely av a reason.. GOD IS UR STRENGHT Dear.. Stay strong for us pls... |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 4:28pm On Nov 25, 2016 |
veekid: lol I wasn't writing e_exams joor. So how did you know abt that? 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by dominique(f): 4:29pm On Nov 25, 2016 |
Welcome back Bibijay, hope you're better now? We've missed you Gann Btw, you're yet to reply the mail I sent you couple of days ago. |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 4:31pm On Nov 25, 2016 |
dominique: I missed you guys too o, I don't know what's up with this migraine. Maybe its stress but m fine. Thank you sis, you? 1 Like |
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