Wow nice one bt I want more

CONTINUATION

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MARY ADAM

My life at the commissioner's house was of mixed occurance. Whenever the commissioner was home, i and other girls do not go through much trouble but during his absence, his wife treats us just the way she wants. She never seize to make us realise that we were just slaves. With time i got use to the double life and gradually, i stopped to weep for my home.
I stayed with my boss for five good years and during the second year, i got to know that my boss wife once had a child. I found out that she was once kindheart some years back but she became cruel and heartless when she lost her only child. According to Hannah, the other girl that told me her story, she blamed the whole world for her loss and she vowed never to show mercy to any human because no matter how good you are to human, they will cause you pain at the end. At a point, i felt sorry for my boss wife but later i found out she was just pathetic, blaming others for her misfortune.

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On the Christmas eve of my fifth year with the commissioner, i was on my way to the kitchen when i met the commissioner lost in thought in his library. Due to the love he showered on me, i felt the urge to go and find out what was troubling him. I went to him and called out the commissioner's name but he did not respond, i had to tap him on the shoulder before he realised someone was with him. I apologized for meddling in his affairs and asked him what his problem was.
As if the commissioner was waiting to share his trouble with someone, he sighed and asked me to have my sit. The commissioner then closed the door to the library and turnoff the light before taking a sit. He cleared his throat and said " am greatful for your concern mary, surly you are my daughter because you behave like one. Am sure you've heard my story before but i will love to tell you myself. I once had a child, a son. I lost him to the cold hands of death after he finished college. He had a plane crash on his way home from abroad. My wife blamed the world for her miss fortune by so doing she shut everybody out of her life, including myself. I could not maltreat her because i love my wife. We tried to have another child but we failed on different occasions and this is the reason for my trouble. Since my wife could no longer give birth, she appointed herself as my guard. She sends spys to know what i am up to and if i am cheating on her, all of this makes my life complicated. After many years of fruitfulless attempt, i gave up on having a child with my wife and decided to have a mistress. To cut the long story short, my mistress is pregnant and about to give birth but ever since she got pregnant, i live my everyday life in fear. I know my wife will soon find out and go after mistress and her child but i want to do everything i can to protect them. My mistress always plead with me to protect her but i am lost on what to do" The commissioner ended his speech and i felt sorry for him. I thought for a while and i came up with the idea of taking care of his child in a far away land immediately, the baby is born. I made a promise to my boss never to betray him and i made him believe i will carter for his child just like mine own. The commissioner believed in me and he agreed with my suggestion.
On the first of January, the child was born and i was informed, i rejoiced with the commissioner and his mistress (Ada). The secret was kept from the public and i was made the intermediary between the commissioner and his mistress. After the third month of the birth of my boss's illegitimate son, an incidence occurred.
My boss sent me to give some items to his mistress, i was on my way to her apartment when i noticed i was been followed. As the sharp girl i was i tried to hide but i was caught. The spy was a professional. Fortunately for me,he was the same police man that helped me some years back. He took me to a quiet corner and told me how he had been following me for a while, he told me he was appointed by our boss wife but he lost the courage to hurt my boss and i. He told me to inform my boss and we should act fast because my boss wife will soon get tired of his excuses and she might send someone else after us. I thanked him profusely and ran the errand i was asked to.
Immediately i got back, I informed my boss of my encounter and we decided it was time for me to escape with the child for safety.
Miss. Ada painfully let go of her child but it was a necessary sacrifice for security. She made me promise with my late brother soul that i would treat her child like mine and i did. A week later my boss told me an accommodation was ready for me in another part of Kogi state and i flew with his child that night with the help of a trusted police officer. That was how i left my hometown for another neighbourhood for the safety of my boss's child."
T.B.C

its a heart touching story,weldone dear,plz dont let them pirate ur work without due permission,cus its stressful to come up with story and we will enjoy it as we are now,more wisdom dear

spixytinxy:
Wow nice one bt I want more

lol oliver twist

Shakyroh320:
its a heart touching story,weldone dear,plz dont let them pirate ur work without due permission,cus its stressful to come up with story and we will enjoy it as we are now,more wisdom dear

hmm. Thats true, never thought of that. Thanks honey

Lankyannie:
lol.abeg no let dtobs hear dz tin u jst talk cus ah no wnt im trailer of wahala 2jam me 4dz place wey i kukuma dy enjoy ma hard earned bobo juice.

lol you still dey drink bobo for this recession? You get mouth o

DTOBS:
Lolzzz... You pple will not kill me ooo

lol amen

shalom7:
In one word,JUST AWESOME,angel................had to abandon a novel i was reading since noon to read your story,u ar really killing it..........i was actually creating pictures for the story in my head.......well done!

awwn. Thanks babe

kingphilip:
And i wanted to mention Kelvin o but na that time she go see another person upstage sha

I knew Kelvin will come back only after the done has been deed and he really did appear

Now she's gonna miss Jordan's date and that could just spell TROUBLE for her but I think she'll sure end up with Kelvin..

Angelinastto you've improved greatly and that's a huge plus on your side. Continue on that path and you'd make an award winning book soon

awwn. What did i do to deserve so much love? Thanks bro!

Wow......so there's much to kelvin story......


I'm moved by Mary story


Ehn.....lemme continue in 3D watching as d drama unfold....


Aunty angel.....I promised not to give anybody akara again

oya manage this 4 wraps of akara.....only an only for you

Angelinastto:

lol oliver twist

from 8:04 pm to 01:04 am, i finally catch up with you guys. thumbs up angel you've got a fantastic story and good writting skill join.

I hope nancy will not fall in love with kelvin.

wow.interested as usual.#waiter,bring lasagna nd champagne 4 moi angel here.she be 21st century bae.

Thanks 4 the dedication dr. and i am happy dat everyting is back to normal, bt were are @teamemmanuel? oju tiyin ni?? shebi una dey make mouth since na lols

Angelinastto:

lol oliver twist

nice one! so kelvin is a bas***d? nobi my mouth una go hear am weldon sis. u are doing gr8 here! how is u? (in jenifa voice)

Angelinastto, you are too much. I never saw this coming, so Kelvin is like Jesus that was hidden so that King Herod won't kill him. I love this Story, God is your strength sis, ride on.

kingphilip:
And i wanted to mention Kelvin o but na that time she go see another person upstage sha

I knew Kelvin will come back only after the done has been deed and he really did appear

Now she's gonna miss Jordan's date and that could just spell TROUBLE for her but I think she'll sure end up with Kelvin..

Angelinastto you've improved greatly and that's a huge plus on your side. Continue on that path and you'd make an award winning book soon

I concur, She deserve an award. More wisdom sis....

Hmmm Selfless life. I've not missed much here. Keep it rolling sweetheart Angelinastto

Angelinastto:
ATTENTION! ATTENTION!!! ATTENTION!!!




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Yeeaa........... I think i need to say this before people kill my morale by connecting this work with nollywood.
Back to the title of the story "In the dark"
before starting this part i left some questions hanging like who was in the dark? That is about to be answered.
The title does not only connect with Nancy who is the main character but it connects with almost everybody in the story.
And people thinking i have forgotten about uncle mike. No, not yet. I just want you all to know that i know where i started from and i know where i am heading, just believe in this little girl here bosses!
Please stick around readers as babsopey will bring touch light for us to see what has been IN THE DARK.
**Kisses**

Seeing this late o, but I'm here with Flood lights, in case touch light ain't enough. Well done dear @ angelinastto

It is really in the dark!!!


Well-done angel

Angelinassto, you got talent. your story is captivating. Thumbs up. You just secured a place in my list of best writers here. Keep it up, bae.. DTOBS, i'm here to possess my possession, keep off. Lol

WHIZKIDEFE:
Angelinassto, you got talent. your story is captivating. Thumbs up. You just secured a place in my list of best writers here. Keep it up, bae.. DTOBS, i'm here to possess my possession, keep off. Lol

Yessirr


Modified: Bros, you black oooo...


*Runs outta thread*

DTOBS:

Yessirr


Modified: Bros, you black oooo...


*Runs outta thread*

Hmm, the way you stressed the sir sounds suspicious. You are upto something.. Lol. Thanks for your homourous constructive criticism so far, as you can see, bae is getting better with each update. Hope you'r cool bro.

WHIZKIDEFE:
Hmm, the way you stressed the sir sounds suspicious. You are upto something.. Lol. Thanks for your homourous constructive criticism so far, as you can see, bae is getting better with each update. Hope you'r cool bro.

...i'm not up to something ooo, rather am side by side with something...

#TrailerJam it is called.

*Bae*? Who?

Thanks for the dedication.......(So kelvin was the baby mary ran away with.....hmmn)...well done!

[color=#006600][/color]I just dy kule all dis while!!!!DTOBS why b say na only u here nd dr,y u dy disturb dat bae enh?I even check ur profile ur pix no dy dr u b CRIMINAL ooooooooooo.tnk God u don even gentle small if u cos troble again na abuja u go go wit keke napep.

DTOBS:

...i'm not up to something ooo, rather am side by side with something...

#TrailerJam it is called.

*Bae*? Who?

Bae(Angelinassto)

More updates ma!!more wisdom ooo

Roeteemie:
[color=#006600][/color]I just dy kule all dis while!!!!DTOBS why b say na only u here nd dr,y u dy disturb dat bae enh?I even check ur profile ur pix no dy dr u b CRIMINAL ooooooooooo.tnk God u don even gentle small if u cos troble again na abuja u go go wit keke napep.

Sowie ma!
I promise to be a very good boy, I will score 10/10 in my assignment ma.

Wait! Abuja? To go do what ma? Our teacher said that we have excursion to "igbo irunmole" the day after next tomorrow oooo

WHIZKIDEFE:
Bae(Angelinassto)

Okay! So what re you now saying?
Cause I am not understanding you!


Eskillful and hormobolanle, honey moon sowie, sugar moon never finish ni? See customer don dey wait for you for shop ooo aunty, I no know say you like this thing like this!

Spixintnxy, please help me and sell #30 Akara! Thanks

Lankyannie:
lol.abeg no let dtobs hear dz tin u jst talk cus ah no wnt im trailer of wahala 2jam me 4dz place wey i kukuma dy enjoy ma hard earned bobo juice.

lolz bros u funny o, trailer of wahala?!

DTOBS:
It is really in the dark!!!

Well-done angel

broda @dtobs u dey here god evening O