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Re: Who Blinks First, A Tale Of How 3 Girls Fought Over One Guy by kingemmix(m): 2:16pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
[color=#000099][/color]haba y will u keep us in suspense this long when probably u will update tomorrow |
Re: Who Blinks First, A Tale Of How 3 Girls Fought Over One Guy by Nobody: 2:55pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
I haven't followed a story this closely like I followed Iyawo nylon bag. Anti-OP, you have got a gift. Also I am glad you're not fooled by the frequent calls for update to direct your story to a shallow theme The greatest strength of this story is in its settings. You have evoked a strong early 2000s settings & timeline that resonates with the more mature audience on NL who happen to be the last reading bibliophilic teen generation we have in Nigeria Fiction reading is a dying art. The first time I burgled someones locker in boarding house, it was to steal a novel, Palomino by Danielle Steel These days teens have zero interest in anything written without a picture around it. If you doubt me, ask a typical teen to name fiction writers .... you will be surprised at the answers you get 15 Likes |
Re: Who Blinks First, A Tale Of How 3 Girls Fought Over One Guy by Luizkid(m): 2:56pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
Suspense in a literary work is gud but too much of it lyk the one in this ur work myt make a reader disinterested... #myThought |
Re: Who Blinks First, A Tale Of How 3 Girls Fought Over One Guy by mrjubril(m): 3:03pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
Anti bomb why u dey keep us for suspense like gameof thrones producer nw.i hope we dont have to wait till forever before u give us update abeg. |
Re: Who Blinks First, A Tale Of How 3 Girls Fought Over One Guy by OkoyeA1(m): 3:10pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
Anti update 7 Likes 1 Share
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Re: Who Blinks First, A Tale Of How 3 Girls Fought Over One Guy by LaClickLaBend: 3:49pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
difference dey oh...Turkey over chicken anyday.
Anti-continue 1 Like |
Re: Who Blinks First, A Tale Of How 3 Girls Fought Over One Guy by lafean20(f): 4:49pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
If to say Na my Bible I settle down dey read like ds e for good oo ....anyways anti-correct guy kontinu am wityu (in patience' voice) |
Re: Who Blinks First, A Tale Of How 3 Girls Fought Over One Guy by ikombe: 4:51pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
kayzat:did you have to quote the whole story |
Re: Who Blinks First, A Tale Of How 3 Girls Fought Over One Guy by mexzzy47(m): 4:58pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
Anti update plz...... |
Re: Who Blinks First, A Tale Of How 3 Girls Fought Over One Guy by emmybest96(m): 5:04pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
papadee93: |
Re: Who Blinks First, A Tale Of How 3 Girls Fought Over One Guy by teamobanabo(m): 5:23pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
Nice story |
Re: Who Blinks First, A Tale Of How 3 Girls Fought Over One Guy by yalecious: 6:04pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
Pls update now.... great job |
Re: Who Blinks First, A Tale Of How 3 Girls Fought Over One Guy by dreezybines: 6:05pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
Turkey over chicken anyway anytime... Nice story Anti-Op... |
Re: Who Blinks First, A Tale Of How 3 Girls Fought Over One Guy by bowman000(m): 6:43pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
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Re: Who Blinks First, A Tale Of How 3 Girls Fought Over One Guy by wizzlyd(m): 6:43pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
Anti-story Pls we day wait for you gbam |
Re: Who Blinks First, A Tale Of How 3 Girls Fought Over One Guy by Kentura(m): 7:07pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
anti-soontobecultguy abeg don't forget to mention me when you update. Nice story |
Re: Who Blinks First, A Tale Of How 3 Girls Fought Over One Guy by Nobody: 7:24pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
Where this guy na, come finish d story ooo anti |
Re: Who Blinks First, A Tale Of How 3 Girls Fought Over One Guy by antispexish(m): 7:31pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
less busy eairlier today Wetin this girl they talk now, I thought, you buy me this sweet turkey only to force it down my throat with sad news. For some seconds , the turkey flesh I had torn from the main turkey lap hanged in my mouth while I searched mercy's face for any kind of play play me:" mercy, that is not a joke o" mercy: " do I like I'm joking" Mercy then started relating to me the things I did not know is happening underground. The night she and uzoma fought, she was visited by aDe, or rather ade escorted her to her hostel and talked to her, the first sign was the apprehension she saw on the faces of two of her room mates, she initially thought it was because of the marks on her body before she realised that the girls where not looking at her, but where looking at ade with fear. The girls knew who ade really is. Ade had calmed her nerves and told her she was just an unfortunate bystander and a victim of circumstance, but he assured her that no matter what happens, no one or group of people is going to do anything to her. He asked her if she still wants to date David despite what happened, she said she will think about it(as at that time) and ade told her point blank that if she continues to date David, despite his protection, he will not intervene if uzoma wants or tries to fight her, he says that their will be no gang beatING, he will counter uzoma's threats, but if they(uzoma and mercy)meet and fight, he will not intervene, no one will intervene. "no wonder", I thought, " that this girl has been wearing strong strong clothes since!" I asked if ade and uzoma belong to the same group(I get you know what I mean by group by now), she said she does not know that one, but she said she is sure uzoma belongs to something, and she messed up big time. " how did she mess up" I asked mercy: " she was supposed to recruit David in 100 level, she did not, she refused to lore him in", so when they broke up and we started dating, they blamed her and refused to deal with me, and since ade and that girl he was with that day are involved, I'm safe from them, but David is not. me: "so you think David and uzoma had broken up abi?, if I give you jist hen! that turkey we you dey chop wunt digest for three days" I said in my mind I asked her " how do you know this and who is that girl that ade was with that day?" mercy: "some one told me in the hostel , the girl with ade is senior to uzoma I heard she even slapped uzoma that night" me:" so how Come you think that ade has joined cult" mercy: " cus of his movement lately, most times I dnt see him, even if I plan to see him, he tells me not to come to his room that he will come see me later" me: " Heya, this girl does not know that anytime he is not with her, he and uzoma are busy grinding each other to a halt in the room" my mind said , but my mouth replied " so you are not even sure sef, and you don make me fear anyhow. The David I know cannot join anything other than debating society for this school." she laughed, but I continued "you know David na, do you think he can fight ordinary puppy dog?, I dnt think he will just join like that without informing you sef. mercy : " if you want to join, will you inform toke?" I did not answer her but asked instead " does toke know all this?" mercy: " yes" me: " does David know all this too" mercy: " yes" me:" then he will know how to avoid them na, dnt worry, I'll look for David, I'll send you a mail tomorrow afternoon when I go to the cafe and tell you where he is, okay, (she nodded), but why did you decide to still date David after ade warned you about uzoma after the fight?" mercy: " me sef they wonder o" (showing me her palms and tilting her heard slightly)" she what Ive gotten myself into" me: "na love na, love can do anything" mercy: " ya head" me : " so if uzoma come fight you , will you fight her back?" mercy: "I might not a Benin girl for nothing" me: " just be careful sha" mercy: " anti-truth, plus tell me , do you know why that girl is still interested in David, he has broken up with her since , why does she now want to still see him, expecially at the club, I understand if she wants to fight me, I'm ready for her, but her trying to see David is what I dnt understand" me: " maybe because he is good in bed" (I winked, bet she wunt know I just gave her the reason ) mercy: " o ya start to dey go, you have stated yarning nonsense, see you on monday" she turned and went inside , I said " help me tell toke that I'm sorry" she just waved her hand without looking back . I turned and left , I was now really worried with this new info I got, so their is a lot more going on that I was not aware of, it's time I set some distance between me and this issue, so that when shit hit fan, I will not be in the room, and if I'm in the room, I'll be wearing space suit. I'm very sure David did not go to see uzoma, uzoma goes home every Friday afternoon. that thought hit me like lightning,"haa!, David, David, davidi, uzoma goes home every Friday afternoon and her roomate ekaite told me to tell him to come by 8.pm on Friday ,what is going on" I asked no one. stay tuned ......... what do you think, do you think it was David that's in trouble or the the issue is deeper, probably the setup is for mercy. 4 Likes |
Re: Who Blinks First, A Tale Of How 3 Girls Fought Over One Guy by ymx(m): 7:32pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
antispexish: Those who attended UNILAG will know that you were referring to UNILAG. And your hostel is probably MAKAMA or SODEINDE hall. Mercy and Toke probably lives in FAGUNWA hall. UFOMA lives in MOREMI. Am I right? 7 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Who Blinks First, A Tale Of How 3 Girls Fought Over One Guy by antispexish(m): 7:50pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
@ lafean20 babeflenz adebayo201 Kentura moscobabs Youngtrice ladyverere Rayjaymay saaddiction humblelyf klbakare MrTeCO Brokenblade1234 wizzlyd 23Tunde45 zicoswagg chidiogojessy mrjubril seanmozilla I hope you guys enjoyin it @ kayzat, had to add your monicker to remind you whenever their is new post. 1 Like |
Re: Who Blinks First, A Tale Of How 3 Girls Fought Over One Guy by antispexish(m): 7:52pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
ekaite! 7 Likes
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Re: Who Blinks First, A Tale Of How 3 Girls Fought Over One Guy by antispexish(m): 7:55pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
ymx:will tell you if you are right or wrong later Bro. |
Re: Who Blinks First, A Tale Of How 3 Girls Fought Over One Guy by Atoos(m): 8:03pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
ymx: I thought of this too but, Moremi is not a 30 mins walk from sodeinde..... |
Re: Who Blinks First, A Tale Of How 3 Girls Fought Over One Guy by kayzat: 8:18pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
antispexish: I really appreciate the mention sir. You are doing a great job. |
Re: Who Blinks First, A Tale Of How 3 Girls Fought Over One Guy by moscobabs(m): 8:19pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
antispexish: anti thanks for the update the story is getting deeper more data to your phone bro, I dey follow you as HIV dey follow adulterer 1 Like |
Re: Who Blinks First, A Tale Of How 3 Girls Fought Over One Guy by padi94(m): 8:23pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
Can u cut short on d sex description pls, the drama alone is cool |
Re: Who Blinks First, A Tale Of How 3 Girls Fought Over One Guy by MrMacinterchi1: 8:30pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
antispexish: lol |
Re: Who Blinks First, A Tale Of How 3 Girls Fought Over One Guy by padi94(m): 8:50pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
Why is Anti-slow dulling this story na, cant we have a ne episode already |
Re: Who Blinks First, A Tale Of How 3 Girls Fought Over One Guy by antispexish(m): 9:14pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
padi94:I posted 3 posts today na |
Re: Who Blinks First, A Tale Of How 3 Girls Fought Over One Guy by ladyverere(f): 9:15pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
antispexish: Tanx anti guy for d mention. Something really deep is going down... |
Re: Who Blinks First, A Tale Of How 3 Girls Fought Over One Guy by Frankdammy(m): 9:22pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
ymx:hmm... Here they come again. ''Hostel Alumnus'', JAJA hall nko? 1 Like |
Re: Who Blinks First, A Tale Of How 3 Girls Fought Over One Guy by iamdazzy(m): 9:41pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
Anti ....
Abeg mention me tmao .... Nice write up ... Keep up the gud work ... 1 Like 2 Shares |
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