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Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 1:11pm On Dec 07, 2016 |
Prologue CHIOMA. I stared intently into his eyes. I didnt know if believing him was a good idea. But then, i loved this man. I couldnt do without him. I closed my eyes then opened them again. Tears filled my eyes 'Chuks, why do you keep doing this to me?' 'i'm so sorry' 'why do you continue cheating on me? What have i done to deserve all this ill-treatment from you? Why?' 'i was seduced, i swear' I started crying again. Crying was all i did nowadays. No matter how much i try to stop myself, the tears never stopped flowing. 'baby please...' he said moving closer to me, he wrapped his hands around my shoulder 'she seduced me. It was never my intention' I cried even harder. 'this is the third time you are sleeping with my best friends!' i cried slapping my laps 'when will you change? What do they have that i dont have? Eh, Chuks?' 'i'm so sorry' 'how many time? How many times do you have to apologise to me for the same mistake? Why do you have to always destroy the friendship between my friends and i?' 'i'm so sorry...' his voice was shaky now 'if i have to apologise over and over again, then i will have to do so over and over again. But please, forgive me' I stood up. I looked at him again and i made my decision 'i've made my decision Chuks...' i moved away from him 'i want a divorce' TBC Please comment, like and share 33 Likes 6 Shares |
Re: Red Ashes by xaviercasmir(m): 1:35pm On Dec 07, 2016 |
really intresting. Pls countinue |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 3:11pm On Dec 07, 2016 |
xaviercasmir:Tanz alot Xaviercasmir. Kip followin 4 more |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 3:13pm On Dec 07, 2016 |
Osaze, dnt jst read, bt also comment, tanz alot 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 5:41pm On Dec 07, 2016 |
To be continued later 9 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 8:50pm On Dec 07, 2016 |
Update removed by author 10 Likes 3 Shares |
Re: Red Ashes by xaviercasmir(m): 10:48pm On Dec 07, 2016 |
that Nathan of a boy behave as if he was the center of the universe. I don'nt know his reseason on why he was doing what he did. Your story line is good with simple English that is easy to understand. KEEP IT UP AND MORE UPDATE PLEASE 3 Likes |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 7:24am On Dec 08, 2016 |
xaviercasmir:Tank 4 d nyc words Xavier, kip followin 4 more. More updates cum up in d evnin. Pls, invite ur friends |
Re: Red Ashes by abefe99: 10:26am On Dec 08, 2016 |
this is interesting pls more update |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 12:18pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
abefe99:Tanx Abefe99, i promise u more interestin updates |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 2:21pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
Update removed by author 11 Likes 3 Shares |
Re: Red Ashes by xaviercasmir(m): 2:51pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
like i said before, Nathan is a jerk. more ink to your pen. AND MORE UPDATE PLS |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 4:50pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
xaviercasmir:more update u shall get Xavi honey |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 8:19pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
Update removed by author 13 Likes 4 Shares |
Re: Red Ashes by xaviercasmir(m): 10:09pm On Dec 08, 2016 |
the truth is bitter but it must told.
that one man foolishness does not mean that all men are foolish.
NICE STORY PLEASE MORE |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 7:04am On Dec 09, 2016 |
xaviercasmir:Tanx dear. Pls dnt just read, also comment. I'm seein a 188 views n just 1 person is commenting. You dont know how far your comments go 2 encourage a person. Comment, criticise (constructive pls, make una no go kill my career ova nite....lollz) Thanks for readin Red Ashes 5 Likes |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 7:19am On Dec 09, 2016 |
Update deleted by author 7 Likes 4 Shares |
Re: Red Ashes by xaviercasmir(m): 10:14am On Dec 09, 2016 |
thats why some men treats ladies like a trash. Upon all the sign that shows that he does not love you as much as you do. You still say that you love him. when he sees the one he truly love,he will leave as asap. NICE WORK AND KEEP IT UP 4 Likes |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 1:39pm On Dec 09, 2016 |
Bibijay123
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Twaci
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Jagugu88li U guys shuld check dis story out oo, tanx alot 2 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Red Ashes by Twaci(f): 1:51pm On Dec 09, 2016 |
Nice one Chumzypinky! Kinda hard to connect the characters...they are slowly falling into place though. Nathan is a aśs though Fire on! |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 2:17pm On Dec 09, 2016 |
Update deleted by author 8 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 2:19pm On Dec 09, 2016 |
Present Sir! What am I being called for? |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 2:20pm On Dec 09, 2016 |
Twaci:Lollz Twaci, dont worry, they will gradually fall into place in subsequent updates. Thanks for following. And please make sure to drop another wonderful story by next yr. I cant wait to read your story again. Thanks for reading and commenting, you dont know how much it meant to me. Thanks a bunch honey. 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Red Ashes by Twaci(f): 2:22pm On Dec 09, 2016 |
Chumzypinky:You are welcome dear And thank you |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 2:23pm On Dec 09, 2016 |
jagugu88li:You are under arrest Jagugu. Make sure you report to the station and admit to your crimes in order to get a lighter sentence. Lollzzz |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 2:24pm On Dec 09, 2016 |
Twaci:Yea |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 2:24pm On Dec 09, 2016 |
Twaci:Yea |
Re: Red Ashes by dominique(f): 2:41pm On Dec 09, 2016 |
Bookmarked |
Re: Red Ashes by MerceeD(f): 3:15pm On Dec 09, 2016 |
Following |
Re: Red Ashes by bibijay123(f): 4:25pm On Dec 09, 2016 |
Thanks for the mention,following 1 Like |
Re: Red Ashes by Julietogbo(f): 4:45pm On Dec 09, 2016 |
Nice one following this story 100% |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 5:35pm On Dec 09, 2016 |
dominique:Kip followin dear. I luv ur name by d way 1 Like |
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