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Paradigm Shift by souloho19(m): 10:58am On Jan 15, 2017
I wnt call dis a poem...just something inspired by true events or sld i say true feelings..:

* when I met u I had met you,
But didn't know I had met you
Cos I was focused on the mini skirt
That was beside you
So I'd stop by for lunch errytime it was her shift - and yours
It wasn't formal when i signed off as 'sincerely yours'
I remember that day clearly and here's d fun fact:
Sitting at my table trying to make eye contact
With ur friend..I had her no. and a message to send
But then she shifted and I saw you at the other end
U caught my attention like u prey'd on my mind
Appreciating God for ur beauty as I pray in my mind
I'd like to skip introductions to introductions if u don't mind
Cos I see u as my wife thru d eye in my mind..
I ain't just weaving a story this is not a fabrication
Dat day something touched me like I had sensitive calibration*

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Re: Paradigm Shift by Flatties: 12:03pm On Jan 15, 2017
It can't be a poem.. Poets don't use 'cos' 'u' "errytine angry angry
Re: Paradigm Shift by souloho19(m): 12:39pm On Jan 15, 2017
Igbos:
It can't be a poem.. Poets don't use 'cos' 'u' "errytine angry angry
OK sir..but what's ur take on d content
Re: Paradigm Shift by Elkay3: 10:14pm On Jan 16, 2017
souloho19:

OK sir..but what's ur take on d content

Just take your time and arrange it, correct spellings, creates a rhyming meter at end or middle, stanza, and believe me, it'll be lovely that you'll like it all over again.
I'm learning poetry too, and it's interesting!

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Re: Paradigm Shift by BlackEl(m): 10:30pm On Jan 19, 2018
nice content, although the message isn't really clarified .. the abbreviations are too much

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