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****His Little Secret*** by Tintinnoty(m): 7:52am On Jan 28, 2017 |
Though I've been very active here on literature section, this is the first story I'll be writing so criticism is welcome. please note am not a writer so am prone to errors. Anyone who wishes to repost this story to any other online forum, Facebook group, blog or any other website should endeavour to acknowledge the author. You can reach me by mail and I will be glade to chat you up. purityval Hibiscuss goodheart02 Fabiano09 Emmaxplus you guys are the best here online so I look forward to your criticism First update is loading |
Re: ****His Little Secret*** by Tintinnoty(m): 8:03am On Jan 28, 2017 |
HIS SECRET The first day I saw him, my heart skipped a beat. I couldn't believe a man can be that beautiful. He was dining al fresco with two other men...his friends, I guessed. They were laughing hard to a joke one of them shared and didn't notice me arrive. I had just arrived home from school on the first semester break and was tired and hungry. Even though the bag I carried which contained my cloth and other essentials I would need for the three weeks we were allowed to spend on break before second semester resumed was not heavy, I was crazily tired. No thanks to the bus I boarded from Ekiti where my school was to Lagos where I reside with my parents. It was a hectic journey as one of the tyres got fed up and resigned and the driver had to replace it with a new one. We had not gone too far before another tyre resigned and we had to repeat the routine. By the time we got to Lagos, I was dead tired and all I wanted to do was sleep. I mumbled a greeting to the laughing men as I walked past them to our own apartment. They answered me jovially and continued their discussion. My younger brother was watching the highlights of a football match when I entered the house. As our usual practice, we gave each other warm hugs, proceeding to gist about all we had each missed. My parents had gone for a get-together so there wasn't much for me to do. I had a quick shower and joined my brother in the sitting room, the thoughts of the beautiful man in my head. ''Ope, who are those guys outside? I have never met them before.'' I asked him. ''Those are our new neighbour and his friends. Mr. Isaac, the fair one among them is the one who rented the apartment Aunty Funmi vacated.'' My brother replied me without looking away from the TV. Suddenly he gave a small laugh, shook his head and said, ''Somehow, Dad feels something isn't right with the man. He says he can't place it but he feels Mr. Isaac can't be trusted. Well, what's my own?'' My brows creased as I take in the imformation my brother gave me. I thought about it for a while and then dismissed the thoughts. After all, my dad has problems with every fair person. He just doesn't like fair people. I shook the thoughts off my mind, took an apple from the refridgerator and joined my brother on the sofa.... 3 Likes |
Re: ****His Little Secret*** by queenitee(f): 8:42am On Jan 28, 2017 |
Adesina12 ![]() Harameede99 sisterly,ladysuperb,sammyfreshsmooth,rachealfst chumzypinky,kindly mention others Comman join me,never read his story before but I hope we enjoy it |
Re: ****His Little Secret*** by Tintinnoty(m): 9:12am On Jan 28, 2017 |
queenitee:thanks for calling your buddies, sure you would enjoy it 1 Like |
Re: ****His Little Secret*** by Chummypinky(f): 9:17am On Jan 28, 2017 |
cool I love d start.......feel it gonna be interesting |
Re: ****His Little Secret*** by iiru: 9:51am On Jan 28, 2017 |
following |
Re: ****His Little Secret*** by Adesina12: 10:19am On Jan 28, 2017 |
queenitee: on the way |
Re: ****His Little Secret*** by Nobody: 10:36am On Jan 28, 2017 |
Okay.... I'm here.
What's on the menu?? |
Re: ****His Little Secret*** by Tintinnoty(m): 11:51am On Jan 28, 2017 |
debdave:you're welcome, sit back relax as I take you on a ride. |
Re: ****His Little Secret*** by harameede99(f): 1:04pm On Jan 28, 2017 |
queenitee:oya i don join i av a feeling we gonna enjoy its lets jst hope for regular updates |
Re: ****His Little Secret*** by Tintinnoty(m): 1:06pm On Jan 28, 2017 |
harameede99: trust me 4 regular updates |
Re: ****His Little Secret*** by Emmaxplus(m): 1:08pm On Jan 28, 2017 |
Tintinnoty:now I don show, ride on boss of life |
Re: ****His Little Secret*** by goodheart02(m): 3:50pm On Jan 28, 2017 |
Tintinnoty: Ride on bro, I'm behind you. |
Re: ****His Little Secret*** by Nobody: 5:04pm On Jan 28, 2017 |
Tintinnoty:Alright.#expecting# |
Re: ****His Little Secret*** by Edipee(m): 6:23pm On Jan 28, 2017 |
goodheart02:My good Doctor, you're fans are still waiting for the completion of your story in an e-book as you promised. |
Re: ****His Little Secret*** by Tintinnoty(m): 7:12pm On Jan 28, 2017 |
Update dropping this night |
Re: ****His Little Secret*** by Tintinnoty(m): 7:48pm On Jan 28, 2017 |
Onihaxy please come on board lets do this together |
Re: ****His Little Secret*** by ladySuperb(f): 9:58pm On Jan 28, 2017 |
Queenite have u ordered for anything ![]() ![]() |
Re: ****His Little Secret*** by ladySuperb(f): 10:02pm On Jan 28, 2017 |
davidf,olami90,kaodek,temmytae70,jbond,fabiano09,marrtynze everyone come oooo.... food yaff ready oooo |
Re: ****His Little Secret*** by Nobody: 10:11pm On Jan 28, 2017 |
ladySuperb:shey there's plenty pepper? |
Re: ****His Little Secret*** by Nobody: 10:13pm On Jan 28, 2017 |
harameede99:kai see the way you bastardized such a beautiful name all in the name of being funky,Aramide. |
Re: ****His Little Secret*** by Tintinnoty(m): 10:13pm On Jan 28, 2017 |
fabiano09:yes boss enough to go round |
Re: ****His Little Secret*** by Nobody: 10:15pm On Jan 28, 2017 |
Tintinnoty:Carry on man,its in you like peak milk lol |
Re: ****His Little Secret*** by ladySuperb(f): 10:42pm On Jan 28, 2017 |
fabiano09:ah lemme ask Rachelfst oooo! but what do u think we can cook? |
Re: ****His Little Secret*** by queenitee(f): 10:46pm On Jan 28, 2017 |
ladySuperb:Been waiting for Adesina12 oo..What should we order? |
Re: ****His Little Secret*** by queenitee(f): 10:47pm On Jan 28, 2017 |
harameede99:He has promised us regular updates,let's enjoy bae |
Re: ****His Little Secret*** by Nobody: 10:48pm On Jan 28, 2017 |
ladySuperb:aahh,you called me saying food don ready,now you are asking what can we cook? lol wahahla dey o |
Re: ****His Little Secret*** by ladySuperb(f): 10:51pm On Jan 28, 2017 |
fabiano09:ayaf eat it finish ....... and I don't want u guys to he hungry, days y I said I kukuma said lemme prepare another jollop rice !!!! |
Re: ****His Little Secret*** by ladySuperb(f): 10:55pm On Jan 28, 2017 |
queenitee:u know I don't usually have appetite .... 5 wraps of swallow..... 4 meats( assorted).... one big stock fish.... panla kika.. 4 ponmo..... 1 five alive...... I think dats ok... I don't have appetite... |
Re: ****His Little Secret*** by queenitee(f): 11:03pm On Jan 28, 2017 |
ladySuperb:Same here,I think I will go with what you ordered.. Adesina12 honey oya oo |
Re: ****His Little Secret*** by harameede99(f): 11:13pm On Jan 28, 2017 |
fabiano09:hmm i dnt even knw wah to say tnx for saying my name is beautiful nd abt beign funky shld i say sorry?i no even knw |
Re: ****His Little Secret*** by harameede99(f): 11:17pm On Jan 28, 2017 |
queenitee:abeg make we sef order na cos na pounded yam wit efo nd bokoto nd goat intestines wit cold smirnoff |
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