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Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 10:19am On Feb 10, 2017
sirblero:
mummy pinky...good morning to you...

you haven't given us breakfast...
#patiently waiting...
ewo! So i luk lyk QueenGolden now abi? I luk lyk ur galfrend that wil gv u food na abi? U wnt QueenGolden to kill me ni

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Re: Red Ashes by citas(f): 10:48am On Feb 10, 2017
finally, I am here, dis story is da bomb n I can't wait for d next update. abeg nollywood shld come n buy dis story if dem get brain. chumzy..... kizzessss
Re: Red Ashes by Queengolden(f): 11:56am On Feb 10, 2017
Chumzypinky:

ewo! So i luk lyk QueenGolden now abi? I luk lyk ur galfrend that wil gv u food na abi? U wnt QueenGolden to kill me ni
why would i kill u nw when you are my one nd only writer on nl
Re: Red Ashes by sirblero(m): 12:02pm On Feb 10, 2017
Chumzypinky:

ewo! So i luk lyk QueenGolden now abi? I luk lyk ur galfrend that wil gv u food na abi? U wnt QueenGolden to kill me ni


lol...its not bad nau...we're gonna be the couple ever!!
#lolzzzz
#more updates please..
Re: Red Ashes by talk2saintify(m): 12:31pm On Feb 10, 2017
mummy wer our lunch naaa....


no updates since muwin cry cry cry

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Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 2:32pm On Feb 10, 2017
nice story
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 3:20pm On Feb 10, 2017
showmeyourpussy:
nice story
u mst be a bad boy
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 3:44pm On Feb 10, 2017
Update removed by author

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Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 4:02pm On Feb 10, 2017
Nene and nath should should just get back 2geda already................ and d girl crushing on nath should b careful ooooo......

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Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 4:03pm On Feb 10, 2017
Nathan should've told Nene the truth instead of lying and Nene should just grow up. Lack of trust and lies can destroy a relationship.
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 4:29pm On Feb 10, 2017
Chumzypinky:
u mst be a bad boy
nah

y would you think so?
Re: Red Ashes by talk2saintify(m): 5:11pm On Feb 10, 2017
showmeyourpussy:


nah


y would you think so?


lolz..look ah ya name,,, cheesy cheesy

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Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 5:14pm On Feb 10, 2017
talk2saintify:


lolz..look ah ya name,,, cheesy cheesy

oh i see.......well its french like "show meyo ur pus sy"

wait o what did u thInk it was?
Re: Red Ashes by jericco1(m): 5:15pm On Feb 10, 2017
Woah! Wonderful. I'd love to criticize ur work...
Re: Red Ashes by talk2saintify(m): 5:20pm On Feb 10, 2017
Chumzypinky:
NATHAN.
I checked my phone and it was Myra calling. Why was she calling by this time? Anyway, it was just 8pm, not very late. I picked the call with a smile on my face 'hello dear'

'hello Nath. Good evening. Whats up?'

'i'm cool. You?'

'i'm alright. I'm doing just fine. Have you had dinner?'

'yes. I just finished eating with my mum, what about you?'

'i'm not in the mood to eat so i've not eaten anything'

'why? Are you okay?'

'i dont know. I'm having stomach upset'

'oh, so sorry. Have you taken drugs?'

'no, i...i'm on my period'

'oh' i was slightly embarrassed. I didnt know why. Wasnt she even embarrassed telling me that?

'whats oh? Is it a new thing to you?'

'lol, its not'

'or you want to tell me your girlfriend does not menstruate eh?'

'lol. I dont have a girlfriend' i thought of Nene.

'i hear well well. A handsome rich and intelligent guy like you cant be single. Alright, what about that girl that came to the office the other day?'

'which girl?' why did i get the feeling that she intentionally called for this information? I smiled feigning ignorance.

'that girl nah. That one that came on tuesday'

'oh! That was...my ex' the word felt heavy coming out of my mouth. Was Kainene really an ex to me?

'your ex?'

'yes, my ex'

'what happened?'

'sorry but i'd rather not talk about it'

'oh, it must be really painful then. Did she cheat?'

'no she didnt'

'she lied to you?'

'look Myra, i really dont wanna talk about this please' i snapped

'okay, i understand' her voice was low now and i felt bad snapping at her. Myra was a very nice lady 'i just wanted to check up on you and hear your voice. Alright then, bye'

'uhm Myra?'

'yes?'

'i'm sorry. I'm sorry for my harsh tone. Just that...'

'its okay, i should be the one apologising, i shouldnt poke my nose into other people's affairs'

'alright then, good night dear'

'good night too. See you tomorrow'

'and you too'

She just chuckled then ended the call.

I slowly dropped the phone on my bed. I walked to my wardrobe and opened it. I brought out a picture. And i smiled. Kainene's smiling face was something i could look at everday.
I was about going back to bed when i heard my mum scream.
***

MABEL.

I held this darkskinned man tightly 'please help me hold my son. Dont let him run away please. Lets take him to a psychiatric hospital immediately before it becomes worse than it already is please' i wept.

The man held me and assured me he and his boys were going to catch up with Nathan.

Tired of running and with my already aching legs, i sat on a pavement and watched as the men gathered a chain, a rop and a whip, then they went after Nathan who was busying dancing and playing with some children in his unclothedness.

I kept weeping and praying. I didnt know how it happened but Nathan was mad. He was mad!

When he sighted the men approaching him, he held his manhood and danced around with it saying 'shaka shakabula. Shakakpum shakakpum, oya shaka shakabula!' the children laughed.

Just when the men were about grabbing him, he ran away and the men chased after him. I kept shouting from where i sat for him to be caught.

'if you do good chewinggum, oh oh oh oh chewinggum, oh oh oh chewinggum waiting for you' i looked back to see who was singing.

And behold it was Kainene!

She was dressed in what i would term as rags and she was holding a packet of orbit chewinggum as children gathered around her. I screamed. What was happening? I continued screaming and screaming and just then, i woke up to see Nathan by my side.

I sighed in relief then i quickly ran my hands all over his body to ensure myself that he was safe and sound. I couldnt tolerate anything happening to this boy because i had grown to love him as my son now.

'mum, are you alright? A terrible nightmare?' he held my hands tightly with worry and concern all over his face.

I touched the freckles of his curly hair 'i had a very terrible nightmare. About you son'

'about me?'

'get me water first' i pointed at the mini refridgerator just beside my bed. He opened it and handed me a bottled water. I drank from it.

'thanks' i said.

He just nodded 'so what did you dream about me?'

Then i became scared all over again. Nathan couldnt run mad. No never! But then, why would he and Kainene ever want to run mad at the same time? Was it because they werent together anymore? Was there a strong hold binding them together? Or were they involved in a blood convenant? I wondered.

'i dreamt of you and Kainene running mad'

The look of shock on his face was evident.

TBC



bar man give the bae 5bottle cheesy cheesy cheesy

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Re: Red Ashes by harunablezin(f): 5:27pm On Feb 10, 2017
d powa of lyf and death lies in d tongue.... even without d blood oat
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 5:36pm On Feb 10, 2017
jericco1:
Woah! Wonderful. I'd love to criticize ur work...
pls do hon
Re: Red Ashes by ElajRita(f): 5:53pm On Feb 10, 2017
Chumzypinky:

sori jhor. Too many tins on my mind



I understand, hope my hubby dey kick wella,
Somebody stole my fone, dats why i dey offline since but i dey follow the story.
Nathan just break my heart, i no sey nene get her own, but he went too far, with the way he treat or rather respond to her...
More wisdom to ur brain, more data to ur fone, and less activities in za oza room.(let my hubby rest nau haba)
Re: Red Ashes by ElajRita(f): 5:56pm On Feb 10, 2017
talk2saintify:



bar man give the bae 5bottle cheesy cheesy cheesy

Tell me why God wee not purnish u?
Re: Red Ashes by yorhmienerd(m): 6:15pm On Feb 10, 2017
talk2saintify:



bar man give the bae 5bottle cheesy cheesy cheesy
USE ASAP!

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Re: Red Ashes by comelyJummy(f): 6:32pm On Feb 10, 2017
Wehdone ma! psychosis on point. Blood oath not my portion oooo.
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 7:05pm On Feb 10, 2017
ElajRita:




I understand, hope my hubby dey kick wella,
Somebody stole my fone, dats why i dey offline since but i dey follow the story.
Nathan just break my heart, i no sey nene get her own, but he went too far, with the way he treat or rather respond to her...
More wisdom to ur brain, more data to ur fone, and less activities in za oza room.(let my hubby rest nau haba)
lol, nw i knw dos contending with me concerning my darling husband, lol
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 7:06pm On Feb 10, 2017
ElajRita:



Tell me why God wee not purnish u?
hahahahaha, i swear dis gat me laughing so hard. U get badmouth oo, eh-hen, see d small small girls of nawadays
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 7:07pm On Feb 10, 2017
yorhmienerd:
USE ASAP!
he needs it like seriously
Re: Red Ashes by samyfreshsmooth(m): 7:18pm On Feb 10, 2017
ElajRita:


Tell me why God wee not purnish u?

tongue tongue tongue tongue
Re: Red Ashes by Winters22: 7:25pm On Feb 10, 2017
shaka shaka shakabula... sheke sheke shekegbula ..... Chumzypinky... is that what nathan did?
Re: Red Ashes by Emekus92(m): 7:58pm On Feb 10, 2017
People do crazy things when they r in luv.
Re: Red Ashes by hatchetman(m): 8:12pm On Feb 10, 2017
talk2saintify:




bar man give the bae 5bottle cheesy cheesy cheesy
u dont hav 2 quote a whole chapter nau
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 8:19pm On Feb 10, 2017
talk2saintify:



bar man give the bae 5bottle cheesy cheesy cheesy
undecided

Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 8:20pm On Feb 10, 2017
mummy pinky, thanks for the update
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 8:59pm On Feb 10, 2017
Update deleted by author

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Re: Red Ashes by Tpresh(f): 9:03pm On Feb 10, 2017
Thanks for the update ma'am

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