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Re: Hidden Diamonds by EvaJael(f): 9:10am On Jun 13, 2017 |
Dedicated to all my readers:both the ones who comment and the ghost readers. Jamille Before long,Niel stormed into the room. “Niel,don’t you know how to knock? What if we were unclad?” I fired at him. “Look,I’m sorry Mille. You can kill me later.” “What’s the problem?” I asked. He looked really angry. He didn’t even bother answering me. He was just glaring at his sister like he would cut off her head in a matter of seconds. I turned to Gloria hoping for an explanation but I got none. She wasn’t a bit shaken by his glare. She was busy chatting,totally ignoring him. “Do you guys wanna tell me what the hell is going on here?” “Ask your friend.” Niel finally replied. “Gloria spill before I get mad.” “Na wa o. Am I the one that barged into the room with a face that can pursue all the witches from Akwa Ibom?” “Gloria,I’m so not in the mood to laugh right now so cut it out.” I said. “Gloria,what have I done to you? Must you always joke around?’ “One question at a time bro. I don’t know what you’re talking about.” “Cut the crap Gloria. You locked my room.” “What the hell! Gloria did I hear right?” I asked. “I have no hand in it. Ask Elliot.” “Stop! Just stop! Elliot would never do that. That’s why you wanted me to go and eat first,so you would carry out your silly plan.” “For the last time Jathniel. I didn’t do it.” She got up from the bed. “Gloria,for the last time,give the keys back.” He clenched his fists and I knew he was getting angry. I decided not to intrude in the sibling fight. A part of me believed that Gloria took the keys. “Mille,talk to him o. I’m not with his keys.” She looked at me but I didn’t even spare her a glance. Niel was moving towards her in very short and slow strides. The room was quite big and they both walked around it. Niel was still moving towards her and she was moving backwards as he came closer. When she reached a corner, she could no longer move. She was beginning to get scared. Just when he stopped before her,I got up from the bed to hold him back. “Niel please stop.” I pleaded “I took it. I took it Jathniel.” She covered her face with her palms. “Give them back this instant.” He said in a voice barely above a whisper. She just stood there with her palms still covering her face. “Gloria are you deaf?” He yelled this time. “It’s not in this room. I’ll go get them if you could just shift a bit.” “Before I shift,I’m warning you never to pull such an expensive stunt when I want to go out especially with Mille. Taken?” She nodded. “I just wanted to delay you so you wouldn’t take Mille away so soon.” He didn’t answer her. He just made way for her to pass. She moved as fast as she could. I had never seen Gloria behave that way before. Once she left the room, I turned to Jathniel. “Mr Discipline,that was way too hard. She was just joking with you for crying out loud and the next thing,you wanted to behead her.’ He smacked his forehead. “ I know and I’m sorry.” “Tell that to Gloria.” She came back inside and handed him the key before running to the restroom. I gave him the ‘see what you’ve caused’ look. He followed her. He held the door before she could slam it shut.I left the room so he would be able to talk to her. I sat on the stairs humming to myself. I felt someone was watching me so I turned and my eyes got locked with Elliot’s. He was peeping from his door. He attempted closing the door when our eyes locked but I stopped him. “Come on out Elliot. I don’t bite.” He came out and sat beside me on the stairs “I’m not afraid of you.” “I never said you were. I just want a proper introduction. You know we started out on the wrong foot.” “Yeah right. I’m Elliot,Jathniel’s brother.” He stretched his hand forward for a handshake. “And I’m Mille,Jathniel’s girlfriend. It’s an honour meeting my boyfriend’s twin.” I shook his hand. I noticed his eyes were a lighter shade of brown while Niel’s were darker. “Love my eyes?” He asked. “I sure do. They suit you.” Niel came out of the room with Gloria holding on to his hand. They were both smiling when I turned to them but Niel’s smile vanished immediately he saw Elliot. “Niel,go get ready so we can go already.” I said to him. I wasn’t ready to watch world war 3 just yet. “Alright love. I’ll be out soon enough.” Gloria sat in between Elliot and I. Only then did Niel enter his room. “You okay?” I whispered in Gloria’s ears. She flashed a smile at me and nodded. “I guess I have to leave you ladies for now.” Elliot announced. “Thanks for keeping me company.” “It’s okay. The only payment I seek is your contact.” “I thought you’d never ask.” I called out my phone number to him and he typed it on his phone. “I’ll surely give you a call pretty damsel.” I giggled “Of course sir. I’ll be expecting it.” Immediately he left,Gloria spoke up. “Small advice Mille. Don’t let Elliot get into your head abeg. He’s a fine boy sha bt I’d advise you stick with your boo boo.” I smiled “Advice taken miss key.” “Stop na. Now you can talk shey? When that your person wanted to kill me,you didn’t say a single word.” “You needed small boost. It would have made sense If he had landed a sweet knock on your head.” Her countenance changed. “Na play o madam.” “I know jare. Never pray for Niel to use his hands on someone abeg. Trust me,I’v heard stories from both Elliot and him.” I laughed. “I’m serious about that my advice Mille.” “So Gloria now gives advice.” Niel came out of his room. 5 Likes |
Re: Hidden Diamonds by pearl009(f): 9:11am On Jun 13, 2017 |
wow!!. we don hit frontpage , congrats EvaJael you really worth it , thus story is superb !.. where's queenitee oya bring the champagne let's celebrate |
Re: Hidden Diamonds by pearl009(f): 9:11am On Jun 13, 2017 |
wow!!. we don hit frontpage , congrats EvaJael you really worth it , this story is superb !.. where's queenitee oya bring the champagne let's celebrate |
Re: Hidden Diamonds by queenitee(f): 9:14am On Jun 13, 2017 |
EvaJael:Lemme quickly go and buy it |
Re: Hidden Diamonds by queenitee(f): 9:17am On Jun 13, 2017 |
Tor world war 3 coming thruuuu |
Re: Hidden Diamonds by Johnsown1(m): 9:17am On Jun 13, 2017 |
EvaJael: I will think about it |
Re: Hidden Diamonds by queenitee(f): 9:24am On Jun 13, 2017 |
pearl009:How many people wants me to bring drinks bayii? I'm coming with champagne |
Re: Hidden Diamonds by Nnekamma: 10:31am On Jun 13, 2017 |
EvaJael:.i like the part where he said come to papa,trying to tickle her.i got tickled here |
Re: Hidden Diamonds by OfficiallyMad: 10:34am On Jun 13, 2017 |
queenitee:You never see the champagne buy
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Re: Hidden Diamonds by OfficiallyMad: 10:36am On Jun 13, 2017 |
Nnekamma:Na why you quote a whole update
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Re: Hidden Diamonds by Nobody: 10:49am On Jun 13, 2017 |
Front page again!!! Congrats sis, this story is superb. Me. I don't like this Elliot at all. ''Queenite I dey here, see my champagne glass o'' |
Re: Hidden Diamonds by Lilyjoe567(f): 10:55am On Jun 13, 2017 |
Congrats sweetie, you made front page again BTW, I kinda like Elliot, his presence will sure make things happen |
Re: Hidden Diamonds by mhizgap(f): 11:07am On Jun 13, 2017 |
KimberlyWest: Elliot might have his badder side but he is cool. I love bad guys. Niel has high temper am sure he can't control in some cases. can you imagine?? He want to hit his Lil sis just because of what. key!!!! something he could pass as a joke. I foresee mills falling for Elliot. 2 Likes
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Re: Hidden Diamonds by sotadegrt(m): 11:20am On Jun 13, 2017 |
[quote author=oluwatymylehyn post=56192861]I must admit this is one of the best story I have read here on Nairaland.. Stop being hyperbolical |
Re: Hidden Diamonds by EvaJael(f): 11:46am On Jun 13, 2017 |
This Elliot is so controversial and am loving it. I'm almost liking him too but I'll hold my peace for now till he finishes his manifestation |
Re: Hidden Diamonds by EvaJael(f): 11:49am On Jun 13, 2017 |
mhizgap:You love bad guys,you must be an iron lady then. As for Niel's temper,the thing been vex me too. Is he the first person to take girlfriend out biko? |
Re: Hidden Diamonds by EvaJael(f): 11:50am On Jun 13, 2017 |
Lilyjoe567:Thanks. So you're on Elliot's side 1 Like |
Re: Hidden Diamonds by EvaJael(f): 11:56am On Jun 13, 2017 |
Nnekamma:I love to believe that a couple can maintain the spice in their marriage no matter how old they are. Small advice: If you don't want my able friend wiszolzy and oda nairalanders to fry you,don't quote the whole post |
Re: Hidden Diamonds by EvaJael(f): 11:57am On Jun 13, 2017 |
OfficiallyMad:Queenitee this delay no follow o |
Re: Hidden Diamonds by EvaJael(f): 11:57am On Jun 13, 2017 |
Nnekamma:I love to believe that a couple can maintain the spice in their marriage no matter how old they are. Small advice: If you don't want my able friend wiszolzy and oda nairalanders to fry you,don't quote the whole post |
Re: Hidden Diamonds by EvaJael(f): 11:58am On Jun 13, 2017 |
KimberlyWest:Thanks bae 1 Like |
Re: Hidden Diamonds by pweetygiftofGod(f): 1:05pm On Jun 13, 2017 |
Bravo Eva, nice piece |
Re: Hidden Diamonds by swiz123(m): 1:50pm On Jun 13, 2017 |
pls evajael,tell your fans to stop quoting your update,they are making the pages seem longer than it should be |
Re: Hidden Diamonds by queenitee(f): 2:09pm On Jun 13, 2017 |
EvaJael:No vex, them open late for their store ni |
Re: Hidden Diamonds by queenitee(f): 2:11pm On Jun 13, 2017 |
OfficiallyMad:Aunty mi, no vex I don arrive |
Re: Hidden Diamonds by EvaJael(f): 2:24pm On Jun 13, 2017 |
swiz123:Noted |
Re: Hidden Diamonds by OfficiallyMad: 2:35pm On Jun 13, 2017 |
queenitee:I no be aunty oh |
Re: Hidden Diamonds by Jane1234f(f): 3:35pm On Jun 13, 2017 |
I think mille should be careful with Elliot, my mind is telling me something |
Re: Hidden Diamonds by queenitee(f): 5:07pm On Jun 13, 2017 |
OfficiallyMad:Uncle sorry |
Re: Hidden Diamonds by OfficiallyMad: 5:56pm On Jun 13, 2017 |
queenitee:I no be uncle too oh |
Re: Hidden Diamonds by Johnsown1(m): 7:40pm On Jun 13, 2017 |
Interesting, nice one evajael, Pls read the lines again before posting, cos i counterd some difficulties while reading, |
Re: Hidden Diamonds by EvaJael(f): 8:16pm On Jun 13, 2017 |
Johnsown1:Alright. Thanks |
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