@ kayo80.. This is a very lovely piece..I enjoyed every bit of it,an was held spellbound all through to the end.

Actually I was expecting a twist at the end of the story when Dupe called Dapo to tell him she was leaving the country and won't get to see him or contact him again. I thought the twist there was gonna be she had gotten pregnant for him also.

Forgive my dry sense of humour but that would have blown the whole suspense of the water and given the story a whole new angle.

More ink to your pen bro..keep it up.

Thanks mods for bringing this to Front Page after so many years. I appreciate it.

lharstborn:
@ kayo80.. This is a very lovely piece..I enjoyed every bit of it,an was held spellbound all through to the end.

Actually I was expecting a twist at the end of the story when Dupe called Dapo to tell him she was leaving the country and won't get to see him or contact him again. I thought the twist there was gonna be she had gotten pregnant for him also.

Forgive my dry sense of humour but that would have blown the whole suspense of the water and given the story a whole new angle.

More ink to your pen bro..keep it up.

But that would mean I would have to write a sequel of the book. And I really didn't want that. Anyway, thanks for the compliment. I appreciate it.

kayo80:


But that would mean I would have to write a sequel of the book. And I really didn't want that. Anyway, thanks for the compliment. I appreciate it.

Nah you don't need to write a sequel...the new twist will put the readers on another platform of bated breath and suspense which will make them deduce what next is to happen to the characters, by continuing the story by themselves in their minds.

All the same..great story bro

lharstborn:


Nah you don't need to write a sequel...the new twist will put the readers on another platform of bated breath and suspense which will make them deduce what next is to happen to the characters, by continuing the story by themselves in their minds.

All the same..great story bro

Okay. Thanks.

kayo80:


No. That's not me. You are mixing me up with someone else.

My name is Oluwande Towoju.....the Kayode Odusanya I know well is a writer and he is a friend of mine on Facebook

PastorAji:


My name is Oluwande Towoju.....the Kayode Odusanya I know well is a writer and he is a friend of mine on Facebook

He might also be a writer, but I am not the one you are talking about.

kk bro one love........and may your ink never run dry........

kayo80:


He might also be a writer, but I am not the one you are talking about.

PastorAji:
kk bro one love........and may your ink never run dry........

Lol! Thanks.

Wow wat a lovely story more knowledge bro

Nickibeauty:
Wow wat a lovely story more knowledge bro

Thank you.

I say this is not regular a bit.
Pleas hastily edit this for a Named publisher. It is good for the press already but for just a little more polishing.

It is such a wonderful read. Please be encouraged to do more. keep it this real and simple. I see awards on your path!

Warm regards,

BrickMan:
I say this is not regular a bit.
Pleas hastily edit this for a Named publisher. It is good for the press already but for just a little more polishing.

It is such a wonderful read. Please be encouraged to do more. keep it this real and simple. I see awards on your path!

Warm regards,

Thanks a lot. You just made my day.

If only every writer on nairaland was like you, I would read every story posted... not leaving a single story

lakezone67:
If only every writer on nairaland was like you, I would read every story posted... not leaving a single story

Whoa! Thanks a lot. I am highly honored.

This is a great piece, the story line, the suspense...waoh! Keep it up

Del17:
This is a great piece, the story line, the suspense...waoh! Keep it up

Thanks a lot.

Wow! kudos..Very interesting piece.

Divasoress:
Wow! kudos..Very interesting piece.

Thanks.

Mehn!... Tbh, i've never really had to read any story on NL, but for the very 1st time after reading this i must confess that it was very interesting; that should even be an understatement. The storyline is very chilled and unpredictable (unlike de norm in 9ja). Don't waste it man (convert it to a movie, and please do give it an excellent ending... That's if u do consider converting it), earlier the better u know. More inspiration to u, wish u well.
Kudos!

Wow you are really good a whole anti reading like me finished it and I am in quest for more

This is one of the best story I have ever read on N.land
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@kayo80
jah bless for the write up...

DoctorCraft:
This is one of the best story I have ever read on N.land
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@kayo80
jah bless for the write up... :DThis is one of the best stories I have ever read on N.land.

Thanks a lot. I really appreciate the compliment.

Terver90:
Wow you are really good a whole anti reading like me finished it and I am in quest for more

I am honored.

Macdawid:
Mehn!... Tbh, i've never really had to read any story on NL, but for the very 1st time after reading this i must confess that it was very interesting; that should even be an understatement. The storyline is very chilled and unpredictable (unlike de norm in 9ja). Don't waste it man (convert it to a movie, and please do give it an excellent ending... That's if u do consider converting it), earlier the better u know. More inspiration to u, wish u well.
Kudos!

Thanks. I will work on what you said.

What a story to recommend for friends, couldn't stop until I finished the story. Nice piece more from you

Wawu!!! I had a great read, just kept on smiling till I finished, great suspense, great story, great ending.

I like that the little boy got your name... Oluwakayode.
It will make it hard to forget the writer and the story... Thumbs Up.

nice story

tyeenigga:
What a story to recommend for friends, couldn't stop until I finished the story. Nice piece more from you

Thanks. I appreciate the compliment.

corpershun:
Wawu!!! I had a great read, just kept on smiling till I finished, great suspense, great story, great ending.

I like that the little boy got your name... Oluwakayode.
It will make it hard to forget the writer and the story... Thumbs Up.

Yea. That was the whole idea. I am glad you understood what i was thinking when i wrote that ending part.

Basit99:
nice story

Thanks.