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Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by Lildiamond: 1:23pm On Sep 19, 2017
Weldone Ma

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Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by cbella(f): 2:06pm On Sep 19, 2017
Lildiamond:
Weldone Ma


Thanks ma'm
Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by cbella(f): 2:11pm On Sep 19, 2017
***SEQUEL***

*****
'What was that Kiss for Nectar. I'm still in pains here and I can't even.......'

'Kate relax the kiss doesn't mean I want to sleep with you right away love. It's just a nice gesture to appreciate the fact that I got a second chance which I obviously dont deserve.' Nectar said smiling.

'I'm glad you know you don't deserve it. Talking about what you deserve or not how are my sons doing. Did you get to check up on any trace of what I suffered from. I don't want them going through what I went through.'

'Kate it's too early to tell, as your Dad did when you were born, he wouldn't have found anything then. Lets give the boys sometime, besides I'm here now to stay so nothing will happen to them.'

'Thank you nectar but I really need to get out of this hospital, I need to hold my kids.'

'Kate, we can't you know that, but let's try this. Wait here let me check if there's anyone on the floor.'

Nectar quickly went out and came back fixing Kate on her wheel.

'Nectar are you sure we won't get into trouble.'
We won't if you stop talking already.'

*****

'You know you have a successful donor now, the best you can do is not stress yourself Wilson until after the surgery.'

'Catherine I'm not even sure if I would even make it, let me make the best of this moment and you lied to Kate about how long I have left.'

'I had to, she had lots of stuffs on her hands now and the last time i checked you didn't have a donor, now that you have there's fifty percent chance you can make it. We can have more of whatever you want now after you get back healthy.' Catherine said worried.

'So I won't even get a Kiss,' Wilson asked frowning.

'Just one, don't ask for more Wilson.' She leaned over and kissed him passionately.'

'Wilson let go, Stacy might come in any moment from now. You don't want her seeing us this way.'

Catherine said trying to stop Wilson from twisting her lips though she doesn't want to stop.

'Catherine let's go upstairs please,' Wilson pleaded then a knock came on the door. They both jumped up like kids. Stacy who came bearing a wine bottle just smiled.

'Stacy you are here, sorry we didn't tell you dinner has been canceled.' Catherine said sheepishly.

*******
'Nectar thank you for sneaking me out. Those boys totally look like my Dad.' Kate said.

'And that's a bad thing Kate?'
'No, I just have my dad to deal with every single time they cry.'

'By the way, Matt's is pregnant I think. Nectar blurted out. I overheard her discussing that with Drake.'

'Oh really! Let me call her.' Kate excitedly picked up her phone.

'Matt's she yelled while trying to reach her on the phone earlier. You were not picking up, where are you. I heard you are pregnant.'

'Katie I'm busy with a case now, can we talk about that later,' she said and hanged up.

'Your sister just hanged up on me.'
'Call her again,' Nectar encouraged.

Matt's who couldn't have enough of Drake earlier stared at the call and picked up. 'Katie, I'm sure nectar would get you dinner. Now can I have my peace.' She said and Kate just knew Drake was there.

'Let me talk to that sluggish guy laying in your bed.'

'He is not in my bed Katie.'
'Matt's wherever you guys are, I don't care but I know he is there.'

'Okay you won !' Matt's said and handed the phone over to Drake.

'Hey Kate, I'm sorry I've not been around lately, I would visit soon. Just have a lot on my plate now.' He said.

'A lot like, pregnancy?' She asked.
'No false alarm Kate. Alot like convincing her to Marry me. I want to stop sneaking around your house just to see her.' He said and Matt's smiled.

'Wow! That's big, knowing Matt's she turned you down because she claims it's too early.' Kate answered.

'Yes how did you know that.' Drake asked surprised.

'I know Matt's, don't pressure her now she will come around. She has a habit of turning every man down for that lame reason.' Kate said and realized her call credit is almost exhausted.

'Lets talk later when you come to visit Drake.'

She hanged up and caught nectar staring.

'They are not having a baby.' She said and nectar nodded and there was total silence.

Kate who was still hang on to her wheel chair, stared him in the eyes while supporting her jaw with her hands and smiled.

'Another smile Kate! Do I have something in my face, ooh it's the shirt!' Nectar exclaimed.

'No nectar, I just feel like kissing you now.'

'And what's stopping you Kate. My lips are ready, this better be good.' He said sounding bossy.

'Ooh you'll get it.' She said and wheeled herself closer to him.

Amidst their lips searching each other passionately, there were a few moans of pain, tears of joy, tinglings and i love you's. You can't even tell who said what at that moment.

As what looked like they forgot themselves entirely lost in that wonderful moment nectar felt a shadow walking out.

He quickly broke the Kiss which Kate thought she did something wrong again. 'What's that, did I do it wrong again?' Kate asked surprised.

'In fact that was perfect, our first kiss and it was different this time but your family is at the door.'

Nectar said and they both directed their gaze to where her Parents and Stacy stood for the past minute watching them accept their feelings.

'Mom, we call this privacy so don't look at me smiling ! And Stacy I'm still your boss you know, give me a heads up next time.'

She said smiling. Come on you guys, that was a joke. Come over here. Dad what happened to dinner by the way.'

'Your husband called asking to move dinner to your end. He said you don't want to miss it.'

'Nectar.' she called and got flashes of smiles from him.

'So where's the food, because I need some real food. Matt's has been feeding me with too much salt lately.' Kate said.

'Ungrateful being,' Catherine blurted out.

'Kate it got canceled when Andy just had to stab your Grams in jail. I had to go identify her body.'

'Dad I'm sorry are you okay?'

'Yeah I would be after Andy dances to his own death sentence in a week. But right now I'm happy you two are getting along.'

Wilson said while Stacy and Catherine sat on her bed with their hands in Kates hair.

'What are you two doing to my hair.' Kate asked.

Then nectar interrupted.

'Pops, I want to know when you would be free so I marry your daughter right this time.'

'And where right means nectar.' Wilson asked while Catherine gave him the don't stress him look.

'That's fine nectar, though I would need incentives for earlier damages caused.' He said smiling.

'Dad you plan on selling me now.' Kate asked smiling.

'I just wanted to see his reaction to what I said. Don't worry I got the answer I need.'

'Kate we would be back with some food in an hour, I can see we totally ruined something.' All three got up on their feet and left.

'Your Dad was right, they ruined something perfect, can we try one more time.'

'No I want to rest my head a little, can you help me on the bed.'

She said and nectar quickly rushed to her end only to get his lips sealed with another warm Kiss.

*******
End of sequel


No one was expecting a sequel, I could have twisted it but....... Pearl05, purples25, Gloryejims, Deeejah, etc

I still need an official EDITOR with no pay! Hit me up

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Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by pweetygiftofGod(f): 2:41pm On Sep 19, 2017
Kudos to Cbella, you're the real deal

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Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by cbella(f): 3:02pm On Sep 19, 2017
pweetygiftofGod:
Kudos to Cbella, you're the real deal

Thanks ma'm

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Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by Pearl05(f): 3:07pm On Sep 19, 2017
I could just eat you up sweetie. I didn't see it coming, you could still take it further till after Kate's discharge from hospital and the retaking of vows and a little proper happy married life.



Please when is your birthday?

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Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by cbella(f): 3:16pm On Sep 19, 2017
Pearl05:
I could just eat you up sweetie. I didn't see it coming, you could still take it further till after Kate's discharge from hospital and the retaking of vows and a little proper happy married life.

Please when is your birthday?

Where proper happy married life means the news in brief i keep giving out eeehh....Tot about that, but i'm exhausted already...i don't want another needle for staying up all night......so lets wait for the new one soon...


You might get full news broadcast, maybe

My birthday!! grin...i'm asking my mom!! Hold on a lil shocked grin

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Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by EvaJael(f): 5:40pm On Sep 19, 2017
Cbella, this is quite a wonderful piece. You held me spellbound from start to finish when I'm supposed to be preparing for exams..lol . Can't wait to read another one from you

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Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by Lildiamond: 5:59pm On Sep 19, 2017
Lovely story

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Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by Nickibeauty(f): 6:00pm On Sep 19, 2017
cbella thumps up

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Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by toyhin123(f): 6:01pm On Sep 19, 2017
Wow cbella,i never saw dat coming. U always have a way of surprising someone. I must say u re a darling. Can't wait for the next story

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Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by cbella(f): 7:06pm On Sep 19, 2017
EvaJael:
Cbella, this is quite a wonderful piece. You held me spellbound from start to finish when I'm supposed to be preparing for exams..lol . Can't wait to read another one from you

Thanks to the ma'm herself, saw it somewhere you were supposed to be writing an exams but then i see you most at times reading and you disappear in a flash.

Following hidden diamond tho!

Will definitely let you know when i start another one.
Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by cbella(f): 7:07pm On Sep 19, 2017
toyhin123:
Wow cbella,i never saw dat coming. U always have a way of surprising someone. I must say u re a darling. Can't wait for the next story

Thanks... will mention you, hope i don't forget! When i do blame pearl05
Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by cbella(f): 7:08pm On Sep 19, 2017
Nickibeauty:
cbella thumps up

Thanks Nicki
Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by cbella(f): 7:08pm On Sep 19, 2017
Lildiamond:
Lovely story

thanks for following
Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by EvaJael(f): 7:15pm On Sep 19, 2017
cbella:


Thanks to the ma'm herself, saw it somewhere you were supposed to be writing an exams but then i see you most at times reading and you disappear in a flash.

Following hidden diamond tho!

Will definitely let you know when i start another one.
I was ghost reading and I apologise. I have exams o but reading a good book helps me calm down when the brain is steaming.
As for hidden diamonds, thanks for following. Your own book awoke some sleeping inspiration in me to continue. Thanks for that. Love ya plenny

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Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by Leesah(f): 7:24pm On Sep 19, 2017
cbella that was awesome thanks for finishing the story hon. mention me when u start another.

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Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by DemiKOL(f): 7:37pm On Sep 19, 2017
Thanks for the updates smiley more grace........ At last... Kate was like she's not gonna reconcile.....and Nectar......

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Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by cbella(f): 7:52pm On Sep 19, 2017
Leesah:
cbella that was awesome thanks for finishing the story hon. mention me when u start another.


i sure will....thanks for keeping me on my toes Leesah
Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by cbella(f): 7:53pm On Sep 19, 2017
DemiKOL:
Thanks for the updates smiley
more grace........
At last... Kate was like she's not gonna reconcile.....and Nectar......


Dont mind them, they were behaving like, they dont like each other........


thanks for following to the end

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Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by cbella(f): 7:55pm On Sep 19, 2017
EvaJael:

I was ghost reading and I apologise. I have exams o but reading a good book helps me calm down when the brain is steaming.
As for hidden diamonds, thanks for following. Your own book awoke some sleeping inspiration in me to continue. Thanks for that. Love ya plenny


I'm glad..... all the best sweets

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Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by 1marking(m): 7:57pm On Sep 19, 2017
Nice Story Madam

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Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by Osedagal(f): 8:50pm On Sep 19, 2017
Cbella u r a bomb, nice update

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Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by SkyyLord(m): 9:11pm On Sep 19, 2017
Thanks a lot dear for this wonderful piece, your indeed a good writer. May God give you more wisdom.

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Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by Gloryejims(f): 9:31pm On Sep 19, 2017
Cbella..... I never hexperedit

Kudos to you infact tiri gbosa for you... Gbosa! Gbosa!! Gbosa!!!

Concerning the editor, maybe you should holla tiffanyj... She probably would know someone


I'm a greedy geh #olivertwist... Epp us with another story soon... Maybe drake and matts... Or the twins growing wink


Congratulations ohh
Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by cbella(f): 11:12pm On Sep 19, 2017
Gloryejims:
Cbella..... I never hexperedit

Kudos to you infact tiri gbosa for you... Gbosa! Gbosa!! Gbosa!!!

Concerning the editor, maybe you should holla tiffanyj... She probably would know someone


I'm a greedy geh #olivertwist... Epp us with another story soon... Maybe drake and matts... Or the twins growing wink


Congratulations ohh



lolzxxxx..... eeeiii Aunty!! so soon? Drake and matts are married, the twins died undecided undecided undecided undecided undecided grin
Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by arthur16(m): 6:00am On Sep 20, 2017
Bella this could make a series movie o.. .so much suspense.. .i love this dear.. .God bless u Nne.. I'm clad I followed to DE end.. And thank God Katie didn't die o.. .i would have jux locate u and fight u grin

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Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by swankmee(f): 12:16pm On Sep 20, 2017
Cbella this is really beautiful.... I enjoyed every bit of it and trust me lessons were learnt.


More ink to ur pen ma
Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by holufunmie(f): 12:52pm On Sep 20, 2017
ave been ghost reading for a while but I felt it will be so so selfish and ungrateful of me not to comment,,I have to at least appreciate a wonderful story like dis..for one to imagine something and put it into writings is not easy,,it takes a lot of courage and believe in oneself to do dat.the beginning was fantastic, ending was amazing and in BTW was just so suspenseful and unpredictable. u re an awesome writer,thumbs up

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Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by purples25(f): 4:47pm On Sep 20, 2017
Hey cbella, that sequel was a surprise. However I like it, we got a look into their lives after everything had been settled. Everything is so sweet now......flashing teeth and joyful emotions on a clear day . I really do hope you get that editor though, I am sorry that I can't, and can't put anyone forward right now. Got some things I'm dealing with and......too nervous to edit even if I'd have the time. Whoever edits this has got a diamond in the rough on their hands though. Fireworks for you kiss
Re: No More Room For Love- By Loudest Thoughts by cbella(f): 5:06pm On Sep 20, 2017
swankmee:
Cbella this is really beautiful.... I enjoyed every bit of it and trust me lessons were learnt.


More ink to ur pen ma

Thanks, Glad lessons were learnt

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