purples25:
Hey cbella, that sequel was a surprise. However I like it, we got a look into their lives after everything had been settled. Everything is so sweet now......flashing teeth and joyful emotions on a clear day . I really do hope you get that editor though, I am sorry that I can't, and can't put anyone forward right now. Got some things I'm dealing with and......too nervous to edit even if I'd have the time. Whoever edits this has got a diamond in the rough on their hands though. Fireworks for you

SWEET BITTER ENDING

I'm just full of surprises like that!!! My editor said she will do the work when she is well enough, that will obviously take her a year lol... You can read meaning into this( what kind of sickness takes a year to recover from tho)
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Nervous, i am more than you, so face your fears ... for TIME; we all don't have and we are dealing too lol ...( don't mind me, i could edit but i'm just lazy as i would be forced to write another sequel and change original work. I do that a lot.

GOD BLESS YOU FOR THINKING ABOUT IT THOUGH

holufunmie:
ave been ghost reading for a while but I felt it will be so so selfish and ungrateful of me not to comment,,I have to at least appreciate a wonderful story like dis..for one to imagine something and put it into writings is not easy,,it takes a lot of courage and believe in oneself to do dat.the beginning was fantastic, ending was amazing and in BTW was just so suspenseful and unpredictable. u re an awesome writer,thumbs up

arthur16:
Bella this could make a series movie o.. .so much suspense.. .i love this dear.. .God bless u Nne.. I'm clad I followed to DE end.. And thank God Katie didn't die o.. .i would have jux locate u and fight u

1marking:
Nice Story Madam

Osedagal:
Cbella u r a bomb, nice update

SkyyLord:
Thanks a lot dear for this wonderful piece, your indeed a good writer. May God give you more wisdom.

cbella:

lolzxxxx..... eeeiii Aunty!! so soon? Drake and matts are married, the twins died

rachealfst:
I'm still trying to catch up. But so far, so good, it's been a great read. Wonderful story line. I applaud the writer. Well done cbella, more inspiration, wisdom, grace and strength. God bless you.

Chigold121:
Wow!!! Didn't I say you are the best, I didn't see this coming. Pls when is your birthday cos I can't for another exceptional piece from u. Well done ma.

Tehmietee:
1daful story...kudos 2 U #cbella

cbella:


Wow!! the ma'm herself!!!!! Thank you, do catch up soon


Reading wrong number tho!!

rachealfst:
Wow! I abandoned my work just to read up and it worth it. Great piece. I really love it. I'm happy everything falls back in place despite the fact that Kate& Necter started on a wrong foot.

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We are all still learning that includes myself but I know you can do better. I know so many readers have already advised and I can see you improved over time but you still have to fix one or two things. You mixed up the character's conversation. Aside that, the story is dope.

Well done! Let's see if I can edit one chapter for you so you can get what your readers actually wants from you.

Thanks for sharing this lessons filled piece. God bless you good. By God's grace this will be the least of your work.
As for Wrong Number let me know if you need the concluding part. Thanks.

Gloryejims:
Cbella..... I never hexperedit

Kudos to you infact tiri gbosa for you... Gbosa! Gbosa!! Gbosa!!!

Concerning the editor, maybe you should holla tiffanyj... She probably would know someone


I'm a greedy geh #olivertwist... Epp us with another story soon... Maybe drake and matts... Or the twins growing


Congratulations ohh

Gloryejims:
Cbella..... I never hexperedit

Kudos to you infact tiri gbosa for you... Gbosa! Gbosa!! Gbosa!!!

Concerning the editor, maybe you should holla tiffanyj... She probably would know someone


I'm a greedy geh #olivertwist... Epp us with another story soon... Maybe drake and matts... Or the twins growing


Congratulations ohh

TiffanyJ:

Aunty, TiffanyJ sucks at editing. Haven't you noticed at already?

Didov1:
wow,.thank you cbella.,this is a great story..even tho m nt always commenting on each update u posted,jst knw dat i always give u some likes sometime...even tho u dnt always see me viewing,jst know that i will alway read ur update,either physically or spiritually(ghost reader)..even tho m nt one of the first 5 commentor.,trust me,i'm still one of ur biggest fans...love u dear,.more ink to your pen.

Taniaa:
Sypnosis of the heart
Intense piece.
following keenly

oly0511:
cbella pls let me know when you start another one

Pinkfeet:
nice work,
cbella u ave done a great work on dis story .

kudos to u jare ...

everything that start with bitter will surely end up wit happyness.

happy ending ....

cbella God will give u more wisdom .

And also thanks to people who support cbella wit their comment and likes .

pearl05 i saw ur mention but am busy dat is the reason why i did not reply since all dis days . pearl05 now dat cbella ave end the story wat will u read at night.