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Constructive Criticism Needed For My New 2d Animated Comedy Series / My designs as a starter. please rate and criticism is warmly welcomed. / Sincere Constructive Criticism Needed. Please, Rate My 2d Animation (2) (3) (4)
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| Criticism Needed by FunctionX(m): 8:00am On Jun 02, 2018 |
I just finished this cartoon, but I feel like I am missing something. Please what could that be?
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| Re: Criticism Needed by Archmage(m): 10:58am On Jun 03, 2018 |
FunctionX: Its a shoddy and lazy attempt sir. All I see is a threshold adjustment and black lines on it. The original image shouldn't be showing at all. Put in more work. use the pen tool and fill in tones accordingly... |
| Re: Criticism Needed by FunctionX(m): 2:07pm On Jun 04, 2018 |
Archmage: How about this
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