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Constructive Criticism Needed For My New 2d Animated Comedy Series / My designs as a starter. please rate and criticism is warmly welcomed. / Sincere Constructive Criticism Needed. Please, Rate My 2d Animation (2) (3) (4)

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Criticism Needed by FunctionX(m): 8:00am On Jun 02, 2018
I just finished this cartoon, but I feel like I am missing something. Please what could that be?

Re: Criticism Needed by Archmage(m): 10:58am On Jun 03, 2018
FunctionX:
I just finished this cartoon, but I feel like I am missing something. Please what could that be?

Its a shoddy and lazy attempt sir. All I see is a threshold adjustment and black lines on it. The original image shouldn't be showing at all. Put in more work. use the pen tool and fill in tones accordingly...
Re: Criticism Needed by FunctionX(m): 2:07pm On Jun 04, 2018
Archmage:


Its a shoddy and lazy attempt sir. All I see is a threshold adjustment and black lines on it. The original image shouldn't be showing at all. Put in more work. use the pen tool and fill in tones accordingly...

How about this

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