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Nice story line
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Adalyon:

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you are welcome....
You just pushed me outta ghostmode..

Interesting story I must say... More ideas to your fresh brain.
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The rest of the weekend went by uneventful, Jenny avoided being in the same room as Mike... She mostly avoided her mother too, she wanted to be alone... She had to get her mind right because her final exams were coming up soon. She'd soon be done with high school and maybe get a job, then she would be able to save up and leave this house she thought to herself as she ironed her clothes in her room in preparation for school tomorrow.
Lisa had a day off this Sunday and spend most of it sleeping, she was exhausted...working 3 jobs wasn't the easiest thing and she'd be on night duty this week... She sighed...Her mind drifted to Jenny,she worried about her, she suddenly seemed so withdrawn lately... She had tried talking to her but Jenny always brushed her off... Maybe she was just nervous about her exams and all. Lisa stretched and tried to get back to sleep.. She did need to rest and work so she could afford college for Jenny
Mike went to the bar on the Sunday evening, when he left, Jenny was still holed up in her room and Lisa was asleep in theirs... He decided to go hang out with his buddies down at the bar, he had hardly seen them since the Lisa and Jenny had moved in.. He walked into the bar and sighted Joe, Paul and Henry in the booth where they usually stayed.
Joe was the first one to see him... "ah look who we have here, our run away pal who forgot his friends because he got a woman now" Joe said... Joe was the owner of the bar and Mike's best friend, he was a short fat man of about 58...he had scraggly hair and a rugged face but kind eyes
"haha.. Did you miss me you fat bastard?" said Mike as he gave Joe a hug

"where have you been Mike?" asked Paul who was almost as tall as Mike but quite ugly, he had a chipped tooth and a prominent bald head.. He ran a small cleaning agency in town

"didn't you hear Joe say he got a new woman?... New püśśy can make a man forget his friends" Henry teased... He was the youngest of the group,he was in his 40s,he was a teacher at the high school and was tall and skinny with a thick beard.. He was arguably handsome and had his students crushing on him.

"I've been around guys... Just really busy" said Mike as he sat down... "Joe tell your bar wench to get me a beer"

"sure" Joe said as he beckoned on his employee

"so spill the beans... Tell us about her" Paul said as he grinned flashing his chipped tooth

"haha... You gossip... Well she's great, single mom... But she's hot guys with the biggest,bounciest t.its you have ever seen" Mike responded, enjoying the attention they all focused on him

"damn... You lucky dog... And I hear she stays with you... " asked Henry

"yeah... She and her kid.. Jennifer" said Mike as he sipped his beer

"for real?...you are family man now huh Mike" Paul teased and laughed

"haha..you can say that again... The last bachelor in the group is finally a family man" said Joe

"Nah Nah... I'm still a bachelor guys but I must admit it's been amazing having them around.. Coming home to a cooked meal and hot püś.s..now I see why y'all got married" said Mike grinning

"hot püšš.ÿ my foot, that cow I have at home hasn't let me fūçk her in forever... I don't even remember what sex feels like honestly" Paul said

"preach brother" Joe and Henry said in unison
This was followed by a roar of laughter from all 4 of them...

"you guys are suckers...my lady can't say no to me and she's a hot number... Always wet and willing" bragged Mike

"you've always had your way with women haven't you" said Joe

"I would kill to switch lives with you" said Henry

"oh please... You're surrounded by hot teenagers all day.. You're the lucky one" said Mike

"I don't fūčk my students... They are just kids and I could lose my job you know" retorted Henry

" just kids huh... Theses kids are the perfect fūčk i tell you.. They are so tight and sweet" said Mike with a distant look as he thought of Jenny

"wait... Don't tell me you are still going outside running after girls with that hot woman you have" said Paul with excitement in his eyes

"no no.. I don't run around... Everything I need is at home" Mike said with a knowing smile

Mike got home at 2am...he staggered in half drunk and stumbled into his room .. He found Lisa awake pacing in the room..as soon as she saw him she ran towards him and hugged him

"where have you been?... I was worried sick... You're drunk" she said as she smelt the liquor on his breath

"yes.. I am dr..drunk.. So?... I'm not a..ki...a child you should worry about " Mike stammered as he walk towards the bed and slumped down... He was soon snoring loudly
Lisa sighed... Boys will be boys she thought... She got into bed and was soon asleep


It was a bright Monday morning as Lisa called Jenny down to the table as she served breakfast.. Mike was already seated and sipping tea when Jenny walked in all dressed in her uniform... She locked eyes with Mike and looked down immediately

"good morning everyone" she said as she walked towards the door

"where do you think you're going" asked Lisa

"school... I'm not hungry" said Jenny still looking down

"I don't know what has gotten over you but get back here and eat your breakfast young lady.. I won't repeat myself" said Lisa.. She was irritated with Jenny's sudden behavior
Jenny rolled her eyes and sat down at the table and ate her food slowly... They all ate quietly... Suddenly Jenny felt Mike's rough hands on her thigh... She looked at him and his face was buried in the news paper as his hands caressed her thighs under the table...
Lisa ate while talking on her phone... Jenny froze and pushed her knees tight together as his hands went under her skirt...he caressed her thighs all the way up to her hips... Jenny quickly stood up

"I'm full... Thank you mum" she said in one breath as she picked up her bag and bolted out the door

"I am worried about her... She's acting starnge" said Lisa to Mike who had been quiet all morning

"dont worry about her, you know how teenagers are with their mood swings and all... Maybe she has a boyfriend" said Mike

"boyfriend?.. Jenny would tell me... She tells me everything"

"give her some space dear.. You're smothering her"

"Hmmm... Sure... I'm off to work.. Take care of yourself honey" Lisa said as she kissed Mike and turned to leave

Mike smacked her a.ss as soon as she turned and she giggled and left.

Jenny couldn't wait to get to school... To get on that track and run... To run so fast like she was running from the nightmares of her life... Running had always helped her cope with how bad things were at home.. From her dad leaving to the time she and her mom were temporarily homeless... She'd run and suddenly feel numb to the big pain she had always felt in her heart... The pain of rejection and abandonment by her father... She tried to push the thought out as she saw a dad drop off his kids at the school gate... Her dad never even looked at her for too long when he was around.. He hated her and she knew it,she wanted to hate him but she couldn't.. She wanted him to come back, to tell her he was sorry and he'd never leave her... She sighed... That was a fantasy.. Her reality was that the only man in her life was her moms boyfriend who came into her room and raped her.. She quickly wiped her face as a tear rolled down her cheek.. She took a deep breath and entered the gate.

Jenny walked back slowly, she was scared of going home when mom wasn't around... But she didn't know when her mom would be back... Eventually she got home and opened the door quietly, the living room was empty and she exhaled deeply... She walked in...

"hey baby"

"oh my goodness " Jenny screamed as she was startled... It was Mike, he was sitting at the table in the kitchen drinking a glass of whiskey

"ummm.. Hey Mike" Jenny said as she made to walk to her room

"I wouldn't walk out on me if I were you" said Mike calmly

This. Scarred Jenny as she stopped in her tracks...

"take this" he said handing her a small pack

" what is this?" Jenny asked as she opened the pack which contained tablets

"birth control" said Mike without looking at her

"what? "

"take them twice daily every single day to avoid getting pregnant...starting now" he said as he handed her his glass of whiskey to take the drug with

"I'm not getting on birth control" said Jenny angrily

Mike stood up now and towered over her as she moved back...

"why do you choose to be so stubborn... You know I'm just looking out for you... If you got pregnant your life would basically just go like your mums life... You'd be forced to have an unwanted child whose father would hate her the way yours did"

Jenny stared at Mike as tears stung her eyes...
" I'm not unwanted" she said as the tears rolled down

"you know you are... Danny didn't want you.. He was a coward but I want you... I am not going anywhere.. I have been here for both of you yet you don't appreciate me.. You refuse to call me "dad" and refused to obey me"

Jenny was quiet

"it takes more that impregnating a woman to be a father, it takes being there for your kid... Taking care of her... Providing for her and loving her... " Mike said as he handed her the glass again

This time Jenny took it and swallowed a pill from the case with a big gulp as she squeezed her face when the whiskey burnt her throat

"good girl... Look Jenny... I'm the one that's here and I'll never leave you... I'm your daddy now" Mike said as he lead her to the table and bent her over..
Jenny didn't fight as Mike lifted her school skirt and pulled down her panties... She heard his belt unbuckle and her heart raced but her mind was numb as tears rolled down her face which rested on the table... She thought about her dad, Mike was right..her dad never wanted her... She felt his hard çöčk rub against her püśśy lips as he looked for her hole. She didn't move.

Mike soon found it and pushed into her.
"ahhhhh" screamed Jenny quietly as she held unto the kitchen table tightly

"sorry baby... Easy" Mike said as he pushed until his full length was inside her pulsating hole..

"s.hit" he mumbled as he was completely inside her, her püśśy felt velvety and tight... He could barely move inside her as her walls held him tightly... It felt like the first time... He pulled out slowly and back in till he was füč*ing her at a steady pace.
He could hear her pant and sob softly... He rubbed her hair and pushed it from her face...

"Awww dont cry baby... You are making daddy feel good... You're so beautiful... Ugh... So füčking tight.. Füçk..." Mike moaned as her kept slamming into her...

Her whole body shook as the table rocked... Mike gripped her small waist with both his hands, holding her steady and slammed into her over and over.. She was standing on her toes at this point as she screamed... This only turned him on more and he fūčked her harder... He pulled out monetarily and Jenny panted... He slid into her again and it felt like his çøçk wasn't stuffed in her a minute ago

"oh damn..." Mike moaned as her slapped her small ass..

Jenny screamed when his rough hand landed on her skin... He held unto her ass tightly and used his grip as balance to fūčk her.

The whole house was silent besides the sounds of Jennys moans and occasional sobs and screams and Mike's deep grunts and swears and the soppy sounds coming from Jenny's püśśy...
Mike gripped her hair and pulled,this lifted her upper body a bit of the table and his other hand found her buttons and we're soon twisting and pulling her nipple

"owwww" Jenny howled

"oh yeah... That's a good girl... Mmmm" Mike moaned
He soon felt the familiar tightened of his balls...he rammed his çøçk into her püśśy faster and deeper now as she howled in pain...

"uh-huh... Yes..yes.. daddy's going to cum inside you... okay baby?" Mike panted ..his eye shut and head thrown back

"okay daddy" Jenny cried out ...she was glad he was finally close

He fūčkeđ her hard for another minute or so before he started cumming..

"oh.. I'm cum.mñg... Oh sh.it.." Mike grunted as he pushed inside her as hard and far as he could as he came, making her scream out as he pushed against her cervix...

Jenny felt his warm cu.m fill her up as he slumped on top of her and pumped while he caught his breath... She stayed still and soon he kissed her neck as he pulled out of her

"fūčk... " Mike said to himself as he squatted down and watched his cu.m run down her legs from her püśśy ...it ran down into her school socks... He stuck a finger into he püśśy and fingered her a bit... She didn't move and didn't make a sound... He smiled to himself... He stood up, leaned over her and put his finger into her mouth...

"mmm... Now come clean daddy up" he said as he dragged her to her knees in front of him...she hesitated and looked up at him...

"go on..." Urged Mike as he rubbed his fingers against her full lips
Jenny licked his flaccid drenched çøçk slowly as she grimaced at the taste of his c.um...

He stood her up and held her face in his hand...
" it didn't hurt as much this time did it? "

"no" she said softly

"you know I love you baby right?...and unlike him, I want you"

Mike could see the confusion and hurt on her face as he said those words... She kept quiet and avoided his gaze


"Go and clean up before your mum gets back.. And remember to take your pills everyday" he said as he buckled his belt and watched her walk slowly to her room..

He remembered Lisa was on night duty this week and would only come home to eat and rest for a while... It'd be he and Jenny all alone tonight... This made him semi hard as he poured himself another glass of whiskey

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Interesting story I must say... More ideas to your fresh brain.

Following.....

Thanks a lot dear

Issokay. I die hia. Ride on OP.

Jenny laid on her bed after stepping out of the shower... She laid there deep in thought, she was tired, confused and heart broken... Mike had really opened up years old wounds but she knew he was right..
She was distracted from her thoughts by her phone beeping, she picked it up and looked at the screen... It was a text from her friend Megan

M: omg Jen guess what
J: what?
M: guess who said he thinks you're sort of pretty
J: Meg I'm not in the mood for this... You know nobody thinks I'm pretty
M: David said he sorta think you're kinda pretty
J: really?
M: yeah... He told Mathew and he told Jess and Jess told me
J: youre kidding
M: I swear

"Jenny"
Jenny turned to see her mom at her door..

" hey mom"

"sweetie are you okay? " Lisa said as she sat on her bed next to her

"I am... When did you get back"

"just now... About to just take a quick shower and maybe a 2hour nap... I'm on night shift this week"

"oh"

"something is wrong with you... You seem sad and just... I don't know... Distant... What's the matter...you know you can always talk to me"

"I know mom... But.. I... I'm fine... You've always taken care of us and I know it's not been easy for you since he left and I'll always do my best to take care of us too.. No matter what because I love you and I am sorry that I ruined your lives"


"what?... No no... Don't ever say that... You didn't ruin my life... You are a blessing to me and.. "

"it's okay mom... I'm fine... I'm just going through some stuff at school... Stress and all... I'll be fine.. Don't worry about me so much okay, I can handle it"

Lisa stared at her, she didn't know where all this was coming from or how to react to it all...

"go take a nap so you can be rested for work"

"would you like me to stay back tonight? "

"no mom... You need that job... Just go okay" Jenny said as she forced a smile

"we'll talk some more tomorrow okay? "

"sure mom"

"I'll make dinner for you and Mike and put it in the microwave"

"thanks mom"

With that Lisa left the room... Jenny closed the door and cried, she cried till she fell asleep. When she woke up it was past 11pm..mom must have left about 2hrs ago... She sat up and felt a splitting headache... She rubbed her eyes and put on her room light... She turned as she heard her door open and Mike walk in

"hey sleepy head" he said to her as he sat down on her bed... He was holding a bottle of whiskey and two glasses

"no... Please I'm tired and have a headache"

"oh come on... What do you take me for?... I just want us to hang out a bit" he said pouring the drink into the glasses

"I don't drink"

" it will help you feel better, I promise... I know you might feel bad but trust me after two glasses you'll be happy and the headache will be gone" he said handing her a glass

Jenny took it and stared at the glass... She was skeptical about this... She didn't know what to think, the last time he promised not to füçk her he had kept to his promise...she did feel really sad all day and knew this would make her feel better, she remembered when her mom used to drink a lot right after dad left.. She said it made her happy... "fūčk it" she thought as she took a big gulp and coughed.

"that's a good girl" Mike said as he filled he cup and she downed it in a gulp coughing ... He sipped his slowly as he made sure her cup wasn't empty

After 3 cups, the room had started to spin and Jenny felt light... She hummed to a non existent song and smiled with her eyes closed..

"how was school today" asked Mike still holding his first glass as he filled her glass for the 4th time

"..ah dunno... It is... Was just regular... Haha.. This one girl fell over on the tracks...hahahahaha... Dumb bitc.h wanted to run like me... Hahaha"

"drink up" Mike instructed and Jenny obeyed

"ugh... No more...it tastes bad" Jenny said after gulping her 4th glass

"stand up " Mike said as he took the glass from her and placed it on the table along with his full glass

"why... I dun wanna... I want to dance" giggled Jenny

"you need to stand to dance don't you" Mike said smiling

Jenny tried standing up and wobbled to the floor laughing hysterically... She tried again and fell Making her laugh harder...
Mike smiled as he helped her stand

"come sit on daddy's lap"

Jenny sat on his lap and crossed her arm over his neck...

"have you... Umm... Had dinner? "

"yeah" Mike said as he unbuttoned her shirt... She didn't object as she hummed her imaginary tone

Mike soon freed her breasts and rubbed on them,squeezing them softly...

"daddy loves your boobs baby"

"Nah... They are too small" Jenny said laughing

"I love how small they are" he said as he started licking and sucking them

"mmmm... Your mouth... It's warm"

"does it feel good?"Mike asked as he ran his thumb over her nipple which was now covered in saliva

"hahahahaha... Yes it does"

Mike smiled...he resumed sucking her breasts and ran his hands over her thighs..

"you did that this morning at the table didn't you" Jenny giggled

Mike pushed his hands farther and soon felt her bare püśśy...

"no panties huh? " he asked

"my püśśy hurt so I took them off "

"spread your legs for me"

Jenny tried adjusting but only staggered... Mike held her on his lap and pushed her legs open himself... His hand explored her püśśy and he soon started rubbing his thumb on her clit..

"oh yes daddy... Mmmm " moaned Jenny with her eyes closed and her head swaying from.side to side.. She squirmed on his lap as he played with her clit...

"you like that baby? "

"yes daddy... Yes... Don't stop"

Mike felt his blood run hot as she said that... He liked her like this.. He'd definitely stock up on whiskey... Jenny was soon squirming so much that she was slipping off this lap...
Mike picked her up and placed her on her back on the bed as she giggled and asked why he stopped... He laid besides her and resumed rubbing her clit, she placed her arm on his chest as her back arched and her legs spread wider for him... He stopped rubbing and slid his finger into her püśśy which was now wet...

"mmmm... Oh yeah"

"you are so wet baby... "

"ooooohh... Yes... It feels good"

Mike increased his tempo as he fi.ngere.d her, her juices dripping down his finger... Soon he felt her walls clench around his finger as she threw her head back

"oh my goodness... Ooooohh " Jenny muttered as she came.

Mike pulled his finger out as she laid there panting...

Jenny had felt her orgasm hit and when she opened her eyes the ceiling was spinning and her legs were weak...

"here" Mike said
Jenny tried to sit up and saw Mike standing there naked, handing her the bottle

She took it from him and drank some more... Mike took the bottle from her and placed it on the table... He stroked his hard çøçk as he looked at her sprawled out on the bed struggling to get up and falling back down... He laughed quietly to himself... He held her ankles and dragged her to the edge of the bed, he placed two pillows under her as.s as she muttered intelligible words to herself... He then mounted her small figure, placing himself between her legs... With his hand, he guided his çøçk into her and pushed his waist forward

"oww daddy..you said.. " said Jenny weakly as she pushed weakly against his chest in a pathetic attempt to push him off

"it will feel good" Mike whispered in her ear and as he started thrusting into her... Her head was at the level of his chest as he laid completely on her holding her head against his chest with his arms...

"oh god... Daddy you're so big"

"yes and you're so tight... Let's see how flexible you are "

Mike pulled himself up till he was kneeling... He held her legs and pushed them back till her knees were behind her ears... She was folded easily and looked even smaller with her püśśy jutting out...

"shi.t" Mike muttered at the sight as he pushed back into her

"oww.. It's too deep" Jenny attempted to struggle but couldn't

"Shhhh... Daddy likes it like this... Mmm" Mike said as he fūčked her

"ow... Okay...ooohhh... Awww" Jenny moaned

"you like it don't you "

"yes... Oww...yes... "

"you're my little fūčk toy aren't you " said Mike as he pushed his weight farther into her with an aggressive slam into her püśśy

"yes...yess... Ow....yes I am"

"I knew you liked it... Holy crap... You're so hot baby... "

Jenny just laid there moaning softly as she slipped in and out of consciousness as Mike fūčked her roughly

Mike pulled out and looked down at his çøçk.,it was covered in a slippery film... He picked Jenny up and repositioned her bending over with her ass in the air.and he belly and head resting on the bed .. With a hand on her hip, he guided his çøçk back into her from behind... He moved slowly till her walls relaxed a bit then he started slamming into her as the sounds of their skin clapping echoed through out the whole house... Jenny didn't make a sound but minor grunts now and then...
"oh yes... That's it... " Mike said as he spanked her..

"oww.. " Jenny groaned as she propped herself up on her hands and her head hanging low

"oh yes... Fūčk me daddy..." Jenny moaned
Mike couldn't believe it and smiled at the bottle of whiskey which he reached for

"drink one more sip"

Jenny obeyed

Mike looked down and saw his çøçk sliding in and out of her püśśy which was now reddened...

"will you drink daddy's cu.m ?"

"oh... Ooohhh... " Jenny moaned mindlessly

He knew she probably couldn't understand him anymore... He laughed loudly as he kept pushing in and out of her... He spanked her ass very hard this time without missed a beat as he fūčked her

"ahhhh.... " Jenny screamed at the too of her voice

"mmmm... I'm getting close. "

Mike saw the red mark appear where he spanked her... He spanked her again and again on that spot

"oww... Owww..." Jenny howled

Mike suddenly felt her walls tighten around his çøçk hindering his movement

"ooohhh... I love your püśśy... You little freak... You're cumm.ing again... You like being fūčked rough... Cu.m you slu.t"

"ahhhh " Jenny screamed as she collapsed again onto the bed and panted while muttering nonsense

Her püśśy spasmed and squeezed his çøçk pushing him to his oragsm

"oh sh.it" Mike groaned as he pulled out and flipped her over easily... He quickly straddled her chest, sitting on her breasts as he pushed his çøçk into her mouth and rubbed his çøçk till he started cum.ming .. Her eyes were closed as he came in her mouth..

"oh god... Yessss" Mike shot his cum into her mouth which hung open... He watched her mouth fill up as he came... His orgasm subsided as he panted still seated on her chest and watching her mouth... She didn't move... She must have passed out from all the alcohol he thought to himself... He held her nose shut and soon she struggled for air, making her swallow her mouthful of his c.um in one gulp...
Mike got of her and laid down... This had been the best night of his entire life... He hadn't had an orgasm this strong before... He looked over at her small figure which laid unconscious next to him, he turned her over and fondled her small ass,spreading them He stuck a finger into her ass.hole..it held his finger in a vice grip...she didn't move...should he fūčk her in the ass before she woke up he thought to himself... He decided against it since it might make a mess seeing as she was probably not clean in preparation for it plus he had no lube...he flipped her over again and pulled her up till he could comfortably suck her tiny breasts as she slept... It was a few minutes to 1am and he felt tired but he wanted to stay awake so he could fūčk her one last time before she woke up... He sucked her breasts and rubbed his çøçk till he started getting hard again... He smiled and turned her on her belly again..

Chai!!! wot a great story...wt a great lesson fr d desperate n nonchalant mums...Thumbs up fr u @Adalyon

what a talent!!!

McEphiks:
Issokay. I die hia. Ride on OP.

Enny2013:
Chai!!! wot a great story...wt a great lesson fr d desperate n nonchalant mums...Thumbs up fr u @Adalyon

what a talent!!!

I really appreciate the kind words... Thanks for following

Mike is very wicked. nice one

This adalyon or adalion girl too like fvck fvck stories!!!
Shuuuuuu!!!

luminouz:
This adalyon or adalion girl too like fvck fvck stories!!!
Shuuuuuu!!!

This luminouz or limousine boy too like to read fvck fvck stories !!!
Habaaaaaa!!!

Adalyon:

This luminouz or limousine boy too like to read fvck fvck stories !!!
Habaaaaaa!!!

Lmaooooo.....
Adanylon..be careful ooo

Enny2013:
Chai!!! wot a great story...wt a great lesson fr d desperate n nonchalant mums...Thumbs up fr u @Adalyon

what a talent!!!

Na the talent u see or u enjoyed the fvckapades!!!

luminouz:

Na the talent u see or u enjoyed the fvckapades!!!

True true your body don full luminose

luminouz:

Na the talent u see or u enjoyed the fvckapades!!!

pls,I dnt tolerate ds kind of question..I won't lyk u quoting me next tym..OK. I beg of u..Tnx

I invited three friend via the page URL and they all confirmed you have a nice story but please try to reduce the sexcapades which made them lose interest.

Good job.

The rape too much.

Last three updates was emphasised on just sex.


Move on with the story please.

Thanks.

Enny2013:


pls,I dnt tolerate ds kind of question..I won't lyk u quoting me next tym..OK. I beg of u..Tnx

Is it the economy or just u
No sense of humor at all!!!

Adalyon:

True true your body don full luminose

Lol..I was just clowning around..too bad she doesn't have a humorous bone in her body

McEphiks:
I invited three friend via the page URL and they all confirmed you have a nice story but please try to reduce the sexcapades which made them lose interest.

Good job.

The rape too much.

Last three updates was emphasised on just sex.



Move on with the story please.

Thanks.

Why will u dictate what she has write for fvcks sakes!!!!
She owns the story,let her express herself....

Ur last warning!!!

luminouz:


Why will u dictate what she has write for fvcks sakes!!!!
She owns the story,let her express herself....

Ur last warning!!!

Why use Panadol for another person headache?

It's an opinion and you should allow her respond to it; don't be over righteous. Bleep you. Don't mention me again. You hia?

McEphiks:
I invited three friend via the page URL and they all confirmed you have a nice story but please try to reduce the sexcapades which made them lose interest.

Good job.

The rape too much.

Last three updates was emphasised on just sex.



Move on with the story please.

Thanks.

Thanks... I understand what you mean but the story isn't for everyone, it is very graphic and will probably get more graphic... The sexual content is important to the story line...i will probably just find a way to move it to sexuality section for clarity sake

McEphiks:



Why use Panadol for another person headache?

It's an opinion and you should allow her respond to it; don't be over righteous. Bleep you. Don't mention me again. You hia?

Go bleep ursef!!!!

luminouz:
Is it the economy or just u No sense of humor at all!!!

Hahahahaha!!!! d 'ECONOMY' got me laughing n rolling on d floor... Oh my God!!! Chai!!!

Enny2013:


Hahahahaha!!!! d 'ECONOMY' got me laughing n rolling on d floor...
Oh my God!!!
Chai!!!

Thank God u laughed! I was almost worried about u!!!

luminouz:
Thank God u laughed! I was almost worried about u!!!

Really ar u dat worrisome

luminouz:
Go bleep ursef!!!!

Dis guy wl nt murder me wt laff... d illustrations ar xo funny..LOL!!

Enny2013:


Really ar u dat worrisome

I'm dat caring babe

Lady way get Creativity come fine join...i throwa cap for u oh jare

You get sense jooor Adalyon. No be one mumu wey ugly cum still stupid join.