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Re: Canadian Express Entry/federal Skilled Workers Program - Connect Here Part 7 by Uche8419: 10:02pm On Mar 09, 2019 |
Please house, Can I do my medicals before receiving ITA? How about police report, can I as well do it before receiving ITA? Thanks. |
Re: Canadian Express Entry/federal Skilled Workers Program - Connect Here Part 7 by Topsmamen: 10:06pm On Mar 09, 2019 |
Uche8419: Yes you can do medicals before ITA. That’s why it’s called an upfront medical exam. Check with the designated organization. Police report before ITA, for sure. 1 Like |
Re: Canadian Express Entry/federal Skilled Workers Program - Connect Here Part 7 by Debsify: 10:13pm On Mar 09, 2019 |
kart042000:A lot of IT/Desktop support jobs in Alberta call for few years of experience with windows OS, Certs in ITIL, A+, MSCA and sometimes experience with some specific software the companies use for ticketing and support. 1 Like |
Re: Canadian Express Entry/federal Skilled Workers Program - Connect Here Part 7 by ladymarshall: 10:14pm On Mar 09, 2019 |
In addition to previous advice, see further corrections below: Beware of contractions (I'm, you're etc). You over-used them. Try not to get used to them. I understand they are ok for informal letters, but many times, it is not easy to make the conscious switch from contractions to writing them in full when you have to write formal. Stick to non-contracted verb forms and it will work well for you in both formal and informal. The way you used them here would give the impression that you do not know how to use verbs in non-contracted forms. How is the new job? (remove "coming along" ) "Platform" is incorrect here, I think you mean "location" (maybe "branch" could also work) Write MOD/IDP in full. If you are to use abbreviations, the first mention of it should be written in full. Subsequent mentions can be abbreviated. Good points for using "feverishly" appropriately. Continue in that manner. Do not keep it simple. Use big grammar, but use it well. Show the examiner that you can write comfortably using uncommon words. "writing", W should not be in caps (or "Writing Module", so we know you are referring to a proper noun) Your 3rd sentence, paragraph 2 is great. That is complex sentence (mixed with a question). Please write more sentences like this one. I am assuming you meant "halt" not "hilt", but remove "to a halt", it sounds colloquial, just write "you're busy" Technically, "targeting" is correct. But it just does not sound nice when it is written. It sounds better when speaking (Mind you, you must be careful not to write exactly how you speak, some words/sentences sound great when you speak but less desirable when you write them). Maybe it is just me overthinking it. Personally, I would write "I strongly desire a 7.5 score" paper-based (with an hypen) handwritten (in one word)/hand-written (Be careful of words like this) "it's", not "its" (the apostrophe makes all the difference in both words, again, avoid contractions if you can) I think what you mean is "electronic devices", as against pen and paper. Keep in mind equal comparisons/weightings in comparative sentences. Avoid simple sentences as much as you can. The last bolded parts could be rewritten as "I hope you understand but I would make my handwriting as legible as possible, although it would take a great deal of effort on my part. I am really counting on you to assist me because this exam is a make or break test for me, especially since passing it would make my dreams of migrating to Canada come through." (flesh up your sentences so you can make them complex) Your last sentence has a weird construction and is not good. You can rewrite it as "I woud like to send you my practice tests on Whatsapp, however, if you consider it too personal or inconvenient, I can send it via email or other messaging platforms suggested by you" (Note I ended the sentence with a passive noun clause). Combining different types of sentences proves to the reader that you have a good grasp of the language. Using transitional words transforms your sentences from basic to complex which would score you points. This link has a great repertoire of transitional words which I still consult when I write in my job http://writing2.richmond.edu/writing/wweb/trans1.html "Thanks a bunch" is too colloquial even for spoken English. Just write "Thanks in advance" or "Thanks very much" or "Thank you". Also, do not take punctuations for granted. There should be a comma in front of "Dear friend" and "Best wishes". I got an 8 in writing, so this advice is not the best you can get. Perhaps there are those who got 8.5/9 in writing that can give superior advice. Also, when practicing, target scoring 9 in all the modules and practice hard for those scores (lol, I used the word "target" ). Usually, we tend to score lower than what our targeted scores. If you practice hard for a 9, you might end up getting an 8.5 or 8 in writing. In addition, please spend more time, thought and mental energy practicing task 2 and write impeccably even during your practice tests. jjohndoe83: 45 Likes 16 Shares |
Re: Canadian Express Entry/federal Skilled Workers Program - Connect Here Part 7 by Ramj: 10:16pm On Mar 09, 2019 |
Xbature: 1. A year payslip would be enough and I hope you informed CIC when she resigned from her job last November 2. the Request is simple - they request that the statement to show salary deposit - One year would be okay at least you can request a customized statement to show only deposits from her office for the past one year ( to make it less bulky). If not possible get her statement and highlight the salary deposits 3. Very easy contact you bank 4. Fill the form 5. Fill the form Je m'appelle ADR 1 Like |
Re: Canadian Express Entry/federal Skilled Workers Program - Connect Here Part 7 by Debsify: 10:20pm On Mar 09, 2019 |
Ifeoma77:BCIT ![]() |
Re: Canadian Express Entry/federal Skilled Workers Program - Connect Here Part 7 by ladymarshall: 10:29pm On Mar 09, 2019 |
Thought I was the only one who noticed ![]() ![]() Amandacanny: |
Re: Canadian Express Entry/federal Skilled Workers Program - Connect Here Part 7 by Greatkhad: 10:42pm On Mar 09, 2019 |
jjohndoe83: I dont mind reviewing your essays..u can tag me when u post them 2 Likes |
Re: Canadian Express Entry/federal Skilled Workers Program - Connect Here Part 7 by Greatkhad: 10:48pm On Mar 09, 2019 |
ladymarshall:Constantly amazed at how helpful people are on this platform. This was a well detailed review. Welldone! 7 Likes |
Re: Canadian Express Entry/federal Skilled Workers Program - Connect Here Part 7 by jjohndoe83: 10:54pm On Mar 09, 2019 |
ladymarshall:Wow! Thanks thanks. This was incisive. I have to read this again when I wake up. There's work to do mhen! 4 Likes |
Re: Canadian Express Entry/federal Skilled Workers Program - Connect Here Part 7 by Nobody: 11:03pm On Mar 09, 2019 |
I just want to thank everyone who encouraged me after my emotional outburst last year, in part 6, about being frustrated after writing ielts unsuccessfully and was stuck in 6.5 writing after six attempts in nine months. I was encouraged to give it a break, practice well and take the exam again, which I did (someone even volunteered to contribute to my registration fee). Thankfully, I passed this time around! L:8.5, R:8.5, S:8.0 W:7.0. I am so grateful to this wonderful family, it wouldn't have been possible without you guys! That said, please I want to ask, how can someone claim points for an employment he was paid cash? I worked in a small company where I was paid cash. The employer didn't issue any pay slip and I don't have any proof on my end other than my employment letter. How do I go about it? Because this job is crucial to my eligibility in terms of continuous work experience. Once again, thanks every one! 63 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Canadian Express Entry/federal Skilled Workers Program - Connect Here Part 7 by Topsmamen: 11:06pm On Mar 09, 2019 |
All hail @ladymarshall, the English Marshal. 20 Likes
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Re: Canadian Express Entry/federal Skilled Workers Program - Connect Here Part 7 by Topsmamen: 11:09pm On Mar 09, 2019 |
NameUserNo: Wow! Plenty congrats! Your resilience and determination have paid off......beautifully. Congrats! You can write a letter of explanation to indicate that you were paid in cash during your employment. The employment letter and letter of explanation are okay. 8 Likes |
Re: Canadian Express Entry/federal Skilled Workers Program - Connect Here Part 7 by ladymarshall: 11:10pm On Mar 09, 2019 |
Wow! Big Congrats! Your perseverance paid off!!! Ask your employer to issue you a salary certificate. Also ensure your reference letter in CIC format clearly states that you were paid in cash. NameUserNo: 4 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Canadian Express Entry/federal Skilled Workers Program - Connect Here Part 7 by Nobody: 11:12pm On Mar 09, 2019 |
Topsmamen:Thanks a lot! |
Re: Canadian Express Entry/federal Skilled Workers Program - Connect Here Part 7 by Nobody: 11:13pm On Mar 09, 2019 |
ladymarshall:Thank you. |
Re: Canadian Express Entry/federal Skilled Workers Program - Connect Here Part 7 by ladymarshall: 11:13pm On Mar 09, 2019 |
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Re: Canadian Express Entry/federal Skilled Workers Program - Connect Here Part 7 by jjohndoe83: 11:27pm On Mar 09, 2019 |
ladymarshall:Do you mind helping out with reviews? Your review blew me out of the water and I'm so upset right now, I almost can't sleep. I'm writing in exactly four weeks. I might not be able to put the essays here, I'm writing on paper. I could take clear photos and send privately for reviews. Can this work? I can start from Wednesday after I must have revised my methods and done some more practice, that way you get a more refined draft. Thanks in advance. 1 Like |
Re: Canadian Express Entry/federal Skilled Workers Program - Connect Here Part 7 by princesschuks: 11:52pm On Mar 09, 2019 |
ladymarshall: Waawu. You are amazing. 5 Likes |
Re: Canadian Express Entry/federal Skilled Workers Program - Connect Here Part 7 by ladymarshall: 11:59pm On Mar 09, 2019 |
Don't be upset. Corrections make you better and more aware of your flaws. Better that you know now than after exams. Chai! Oga, na work you wan giv me o ![]() jjohndoe83: 4 Likes |
Re: Canadian Express Entry/federal Skilled Workers Program - Connect Here Part 7 by chukwumummy: 12:00am On Mar 10, 2019 |
PLS I'M FILLING MY E-APR AND I NOTICED THAT I MADE A MISTAKE IN MY SON'S NAME, INSTEAD OF KENECHUKWU I TYPED KENECHUMWH. AND IS NOT ALLOWING ME TO MODIFY. THE NAME IS LOCKD. PLS WHAT DO I DO? |
Re: Canadian Express Entry/federal Skilled Workers Program - Connect Here Part 7 by jjohndoe83: 12:04am On Mar 10, 2019 |
ladymarshall:Thank you very much. I've not even started studying for Task 2. But I'll move to that and walk back to Task 1. I'm not upset because I was corrected, it's more like how did I make so many mistakes, me that I've published in journals ![]() ![]() 5 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Canadian Express Entry/federal Skilled Workers Program - Connect Here Part 7 by Kogigallll: 12:35am On Mar 10, 2019 |
Airn:Thanks |
Re: Canadian Express Entry/federal Skilled Workers Program - Connect Here Part 7 by Xbature: 12:47am On Mar 10, 2019 |
Ramj: Thanks for the response. The wahala there is that we haven’t notified them of the resignation even though there is a cogent reason for it. We intend to explain it in the explanation letter we will be attaching and for the statement that won’t be any issue but I want to know if it should stop at this March. Meaning doing from April 2018 to March 2019. because all through 2017 to March 2018 she as on study leave without pay. Your advises have been very helpful and my tension is reducing gradually. You can see I never fit sleep becos of how to solve this issue. Thanks again. |
Re: Canadian Express Entry/federal Skilled Workers Program - Connect Here Part 7 by GozyNA: 1:03am On Mar 10, 2019 |
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Re: Canadian Express Entry/federal Skilled Workers Program - Connect Here Part 7 by Josefuadjr: 1:11am On Mar 10, 2019 |
Xbature: Worry not. You'll be fine |
Re: Canadian Express Entry/federal Skilled Workers Program - Connect Here Part 7 by Fadia: 1:21am On Mar 10, 2019 |
1. I submitted my aunt's Passport as the Proof of PR and submitted copies of her recent phone bill, hydro bill, passport (again) and Employment T4 as the Family member proof of status. 2. My aunt didn't have a birth certificate to show so my mum went to National Population Commission to get a letter of attestation for her and also swore an affidavit of relationship at the high court. My aunt also wrote a justification letter explaining the family tree and put her number there to be contacted for further enquiries. Modified. Bbol: 4 Likes 3 Shares |
Re: Canadian Express Entry/federal Skilled Workers Program - Connect Here Part 7 by zone51: 2:30am On Mar 10, 2019 |
COPR: Please help out here, I want to use my NECO result, have 8 Credits and 1 D7 in Chemistry, does it matter? |
Re: Canadian Express Entry/federal Skilled Workers Program - Connect Here Part 7 by sconp: 3:02am On Mar 10, 2019 |
zone51:No |
Re: Canadian Express Entry/federal Skilled Workers Program - Connect Here Part 7 by Canadaforsure(f): 3:10am On Mar 10, 2019 |
Dear family. Great job every one. Please i need the format for a colleague writing IRCC in the event i can't get reference letter from my employer. I searched the thread but cant seem to locate something like that. |
Re: Canadian Express Entry/federal Skilled Workers Program - Connect Here Part 7 by 19CannyMum: 4:04am On Mar 10, 2019 |
jjohndoe83: Share the question you're answering. The question is as important as the answer. 4 Likes |
Re: Canadian Express Entry/federal Skilled Workers Program - Connect Here Part 7 by Elektra008(f): 5:36am On Mar 10, 2019 |
COPR: Please can you point me to the right link where we covered issues on neco verification? I actually read all the pages on this part but I must have overlooked it. Thanks. |
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