whytey:
Hello Everyone,

I applied for a diploma course on Software development but I was asked to provide a Statement of Purpose which I don't have.

Please can someone provide me with a sample letter of the Statement of Purpose.

Kindly paste here OR send to my Gmail: denweremadu@gmail.com

Thanks and God bless!

Statement of purpose is not difficult to write just get a template from the internet.

I just checked my account and saw a second corresponding letter and it’s a reject.

ehiremen2002:
I just checked my account and saw a second corresponding letter and it’s a reject.

Sorry to hear this Ehiremen.

Please, what are the documents you submitted?

Did you include SoP in your application?

Have you travelled outside Nigeria before, I mean to any of the advanced nations?

Are you self-sponsored or sponsored by someone e.g. parents?

Did you apply for a master's, PhD, PGD...?!?

Hi Everyone, been a silent reader for a while and was rejected last week.
Please can @frankrobbn1 and other gurus advice me what to do

I got an admission to study Masters of Business Administration in Canada, I paid $7000 tuition deposit.

Rejection letter dropped with these generic reasons:

Travel history
Family ties
Lack of funds.



I have a Bsc in Accounting, I am currently employed under my dads company, I have a great travel history, been to so many places, Parts of the US and Europe so i don't understand the travel history reason.
My Sponsor is my father

Documents submitted:
Dads CAC document, which also shows i'm among the board of directors( I used this as part of my ties to my country in my letter)
Bank statement with balance of 50m and Bank reference letter
Sponsorship Affidavit letter
Sponsorship letter( although this didn't state how much he will be given me for my school, it just states he will be sponsoring me)

My Transcript
International passport and previous visa pages
Acceptance letter
Letter of Recommendation from my dads company
Waec
My birth Certificate
Police clearance
My letter of intent
Imm forms

I know its advisable to apply for the gcms note but we have decided not to and reapply and while doing that i will get an official admission from another country to have that as back up. My school is to resume in may, please I would like all the gurus here to advise me on whatever document I am to add to strengthen my application. Apologies if this post is long, i'm just here to learn. Thank you all

vanessa969:
Hi Everyone, been a silent reader for a while and was rejected last week.
Please can @frankrobbn1 and other gurus advice me what to do

I got an admission to study Masters of Business Administration in Canada, I paid $7000 tuition deposit.

Rejection letter dropped with these generic reasons:

Travel history
Family ties
Lack of funds.



I have a Bsc in Accounting, I am currently employed under my dads company, I have a great travel history, been to so many places, Parts of the US and Europe so i don't understand the travel history reason.
My Sponsor is my father

Documents submitted:
Dads CAC document, which also shows i'm among the board of directors( I used this as part of my ties to my country in my letter)
Bank statement with balance of 50m and Bank reference letter
Sponsorship Affidavit letter
Sponsorship letter( although this didn't state how much he will be given me for my school, it just states he will be sponsoring me)

My Transcript
International passport and previous visa pages
Acceptance letter
Letter of Recommendation from my dads company
Waec
My birth Certificate
Police clearance
My letter of intent
Imm forms

I know its advisable to apply for the gcms note but we have decided not to and reapply and while doing that i will get an official admission from another country to have that as back up. My school is to resume in may, please I would like all the gurus here to advise me on whatever document I am to add to strengthen my application. Apologies if this post is long, i'm just here to learn. Thank you all

LACK OF FUNDS

Since you said you are employed in your Dad's company, it means you receive a salary. You will need to show that through your personal SOA. Attach your payslip if you have.

Also, It wouldn't be out of place for your Dad to state how much he is committing to your education (in the sponsorship affidavit letter) and also to have him transfer part of the money to your personal account. BTW, is the statement of account you submitted your Dad's personal account or Company's account?

Did you attach the receipt from the school after you paid Tuition? If you didn't, you will need to do that?

TRAVEL HISTORY

It's interesting that after being to US and Europe, they are coming up with 'travel history' as an excuse. You will need to do an LOE, emphasizing that you have a good travel history. Have you been denied Visa before? If yes, did you state it in your application?

FAMILY TIES:
You probably didn't emphasize this very well. Beyond being one of the BOD in your father's company, you have to explain to the VO how indispensable you are to your Dad's business. In the letter of Recommendation from your Dad's company, did they emphasize that you will be coming back to help the business grow? If not, you may want to have them add it to the letter. Finally, do you have any property in your name?

Good luck with the application.

JosephYemsol:



Firstly, what's your qualifications, if u v a bsc and it's a upper 2nd class division, forget the diploma program idea as you will hardly get a visa

Do I stand a better chance of getting a study visa since I was admitted on a Diploma Program in Welding(Northern College) although I graduated with a 3rd class in material and metallurgical Engineering....
1). Is it advisably to add my degree certificate during my application or i shouldn't just apply with it..or
2). should I apply with my welding training certificates (Samsung welding training certificate and PTDF welding certicates) i did while I was in school...
Please Gurus in the house i really need an advice on this..to avoid regrets..

Miide2:
Please can someone brief me on how to tackle family ties rejection reason.

What do you need to submit to prove family ties home and abroad. Please it is urgent

Someone asked a question here?

vanessa969:
Hi Everyone, been a silent reader for a while and was rejected last week.
Please can @frankrobbn1 and other gurus advice me what to do

I got an admission to study Masters of Business Administration in Canada, I paid $7000 tuition deposit.

Rejection letter dropped with these generic reasons:

Travel history
Family ties
Lack of funds.



I have a Bsc in Accounting, I am currently employed under my dads company, I have a great travel history, been to so many places, Parts of the US and Europe so i don't understand the travel history reason.
My Sponsor is my father

Documents submitted:
Dads CAC document, which also shows i'm among the board of directors( I used this as part of my ties to my country in my letter)
Bank statement with balance of 50m and Bank reference letter
Sponsorship Affidavit letter
Sponsorship letter( although this didn't state how much he will be given me for my school, it just states he will be sponsoring me)

My Transcript
International passport and previous visa pages
Acceptance letter
Letter of Recommendation from my dads company
Waec
My birth Certificate
Police clearance
My letter of intent
Imm forms

I know its advisable to apply for the gcms note but we have decided not to and reapply and while doing that i will get an official admission from another country to have that as back up. My school is to resume in may, please I would like all the gurus here to advise me on whatever document I am to add to strengthen my application. Apologies if this post is long, i'm just here to learn. Thank you all

Sorry about your refusal;
1. Regarding the finance clause, did your dad submit a company account or used both personal and company account.

2. Your travel history, as it been in the last 10yrs?

3. Did you provide documents showing your individual family status and general information about them?

PeterWealth:
please does anyone have any idea of schools in Canada accepting applications for masters program right now.

Every school accepts admission applications. To be on the safe side apply for September (Fall 2020 semester).

P.s: there are 3 semesters in Canada Winter(January), summer(May) and fall(September).

SonofGod2000:
Please house, if one is refused under 4 weeks of visa application base on family ties and purpose of visit, can he use the initial SOA if he plans to reapply the second time immediately? That my friend was denied yesterday after the Correspondence letter Recieved

Urgent pleaseeee guys.......

SOA have a 30days validity. Also what's the point of applying almost immediately. Settle down defer if you have to and sort out every refusal Clause

This officers are really not serious.

Documents I submitted

1 - SOP
2 - LOE
3 - Uncle´SOP - saying he will sponsor
4 - Sponsorship declaration
5- sponsor employer introductory letter -however this was old copy he use when visiting his daughter
6- Dom account of sponsor with 4900 USD - this fund solely dedicated for my studies
7- Fix deposit advises for applicant - about 5Million from late dad properties- lost dad when I was in Jss1 so uncle has been using fund save for me till my graduation last year. and saving acount with 10million

8- sponsor travel history - stamps from several trip to Canada to visit daughter
9- 2 previous letter from Raph Goodale - he used for his visit
10- Ref letter from bank
11- land documents for sponsor
12-land document for late dad
13- Birth certificate
14- testimonial from school
15- statement of result - online waec
16- Dad's burial flyer, death certificate . document showing his death /2013)
17- Custodianship declaration form from cousin, she also added her Canadian passport and her property docs in same city I will be studying.

in my SOP, on eof my strong tie back home is my mum. been a widow and I the only child.


I applied for software engineering Bsc UofRegina

GentleBobo:


Sorry to hear this Ehiremen.

Please, what are the documents you submitted?

Did you include SoP in your application?

Have you travelled outside Nigeria before, I mean to any of the advanced nations?

Are you self-sponsored or sponsored by someone e.g. parents?

Did you apply for a master's, PhD, PGD...?!?

samoji84:
Thanks for your response.
Please I want your advice if I should continue with the current 1 year PGP?
What is the implication for eligibility for PR, if I studied the 1-year program, and got PGWP for a year?
It's really a concern for me, given that the end goal is to apply for PR.

Kind regards,
samoji.

The bolded, do you have your visa already?

Yomiyo:
Hello gurus in the house, Please I need more enlightenment about Toronto school of management. I would like to apply for a diploma course with the hope working while studying to take care of my family back home. Do we have somebody who has gotten admission and visa through this process. Thanks for your help

The bolded, you want to get a job as a student to take care of your family back home?

Also, make sure you confirm and you are 100% sure Toronto School of Management offer PGWP eligible programs to avoid stories that touch.

That is the link below to confirm schools in Canada that offer PGWP eligible programs.

https://www.canada.ca/en/immigration-refugees-citizenship/services/study-canada/study-permit/prepare/designated-learning-institutions-list.html#wb-auto-25

ishowleck:
Good Afternoon everyone in the house.
I want to seek advice from experienced people in here. I want to enrol for a graphic design diploma in Canada and I don't mind if there is suggestions on institution. But my aim is to stay back and work in Canada after my study.

Sir/Ma in the room, pls I need advise on how to start thehe important think to take note and the document I should prepare for.

Thank you in advance

Hello sir, I have attached a link below. You can start there.

https://www.canada.ca/en/immigration-refugees-citizenship/services/study-canada/study-permit/apply.html

whytey:


Please someone should kindly send me the sample letter of the Statement of Purpose to my Gmail : denweremadu@gmail.com

Please help a brother

Thanks and Godbless.

There are lots of samples online.
Just a quick guide. Why did you choose the course and school? What skills or experience makes you an excellent fit for the course? What are your short and long term goals and how does the course help in achieving these goals?
Maximum of 1 page or 500 words.

JosephYemsol:
Hi guys... Pls assist


I finished with 3.62 /5
My last 2 semester GPA is 4.28/5

And I wanna apply for an MENG program... But it's been proving difficult with my CGPA

So I wanna ask, as a 2.1 , can I apply to kwantlen polytechnic university...I hope it's not an under qualification..

Can the VO understand my case?...
Pls advise

The most important thing is what degree are you going for?

If you have a Bsc and then decide to spend another $10,000 on diploma or another Bsc, the visa officer will assume you are not a genuine student. It is always better to go for a degree higher than your previous one. It is not just a Canada thing, same thing applies in UK. If you decide to go for same or lower degree, you will need to give a good and convincing reason why you want to toe that path.

In some exceptional cases, some applicants have been able to convince the visa officer by applying for same or lower degree and got their permits.

When you see visa officers write "taking the applicant's plan of study into account, the applicant does not appear to be sufficiently well established that the proposed study will be a reasonable expense". It is most likely they are not convinced the student is genuine, no career progression or they feel it is a waste of money spending such huge funds on the program. This is where the applicant needs to write a good LOE to justify why they chose the program. cc plantainboy1

There are 3 major areas you need to convince the visa officer as a Canadian study permit applicant

(1) You are a genuine student - Career progression comes in.

(2) You have the funds to take care of yourself and comfortable pay your fees.

(3) Home ties to your country

Hello sir please when one is applying for a study permit and has being denied a US visa where am I to state I have being denied before a US visa

Qudkom:


Sorry about your refusal;
1. Regarding the finance clause, did your dad submit a company account or used both personal and company account.

2. Your travel history, as it been in the last 10yrs?

3. Did you provide documents showing your individual family status and general information about them?

vanessa969:
Hi Everyone, been a silent reader for a while and was rejected last week.
Please can @frankrobbn1 and other gurus advice me what to do

I got an admission to study Masters of Business Administration in Canada, I paid $7000 tuition deposit.

Rejection letter dropped with these generic reasons:

Travel history
Family ties
Lack of funds.



I have a Bsc in Accounting, I am currently employed under my dads company, I have a great travel history, been to so many places, Parts of the US and Europe so i don't understand the travel history reason.
My Sponsor is my father

Documents submitted:
Dads CAC document, which also shows i'm among the board of directors( I used this as part of my ties to my country in my letter)
Bank statement with balance of 50m and Bank reference letter
Sponsorship Affidavit letter
Sponsorship letter( although this didn't state how much he will be given me for my school, it just states he will be sponsoring me)

My Transcript
International passport and previous visa pages
Acceptance letter
Letter of Recommendation from my dads company
Waec
My birth Certificate
Police clearance
My letter of intent
Imm forms

I know its advisable to apply for the gcms note but we have decided not to and reapply and while doing that i will get an official admission from another country to have that as back up. My school is to resume in may, please I would like all the gurus here to advise me on whatever document I am to add to strengthen my application. Apologies if this post is long, i'm just here to learn. Thank you all

It’s better to defer your admission and apply for the gcms notes. That’s only when they can give advice.

Congratulations to all those approved recently.

Who has the experience of how long it takes for CIC to give feedback after responding to a Procedural Letter for proof of funds (CIC false accusation)?

Thank you very much for this reply, I didn't put my personal SOA or pay slip because i was working somewhere else and stopped in October, then I traveled and started work in my dads company in January that's why and honestly there's no money there. What i can do is to tell him to transfer some funds into my account and i would explain it in my letter. But i need to know like how much he should transfer and what the money will be for( My tuition for 2 years is $45,000 and i have paid $7,000) I also submitted the receipt for that.

Also for lack of funds, my dad has an account in Canada, there is no transaction happening but there is money inside, can i also submit that too please, would it help?

For the travel history, i will emphasis it well in my letter, before October 2019, the last time i traveled was in 2016.
For the family ties will explain that well too, no the letter from the office didn't emphasize that well. Will work on that too. I don't have any property in my name but my dad has

mundus:



LACK OF FUNDS

Since you said you are employed in your Dad's company, it means you receive a salary. You will need to show that through your personal SOA. Attach your payslip if you have.

Also, It wouldn't be out of place for your Dad to state how much he is committing to your education (in the sponsorship affidavit letter) and also to have him transfer part of the money to your personal account. BTW, is the statement of account you submitted your Dad's personal account or Company's account?

Did you attach the receipt from the school after you paid Tuition? If you didn't, you will need to do that?

TRAVEL HISTORY

It's interesting that after being to US and Europe, they are coming up with 'travel history' as an excuse. You will need to do an LOE, emphasizing that you have a good travel history. Have you been denied Visa before? If yes, did you state it in your application?

FAMILY TIES:
You probably didn't emphasize this very well. Beyond being one of the BOD in your father's company, you have to explain to the VO how indispensable you are to your Dad's business. In the letter of Recommendation from your Dad's company, did they emphasize that you will be coming back to help the business grow? If not, you may want to have them add it to the letter. Finally, do you have any property in your name?

Good luck with the application.

Thank you for the reply,

1.I submitted his personal account
2. No i gave them visas for the past 10 years( 2 Past US visas, 2 schengen and a current US visa)
3. No i didnt submit anything about them, have learnt that now. Will add their birth certificate, passport, visa pages. I put information about them in the funds

Qudkom:


Sorry about your refusal;
1. Regarding the finance clause, did your dad submit a company account or used both personal and company account.

2. Your travel history, as it been in the last 10yrs?

3. Did you provide documents showing your individual family status and general information about them?

Greetings to you sir
Please what exactly does travel history have anything to do with a study permit

Naijaforeigner:


Hello sir, I have attached a link below. You can start there.

https://www.canada.ca/en/immigration-refugees-citizenship/services/study-canada/study-permit/apply.html

Can you help me go through my Sop and LOE please sir I have just been refused visa again.

mundus:



LACK OF FUNDS

Since you said you are employed in your Dad's company, it means you receive a salary. You will need to show that through your personal SOA. Attach your payslip if you have.

Also, It wouldn't be out of place for your Dad to state how much he is committing to your education (in the sponsorship affidavit letter) and also to have him transfer part of the money to your personal account. BTW, is the statement of account you submitted your Dad's personal account or Company's account?

Did you attach the receipt from the school after you paid Tuition? If you didn't, you will need to do that?

TRAVEL HISTORY

It's interesting that after being to US and Europe, they are coming up with 'travel history' as an excuse. You will need to do an LOE, emphasizing that you have a good travel history. Have you been denied Visa before? If yes, did you state it in your application?

FAMILY TIES:
You probably didn't emphasize this very well. Beyond being one of the BOD in your father's company, you have to explain to the VO how indispensable you are to your Dad's business. In the letter of Recommendation from your Dad's company, did they emphasize that you will be coming back to help the business grow? If not, you may want to have them add it to the letter. Finally, do you have any property in your name?

Good luck with the application.

Thanks for the timely information, I appreciate

Naijaforeigner:


There are lots of samples online.
Just a quick guide. Why did you choose the course and school? What skills or experience makes you an excellent fit for the course? What are your short and long term goals and how does the course help in achieving these goals?
Maximum of 1 page or 500 words.

Obehi44:

House documents

Thanks

Please I will like to know if I use my church as my sponsor will I still need to show my personal statement of account

Adetayoade1:
Hello sir please when one is applying for a study permit and has being denied a US visa where am I to state I have being denied before a US visa

The application form you will fill when you're about to submit your application. In that form you will be required to give a comprehensive explanation of your previous visa refusals.

krishenry:
Please I will like to know if I use my church as my sponsor will I still need to show my personal statement of account

Church? Don't use it. That rarely works

Thank you very much sir does travel history really matter ? Cause I am seeing people being denied on travel history

Qudkom:

The application form you will fill when you're about to submit your application. In that form you will be required to give a comprehensive explanation of your previous visa refusals.

What do we say to the rejected forthwith?

Chaniel:
Congratulations to all those approved recently.

Who has the experience of how long it takes for CIC to give feedback after responding to a Procedural Letter for proof of funds (CIC false accusation)?

I am still preparing my application.
I am only asking in preparation.
Is this a possibility?

Thanks.

Naijaforeigner:


The bolded, do you have your visa already?

I have replied to your mail.

Banny2020:
Can you help me go through my Sop and LOE please sir I have just been refused visa again.