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Last Man by Aiyamrex(m): 11:21pm On Apr 07, 2020 |
Isn't it horrifying? after death t'was noisy silence, The last man on Earth sat at a end of the dark room. There was a knock at the door. 1 Like |
Re: Last Man by Banjam32(m): 10:10am On Apr 09, 2020 |
A dark poem. This feel has though it starts from nowhere and ends same way. And so; "...there was a knock at the door". |
Re: Last Man by Aiyamrex(m): 3:59pm On Apr 09, 2020 |
Make me understand sir, i'm nt but a kid in this game of poem |
Re: Last Man by Banjam32(m): 5:02pm On Apr 09, 2020 |
Firstly, I am no sir and secondly, I believe poems should be an imitation of life like literature in words, so it's more reality than game. Finally, as a critique to your poem, it starts with a rhetorical question of something horrific but what's it? The subsequent line answers it(its death or dying, hence I labelled it a dark poem). Which would be confirmed with the word "dark room" in the next line and now back to my saying its starts from nowhere and ends same: the last man...knock at the door, all shows either the poem is cryptic or part of a story yet to be told. Or maybe it is me knocking(wanting) more from the poem. |
Re: Last Man by Aiyamrex(m): 6:09pm On Apr 09, 2020 |
Banjam32: ummm boss, from the piece, i made it be kind of image to be built in reader's mind. thank you for the correction sir. . . . can u please check my poems and make critique. . . I need training Sir |
Re: Last Man by Banjam32(m): 11:38pm On Apr 09, 2020 |
Well, OK... |
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