I like that you take honest criticism well, it will help you become an amazing writer. Never shy away from critics. It helps your growth. Kudos
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Thanks dear.
Firstly: about the story been disjointed its some how intensional,at the ending you will understand better.
Secondly: about the use of shorthand, most times i type fully but you know there is a limit to the number of words i can type at a time (5000) so i sometimes make use of short hand in other to deliver what i want to deliver in a post.
Thirdly: wrong spelling, am guilty of that, am too lazy to consult the dictionary. My bad.
Fourtly: paragraphing I try my best to amend.
Thanks for taking your time in making me a better writer. God bless you for me![/quote]