this promises to be an interesting one, and i intend on following too. Ive also nt reli fnishd the first few pages, bt jux had to mke dis comment, forgv me, if uve already corrected urself. I realised u tried using the simple present tense togeda with the past tense, i reli thnk dats nt going too well. I'll advise u maintain a particular tense, the past tense i thnk even makes it easier. I stand to be corrected anyway. Tanx more faya.

i beg cntinue dis thng for me na na now oo, if nt, if i vex eern, dat thng wey happen 1941 go repeat imself, lol.... Still followin miss, nice work

my dear miss classy, i hope u will continue dis beautiful piece for us, soon enough. No pressure tho, jux eager to read ur lovely work. tanx

am sure goin to enjoy dis, oya keep ur lantern burning, its jux dusk, even and night is yet to cme...........more vim, lady

it has jux begun

oga flooow, dis ur system sef. Anyway more fire to ur cooking pot.