Infant, you have proven so far that a story can be decent and interesting. Most of the literatures on NL revolves around sex but you have managed to keep this story reasonably clean while passing salient lessons.

What about the character "Daniel"? You need to deal with him very well in this story to affirm to readers that no man goes far who oversee other people's ruin. Mr Steven also needs to be thought a serious lesson to send a message to people who play God with the life of others.

I perceive there's still a long way to go in this story as there must need be interaction between Daniel/Angel... Ella & co/Jewel... Jewel's Grandfather/Father/Mother etc. Which ever the case, however you decide to steer the story, I'm sure Love will eventually speak.