Nice writeup man

*Following*

Nice story man
following in ghost mode

So no tori dis 9te

I don join d train oooo. Rock abeg increase d speed

Hmmmmmmmmm...... 9ce story man well done. But guy u don Rock life oooooo. Na ur name dey push u sha

Hmmmmm am here again 9ce work key keep it up

Nice piece bro..
Have been following d story since last week.
I thinlk my vote will s my voice so av spoken for u.
You are the SUN kmj no darkness can cover ur shine
with 1 MIND i say 1 LoVE

lorretta u: YOUR FANTASY GIRL.
(by Lorretta)

with one lush 'come hither' look. . .
I've got you by the hook. . .
I'm your fantasy girl...
in your eyes i glow like a pearl. . .
you long for the nectar from my lips...
you delight in the gentle curve of my hi-ps...
of this ball i am the belle. . .
you're completely under my spell. . .
i smile at you,my cheeks dimple. . .
you wanna whisk me off. you wish it were that simple. . .
am i a figment of your imagination?. . .
NO! I'm as real as your ere-ction. . .

lovely poem
i love d ending
i like it cant say much cos am just a beginner.
Pasted my 1st poem last week
nairaland.com/1456866/short-poem

any poet in d house
its my 1st poem
pls i need constructive criticism to improve

Give me the smile i long 2 see
No matter what the situation might be
Even if the condition sting like Bee
It will be you &i
Even when gossips said i'll flee
I knew you'll never Agree
Even when the darkness makes u eerie
It has been you & i
In d wind i'll be d Lee
Cover you like coat made from Fleece
Then you smile at me in Glee
Be warm for you & i
All the problem that make u Dizzy
I will make sure i Bury
So we can make Merry
Let it be you & i
You smell so sweet as Jasmine
I'll show you the world in my Ferry
Don't bother abt d Money
We'll make it you & i
And when its time to Marry
The soldier will put on their Busby
Then i'll kiss the lips dat taste lik Berry
And forever you & i.........
tomiblack