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Poems For Review / It Will Be My Pleasure by toprate(m): 12:10pm On Mar 23, 2007
Pleasurable

The horrible beast
creating an extended havoc
that strikes an indeliable mark
in the mind of the living
Just how deadly can you be?

Forlon, you bring forth
as you extract an ocean of tears
that strip down these lovely faces.
hope get shattered
and dreams are blanked,
Hearts are broken
All because you had a hit

Neighbours frown in disbelief
at the eviction of a fish
from the ocean that encircle them
associates are dulled in shock
and family scream in torment
because of you messanger of misfortune
Are these the pleasure of your job?

I know someday
In the morrow, that is.
you'll aim your missile at me
and they'll groan over my passing

But it is good you note
how pleasurable it sounds
to exchange this world of chaotic unrest
with that of eternal rest.
Literature / Being Shown The Way Out by toprate(m): 11:42am On Mar 23, 2007
Unworthy

It pained so much
it burned my heart
I cried so bitterly
but shed concealed tears

so unwanted it made me feel
that I considered myself a waste
how can I be so confered
with such degrading status?

I made an omision
that caused me my position
where on earth was my mind
when I acted like the blind?

Though my teas are unseen
they've made a pool in me
'cause my world knelt before me
when she pronounced me unworthy
Poems For Review / Re: Meeting Scare by toprate(m): 6:54pm On Dec 06, 2006
Yep thanks pal, for your comments.certainly, it's aboutan internet love with no pictures shared. You know how it is when you're about meeting a friend you never saw. especially when you have talked intimately on phone.
Poems For Review / Meeting Scare by toprate(m): 5:56pm On Dec 05, 2006
In blindfold I have seen a soul
Few miles from my soil
ignorant of her face,I still reach her
But my eyes itches to see her

Internet, being the veil
that keep us in contact
Two strangers from Adam
coming together, far apart

Faces never embrace
though ears have heard voices
And the minds seem friendly
with eagerness to unite their hosts

Today, I expect my veiled friend
with the exclusion of the veil
But I wonder what she'll feel
when our faces come to meet.
Poems For Review / Re: Stay With Me by toprate(m): 1:56pm On Oct 21, 2006
yes quite short but I thought it's precise. just talking about a lady giving her guy a red card cause she no longer can cope with the harsh situations. So the guy now trying to plead with her to stay, that things may be as they are now but there will soon be soccur. "in the morning there shall be light" I appreciate ur critical comment
TV/Movies / Re: Cuando Seas Mia: 'When You Are Mine' by toprate(m): 1:38pm On Oct 20, 2006
If u read my input well u will notice that I said I've seen it all. Infact to confirm that I'll tell u something, watch out for it.
It will at first seem like Diego is going to prison as the trials progress but eventually it will be Fabian.
Business / Who Has An Idea On Exporting by toprate(m): 5:03pm On Oct 17, 2006
please i have some products that i want to export is there anyone outthere who can put me throught the process
Poems For Review / Re: Stay With Me by toprate(m): 12:45pm On Oct 06, 2006
hey people aren't you checking out this poem. let me have your judgement of it.
Poems For Review / Re: Call it whatever! by toprate(m): 4:35pm On Oct 04, 2006
great lyrics
Poems For Review / Stay With Me by toprate(m): 1:45pm On Oct 04, 2006
It hurts (me) like a bee sting sad
stings (me) as salt on a wound
What a hell on earth? shocked
this idea of you leaving, bring-forth

You may have suffered here
but I suffered most
What if you stay tonight
In the morning there shall be light.
Poems For Review / Three Speeches On 2007 by toprate(m): 1:28pm On Oct 04, 2006
Nuhu: just the two of us wink
          You and I
          so it moves
          Here and there and here,
          you executed your bit
          Now, my turn

Noah: No No! grin
           That's no fair
           Three households we are here-ditto you
           So different we are together
           There you all had the mantle
           Round us each let it move
           Just the six of us-I move

Anonymous: True,
                     you who swallows the sun
                     in the south
                     had your bit done
                     You have a neighbour
                     who vomits it
                     plus another, in the delta
                     in between.
                     A chance they all deserve.

                     But why draw a difference sad
                     in this union of peace
                     Why cleave the unity?
                     the pillar that stands us.
                     Why make tomorrow
                     shaky for my like to face?
                     One to six
                     I sight no difference
                     Let come forward, the best
                     from all households
                     and chance the free members
                     of this diverse compound
                     to choose who
                     to direct their affairs.
TV/Movies / Re: Cuando Seas Mia: 'When You Are Mine' by toprate(m): 1:00pm On Oct 02, 2006
Hi,
I think some other guys have told u the circumstances sorrounding her going away from Diego but they didn't tell u about the name. The name Helena Olivares was given to her by the guy who took her to Paris,that was the name on the passport she used in going to Paris. On her return she decided to keep the name because she had to find a job premise on the fact that She's had "working experience overseas". In fact I've seen the whole soap on AIT. Feel free to ask any further question.

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