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Re: Rhymes by colors(f): 10:10pm On Feb 11, 2008 |
words, expression of thought are never enough heavily laden with emotion, i am thoughtless how can i make you understand, the waves are riding rough i am defeated, indeed i am less |
Re: Rhymes by angelempy(f): 2:42pm On Feb 12, 2008 |
i wish we were still in those days when we slept alone in the bays with our two eyes closed and our doors firmly opened our hearts merry and our souls in no hurry we cooked with so much curry so we wont end up scurry but those days are gone with the wind for we are now left alone in the wild its so bad to find that we are in one bind please bring back those pleasant days and moonlight nights when the only shelter is the cloud and the moon gives off life though we lack all the pleasures yet our lives are full of treasures please give us those days agone |
Re: Rhymes by ifyalways(f): 6:40pm On Feb 12, 2008 |
. . .when am down to nothing God is up to something ! when its over my head its under Gods feet ! @cooljoe,luv ya style. |
Re: Rhymes by cooljoe(m): 10:08am On Feb 14, 2008 |
Nothing guarantess a great future, like a great future, one cannot feature, in a future, that one can't picture, guys pls keeep your dreams alive by picturing your great future. @ ifyalways thanks dear, i like posting here, i love rhymes. |
Re: Rhymes by cooljoe(m): 5:30pm On Feb 14, 2008 |
You are so fine, I want you to be mine, on this valentine, lets have a date, by eight, its going to be filled with fun, say yes and make me a son-of-a-gun, be my val. |
Re: Rhymes by colors(f): 11:14pm On Feb 14, 2008 |
the first tuesday before friday is usually my pay day but i get broke even before the D-day its not my fault i just like to shop on E-bay not a very good thing if i may say but i cant help it if it makes me feel okay my friends tell me to stop but i say NAY! its my life and i'll live it my own way |
Re: Rhymes by Gamine(f): 11:28pm On Feb 14, 2008 |
'hmm This whole Valentine thing The day finally comes and i get nothing Guys promise me everything Yet i never end up with something See Gifts, Teddies,cakes and Victoria's secrets Whats a gal to do End this continuous flux and be Discrete!! |
Re: Rhymes by angelempy(f): 10:59am On Feb 15, 2008 |
hmnm, what a dry day it was all hype and no pay but what am i to say all those fuzzy dudes and their effusive crudes oh dear why should i complain when all the guys dont come plain since no one bought me any gift i have to give myself a soul lift and be careful to stay adrift with all my heart, i say happy val to myself and all those giftless rhymers. HAPPY VAL |
Re: Rhymes by BTT(m): 5:48pm On Feb 15, 2008 |
colors: Believe it This' the best Of your text Tha've seen. Happy Val My pal |
Re: Rhymes by BTT(m): 6:08pm On Feb 15, 2008 |
angel_empy: @ ANGEL & All I've seen quite some Vals And I've met some cool gals I've been to the Isles And I've met unusual pals I've heard the frogs croak And I've seen the Priest's cloak - I've seen the good, Believe me, and the crook I've seen some food Yours sincerely, and a hungry cook. But why worry so A pig's good as a sow Angel, the breath of your soul Without a Val gift from a Princely soul Is God's greatest gift to tow Happy Val Rhyming pal |
Re: Rhymes by lekana(m): 9:41pm On Feb 15, 2008 |
I waited for this day so as to wine and dine with you so bad am not home to go out with you but before i left home i signed on the note of my art around nine to reach you nomatter what; cos you're so fine and nice to me this made me to assign today for you to define and design this lovely note to you which has inclined my spirit so high cos you're mine Happy Val. |
Re: Rhymes by cooljoe(m): 12:16pm On Feb 16, 2008 |
Her eyes burn bright, even in the darkest of nights, when I look at her, I like what I see, He who made Abraham, surely made thee, though she scolds me sometimes, for not making the best use of my time, I know she's very true, when she says I love you. I'll give her my coat of gold, even if it means I die in the cold, no tick or art, can diminish the love in her heart, she showers love on the rich and poor, she cares for the girl next door. One day I'll take her to Aberdeen, so she can fulfill her childhood dream, of visiting Scotland, a country of high and lowlands, The most important thing I've learned, as far as I am concerned, is to always love, cherish and adore my MOTHER. |
Re: Rhymes by meexteriox(m): 2:02pm On Feb 16, 2008 |
[center]colours, i think you are da'bomb sorry, not like in da tomb all you ladies are doin us proud i can't b'liv wat i found guys, u are not left out i tell you, without any doubt some are talented y some look rented still, i'm happy to be here though, not to dare rhymes are easy, time is shorte prose has never been my forte this is mine hope it will be worth a dime the minutes mock my writing block i want to bid each ticking clock to stop the ticking and to lock you may ask if you note why the lines i just wrote are not broken by ryhme into rows[/center] |
Re: Rhymes by ACAN(m): 2:20pm On Feb 16, 2008 |
[center]Love at times can be futile Putting all one trust in a girl Its painful any time I think about my ordeal I love this damsel damned so much Everyway I helped lift her touch I held the candle for her till it burnt out without hush Gave her every thing one could think off Didn't know she would one day take off I gave her the pride a princess deserved Treat her like an angel, taught she was reserved Its painful sometime I wonder if loving someone is wrong Or is it an experience to make man strong Or a path that sails man along With a heart of good song While trying to purge the differences And still love despite these nemesis[/center] |
Re: Rhymes by meexteriox(m): 7:11pm On Feb 16, 2008 |
[center]color, your rhymes so full of grief sometimes even more brief; makes me wonder or rather ponder; what could be wrong even when you sound so strong; you paint a pathetic picture and the answer to the future; you state so vivid this makes me livid; you rhyme with so much ease this makes me please; but your constant distress makes me a little restless; could you please confide maybe i can provide?; listen, from a sincere heart this is not tit for tat; wishing you the best and not trying to be a pest.[/center] |
Re: Rhymes by colors(f): 8:32pm On Feb 16, 2008 |
meexteriox i dont know why i write so sad but pray tell me is it so bad? i find that despair gets me inspired it's still a mystery my writing gets admired a part of me is really happy and bright but for some reason the other side gets me to write i think too many people focus on the cheerful side of life but what about the pain, hunger and strife? |
Re: Rhymes by colors(f): 8:48pm On Feb 16, 2008 |
BTT thanks |
Re: Rhymes by lekana(m): 9:35pm On Feb 16, 2008 |
Still not Believing I still find it so hard to believe that you're not going to be mine Cos you're so fine and nice to me. It’s so bad I couldn't define my love to you, In a refined way. Just like yesterday When we use to wine and dine together I felt it will continue like that Not knowing God has designed a place for you And now you're far away That I can't even see the sign of your sunshine. I won't afford to play a lady for a dice again Cos this has really declined my spirit so much. But this is not the right time to resign Cos I can still fall back on line If God wants to be precise. I need someone's advice to put me back on the track As I feel like finding a device To take me to where she resides Cos am paying the price of silence And won't let it happen twice. Cos if it does, I will have to slice myself Call myself a "swine" that needs to be beheaded at the shrine of Ogun For being a *****. |
Re: Rhymes by meexteriox(m): 12:49am On Feb 17, 2008 |
[center]color DON'T QUIT when things go wrong, as they sometimes will, when the road you are trudging seems all uphill, when the funds are low and the debts are high, and you want to smile but you have to sigh, when care is pressing you down a bit, rest, if you must-but don't you quit, life is queer with its twists and turns, as every one of us sometimes learns, and many a failure turns about, when he might have won had he stuck it out; don't give up, though the pace seems slow- you might succeed with another blow, success is failure turned inside out- the silver tint of the clouds of doubt- and you can never tell how close you are, it may be near when it seems afar; so stick to the fight when you are hardest hit- it's when things get worse that you mustn't quit![/center] |
Re: Rhymes by angelempy(f): 11:06am On Feb 17, 2008 |
my God, meexte ur rhyme is awesome. where did u get such a cool idea from. oh well here's my ryme for today its a long way from here how so dare i want to get there to conquer my eering fears shedding my eyes from so much tears little things we see and sultry words we hear can make our hearts soar we live in the days when success is measured by the amount of your recess how deep you see the future it so far depends on the texture of your dream, and how u nuture to get there u must not rush fight hard to keep the hush but never tire to push if u must get that brush to the top of your dreams |
Re: Rhymes by akiro(m): 1:23pm On Feb 17, 2008 |
[center] angel empy i appreciate that with all my heart we are all contemporaries there is only a difference in our memories yours is simply amazing correct me if you are not an amazon listen, i'm not just praising, your work, i've been appraising please, keep it up you might just get the coveted cup and to you other ladies i just have to say this you've all made me proud dish out, where it all abound[/center] |
Re: Rhymes by meexteriox(m): 4:12pm On Feb 17, 2008 |
Angel empy, i mistakenly posted the upper reply through a friend's username (also a nairalander). I stumbled upon this ryhme i wrote years back during NYSC in Jos, hope you enjoy it. They found me in Kuru A pleasant little town close to Bukuru; They found me living in a shaded brick home In a wide avenue with trees like dome; They found me alone Frantically battling with a chicken bone; They found me living a comfortable life Certainly not one short of rife; They found me looking very lean though, i still appeared clean; They found me after tedious and difficult search After four years of dead ends and endless research- But they found me, |
Re: Rhymes by lekana(m): 4:36pm On Feb 17, 2008 |
West City Rhyme Competition for 2008 Welcome! Welcome!! Welcome!!! A Policeman enters the competition room and said YOU’RE UNDER ARREST Oga Police? Give me chance because I dey do one test right now said Js No way said police I know you have come to arrest me said Js And so? said police So I suggest you don’t arrest me now, You can come for me after the screen test said Js I dey drag you go station said police Okay…I arrest my case said Js Now in Station Wetin happen said D.P.O He dey resist arrest said police No Oga D.P.O…said Js So what happened said D.P.O He said he arrested me because am the best said Js Best for wetin said D.P.O For the contest wey I dey do said Js Which kind case be this said D.P.O Release the guy make he go rest said D.P.O Thank you Oga; God bless you said Js… Out of Station Oga Police? said Js Wetin, sebi he don free you now? GO! said Police Okay…said Js GO! Said Police Oh! God…this man request don come to pass said Js He no let me manifest my mission finish well well said Js Pin pin pin (bus sounding) Go joo…I no dey go west this time said Js Pin pin pin (bus sounding) I go enter the next east bus said Js Pin pin pin (bus sounding) East! East!! East!!! (Akwa Ibom) said conductor Make I enter this bus to try my luck for east said Js End of the sequel |
Re: Rhymes by meexteriox(m): 5:30pm On Feb 17, 2008 |
[center]Lekana dear i don't think i can bear your input so far rendering it threadbare; our ryhming thread please, don't dread; just an advice don't make it look like a vice; could you ryhme more that's what is meant for; hope you comprehend so we don't leave you behind.[/center] |
Re: Rhymes by ifyalways(f): 6:59pm On Feb 17, 2008 |
Lekana and others,you guys rock ! moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee pls |
Re: Rhymes by opiororo1(m): 11:05am On Feb 18, 2008 |
Colors, ur rhymes are so real that i'm tempted to strike a deal though i'm not so good at rhymes yet i promise u motivational lines that might keep u standing on whatever you are doing stay cool and alive while u read from my rhythmic archive No condition is permanent Though it may seems persistent. You may not be convenient At the moment But keep being patient To come across ur God-sent. Don't try to relent On Your commitment Though the road may be rough and bent. Don't be despondent As to quit your establishment Cuz this may destroy ur destined achievement Don't consent To the evil ways others went Instead be prudent With ur talent To invent things of great enjoyment For the whole continent. Ur effort may seems spent and solvent Yet remain consistent Standing by what is ur talent Though u could do with little and helpful adjustment. Though all comments May not always be good judgement Yet don't feel incompetent. Good compliments Will complement your accomplishment But it could also make u overconfident Which might be at ur detriment. Lastly,your movement At any moment Should be aimed at improvement. Hope it makes sense but if u think it doesn't well i'll take no offense cuz to me i feel it's just a hint |
Re: Rhymes by colors(f): 11:19am On Feb 18, 2008 |
you sound familiar opi- ororo do you happen to be an ozo? if yes then i'm impressed salient points you have addressed i definitely will take no offense very well said, i will surely make reference but right now i'm under a lot of strain so from a reply i must refrain but i definitely will get back to you when the time is due |
Re: Rhymes by meexteriox(m): 12:16pm On Feb 18, 2008 |
[center]color do you reside in warri? then i need not worry; now distanced could be shortened our scope further broadened; you still under strain? could you please relax the brain; or, could we relate? to enable us cogitate; honestly, i do love that from my innermost heart; anywhere in oil city will simply be a beauty.[/center] |
Re: Rhymes by princesa(f): 5:06pm On Feb 18, 2008 |
hi to the newcomers and the peolpe who i know a beautiful rhyme flow means everyone is talented and need a homer (coutesy princesa) |
Re: Rhymes by BTT(m): 6:53pm On Feb 18, 2008 |
The place to be Is nowhere But here You see |
Re: Rhymes by colors(f): 8:47pm On Feb 18, 2008 |
ODE TO MY HEART part 1 you and I strangers previously unknown brought together by facebook, messenger and phone its been less than a month but feels like eternity you've already got me thinking marriage and maternity your voice, your words, theres a connection, its real theres no denying this emotion we feel you have another, you told me, i know i hate her already, can't you let her go? how can i overcome this addiction what i feel for you is now my affliction strange i know, but your eyes, they speak to me your voice like a potion just wont let me be this is so crazy we have never met before but with you i can be anywhere, even Darfur hope you feel what i feel i'm slowly dying 'tis true love, i swear i'm not lying help me! please someone call 911 i'm wounded, cupid's arrow, i know he's the one |
Re: Rhymes by ACAN(m): 9:01pm On Feb 18, 2008 |
i see valant men blowing there trumpet this remind me when i read macbeth everyman his shield held abreast fighting battles,no rest every rhymes echoes above the clouds alas my brothers ,even the lads you all should keep rhyming till the end like our country we need to defend |
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