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Re: Rhymes by meexteriox(m): 9:09pm On Feb 18, 2008 |
I see your smile And all seem worthwhile, In your eyes, there is light To brighten up my dark night, You are gay and you fill my life with joy I'm like a child with a new toy, Very excited and curious But sometimes destructive and furious, Thank you so much for your love It's like a nice soft warm glove. |
Re: Rhymes by meexteriox(m): 9:31pm On Feb 18, 2008 |
Dedicated to the memory of my friend FRED Here lies Fred Who was alive and is dead Had it been his father I had much rather Had it been his brother Still better than another Had it been his sister No one would have missed her Had it been the whole generation Still better for the nation But since 'tis Fred Who was alive and is dead- There's no more to be said. |
Re: Rhymes by meexteriox(m): 9:48pm On Feb 18, 2008 |
One of my earliest rhymes, long back, enjoy. TORTOISE He committed a sin And thought he was never seen; The long arm of the law Caught him and brought it to fore; He was brought before a judge Which he attempted to dodge; He was thrown into a cesspit Which all deemed fit; He was there a long time And never complained of the smelling mine; When he saw someone coming To release him in the morning; ''Hurry'' Tortoise mouthed ''The stench down here is unbearable'', he shouted. |
Re: Rhymes by colors(f): 9:59pm On Feb 18, 2008 |
meexteriox, i feel you |
Re: Rhymes by lekana(m): 10:15pm On Feb 18, 2008 |
meexteriox: thanks meex, i got your point.I will make some improvement.Well,am still an amateur poet so you won't blame me that much. Thanks anyway for the comment, for pointing out points that needs to be corrected.Some read and have decided not to correct. Thanks, you will see more that will be better. |
Re: Rhymes by lekana(m): 10:19pm On Feb 18, 2008 |
My Hood Life is so rough in my hood The abode of woods called home Full of rude souls and hoodlums Surviving in this neighbourhood Takes so much discipline and policy To achieve a good life. I always think If I can leave the suburb area Because I’ll miss the rough faces That blazes all day Like the burning furnace But I need to go on with life |
Re: Rhymes by opiororo1(m): 10:48pm On Feb 18, 2008 |
@COLORS Well i don't happen to For i am not an ozo Neither am i an oro, But if u say so I wouldn't say no. As for the strain, don't let it get u down the drain cuz i know u've got the brain. Hence, be patient for the rain That'll bring u relief from ur sorrow and pain. I'm happy u're impressed cuz 4rm ur words i sensed u were a bit stressed And decided to make my advice expressed Hoping to make u refreshed. stay blessed and have enough rest, Giving God the rest While u do ur best. |
Re: Rhymes by opiororo1(m): 11:06pm On Feb 18, 2008 |
@ COLORS Well,I don't happen to. For i am not an ozo Neither am i an oro. But if u say so I wouln't say no. As for the strain dont let it get you down the drain because i know you've got the brain. Hence ,be patience for the rain That'll bring u relief from your sorrow and pain. I'm happy you are impressed. From your words ,I saw u were a bit stressed And i decided to make my advice xpressed Hoping to make u refreshed. Stay blessed and have enough rest, Giving God the rest While u do your best. |
Re: Rhymes by opiororo1(m): 11:34pm On Feb 18, 2008 |
Early this morning I needed to get a call going I started with MTN But ended trying till it clocked ten I tried using my brother's CELTEL, Only to an unknown well Did my effort fell. I ran to a phone booth using RELTEL But what the problem was, i coudn't tell. A friend of mine gave me GLO But glo couldn't make it's pride glow Cuz my call couldn't flow. I tried using MULTI-LINKS Which couldn't offer the tiniest of links Instead i thought they've got a jinx. I opted 4 STARCOMMS But their stars have been eaten by worms Next on line was CELLCOM But the croaky sound i got suggested tom-tom And i wondered where d network came from. The last network i tried was ICALL, Infact there was no service at all. Frustrated,I headed back home And guess who i sitting on a foam The person for whom i have had to roam. (true but a little exageration) |
Re: Rhymes by darf(m): 12:54am On Feb 19, 2008 |
Chia!ororo ur lines too follow, uve really smacked dose fellows like d mask of Zoro, do u know all dey do is just to switch from '80 to '70 and xpect us 2 keep scratchn like people wen don kolo. |
Re: Rhymes by meexteriox(m): 9:24am On Feb 19, 2008 |
@Lekana i appreciate your person for taking your lesson; just take it easy when you are not busy; to enable it flow i tell you, all will follow; you've good poem sense but no ryhme presence; practice makes perfect to have good effect. |
Re: Rhymes by meexteriox(m): 9:51am On Feb 19, 2008 |
@colors your sudden silence or are you on the fence? on issues raised by me or i should let you be? oil city is where i am close to the dam so you are a litigator? cause am an auditor; deny it if am wrong please don't make me look strong; really want to meet you when the time is due; hope you are feeling me cause i'm trying to be me. |
Re: Rhymes by meexteriox(m): 9:58am On Feb 19, 2008 |
@opi ororo you have a way with ryhmes that gives me the smiles; more grease to your elbow please, don't use the arrow; could you unleash more even the hardcore? |
Re: Rhymes by cooljoe(m): 11:08am On Feb 19, 2008 |
meexteriox, colors, opi-ororo, You guys rock, nice ryhmes, nice lines, top draw, absolute top draw. |
Re: Rhymes by angelempy(f): 1:55pm On Feb 19, 2008 |
watz up rhymers, u are all doing great in ya rhymes. kudos to colors, acan, princessa, etc. keep da flag flying. when the world looks down on me i look up to behold him at his home when i have nothing to pay i look up to him for a say when its hard to go on i look up to him to lead me on |
Re: Rhymes by colors(f): 3:17pm On Feb 19, 2008 |
ODE TO MY HEART part 1 you and I strangers previously unknown brought together by facebook, messenger and phone its been less than a month but feels like eternity you've already got me thinking marriage and maternity your voice, your words, theres a connection, its real theres no denying this emotion we feel you have another, you told me, i know i hate her already, can't you let her go? how can i overcome this addiction what i feel for you is now my affliction strange i know, but your eyes, they speak to me your voice like a potion just wont let me be this is so crazy we have never met before but with you i can be anywhere, even Darfur hope you feel what i feel i'm slowly dying 'tis true love, i swear i'm not lying help me! please someone call 911 i'm wounded, cupid's arrow, i know he's the one |
Re: Rhymes by opiororo1(m): 10:24pm On Feb 19, 2008 |
To all rhymers; A STORY FOR THE NITE On a dark and lonely night with nothing as a source of light i trod a path full of granite. Suddenly,i saw a flash of light. Turning to my right, guess what engaged my sight. A shadow knight! : Initially i wanted to throw up a fight but then i couldn't gather enough might the reason for which i knew was fright. By intuition i took to my heels and then i saw i was down a hill. Instantly,i began feeling ill for by his looks he was out to kill. Running with all courage i could muster i looked back and saw he was getting closer. Increasing pace i ran faster but with what lay farther i knew it was over. About ten steps further i saw to my horror,a river with nothing to cross over. Approaching,he let out a laughter one i've never heard so sinister and so i began to shiver. A dead end,it tended to seem everything looking like a film Shaking,i let out an awful scream Waking up, it was only a dream. ! GOOD NIGHT HAVE A NICE DREAM |
Re: Rhymes by lekana(m): 5:43am On Feb 20, 2008 |
@meexteriox thanks for the encouragement |
Re: Rhymes by lekana(m): 5:48am On Feb 20, 2008 |
He's an Answer When I needed a CLUE He came to my RESCUE No one was there for me When I needed FOOD He did GOOD to me No one was there for me I ran HELTER-SKELTER but He got me a SHELTER No one was there for me When I needed someone AROUND He was being FOUND No one was there for this whole thing And I KNOW When I’ll need to SOUND to the world He'll definately provide the GROUND For me to display my talent Who is HE? MY GOD |
Re: Rhymes by cooljoe(m): 11:16am On Feb 20, 2008 |
colors:My word, this is nice. Am feeling you sister. |
Re: Rhymes by meexteriox(m): 5:55pm On Feb 20, 2008 |
@cooljoe thanks cooljoe i wish i had enough dough; i would have given you though without much ado; all the same i'm looking for fame; or i die in shame and not without blame; listen, i'm only joking please, don't go poking; and don't call the police cause i didn't give you any notice; see ya wouldn't wanna delay ya. |
Re: Rhymes by meexteriox(m): 6:14pm On Feb 20, 2008 |
@lekana certainly, there is an improvement without any debasement; just keep on trying before you know, you will be flying; to the top of ryhming without even miming; note, i'll be on the look out if you ever want to lose out. cheers remember, no beers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Re: Rhymes by ACAN(m): 9:08pm On Feb 20, 2008 |
@lekana rhyming is not a liability but for one to show his ability its true they say practice make perfect with your words rhyming effect at first it might look small like insect i tell you, you are one of the ellect in rhymes forum despite the content creative, educative and cogent this forum is really picking up fast poets rhyming with good contrast hope i have the paste to keep up so occupied but still i don't want to flop keep it up lekana am still sipping from your cup got to go now, my times up |
Re: Rhymes by lekana(m): 5:36am On Feb 21, 2008 |
@ meex and acan meex, you make me smile, my HOD to supervise my work acan, thanks |
Re: Rhymes by lekana(m): 5:42am On Feb 21, 2008 |
@meex anyway, i hope to improve so that you guys can approve my rhymes cos i do not want to be removed from the thread but to groove with you guys I'll move to the next level to prove myself to you |
Re: Rhymes by colors(f): 10:47am On Feb 21, 2008 |
lekana i admire your determination all needed is a little more coordination rhyming is quite easy as you can well see there's nothing to it, its just like ABC from what i've read you're almost already there good work i say, it's good to have you here meex and acan and everyone else hi |
Re: Rhymes by colors(f): 11:10am On Feb 21, 2008 |
a friend of mine has asked me to post this its not my work its all his he could have done it himself but from nairaland he's had a ban this is his first try, comment on it if you can!!!!!!!!!!!!!! @colours true but sad words from colours just hope love shows you some honours life is full of shit, and can leave you with a frown dont just let it play you, and take you for a clown every passing second is another light of hope just make sure you hold on and climb up life's rope |
Re: Rhymes by BTT(m): 1:46pm On Feb 21, 2008 |
I'm back! Sometimes time makes us slack. . . I see Colors' yet unbeaten Lekana's brandishing his piston And Acan is rolling his pen Meex' ensuring his hen comes to pen Here we are and yet to be ten Opiororo came to the screen, screamed and scrammed Cooljoe made his point, slammed the door and jammed And all the Rhyme Weavers here look as if programmed I am only happy to be back into the fold, I hope it's not crammed Again, Every Rhyme Weaver in the house I hope you will always remember each time you browse That somebody cherishes your prose |
Re: Rhymes by lekana(m): 4:49am On Feb 22, 2008 |
@ colors thanks colors for your comment too i have seen that it needs determination for me to overcome the frustration inasmuch i can rebuild my foundation then,my relation with you guys will take me to a good location so that i can receive your admiration . , I think there was no concentration in my work all this while and has not given me the room for an explanation in my conversation with you guys and now the dedication is there which will take me to my destination and never let your expectations be high as i have not gotten so much inspiration some days ago because of my occupation which involves so much operations and navigation of departments Presenation is all i do most which hasn't given me the room for relaxation because there are regulations guiding our work in our organization na so so safety and security orientation for here oooo but the transportation to home is not as stressful as that of lagos with great acceleration all day like the situation of people in china with so much population. I am preparing for office and i hope you can feel my vibration with this little formation, Have a good day colors,meex,acan,and the rest of the house. |
Re: Rhymes by opiororo1(m): 9:56am On Feb 22, 2008 |
Thinking of you meexteriox you sound as ur name suggest,mysterious Your rhymes with the strength of an ox hitting with so much adorable force. We enjoy you,all of us. Talking of you,Colors to your rhymes you add such flavors that it would be to my horror if your predecessors and ancestors were not great poets and authors. Oh you Cooljoe, a good rhyming skill i think you show if others permit me to say so. So far so good you tend to flow mind you everything isn't about dough. As for you,Lekana your mistakes you didn't try to ignore good for one who wants to learn more. You are not considered a bore. For these i give you a good score. As for me opi-ororo, i think i'm still trying to grow for many things i still need to know in order to be able to flow. All of your steps,i'm trying to follow. And to any other who thinks to be a rhyming nairalander your contribution i also consider well appreciated and in order. |
Re: Rhymes by aslan333: 3:09pm On Feb 22, 2008 |
happy and free in the shade of a tree; feeling the breeze basking in sunlight, there's never a dull sight happy and free soaking in the beauty of the world happy as the gazelles and the birds this worlds so lovely; Gods thinking of me it shows in everything i see beneath the night sky; under it i lay so many stars, oh what a sight that screams out to me each star sings out his praise telling me he always remains the same he shows he loves me, always thinking of me this vessel of clay through good and bad times; his by my side his there to scold me and always draws me close when i cry he watches every move i make and his always happy at my faith this worlds so lovely, i declare boldly am happy and free |
Re: Rhymes by chiogo(f): 12:45am On Feb 23, 2008 |
Came to d literature section to see bout book-readin' Didn't know it's gone hip hop, folks are all rhymin' I'm a book-lover and also a lover of hip hop So let's get this poppin' and never stop Both books and rap music inspire me a great deal When i do them, it feels like havin' a nice meal I've read/listened to thousands so my words flow like a river So don't be surprised to see me back here wit even more power. |
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