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Will You Forsake The Lord? (2) (3) (4)
Forsake Me Not by luvkia(m): 2:09pm On Aug 11, 2012 |
Inside this night that never comes and the opaque of lots that shelter me inside the narrow veins in my troubled heart and the thoughts of you that governs me I cry like a nightingale and bury your love in the pearl of my hope. Hear my cry and listen to the waning sound of my heartbeat. You are the limit to my unending drought. Let my pains sink into the glamor of your smiles and the pureness of your life. Or let there be no day nor night inside the sweeten craziness of your love but forsaken me not in it dooms. |
Re: Forsake Me Not by tuchi2: 8:10am On Aug 12, 2012 |
Niceone |
Re: Forsake Me Not by luvkia(m): 10:12am On Aug 13, 2012 |
@tuchi tnx for d comment |
Re: Forsake Me Not by Linusclark(m): 7:56pm On Aug 16, 2012 |
Nicely done. Your poem doesn't love contrived; the rythmic flow of sounds made it simple and easy to decipher... Besides, the enjabment is also an added advantage... Good work! |
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