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Reborn by 40fied(m): 4:18pm On Aug 29, 2012 |
REBORN It's the birth of a new day 24 hours long time to make things right enough of doing wrong yesterday's gone gone with the wind today's a happy song the world hears me sing so to everyone who's been hurt by me I pray thee, lower your gun this is a new me If I could go back in time bring back yesterday trust me, I'll press rewind and change destiny 40fied. |
Re: Reborn by Nobody: 11:06am On Aug 31, 2012 |
40fied: REBORN Straightforward! The absence of nuances makes it less engaging though, at least that's what I think. |
Re: Reborn by 40fied(m): 11:36pm On Sep 02, 2012 |
This was intentional my friend, besides, in Neo-Poetry, the absence of "nuances" is permissible. This is the new-age. Poetry is more soothing when the words sound like they could fit into a song. |
Re: Reborn by Nobody: 9:30am On Sep 05, 2012 |
40fied: This was intentional my friend, besides, in Neo-Poetry, the absence of "nuances" is permissible. This is the new-age. Poetry is more soothing when the words sound like they could fit into a song. I'm sure it's permissible. I was considering the quality of forgetability. A poem that doesn't take in the depths is easy to forget. That's nice sometimes. In fact, I think that the best poetry are such as can be light and deep at the same time. But depth is what gives poetry its essence. The new age might actually be in need of a new age lol |
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