REBORN
It's the birth of a new day
24 hours long
time to make things right
enough of doing wrong
yesterday's gone
gone with the wind
today's a happy song
the world hears me sing
so to everyone
who's been hurt by me
I pray thee, lower your gun
this is a new me
If I could go back in time
bring back yesterday
trust me, I'll press rewind
and change destiny

40fied.

40fied: REBORN
It's the birth of a new day
24 hours long
time to make things right
enough of doing wrong
yesterday's gone
gone with the wind
today's a happy song
the world hears me sing
so to everyone
who's been hurt by me
I pray thee, lower your gun
this is a new me
If I could go back in time
bring back yesterday
trust me, I'll press rewind
and change destiny

40fied.

Straightforward! The absence of nuances makes it less engaging though, at least that's what I think.

This was intentional my friend, besides, in Neo-Poetry, the absence of "nuances" is permissible. This is the new-age. Poetry is more soothing when the words sound like they could fit into a song.

40fied: This was intentional my friend, besides, in Neo-Poetry, the absence of "nuances" is permissible. This is the new-age. Poetry is more soothing when the words sound like they could fit into a song.

I'm sure it's permissible. I was considering the quality of forgetability. A poem that doesn't take in the depths is easy to forget. That's nice sometimes. In fact, I think that the best poetry are such as can be light and deep at the same time. But depth is what gives poetry its essence.

The new age might actually be in need of a new age lol