Hope is found in despair.there can neva be hope without total despair,in our time of despair there is hope and in our time of hope there is despair.they say hope is hard 2 find in despair but despair is easy 2 find in hope.hope exist as a very thin line dat only wen u take time 2 luk closely dat u see dat there is hope.in life the eye sees manytins bt recognise sumtins.d spirit sees hope while d body feels fear.our fear is nt despair bt we feel fear in our despair.many pple in the bible xperienced despair,pple lik Job,ELIJAH and David.bt in all wat they went through they always called on God 2 see them through.in despair depression is inevitable,so pray n b hopeful

Hope is found in despair.there can neva be hope without total despair,in our time of despair there is hope and in our time of hope there is despair.they say hope is hard 2 find in despair but despair is easy 2 find in hope.hope exist as a very thin line dat only wen u take time 2 luk closely dat u see dat there is hope.in life the eye sees manytins bt recognise sumtins.d spirit sees hope while d body feels fear.our fear is nt despair bt we feel fear in our despair.min the bible xperienced despair,pple lik Job,ELIJAH and David.bt in all wat they any pple went through they always called on God 2 see them through.in despair depression is inevitable,so pray n b hopeful

More than fifty percent of this has error. I assume English is your second language. An Agent, or Publisher. would reject this work after reading half the first sentance.
Do not be mislead..if you self published, you would meet with rejection from readers. You have a good story, and I can tell you love to write. You must take the time to master English. Give yourself one, or two years...you can do it.

eamon skin: Hope is found in despair.there can neva be hope without total despair,in our time of despair there is hope and in our time of hope there is despair.they say hope is hard 2 find in despair but despair is easy 2 find in hope.hope exist as a very thin line dat only wen u take time 2 luk closely dat u see dat there is hope.in life the eye sees manytins bt recognise sumtins.d spirit sees hope while d body feels fear.our fear is nt despair bt we feel fear in our despair.many pple in the bible xperienced despair,pple lik Job,ELIJAH and David.bt in all wat they went through they always called on God 2 see them through.in despair depression is inevitable,so pray n b hopeful

Publishing a story with shorthand notations in a public forum is already a minus for you.

Take your time type words correctly...even your spellings are poor...don't be in a haste to express yourself.

Also your first 5 lines is a typical example of tautology...avoid repeating yourself and go straight to the point...most readers aren't patient enough, so when you begin to beat around the bush, instead of hitting the nail on the head, they'll just dump your story for a much better one.

I believe you can do much better.

Good luck.

Sowie i dont Knw much abt publishing but am ready to learn.
Thanks for the advice