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Re: ... by Ishilove: 8:28pm On Jul 21, 2013 |
Nice piece. 'Brilliant student', huh? In secondary school my teachers thought otherwise Jus kidding There are inconsistencies in the plot. In ishilove's update, Mazi oozes sexuality, but in your update he is a 'cool looking guy.' LarrySun is a lecturer who is away in Ogbomoso while ishilove is his graduate assistant. In your update, Larrysun is present and a student... We should endeavour to stick to the storyline to ensure consistency. Nice job 1 Like |
Re: ... by Nobody: 8:36pm On Jul 21, 2013 |
Ishilove: Nice piece. 'Brilliant student', huh? In secondary school my teacherß thought otherwiseexactly, some inconsistency here and there, Uju_sizzle in some1's update is a cool headed gal, and in some1 else update is s a huge woman that is d head of d market women. |
Re: ... by yemi2plus(m): 8:43pm On Jul 21, 2013 |
Ishilove: Nice piece. 'Brilliant student', huh? In secondary school my teacherß thought otherwiseDear Ishilove, can you please break down this grammar? Thanks, Yemi2plus |
Re: ... by yemi2plus(m): 8:45pm On Jul 21, 2013 |
Ishilove has a point, writers should stick to the storyline. |
Re: ... by Oluwaconquer(m): 11:45pm On Jul 21, 2013 |
... Nice. |
Re: ... by Dygeasy(m): 11:50pm On Jul 21, 2013 |
I'm Trying To Block All Loopholes In The Story. Writers Are Creating Plots Outside The Forum. All Monikers Are Meant To Be Students But The Writers Are Making Some Monikers Other Things. If Only Subsequent Writers Built On The Foundation Posts, The Inconsistency Would Have Been Minimal. Other Writers Should Try As Much As Possible To Steer The Oversteering Steering Wheel To Safety. Thanks All! |
Re: ... by UjSizzle(f): 1:38am On Jul 22, 2013 |
lol nice one Dygeasy..your last paragraph was wicked . And yeah, you guys should stick to one plot. There would be a plot if you actually gave everyone a rundown..somewhat background of the story before dishing out chapters. Pls work on this, no one wants to read in circles. Keep up the good work . |
Re: ... by EzePromoe: 2:53am On Jul 22, 2013 |
Dygeasy: I'm Trying To Block All Loopholes In The Story. Writers Are Creating Plots Outside The Forum. All Monikers Are Meant To Be Students But The Writers Are Making Some Monikers Other Things.It doesn't matter if the fault is from anybody. We all should follow the plot as stated by what HBG, Mazi, Ishilove. That's why its necessary to read that of others before posting. 1 Like |
Re: ... by Ishilove: 6:50am On Jul 22, 2013 |
Eze Promoe:I agree completely |
Re: ... by Rapmaestro(m): 7:42am On Jul 22, 2013 |
Sweet Jeez |
Re: ... by xynerise: 7:46am On Jul 22, 2013 |
Eze promoe, I am a student in the story and not Skydeep's husband. . Skydeep's boyfriend is preferable |
Re: ... by Idowuogbo(f): 8:01am On Jul 22, 2013 |
xynerise:Antelopia, abeg abeg no pour me early morning spit mehn! Msteeew! @eze Read b4 u post or...better still, if u are high on ink, DO NOT POST. |
Re: ... by Emiru(m): 8:30am On Jul 22, 2013 |
Flow my manh, yhu got that one there. Yhu always on point. Dygeasy, i'm feeling yhu big time...LOL NairaLand av about 950,000 legit peepz, sticking to a particular group might lead to reading drudgery' i think they should do what's on their mind. Besides, it wasn't pre-planned. 1 Like |
Re: ... by Ishilove: 8:44am On Jul 22, 2013 |
Idowuogbo:Lmao!! |
Re: ... by EzePromoe: 9:08am On Jul 22, 2013 |
xynerise: Eze promoe, I am a student in the story and not Skydeep's husband. . Skydeep's boyfriend is preferableWhere you were stated as Skydeep's husband was in a quote by Sexkillz. And since its just a quote, it could be easily disclaimed by the writer as people's mere illusion. Oya check this: People regarded Xynerise and his girlfriend as husband and wife, due to the fact that her level of submissiveness were only peculiar to wives. Do you now see that you've been worrying your head for no cause |
Re: ... by xynerise: 9:19am On Jul 22, 2013 |
Eze Promoe:You added that part just now? I no see am o |
Re: ... by EzePromoe: 11:26am On Jul 22, 2013 |
xynerise:I didn't include that in my write up, I was just saying that I could add that as a disclaimer as long as that was a quote by Sexkillz |
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