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Re: A Tour With A Ghost by midexz(m): 5:15pm On Aug 19, 2013
Enomasly, update coming soon... plainmirror, i see u bro...
Re: A Tour With A Ghost by midexz(m): 6:54pm On Aug 19, 2013
EPISODE 12

We left the hospital and headed straight to a place i was very familiar with and it was a cementry.

A cementary have been to several times in the past few months.

I asked why we were there and all she said was

"Calm down, you will know soon"

I calmed down but was tensed as i couldnt imagine what was next to be unveiled.

Few minutes later we stopped at a grave i was very familiar with.

A grave i still went to drop flowers on few days before then.

I opened my mouth but couldnt say a word and then she helped me as she turned to me and said

"You see this grave, i know you know who is lying in there and thats why we are here and the more reason i came to you"

Truly we were standing by the grave where my friend Dapo was buried but i still couldnt figure out why we were standing there at that moment and that was when i asked

"What has my friend got to do with this whole thing?"

She smiled and said

"You see your friend payed the wages of his sins against the innocent ladies in general as he enjoyed playing with their feelings and dump them as he like.

I met Dapo at a shopping mall one saturday evening where he walked up to me and made his feelings known to me claiming he loved me at first sight and would love to have me as his wife. We exchanged phone number and we departed.

We met later in a bar after we had both agreed on phone to meet there.

we talked about a lot of things and it was at that spot he made so many promices and swear he should die if hes playing with me.

We left the bar together that night and went straight to his house together and had a nice night together.

I only wanted to teach him a lesson by making him loose all he had but he changed my motive when he woke me up the following morning cursing and calling me different names as he sent me out of his house claiming he was drunk the previous night and that was why he took me home.

I was so angry that i decided to make him pay in a bitter way so as to clear one of the bad people like him off earth and more over he had said it himself that death should be his reward if he chooses to play me and that i did by hidding behind his illness.

So i brought you out here because i see you love hime as you never ceaze to bring him flowers evry month

And i believe this will serve as a warning to you and evry other men like williams, Julius and your friend out there that they should think twice before they venture into what may change their life for the worse because most people had lost their sanity in different ways just for a one night stand or sexual adventures as you may call it"

She stopped talking as i stood there and couldnt say a word as i was already shaking because i know i had already commited almost the same sin Dapo commited and i didnt know what wages await me but i prayed silently and hoped she would let me go as she had promiced earlier...
Re: A Tour With A Ghost by HumbledbYGrace(f): 7:04pm On Aug 19, 2013
angry I wish this Alisha could visit one guy I know, he likes beautiful things and anything in skirts.

Just kidding, still buffled that I am still hands on decks here...gorry stuff.

Midexz could you try proofreading before updating.
Re: A Tour With A Ghost by midexz(m): 7:29pm On Aug 19, 2013
HumbledbYGrace: angry I wish this Alisha could visit one guy I know, he likes beautiful things and anything in skirts.

Just kidding, still buffled that I am still hands on decks here...gorry stuff.

Midexz could you try proofreading before updating.

Oh! its a great honor that u still check around here and by the way u can pull dat ur frnd down here to see aw tinz can be if he slacks too much oo... thanx for d comment though..
Re: A Tour With A Ghost by HumbledbYGrace(f): 7:36pm On Aug 19, 2013
midexz:

Oh! its a great honor that u still check around here and by the way u can pull dat ur frnd down here to see aw tinz can be if he slacks too much oo... thanx for d comment though..
Nothing keeps me away from great talent, so you are on the same boat. smiley
Re: A Tour With A Ghost by midexz(m): 7:39pm On Aug 19, 2013
Thanks to everybody thats been following this story right from the beginning, most xpecially the few people that commented and as well the silent readers and all the guests that grace dis page..

Big shout out to humbledbygrace, Enomasly, Plainmirrow and evry body, u all are realy my inspiration... thanks and God bless..

watchout for d next update as its gona be d last Episode of d story jaz like i put it from d start that its goin to be a short story...

once again tanks to you all...

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Re: A Tour With A Ghost by HumbledbYGrace(f): 7:46pm On Aug 19, 2013
Pls finish tonight
Re: A Tour With A Ghost by midexz(m): 7:48pm On Aug 19, 2013
HumbledbYGrace: Nothing keeps me away from great talent, so you are on the same boat. smiley



Thanks a lot my beautiful sis... and once again i must confess ur comments has been a great deal in building and encouraging a new writer..

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Re: A Tour With A Ghost by midexz(m): 8:04pm On Aug 19, 2013
HumbledbYGrace: Pls finish tonight

Oops!!! Am so sorry sis, gat a low ba3 nw.. u knw aw PHCN can be na.. bt i ll do as soon as i charge....
Re: A Tour With A Ghost by HumbledbYGrace(f): 8:08pm On Aug 19, 2013
midexz:

Oops!!! Am so sorry sis, gat a low ba3 nw.. u knw aw PHCN can be na.. bt i ll do as soon as i charge....
hmmm, ok its fine.

Your welcome and thanks again.

Take care
Re: A Tour With A Ghost by midexz(m): 8:14pm On Aug 19, 2013
HumbledbYGrace: hmmm, ok its fine.

Your welcome and thanks again.

Take care

You too sis!

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Re: A Tour With A Ghost by midexz(m): 8:16pm On Aug 19, 2013
DEAR SINGLE GUY!!!

1)Dear Single Guy, Never let your broken
Heart seek revenge by
breaking another heart. Let God heal your
hurt and let Him “even
the score”

(2) Dear Single Guy, Sleeping with a
plethora of women doesn’t make you a
man. It actually shows you are still a boy
who’s lacking in self
control!

(3) Dear Single Guy, when you understand
that there is more to a
woman than just her physical appearance, It
is then you finally
understand a woman’s worth and
value.

(4) Dear Single Guy, you may not be tall, you
may not be dark, you
may not be handsome, you may not have all
the money in the
world, but you will always be perfect for the
one heart that’s meant
to love you

(5) Dear Single Guy, If your relationship was
built on sex then don’t
be surprised if it doesn’t last. True Love is
built on God not sex!

(6) Dear Single Guy, If you have a drama
filled relationship then
blame yourself because you are sure playing
a major role in the
situation!

(7) Dear Single Guy, Winning an argument is
not worth losing a
relationship

(cool Dear Single Guy, stop overlooking the
one your heart needs for
the one your eyes are attracted to.

(9) Dear Single Guy, Stop giving power to a
simple
misunderstanding; Small things should never
turn into big issues!
Control
your temper!

(10) Dear Single Guy, A beautiful face can
hide an ugly heart. Don’t
trust “looks” to tell you what’s right for

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Re: A Tour With A Ghost by HumbledbYGrace(f): 8:24pm On Aug 19, 2013
midexz: DEAR SINGLE GUY!!!

1)Dear Single Guy, Never let your broken
Heart seek revenge by
breaking another heart. Let God heal your
hurt and let Him “even
the score”

(2) Dear Single Guy, Sleeping with a
plethora of women doesn’t make you a
man. It actually shows you are still a boy
who’s lacking in self
control!

(3) Dear Single Guy, when you understand
that there is more to a
woman than just her physical appearance, It
is then you finally
understand a woman’s worth and
value.

(4) Dear Single Guy, you may not be tall, you
may not be dark, you
may not be handsome, you may not have all
the money in the
world, but you will always be perfect for the
one heart that’s meant
to love you

(5) Dear Single Guy, If your relationship was
built on sex then don’t
be surprised if it doesn’t last. True Love is
built on God not sex!

(6) Dear Single Guy, If you have a drama
filled relationship then
blame yourself because you are sure playing
a major role in the
situation!

(7) Dear Single Guy, Winning an argument is
not worth losing a
relationship

(cool Dear Single Guy, stop overlooking the
one your heart needs for
the one your eyes are attracted to.

(9) Dear Single Guy, Stop giving power to a
simple
misunderstanding; Small things should never
turn into big issues!
Control
your temper!

(10) Dear Single Guy, A beautiful face can
hide an ugly heart. Don’t
trust “looks” to tell you what’s right for
1000000000 likes.

You are so on point
Re: A Tour With A Ghost by midexz(m): 8:31pm On Aug 19, 2013
HumbledbYGrace: 1000000000 likes.

You are so on point

Tanks.. Single Ladies part coming soon

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Re: A Tour With A Ghost by midexz(m): 9:26pm On Aug 19, 2013
DEAR SINGLE LADIES!!!

(1)Dear Single Ladies, If you carry yourself
only to catch a man’s
eye then you probably won’t steal his heart!

(2)Dear Single Ladies, that degrading
lifestyle might get you a man’s attention for
the night, but I promise
you it won’t keep it for life.

(3)Dear Single Ladies, Your body is a
temple not a hotel; Stop letting men come
and go as they please.
Respect yourself or nobody else will.

(4)Dear Single Ladies, If you Dress like it,
Talk like it, Act like it and
Carry yourself like it; Don’t get mad when
they treat you like it

(5)Dear Single Ladies, You might be too big
for some, or too petite
for others but you’re the perfect size for the
heart that’s meant to
love you!”

(6)Dear Single Ladies, You’re beautiful;
Never let people who are
blind to beauty make you think any different.
Keep smiling and keep
being you.

(7) Dear Single Ladies, your pretty face may
get you a flirt, your
lovely heart may get you a lover but your
attitude will get you a man
who will stay with you forever.

(coolDear Single Ladies, Don’t let the fear of
loneliness make you
accept less than your worth! you deserve
better!

(9)Dear Single Ladies, your heart is not a
punching bag, stop letting
guys use it for target practice; Be wise,
Protect your heart!

(10)Dear Single Ladies, Never rush into
another relationship just to
get your mind off your past relationship.
That’s false healing!!!

(11) Dear Single Ladies, If you are not being
treated with love and
respect, then you need to check your price
tag. Perhaps you have
marked yourself down. It’s you who tell
people what you are worth
and how to treat you by what you decide to
accept!!
Re: A Tour With A Ghost by plainmirror(m): 9:37pm On Aug 19, 2013
@midexz you write-up is very interesting and suspense full despite †нэ smallsize

Perhaps there is room 4 improvement
Re: A Tour With A Ghost by midexz(m): 9:50pm On Aug 19, 2013
plainmirror: @midexz you write-up is very interesting and suspense full despite †нэ smallsize

Perhaps there is room 4 improvement

Thanks bro!!! Realy aprciate..
Re: A Tour With A Ghost by plainmirror(m): 9:54pm On Aug 19, 2013
I look forward to reading more of your interesting stories. Asuch inform we U̶̲̥̅̊я fans on any impending story dat is crafted by MIDEXZ
Re: A Tour With A Ghost by midexz(m): 7:21am On Aug 20, 2013
"Appreciate life itself even if it’s not a bed of roses. Contentment is not fulfillment of what u wish for but appreciation of what u have."... GOOD MORNING BEAUTIFUL PEOPLE...

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Re: A Tour With A Ghost by HumbledbYGrace(f): 8:36am On Aug 20, 2013
The morale of the story....wow dear I loved the ladies piece, thanks for a lovely breakfast.

I got your back wink
Re: A Tour With A Ghost by midexz(m): 9:53am On Aug 20, 2013
HumbledbYGrace: The morale of the story....wow dear I loved the ladies piece, thanks for a lovely breakfast.

I got your back wink

You welcome and tanks for getting ma back alwz... av a luvly day ahead...
Re: A Tour With A Ghost by midexz(m): 10:13pm On Aug 20, 2013
EPISODE 13

I was happy when she finally said

"Now you can go but dont forget my message to save the generations of your time and of those to come.

I wanted to talk but i couldnt as i hear different voices calling my name

I opened my eyes at once and saw people gathered around me

The first face i noticed was that of my fiancee or better still my wife as we are married already, next was my mum, my friend Kunle and i almost run when i saw my Dad as i thought i was seeing a ghost again and it was then it dawned on me i have been dreaming all this while.

The previous day had been my wedding day and i had gotten myself high that night so as to make my honey moon a very hot one, dnt ask me wat i took oh.

But it all got me in a wrong way as i slept off immediately i hit the bed and all effort to wake up by my wife changed nothing as i was busy enjoying my honey moon with a ghost while i lay there like i was dead

And the only reason they never gave up on me was because i was still breathing

And finally i woke up after my tour had come to an end but i still couldnt narrate my ordeal to them at that instant because i was so exhausted

I later told my family everything i had seen and promised myself i will make the world know and share my experience

And i never forget to rush out to check my car where i had parked it the previous night and i smiled when i saw it there and said to myself

"Thank God It Was All A Dream"

Like many people will say;

"Thank God Its friday"

And mind you my wife has not forgiven me as i spoiled our honey and had to f**k a ghost instead of her so am hoping you guys will help apologise

And dont forget to be careful about the way you go about with with ladies as they are not to be treated like a thrash.

Treat them like the goddess they are and never play with their feelings.

If you wont buy, then dont price as you must pay if you price...



*******THE END********

My great appreciation to all my beautiful readers both NL members and guest, those that commented and all my silent followers. Thank you all for following right from the beggining and for your support and comments as they realy serve as a great deal to me.... Please kindly let me know if there is any mistake or error you notice and i ll be glad to make corrections... watch out for my next story soon and i promise you wont be dissapointed... .thanks once again..

Follow on twitter @midexz nd i ll follow back..

.........PEACE!!!!
Re: A Tour With A Ghost by midexz(m): 10:13pm On Aug 20, 2013
And that will be all... Thanks everybody...
Re: A Tour With A Ghost by HumbledbYGrace(f): 10:31pm On Aug 20, 2013
Thank you
Re: A Tour With A Ghost by enomasly: 11:13pm On Aug 20, 2013
This cant be d end i feel like crying nuch tuale for u anyway ff midexz on point
Re: A Tour With A Ghost by midexz(m): 11:23pm On Aug 20, 2013
enomasly: This cant be d end i feel like crying nuch tuale for u anyway ff midexz on point

Am sorry bro.. i zd it frm d start dat its gon be short so lets all look forward to d next new story.... all d same thanks for ur support...
Re: A Tour With A Ghost by midexz(m): 8:38am On Aug 21, 2013
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**** Good Morning*****
Re: A Tour With A Ghost by Okonjoiweala(f): 4:04pm On Aug 21, 2013
Nice one
Re: A Tour With A Ghost by midexz(m): 5:09pm On Aug 21, 2013
Okonjo iweala: Nice one

Thanks

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