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Re: ***total Love*** by LogoDWhiz(m): 3:14pm On Dec 04, 2013 |
Now on FP... Congrats bro |
Re: ***total Love*** by D9ty7(m): 3:17pm On Dec 04, 2013 |
Mr T.Dan i am here to congratulate you on your success in hitting the frontpage. I am here with two personalities. 1. As a writer: i congratulate you for a job well done in writing stories that teach us lessons. Your participation on this thread is well appreciated. 2. As a reader: you kept me entertained with your stories and i pray i'll one day become a writer like you. Once again felicitation boss. |
Re: ***total Love*** by KingzPen(m): 3:19pm On Dec 04, 2013 |
Congratulations Boss... FP thingz... |
Re: ***total Love*** by Macdashwa(m): 3:24pm On Dec 04, 2013 |
Congratulationz |
Re: ***total Love*** by scaline: 3:29pm On Dec 04, 2013 |
nice write up but na copy rite in d case of two women draggin a son |
Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(m): 4:25pm On Dec 04, 2013 |
Fp? Abi I dey dream? I'm short of words, I don't know how to start thanking.. I just don't knw.. I'm more than surprised, just came online to comment on my pals' comments then saw I'm now on fp.... Firstly thanks to Almighty, the maker of me and you guys, and the one inspired to open this site.. I'm short of words and honourable mods: Mynd44, Obinnau.. My Bosses dt made me start writing: Repogirl, Princesa, Chistar, Frank 3.16 Thanks to my surest pals that has been following since my first story NO MATTER WHAT: www.nairaland.com/1421645/no-matter-what Florblu, Hameenat, Akinpelumi, Abbey, Heywhy.kum, D9ty7, Ozymog, Kingphilip Winnie, Zenie, Damex33 (my surest padis) TOTAL LOVE: FLORBLU, HAMEENAT, AKINPELUMI, ABBEY, HEYWHY.KUM, D9TY7, OZYMOG, KINGPHILIP, KINGZPEN, DELE-PAUL, ZOMBI2, HEYWHY.KUM, ABBEY2580, AKINPELUMI,ABIMBS, QUEEN XSTAR, FERKING, JUMZIE, WINNIE, MACDASHWA, BOLUGURL, SOREB, WINSALA AYOMIDE, PRINCEADEPOJU, OLLYBOY,EVAGOLDEN, ZENIE, DAMEX33, GAMESOUND, HORLAH, MIRACY, ICE4JEGZ..... *even if I 4got 2 write ur name, knw u escaped my mind, love u dearly.. I appreciate u all, u are dah best! Love u all! 1 Like |
Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(m): 4:37pm On Dec 04, 2013 |
shininglight: As interesting as the story is, I just wish u could add more creativity to it. I feel like am reading all those 70naira story books. Bland nd ordinary. Still good though. .... I'm not into writing as a profession and didn't attend art class neither do I know anything about literature. Just love writing so can't really be like those that are good at it... This really hit me.. Thanks though, really love u! I'll reply other comments later, just want to comment on this first.. Be back later! Really love u all.. |
Re: ***total Love*** by Abbey2580: 4:47pm On Dec 04, 2013 |
We are now on fp? Dan! Congrats!!!!!!! U deserve this! |
Re: ***total Love*** by Bolugurl(f): 5:03pm On Dec 04, 2013 |
...congrats Dan,i knew u wuld make it... |
Re: ***total Love*** by Akinpelumi01(m): 5:21pm On Dec 04, 2013 |
shininglight: As interesting as the story is, I just wish u could add more creativity to it. I feel like am reading all those 70naira story books. Bland nd ordinary. Still good though. Just finished checking ur profile just saw dt u've never written a story... Dnt criticize, learn aw 2 correct mistakes and encourage, I've witten a story b4 titled "love of my life buh never reached quatre b4 I stopped it, can't face typn and other stresses... Dose dt are writing, na job dem dey do.. Weldone DAN! Congratulations... |
Re: ***total Love*** by KingzPen(m): 6:03pm On Dec 04, 2013 |
I really don't know wah to say to you because if I start, I would end up wasting pages or even get a novel out of you but I seal my mouth and watch you comment such again... shininglight: As interesting as the story is, I just wish u could add more creativity to it. I feel like am reading all those 70naira story books. Bland nd ordinary. Still good though. |
Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(m): 6:04pm On Dec 04, 2013 |
KingzPen: Congratulations Boss... FP thingz... Thanks ma King.. U are dah best!!! |
Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(m): 6:09pm On Dec 04, 2013 |
D9ty7: Mr T.Dan i am here to congratulate you on your success in hitting the frontpage. I am here with two personalities. Macdashwa: Congratulationz Fenx ma bosses na u oh... U are just gr8! |
Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(m): 6:13pm On Dec 04, 2013 |
Hameenat94: Frontpage tinz.*dancing* update fast oh 2 congratulate us nd urself.e b lyk say na me ist c am oh Queen xstar: Congratulations dear! scaline: nice write up but na copy rite in d case of two women draggin a son LogoDWhiz: Now on FP... Congrats bro scaline: nice write up but na copy rite in d case of two women draggin a son Fenk u ma bosses! Na u wey make me ds ooh.. Love u all! Hameenat, I c u jere, don't worry, I go soon throw something |
Re: ***total Love*** by benibank(f): 6:25pm On Dec 04, 2013 |
Congrats on making FP! U really deserve it |
Re: ***total Love*** by Abbey2580: 6:39pm On Dec 04, 2013 |
Wao.. Waiting for d update u go use wash am 4 us ooh.. Abi? |
Re: ***total Love*** by heywhykum(f): 6:46pm On Dec 04, 2013 |
I don miss upd8s sha.. First tin first, make I come congratulate my boss 4 ds, you are talented, at least I've read two of ur works! Kudos! Congrats... Wen anoda update dey ceme now? #im expecting# |
Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(m): 8:17pm On Dec 04, 2013 |
-79- The six-cliques as usual met on the first day of the year for a get-together. Fredrick Charles was dressed in a black suite and a black pair of shoes, looking elegant. He entered into the relaxation center last. They started discussing with each person with a dish of food. 'Me get gist for you guys oh.' Fredrick uttered smiling at the quiet Peter. 'Why are you now smiling at me. You better talk.' Peter replied smiling. "Both of you have started now. What is it that is hard now? Faith said eating his food continuously. "FFO! Now, the issue is about the princess." He paused. "You don turn to home theatre wey dey pause! Fredrick talk!" He shouted. They all laughed. "Okay, he wishes to be the King." Peter laughed. "KING?" Dammy repeated and laughed. 'Don't mind Peter. Its just that..' He paused and continued smiling. "It seems you all aren't ready for this talk, let me bring up my topic..." Blessing was saying while he was interrupted by Fredrick. 'Em.. Its that I want to date the princess.' He concluded. 'Ehn.. What did I just hear? This is serious, our fredrick loves a girl.' Dammy laughed. 'Hmmn.. That's the reality sha.' Fredrick replied. Faith kept on eating, not bothering about what they were talking about. "Go and ask her out now. Its so easy..." Dammy smiled sipping from the cup. 'Should I?' He asked, turning and looking at them all. "Sure now." They echoed. •••• The princess and her friends were by the pool side holding their usual evening gists. The princess thought of bringing the issue of Daniel up between them and tap advice from them. "You see, this issue is getting worse. I don't even know what to do." The princess uttered. 'What is the Queen doing about this?" Bibi asked. "She said I should wait till we end our studies since we are all offering a four-year course." She replied. 'Its simple, we can deal with her personally.' Rachael suggested. 'Yes now. We can all do this, whatever we want, we must get.' Stella added. "Em.. What can we do?" The princess asked with concern. 'I have a suggestion for her.' Rachael quickly said. 'Really?' Princess moved closer. ... |
Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(m): 9:29pm On Dec 04, 2013 |
-80- They moved closer and started whispering to one another. "Let's give this work to Agent Six." Rachael uttered. 'Who are they? And pouring acid on that girl, won't be easy.' The princess pitied. 'Why won't it? We'll pay them off and they'll get the job well done for us now.' Rachel insisted. 'That's no problem, we will do it.. Anything for you my friend, it will be done.' Stella uttered. "Em.. I'm scared" the Princess was concerned looking scared facially. Rachael took a slight rest and sighed. "Don't you want?" She asked again. 'Alright, it should be done.' Princess concluded. *** The traditionalists got to the palace with different kind of strange things, looking angry. They came to hold a meeting with the King and were very serious and determined that they won't agree until the King hearkens to them. The King was so scared by all what they brought to him to scare him, he was told about how his father ruled the Kingdom and other Kings, his own shouldn't be a problem. They were doing this while Daniel was with Darasimi talking about how the next session would be. They'd be resuming by January 7th back to the school, its been Dan that has been helping her in all what she needs. Dan got a ping from the princess to come home immediately that the King was in a coma. He left immediately and on getting home met the princess and her friends gisting. He walked towards the pool angrily. "Don't just tell me you were joking!" He said angrily. 'Dan, don't start all that. Where do you always go? Come and sit with us, let's gist.' Rachael replied smiling and bubbling the gum she was chewing. "You these girls are bunch of fools, idiots! I was doing something important there, you just interrupted it!" He exclaimed. 'Huh? Fools? Us?' The princess stood up and walked towards him. 'Don't just move closer.. I don't need to tell you this, I'm off.' He uttered and walked out. •••• David got home after the hectic day, the farm work has turned him into another dimension, looking so tired and sick. He couldn't condone the hot sun and walked home. He got to his room and met the door locked. He wondered where his wife would have gone to. He walked to his living room and started hearing shouts from inside, as if some people are playing and shouting. He exclaimed his wife's name and walked to the door. Everything became quiet, he continued knocking on the door but no one could come out to respond to him. He sat by the door. ... 1 Like |
Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(m): 9:33pm On Dec 04, 2013 |
Dtz all 4 tonight, love to meet ur views about this story and comments. *Good or bad* don't worry, you won't hurt me. #love u all! |
Re: ***total Love*** by missterious(f): 10:40pm On Dec 04, 2013 |
Following |
Re: ***total Love*** by kojusoluwa(m): 11:29pm On Dec 04, 2013 |
Lovely |
Re: ***total Love*** by Ozymog: 11:45pm On Dec 04, 2013 |
No no no no no oooooooooooooooo...... Abeg com Ud8 I take God beg U T.Dan. U c na dis kain tin make me take brake so U go do plenty Ud8. By d way make I hail My Oga in D top CONGRATS on Ur FP. We Ur fans are proud of U. Keep it comin. Abeg no forget my own Lacasera or Matina U fit add puff puff or Kwolikwoli. More engine oil to Ur finger joint Oh 10q for remembering me, me is d brushing *blushing* |
Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(m): 3:11am On Dec 05, 2013 |
miss.terious: kojusoluwa: Lovely miss.terious: Fenkx ma bosses, you are welcome ere.. |
Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(m): 3:12am On Dec 05, 2013 |
Ozymog: No no no no no oooooooooooooooo...... Abeg com Ud8 I take God beg U T.Dan. U deserve it, don't worry about the update, another one will be updated ds mawnin... With love... #T.Dan# |
Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(m): 3:14am On Dec 05, 2013 |
##Typn## |
Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(m): 3:49am On Dec 05, 2013 |
-81- Shalewa became so afraid in the bedroom. Sammy summoned courage and came out after putting on his clothes. "Let me pass" he said and hit David's hand with his left leg so he would be able to move out, David stood up and them. Sammy gave David the beating of his life. If not for the intervention of his wife, Shalewa, he might have beaten him to death. Shalewa packed her things immediately and left the house, they turned him into an empty barrel. •••• Dan was at the entrance to their place. Gloria came out to open the gate for him, smiling. "Happy new year son." She wished and hugged him. 'Same here mum, happy new year. You are just getting more beautiful. You've never come to greet me in the palace and even greet the King, its not good oh.' He uttered cleaning his feet and walked into the house. "..eeeeh.. Bibi, how are you!" He quickly shouted and ran to her. 'I'm good bro, happy new year.' She smiled. "Abi na, we thank God. Its a really new year." He smiled. 'I should come to the palace? For what?' Gloria asked as she walked inside looking so beautiful. "Yes now. Since the King assisted us, you've never come to greet him and I'm not even sure if you've seen the Queen before." He replied. Gloria smiled and turned into laughter. She kept on laughing and staring at Daniel. 'You won't know, don't tell the Queen about me sha.' She added. "Hmmn? Okay don't worry. I'll do as you want, stand by your will." He smiled and laid on the sofa. 'That's means all Darasimi told me is true. This Queen can harm Darasimi too, even me myself. I must not reveal anything about my mother to her not even a bit.' He thought. He slept off on the chair he laid on, he phone was personalized to silent when he was tired of his whatsapp messages, he forgot to return it back to normal. The King had called him severally but he wasn't picking up. The Queen came out and thought it would be an opportunity to implicate Darasimi more where the King is. She started her lies. •••• Tony was in his car all alone, off to get some provisions that evening, he was on a fast speed because there were some places he still wanted to touch. He got there and started picking what he'd love to get, he was listening to the sales girls as they were playing. He was smiling, suddenly he heard. "Damilola, don't take that groundnut, it won't be funny oh!" He turned and peeped at them. "DAMILOLA?" He asked again. He picked all he could and got back into his car, still thinking. He remembered the issue of perfume he smelt and Damilola he just heard flashed back into his memory. He continued thinking but still didn't hit anything, he drove home and noted that name. ... 2 Likes |
Re: ***total Love*** by abimbs: 6:17am On Dec 05, 2013 |
We re moving forward. God is with us. Ride on T.dan. 1 Like |
Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(m): 6:37am On Dec 05, 2013 |
abimbs: We re moving forward. God is with us. Ride on T.dan. Fenx Boss! U are dah best! I feel u.. Mawnin all.. Updating soon! |
Re: ***total Love*** by heywhykum(f): 6:51am On Dec 05, 2013 |
Temitope Daniel: Still waiting 4 dt Boss... 9c work! |
Re: ***total Love*** by Hameenat94(f): 7:24am On Dec 05, 2013 |
Mawing y'all.waitin |
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