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Re: ***total Love*** by delepaul(m): 8:16am On Dec 05, 2013
I'm enjoying these
T.Dan..Fire on
Re: ***total Love*** by miss2895(f): 8:40am On Dec 05, 2013
Wow! I jst started readin tis yday nd i rily lik it. Pls update ASAP.
Re: ***total Love*** by mayor10(m): 8:55am On Dec 05, 2013
Please update nam..sum1 z dying here...ur story is lyk the magic flute that excites the king...pls update asap
Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(m): 9:18am On Dec 05, 2013
miss2895: Wow! I jst started readin tis yday nd i rily lik it. Pls update ASAP.


mayor10: Please update nam..sum1 z dying here...ur story is lyk the magic flute that excites the king...pls update asap


Yes bosses.. I'll start typing..
Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(m): 9:25am On Dec 05, 2013
Hameenat94: Mawing y'all.waitin

##Typing##
Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(m): 9:58am On Dec 05, 2013
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He got home and was somehow sad, he dropped his car key and sat in the sitting room. His two children rushed down to come and greet him, his wife was still heavily pregnant then. She came down to smiling, to welcome her husband.


"Dad, what's wrong with you?" The daughters were asking.


His wife came down, looking very beautiful with the Ghana weaving hair on her. She was smiling only to discover that her husband wasn't happy. "Haha. " She exclaimed and walked properly beside him. "What's the matter?" She asked with concern written all over her.


'I'm okay. Just trying to remember something.' He replied.


"Remember? About that issue?" She asked.


'Yes.' He replied and smiled at her. He cuddled his daughters "don't worry dad is fine. Go to your rooms and rest." He smiled to them.


The girls left for their various rooms while Tomilayo was still with him, also thinking.


"I heard a name today.. Damilola. I've been trying to remember what the name is all about but can't at all." He said.


'Okay, let's start like this. She was your sister, fianceé, cousin, nephew, niece, mother or what?' She emphasized.


"I don't know." He replied.


••••


The students resumed back to their various schools. The princess and her friends were after bringing Darasimi down. They called the guys that will execute the work for them. They concluded that they will carry out their operation on friday night.


They concluded on money and everything, those guys were exactly the same guys that kidnapped Tony. They still exist and still work together hire killing people for money.


"She's gonna regret this!" The princess smiled and crossed her legs.



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Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(m): 10:03am On Dec 05, 2013
I'll upd8 anoda one soon, ba3 z low as usual plz, wan2 get means of charging.. Thanks!
Re: ***total Love*** by heywhykum(f): 10:06am On Dec 05, 2013
Wah did dey naw do 2 ha.. Come and continue ds Dan! I'm scared.. *crying* come and update ooh! Go and charge!!!!!
Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(m): 11:02am On Dec 05, 2013
Now charging.. ##Typing now##
Re: ***total Love*** by KingzPen(m): 11:11am On Dec 05, 2013
I like your spirit... Always ready to satisfy your readers... Hmmm... I envy you Oooo...
Temitope Daniel: Now charging.. ##Typing now##
Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(m): 11:35am On Dec 05, 2013
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The deal was completely stricken, minds were at rest that Darasimi won't escape that friday, it might even lead to her death, they didn't care.



6:30pm Friday evening.....


Daniel was in his room with his friends gisting. He got a call from the students' Fellowship coordinator. He was told there would be a fellowship vigil and must at least bring two people. He was amazed and told his lazy friends about it who laughed it off. He decided to ping Darasimi about the fellowship vigil.


'I can't come for vigil oh..the lectures were tiresome today.' She replied


"Please now, it won't be easy for me alone and I must bring at least to people." He replied.


'And must they be ladies?' She teased smiling.


"Come if you want to.. Haha, please Darasimi." He pleaded.


'Okay, where should we meet?' She asked.


Daniel smiled happily. "Okay, around the library." He replied.


'I'll be there shortly, we shouldn't walk at night.' She uttered and smiled.


'Alright. Thanks lots of love.' He smiled.



••••


08:30pm Friday evening....


The guys got to the front of the room and knocked. It was one of them that walked in asking for Darasimi. They were surprised a male could come to their hostel to ask for Darasimi.


'She's not in.' The room mate replied.


"But everyone is on bed right now. How come she's not here.. You are lying." The guy smiled.


'Please who are you? I said..'


"Just show me her bed.." The guy insisted.


She pointed to her bed and met a girl sleeping on it. He smiled and walked towards the place. All other girls kept on watching them and busy with what they were doing, all wondering about what he was up to. He whistled and other guys broke in, everyone was afraid and couldn't face them. They walked to the bed the guy was showed and sprinkled acid on her....



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Re: ***total Love*** by Macdashwa(m): 11:41am On Dec 05, 2013
*Mouth agape*T.Dan cm n continue o.mre wisdom 2 ur brain
Re: ***total Love*** by cheruv: 12:04pm On Dec 05, 2013
Sweet story telling I must confess of you tokpe..but your storiz are getting shorter and takes longer to come out embarassed
Re: ***total Love*** by Lakeshizu(m): 12:12pm On Dec 05, 2013
grin grin grin grin oga come and finish it o angry angry angry
Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(m): 12:17pm On Dec 05, 2013
Macdashwa: *Mouth agape*T.Dan cm n continue o.mre wisdom 2 ur brain
cheruv: Sweet story telling I must confess of you tokpe..but your storiz are getting shorter and takes longer to come out embarassed


I'm sorry my bosses, trying all my possible best to get thing on the right track, I promise to update as much as possible today, it isn't to make it so long, its been wiping off since morning, just typing and typn over and over again, I'm still sorry. My Bosses!
Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(m): 12:18pm On Dec 05, 2013
Lakeshizu: grin grin grin grin oga come and finish it o angry angry angry


Me no be oga oh.. cheesy you are ma oga na, I'm just writing this story line to please everyone(all ma bosse)! Na u sir! Twale! grin
Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(m): 12:21pm On Dec 05, 2013
...Typing now....


Come check for 1:00pm, I wud av updated grin grin no worry.



Where z Winnie, Florblu, Akinpelumi, Abbey, em.. Kingphilip, ollyboy, prince Adepoju... Need u all!
Re: ***total Love*** by otunlexy(m): 12:43pm On Dec 05, 2013
Dude,u actually got me glued to my fone for 2days nw....u deserve a medal.thumb up,more grease to ya brain....jah bless u

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Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(m): 12:54pm On Dec 05, 2013
otunlexy: Dude,u actually got me glued to my fone for 2days nw....u deserve a medal.thumb up,more grease to ya brain....jah bless u


Fenkx Boss... Amen & u 2...
Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(m): 12:58pm On Dec 05, 2013
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The guys left after they've completed their job. The other room mates rushed to check on Adeola who was sleeping on Darasimi's bed that was washed with acid. The girl was quickly rushed to the hospital and attended to. The guys went back home happily that they've just completed their good job while Darasimi was busy with prayer in the fellowship meeting.


The princess and her friend celebrated all night when they heard that she had been rushed to the hospital, not knowing it was Deola, one of the girls in the hostel and not Darasimi.


SATURDAY, 5:00 AM


Darasimi was escorted by Daniel to the hostel. The princess and her friends were angrily outside then, they've discovered that it was Deola that was the victim of their bad intentions towards her.


She climbed up the stairs and greeted them, they never answered but were all standing and facing the last floor looking at Dan to verify if she went out with Dan all night. They neglected her as she went in, she entered into the bedroom and met everything scattered. Nobody was in, she walked out looking so scared. "What happened?" She quickly asked the princess and her friends.


They pretended as if they didn't hear all what she had been saying and started their discussions. She brought out her phone and met twenty-eight missed calls on it, she wondered what went wrong that her phone didn't ring out. She remembered she had to personalize her settings to silent so that she won't be the wave in the fellowship.


She quickly dialed Funmi's number to confirm what happened but it wasn't going through. She rushed downstairs, her eyes were although heavy she got down and tried another room mate's phone number but it wasn't going through. She rushed to a room downstairs to ask of what happened, she then heard about all that happened. She rushed to the hospital to confirm.



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12:05 PM SATURDAY AFTERNOON.


Gloria and Funke were together at Gloria's place to discuss and play together. They usually see to discuss but they've seen each other for somehow long. "The Queen still doesn't know we are alive. That woman just killed Tony just like that." Funke uttered.


'Urgh..' Gloria laughed out.


"Haha. What's funny now?" Funke stared at her.


'Just imagined something, Tony should just come in now.' They both laughed.


'Its true, I'll take to my heels instantly.' They both laughed.


"I even saw his passport with Daniel. He said the King gave him to keep." Funke uttered.


'King? I don't even like how my son is living with that Queen, human lives are nothing to her.' Gloria complained.


"Its just a matter of time, when he becomes the King now.." Funke uttered.


'Who? My son.. He can't marry that princess oh!' They both kept laughing.


"You are desperate about this?" Funke smiled.


'Sure, that useless Damilola that calls herself a Queen. She can do anything to protect her useless dignity.' Gloria added.


"Is it me that Is useless?..........." A voice uttered from the door.


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Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(m): 1:01pm On Dec 05, 2013
Is it longer now

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Re: ***total Love*** by heywhykum(f): 1:10pm On Dec 05, 2013
Temitope Daniel: Is it longer now


Loooooooooool! Dan!!! Come and continue, you deliberately stopped there, its longer, make it longest cheesy
Re: ***total Love*** by otunlexy(m): 1:22pm On Dec 05, 2013
Temitope Daniel: Is it longer now
No...guy if dey sack me for my office,I go hold u responsible ooo...wen is d story gonna end nw...*md arrives**sneeks fone unda ma locker**checking for more updates*
Re: ***total Love*** by kingphilip(m): 1:43pm On Dec 05, 2013
Temitope Daniel: Where z Winnie, Florblu, Akinpelumi, Abbey, em.. Kingphilip, ollyboy, prince Adepoju... Need u all!
present sir ride on boss wit ur gr8 work
Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(m): 2:08pm On Dec 05, 2013
kingphilip:
present sir ride on boss wit ur gr8 work


Hmmn.... Longest tym. Fenk u ma #Boss!
Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(m): 2:09pm On Dec 05, 2013
otunlexy:
No...guy if dey sack me for my office,I go hold u responsible ooo...wen is d story gonna end nw...*md arrives**sneeks fone unda ma locker**checking for more updates*



Haa.. No make him sack u oh.. I'll update soon.. Let's c by 5:00pm sha.. grin
Re: ***total Love*** by PrinceAdepoju(m): 2:24pm On Dec 05, 2013
Temitope Daniel: ...Typing now....


Come check for 1:00pm, I wud av updated grin grin no worry.



Where z Winnie, Florblu, Akinpelumi, Abbey, em.. Kingphilip, ollyboy, prince Adepoju... Need u all!
Temitope Daniel: ...Typing now....


Come check for 1:00pm, I wud av updated grin grin no worry.



Where z Winnie, Florblu, Akinpelumi, Abbey, em.. Kingphilip, ollyboy, prince Adepoju... Need u all!
Temitope Daniel: ...Typing now....


Come check for 1:00pm, I wud av updated grin grin no worry.



Where z Winnie, Florblu, Akinpelumi, Abbey, em.. Kingphilip, ollyboy, prince Adepoju... Need u all!
still here with you bro, gud job....and congrats for hitting FP !
Re: ***total Love*** by Djsmart1: 3:02pm On Dec 05, 2013
Temitope Daniel i must say u're vry gud. It a nyc series, so so lovely and touching
Re: ***total Love*** by ollyboy009(m): 3:54pm On Dec 05, 2013
Temitope Daniel: -84-





"Is it me that Is useless?..........." A voice uttered from the door.


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See gobe ooooo.........How com? hop its not d queen sha!. Abeg Dan u better stop dis suspense and update quickly. Sorry I ddnt comment for some time nw,just kinda busy. Thumb up bro,still watching ur back.
Re: ***total Love*** by Hameenat94(f): 4:07pm On Dec 05, 2013
Hmmmmmm.ki lo ku ba yi?
Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(m): 4:13pm On Dec 05, 2013
ollyboy009:
See gobe ooooo.........How com? hop its not d queen sha!. Abeg Dan u better stop dis suspense and update quickly. Sorry I ddnt comment for some time nw,just kinda busy. Thumb up bro,still watching ur back.
Hameenat94: Hmmmmmm.ki lo ku ba yi?
[quote author=ollyboy009]
I don talk say 5 grin, don't worry. I'm sorry 4 d suspense bt its necessary, without it a story is useless...
Re: ***total Love*** by prettycee(f): 4:54pm On Dec 05, 2013
saw this on front page today. Read through it, omo u are good

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