Temitope Daniel: I need suggestions plz. This piece will end 2mao by God's grace just want to ask dt sud I start the new story 2dae "LOVE & WISDOM" ?


THANKS.

strt d new 1

its either his real daughter or his twin brother

Three people are involved....its either tony, dara or daniel

abt ur other story u can jst finish the this one 1st and den drop the link of the new one tomorow

kingphilip: Three people are involved....its either tony, dara or daniel

abt ur other story u can jst finish the this one 1st and den drop the link of the new one tomorow

Thanks bro.. I'll do just that!

Thanks all 4 d suggestions. I'll start the story tomorrow morning but open the thread and drop somethings tonight. Wish to end it this year 2.


Updating latest 7:45pm.


Thanks.

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The Queen continued thinking. 'Who is this person?'


••••


Winnie and the philosopher got to Tony's place after receiving his call before he left the hospital that his wife gave birth and he'd like to visit the palace the following day. He called them so they would sort things out on their traveling plans for the following day.


The gate was opened. Winnie thought within her that maybe the issue of his wife giving birth to a son has made him forget to close the gate. They walked in happily after knocking severally and met the inhaler on the center table in the living room. 'Is anyone at home at all?' Philosopher faced Winnie.


"But that's the inhaler that signifies the presence of Mr. Tony at home." She replied.


'Alright. Mr Tony!' The man shouted his name.


Tony had heard the shouts and added to his shouts in the kitchen for them to notice he's there and couldn't just get to the living room to get the inhaler. "Something is happening." Winnie thought and dropped her handbag, straight she went to the dining and finally to the Kitchen.


"Mayor! Get the inhaler!' She screamed on seeing him on the floor. The kitchen was already stuffed with the smoke of the food on the cooker & has added to his attack.


The philosopher rushed to the kitchen easily after seeing how Winnie walked there, it was easier to locate the Kitchen than looking for it. He was with the blue inhaler, Tony was rushed out of the smoke and was aided. Straight to the hospital after the first aid.



••••



The Queen ordered the guards to get the greatest hunters of the Kingdom immediately. They must go and quickly search the forbidden forest to quickly get Dan and Dara. One of them should be the one that will save the King. She thought.



6:55pm...



The hunters got to the palace. Dressed in their various hunting clothes, ready for the forest.


The Queen granted their warrant and ordered their departure immediately. The King must be saved.



7:10pm...



The hunters got to the exit of the Kingdom after a quick race. The forest guards refused on letting them into the forest. "Some people were sent there today, I can't allow you to go there with them." One of them uttered.



"The Queen sent us, the King is seriously ill and we must get those people out of that place." One of the hunters convinced.


"Not possible!" One shouted.


7:20pm...


Two of the hunters got back to the palace to inform the Queen about the issue of the guards. The Queen got into the car with them and they drove there.



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Anoda update still coming tonight... #eating#

Gulder ultimate search season 11 wan start for daniel and darasimi head o...the king will be saved btw 11:50-11:59
the secret must be revealed too soonest

kingphilip: Gulder ultimate search season 11 wan start for daniel and darasimi head o...the king will be saved btw 11:50-11:59
the secret must be revealed too soonest

Lol.. U are d best man!

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7:26 pm...



The hunters finally got into the forest. They were six in number, with their giant touch-lights. They started searching and dismissed one another to start searching the forest, the way passed is unpredictable.



••••


7:34 pm...


Tony woke back alive. He sat on the hospital bed staring at Winnie and the philosopher. "I'm so much grateful for this." He smiled looking at them.


"Its nothing. We just have to thank God. Which is hospital is your wife?" Winnie inquired.


"Em.. HIS GRACE." He replied.


Winnie and Mayor, the philosopher looked at each other and laughed. "We are in the same hospital then." He replied.


They all stood up and was about leaving the ward when Tony fell on the floor and started foaming out things from his mouth suddenly.


Mayor and Winnie were surprised. Winnie rushed to the reception immediately to get the nurses who will assist her to get the Doctor that will attend to him. Everything was changing and getting out of hands.


7:39pm...


Tomi was informed about what just happened to her husband. She was panting on the bed she was laying on, she sat down still looking around. "Someone should just come in and lead me there. At least I don't know the way, this hospital is too big to be searching for someone." She cried.



She dialed the number of her pastor some second later and got him informed about the incidence. "I never knew it would be you. I've seen a great vision that must be......"




••••



08:11 pm...



The hunters were already scattered in the forest searching for Daniel and Dara. They all were thinking that they must have been devoured by wild animals or killed by some spirits.



They continued searching. 12:00 pm is the deadline!





The Queen and her daughter were with Ray in the room, both crying profusely and praying that those two were found and gotten to the palace within the range.



11:04 pm...



The Queen was getting more and more uncomfortable and covered with sweats. The palace had turned upside down then, no one could sleep, all awaiting the arrival of Darasimi and Daniel. Everyone sobbing that they'll loose the King.


11:37 pm...

Dami got inside the car and ordered the driver to rush down to the Kingdom's exit. They waited there, all hoping to see the hunters come out of the forest.


11:41 pm...



They finally got there, watching here and there. They should just come out! The Queen was shouting, with her heart beating very fast.



12:00 pm...



It was 12 pm sharp. The Princess' phone call was received.



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kingphilip:
thats after u o

Me? Wu me be? Na u jere ma ***BOSS***

oh boy! see suspense,..i almost throw way my phone wanting to see what d princess said,abeg nah,i'm too young for dis.#heartbeatingfast#

O boy u wan make i blow u from here abi

Dis is a gr8 suspense abeg ud8 fast

The call was that Tony and the pastor is in the palace and the king is getting on well....erm its going to be very interesting the grand finale i guess

U ar hav done a great job so far but pls i beg u dat tmrw upload evrytin @ once if possible or upload dem @ rily close intervals. Thank you

One word for the las update. Suspense!!!..
What time are you uploading tomorrow.

I'll update b4 6 o'clock 2mao... I'm feeling sleepy, I'll update 2mao.

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The Queen's phone started ringing. She neglected the call as she saw 12 o'clock on the phone, already weeping so much. This time, the hunters were coming out of the forest with Daniel and Darasimi. "These fools are already late!" She shouted as she hooted so that they'll notice her presence and walk faster.


They all got into the car immediately they noticed her and rushed to the palace. The Queen was still sweating despite she's in the atmosphere of air conditioner. The Princess called her again. She picked it, "he's dead right? I'm dead!!" She exclaimed and ended the call.


"Can't you run, is the car telling you not to press the throttle?" She scolded the driver.


They finally got to the palace. The palace gates were wide open. No one was outside, the Queen couldn't contain it any longer, she jumped out of the car.



WHAT NEXT?



She met the guards in the living room and maids, all happy wining and dining. "Are you all mad!" She shouted and rushed upstairs.


She got to the front of the King's door and met Tony standing. She freezed, and shivering. "You can go in." She pointed.


The Queen rushed into the room and met the King seated. She stood in front of him with surprise all over her. Tony walked inside the room also.


"Raymond." She called stretching her hand forward.


Daniel had rushed upstairs too, at the front of the King's room.


The King was staring at the Queen and was smiling continuously.


"How are you now?" She asked as she quickly sat beside him.


The King demonstrated that he couldn't talk. Tony cleared his voice so that his presence will be felt. "Let's go to the living room your highness." He uttered, staring at the Queen.


They walked to the palace. The King couldn't talk. Daniel dodged on noticing them coming out. He was still surprised and didn't understand all what was going on. He walked into the King's room and looked around. He saw his mouth organ on the table there, he picked it and dashed downstairs.



He stood by the dining and peeping. The Queen was shouting at the guards then. "What's the celebration about, can the King talk!" She kept shouting.


Everyone kept quiet right away. The Queen was addressing them and still tilting her head to see Tony. "What is he doing here. How come? What happened?" She kept asking.


The pastors came inside the palace from outside. They've been discussing and praying for the King. "The mouth organ." Tomi's pastor uttered.


He came to "HIS GRACE" hospital and told them that for Tony to get well, he must also make sure he sees his twin brother. Although, they were all surprised about who the twin brother is, until the pastor told them its the King.


The guards were looking at one another. "Wahala dey for palace today oh, wich one be mouth organ again bayi in this matter."


The Queen was staring at the pastor as a new face. Daniel came out from the dining and walked to the living room with his bloody and tattered cloth. He stood in between everyone and showed the mouth organ.


"Who is Daniel?" The Pastor asked again.



Everyone kept staring at the pastor. No one understood them.



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The Queen pointed to Daniel and he started playing his "magic mouth organ". As he was playing, everything was changing, the King's health started turning around, till everything changed and everyone took their rest.


••••
The next morning...

Tony was in a hurry to leave for the city because of his wife but was delayed. Winnie was with her through out the night. The pastors didn't allow it, they said they must settle everything at once.


Funke and Gloria rushed to the palace on hearing Daniel and Darasimi are back. They were allowed into the palace this time and they barged in.



••••


David was also on his way to the palace to plead with the King to get him his wife and children and he has repented. He was also present in the palace that morning as Omitola was also invited to come.


The issue started.



"You were there when the delivery took place ma. Is it true the King and Tony are twins?" The pastor asked her.


"Yes.. They are."


Everyone became quiet and surprised. The King himself filled with surprise, looking at Tony, while Tony was also staring at him, smiling.


"It was planned years back, when the Queen wanted to give birth that Tony will be given to the Queen's friend and demonstrated that way so that they won't be killed." She explained.


Raymond sighed.


"Everyone thinks I'm dead, but you're all wrong..." Tony said.


"Y.. Yea... At this junction I'll confess." Damilola said sadly.


"Confess?" Ruth stared at her.


"Yes.. I was the one that sent the hired killers to kill him so that he won't disturb me about the pregnancy I was carrying then." She explained.


"Preg what?" The King repeated and was looking at her.


"Yes. T.. Tony I...is.. Ruth's father." She stammered out.


"Huh?" Ruth stood up at once. Daniel was smiling where he was. "See princess." He thought.


"You don't mean this!" The King shouted.


"I also tried to kill Gloria and Funke, but weren't found. Since then, they've not entered this kingdom." She uttered.


"You this woman!" Raymond shouted.


"I'm sorry." She started crying.


"So I'm an empty barrel without a successor." The King's eyes turned red and he rested his back.


"You have a successor!" Funke and Gloria walked in, they've been by the door since.


"This is serious!" Daniel laughed from his seat. Daniel and Darasimi rushed to their mothers and hugged them happily.



"A successor?" The King repeated staring at their faces. "Funke! Gloria!" He shouted and stood up, the Queen and Tony also stood up.


"What's happening?" The King was looking around.


"Darasimi is your daughter." Funke said.


"Darasimi?" The King stared.



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oga cme finish dis story o

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..."Yes, she's your daughter." She uttered.


"How come.. Come here, my dear." The King called Darasimi.


"I was pregnant back then, but couldn't bring myself to you. I don't want to disturb your home and even don't want to inherit death from the Queen." She uttered.


"So.. I'm confused. You are Daniel's mother too?" The King faced Gloria.


"Yes." She replied with her head down.


"God is mighty!" The pastor smiled and shook his head.


The Queen continued crying. "Oh My God! Funke.. Gloria!" Tony smiled from his place.


"This is awesome. How did you escape death too?" Funke asked smiling.


" A man assisted me from where I was dumped, from there, I forgot everything about this Kingdom totally before God helped me to be able to remember."


"This God is great!" The pastor repeated.


"No doubt about it then, Daniel is the crown prince." The King uttered.


The Queen was still heavily crying.



"I want us all to sit down. We need to talk." The Pastor said and stood in between them.



"I won't use any bible verse but I want you to know some things. We are all humane.. We love partiality. The rule of this Kingdom is that twins should be killed but when it came to the issue of the Queen, you scraped it. God hates people who are partial. We must always do things with equality, although NO MATTER WHAT the partiality is, if God doesn't wish it, it won't come to pass. If God had wanted the King and Tony to be killed, they would be killed too. God does things because of something.. You may always think that why are you in poverty, why are you in problem.. God understands. There was a man striving to buy a car but God told him its not yet time. He made sure he stole so that he could buy a car, on his way back home to show everyone the car, he died in it. He knows the best time for us and best thing.



You don't tell God this is what you want. What you want may be bad but before you, its good. Always say "LET YOUR WILL BE DONE" rather than saying you want this and that. To you Tony.. God deliberately saved your life because of the fulfillment of this day and so that his name would be glorified. Those twins that caused havoc in this Kingdom then were given by a god to the woman that gave birth to them, that was why everything turned around. Twins aren't bad!



The Queen, its because you aren't in God. You could have told the former King who you are in love with and fight the battle for your love, that's a TOTAL LOVE, but because of wealth, riches, fame, you deserted everything about love and killed people. You never tempered justice. God hates it!


To you the King, because of anger, you almost destroyed a soul that now saved you. God hates anger so much, I Proverbs 14, he talked about it so much through his servant, Solomon. Anger destroy things and has nothing to offer you! To forge forward, have a TOTAL LOVE for everyone and desert bad attitudes. You almost lost your soul too if not for God's mercy and the good things you've been doing.


To you all Daniel, continue with the TOTAL LOVE you have, it was the one that prevented death for you also. You would have died and become a history of the forest if not for the TOTAL LOVE you have for everyone. That's what God loves and there are rewards for it. You fought for your love and you aren't the Queen who gave up her love because of wealth and riches. This is your reward, that's the Queen's reward.


To the princess and her friends who believe eliminating anyone will let you get whatever you want but you are wrong! God kills, creates! If you kill, you have blames before God. That's your reward too.



To you that beat your wife and desert your wife because of a woman. A promiscuous man, an adulterer, that's your reward too. You worked severally to get everything for this your wife through hard ways but at the end, see your life. Your anger got a daughter's spinal cord disturbed."



"I'm sorry Gloria.. Please accept me back." David knelt.


Gloria walked towards him and received him back.


The pastor smiled. "That's TOTAL LOVE and there's reward for it.



"Now that everything has cleared off. Dami and her daughter should leave the palace for me so that the Queen and my daughter will be here." The King shouted.



"No.. That's not TOTAL LOVE. We should be able to forgive and forget. Temper justice, my King.


"Alright, Funke and Darasimi will move into the palace also and we'll all live together like a happy family," he said.


"Yes.. That's cool." Tony smiled.



"So TOTAL LOVE HAS REWARDS AND GAINS, IT HAS JOY IN IT, HAPPINESS, MERCY AND LOTS MORE!"


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FROM THE AUTHOR'S DESK.


LOVE EVERYONE TOTALLY, DISCARD HATRED, LEARN FROM MISTAKES PEOPLE HAVE MADE AND FORGE FORWARD IN ALL ASPECT. DON'T RUN AWAY FROM SOMEONE BECAUSE OF THE PERSON'S PROBLEM TO SAVE YOURSELF, SNUB ANGER, DON'T KILL.



REMAIN BLESSED..


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THE END.

TOTAL LOVE- Temitope Daniel. ©2013

Firstly, to the creator of you and I, the greatest, the unpredictable, the one with total love and acts no matter what. I appreciate his holy name for the completion of this. He gave me the gift, the talent. He's worthy to be praised.


To all the readers, guests, nairalanders... If I start mentioning names.. Omg! I appreciate you all 4 backing me up, to reach fp, to be a success. Really love you all! Now, LOVE AND WISDOM has started.



Let's discuss b4 we go. I want you to point out ma mistakes so that I can learn more and change, then tell me what you've learnt so far.


T.DAN.


©2013.

Plz, I need u 2 drop ur comments. Those that has never commented sef.. Plz. This z part of Total Love.

dis my first time of commenting...hmmm short of words... ure really talented n ve learnt alot from ur piece of work... may d almighty Gud continue yo strengthen u.... moving straight to Love$wisdom

Lovely piece Temi, Thanks for sharing.

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Thatz d link.. Bbl

Noticed some typos so maybe u'll correct dem later....
Bro u r really gud keep up da good work
btw the TOTAL LOVE had a whole lot of morals among which are: total love is
1. Sacrificial
2. Selfless
3. Seeks not revenge and many more